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2025届江苏淮安等地高三第一次质量检测作文分析 第四部分写作(共两节;满分40分)第一节(满分15分) 假定你是李华,上周三你们班举行了英文经典名著阅读分享会。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次活动，内容包括: (1)你的分享;(2)你的感受。 注意: (1)写作词数应为80左右; (2)请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, I'm writing to you about a sharing session of reading English classics we held last Wednesday. 分享英文经典名著阅读分享会（分享；感受） (一) Dear Chris, I'm writing to you about a sharing session of reading English classics we held last Wednesday. I am excited to appreciate a variety of classic pieces of English literature for our "Read Together" event. Impressed with the profound meanings hidden in the boundless masterpieces, I gave an detailed account of the English classic that I've read recently, including the author, the main characters, the plot, and the historical background of the book. Apart from that, the social values, humanity and culture that the book had reflected have been analyzed, which was well-received by the crowds. Additionally, I find it essential to appreciate beautifully written works that offer insights into English culture with my classmates, enabling us to be equipped with relevant abilities. Not only did I realize the significance of reading English classics but also it can broaden our horizons by sharing such fantastic experience. I do hope you can enjoy it as I did. Best regards, Li Hua 亲爱的克里斯, 我写信给你是关于我们上周三举办的阅读英语经典的分享会。我很高兴能在我们的“一起阅读”活动中欣赏各种经典的英国文学作品。 我对我最近读过的这部英国经典作品，包括作者、主要人物、情节和历史背景，都进行了详细的描述，这给我留下了深刻的印象。除此之外，还分析了该书所反映的社会价值、人文和文化，受到了广大读者的好评。此外，我发现和同学们一起欣赏那些能深入了解英国文化的优美作品是很重要的，这样我们才能具备相关的能力。 我不仅意识到阅读英语名著的重要性，而且通过分享这些奇妙的经历可以开阔我们的视野。我真的希望你能像我一样喜欢它。 第二节(满分25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Can harmed relations restore like holes in the fence? Matt was a nice enough guy. He enjoyed his friends and family and, mostly, they enjoyed him. I say "mostly" because sometimes Matt could get really angry. If things didn't go quite his way, he could shout and scream at people. His mom and dad had long said things like, "You'd better learn to control that temper, young man, or one day you will get into real trouble." Now Matt was noticing that some of his friends at school tended to be avoiding him more and more. Lose temper ------ lose friends This worried Matt. He liked his friends. He didn't want to lose them but he didn't know what to do about it. Try as he might, at times things would build up like a volcano until he erupted. 尽管他很努力，但有时事情会像火山一样堆积起来，直到他爆发。Matt felt it was outside his control. What could he do? Worry---confused One Saturday morning his dad came home from the hardware store and said, "Matt, I've got a present for you." Out of the shopping bag he pulled a brand-new hammer and bag of big, shiny nails.他从购物袋里拿出一把崭新的锤子和一袋又大又亮的钉子。 He got an old can and tipped the nails into 把钉子插进去the empty container. Handing Matt the brand-new hammer and can of nails, he said, "Every time you get angry, go outside and hammer a nail into the wooden fence that runs down the side of the house." 每次你生气的时候，就出去把钉子钉在房子旁边的木栅栏上。 At first, Matt thought his old man must be going crazy or something. But he had tried everything else, why not do what his father had said? Each time he got angry at home he went and hammered a nail in the side fence. If he got angry at school he'd remember how many times he'd lost his temper and as soon as he got home he'd go and hammer the appropriate number of nails into the fence. Soon Matt found the task of hammering the nails in got boring. He didn't like having to keep track of all the times he got angry and pound (敲击) in a few more nails. Surprisingly, Matt found that he was getting less and less angry. It was easier, in fact, to control his temper than to remember the times he hadn't, then go and hammer another nail in the fence. Attempt- be close to quit- insist Boring- annoying-surprise 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右: 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 After a week of not hammering the nails, he proudly went and told his dad. Matt became concerned about the holes that remained after removing the nails. (一) After a week of not hammering the nails, he proudly went and told his dad. “Good,” said his dad. “I'm pleased to hear it. Now, every day you have without losing your temper, I want you to go and remove one of those nails you hammered in the fence.” The days went by, and the nails came out one at a time, but somewhere in the task of removing them, Matt noticed that they were leaving holes. The wood sprung back around some of the holes, closing them up a little, while others stayed the full size of the nail. 一些洞周围弹回来，把它们合上了一点，而另一些则保持着钉子的大小。 Matt became concerned about the holes that remained after removing the nails. He came to realize that it was a bit like what happened when we got angry. Anger could hurt and sometimes it left a wound or a scar that people remembered long. Eager to fix what he'd done, he asked his dad if he could paint the fence. Thinking to himself, perhaps he could have a fence-painting party, inviting his friends around. Confident and anticipated, he was confident to heal their friendship that could be restored like the holes. 马特开始担心拔下钉子后留下的洞。他开始意识到这有点像我们生气时发生的事情。愤怒会伤害人，有时它会留下让人难以忘怀的伤口或伤疤。他急于弥补自己的过错，就问爸爸能不能给篱笆刷漆。他心想，也许他可以举办一个粉刷栅栏的聚会，邀请他的朋友们来参加。他充满信心和期待，他有信心治愈他们的友谊，就像伤口愈合一样。 (二) After a week of not hammering the nails, he proudly announced to his dad, "I've kept my cool all week, Dad! No nails needed." (时间状语从句+直接引语，展现一周后的成果与自豪)His dad nodded, smiling, "Now, for each day you stay calm, pull out a nail." (并列谓语+直接引语，父亲以微笑和鼓励的话语提出新规则) Following this new rule, he noticed the fence, which was brand new, now dotted with holes. (通过对比描述围栏的变化，暗示情感会造成的伤痕)These holes reminded him that while anger could be controlled, its scars lingered.继续存留，缓慢消失；流连，逗留； (主语+宾语从句，强调愤怒虽可控，但伤痕难消) It struck Matt that the essential point of a consistent relationship is the love and respect. (阐述教训对马特的影响) Matt became concerned about the holes that remained after removing the nails.(表达马特对钉孔的关注) They served as reminders that even forgiven, past anger left marks. (主语+谓语+宾语从句，进一步阐释钉孔的象征意义) He vowed to be more considerate, understanding that true repair meant not just controlling outbursts, but actively nurturing bonds. (并列谓语+宾语从句，强调真正修复关系的重要性) Having apologized to those who he has hurt, he was overcome with content. He was aware for sure that every time he lost temper in the future he would remember those holes. (强调主题) After a week of not hammering the nails, he proudly announced to his dad, "I've kept my cool all week, Dad! No nails needed." His dad nodded, smiling, "Now, for each day you stay calm, pull out a nail." Following this new rule, he noticed the fence, which was brand new, now dotted with holes. These holes reminded him that while anger could be controlled, its scars lingered. It struck Matt that the essential point of a consistent relationship is the love and respect. Matt became concerned about the holes that remained after removing the nails. They served as reminders that even forgiven, past anger left marks. He vowed to be more considerate, understanding that true repair meant not just controlling outbursts, but actively nurturing bonds. Having apologized to those who he has hurt, he was overcome with content. He was aware for sure that every time he lost temper in the future he would remember those holes. 在一个星期没有钉钉子之后，他自豪地对他爸爸说:“我整个星期都保持冷静，爸爸!不需要钉子。”爸爸点点头，微笑着说:“现在，你每冷静一天，就拔一颗钉子。”按照这条新规则，他注意到那道崭新的篱笆，现在布满了洞。这些洞提醒他，虽然愤怒可以被控制，但它的伤疤却挥之不去。马特突然意识到，一段稳定关系的关键在于爱和尊重。 马特开始担心拔下钉子后留下的洞。它们提醒我们，即使原谅了，过去的愤怒也会留下痕迹。他发誓要更加体贴，因为他明白，真正的修复不仅意味着控制情绪爆发，还意味着积极培育纽带。向那些被他伤害过的人道了歉之后，他感到心满意足。他很清楚，以后每次发脾气，他都会想起那些洞。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$