读后续写 卡门熊的冒险之旅 课件-江苏省苏州市2024-2025学年高三上学期期初学业质量阳光指标调研英语试题

2025届苏州期初调研 读 Continuation Writing 后 续 写 六格漫画 cjj@陆高 6 5 4 3 2 1 2. 构思 3. 编写 4. 打磨 1. 读懂 After seeing a program on television about a reporter who had hitchhiked(搭顺风车) across America, My ten-year-old daughter, Ashley said, “I wish I could do that!” Ashley was diagnosed with cancer three years earlier. Although she is cancer-free now after a surgery, numerous tests and the scary procedure of treatments had made her unwilling to risk outside her known world. So I wanted to encourage that spirit of adventure in her. 6 5 4 3 2 1 1. 读懂 I began trying to think of a way for her to “hitchhike” across the country without leaving home. That’s how Carmen was born. Carmen is a teddy bear Ashley had received while she was in the hospital. We decided to send Carmen in Ashley’s place. So we purchased a notebook as a travel journal and a bag for Carmen to travel in, together with a letter written by Ashley: 6 5 4 3 2 1 1. 读懂 My name is Ashley and I am ten years old. This is my bear, Carmen. I got her when I was in the hospital. She wants to go to all fifty states just like the reporter guy on TV who hitchhiked across America. But she can’t walk, so will you please help her? Could you let her ride with you and keep her safe, as well as tell her about yourself so she won’t be lonely? Please write a little about yourself in the journal and then introduce her to someone new. She wants to meet as many new people as she can. 6 5 4 3 2 1 1. 读懂 I think by about September she will be ready to come home. In her coin purse is $5.00. Please put her in a box with her journal and send her to Sac City State Bank. Attention: Caretaker of Carmen Bear. If you would like to hear from Carmen after she gets home, please leave your address in her notebook and we will send you a note and let you know when she gets home safely. Thank you for taking care of Carmen, and thank you for taking the time to write in her notebook. Your new friends, Carmen and Ashley 6 5 4 3 2 1 1. 读懂 问题是什么？ 主题是什么？ 如何解决？ 如何体现？ 2. 构思 跟巡警解释情况和目的。 巡警帮忙找司机带泰迪熊。 泰迪熊的旅行接力开启了。 Ashley翘首以盼。 Ashley兴奋地打开盒子。 日志上写满了陌生人的祝福和鼓励。 Ashley根据地址回信。 陌生人的善举，为她展示了多彩的世界，给了她勇气和希望。 5 6 3. 编写 人物 动作 语言 神态 心理 文字表达 动作链 从句 非谓语 倒装 强调 4. 打磨 从 句 定语从句 名词性从句 状语从句 动作链 某人did......, did......, and did...... 非谓语 主干, doing ...... and doing ...... doing ......, 主干, doing ...... done ......, 主干, doing ...... with ......, 主干, doing ...... 文字表达 动作链 从句 非谓语 倒装 强调 动作链 She quickly grabbed her keys, unlocked the door, and rushed out into the rain. She carefully read the instructions, assembled the puzzle pieces, and placed them neatly on the table. She carefully unwrapped the gift, admired the beautiful jewelry, and put it on with a smile. 从句 She dreamt of traveling to Paris, a city she had always longed to explore since she was a child. We met at the bus station where he dropped me off four days before. When the sun set behind the mountains, the sky turned into a canvas painted with hues of pink and orange. 非谓语 Surprised by the sudden noise, the children looked up from their game, their faces filled with curiosity. Overwhelmed by the news, she stood there in silence, unable to speak. The letter, written with deep affection, touched everyone who read it. 定语从句 状语从句 what名词性从句 It struck me that....(名从) 非谓语 ......, doing 非谓语 Done..., ...... 非谓语 With..., ...... 非谓语 独立主格结构 倒装 Hardly had I... when... 倒装 as 倒装 so 强调句 It was ... that ... 无灵主语: 情绪词做主语 无灵主语: 时间词做主语 高级表达 自查表 We then took Carmen to our family friend Phil, a highway patrol officer (巡警). Ashley explained our plan and begged his help. “Sure. There must be some drivers who are willing to take Carmen.” Phil agreed with a grin. Ashley thanked Phil, kissed Carmen goodbye and went home with an anxious heart. Meanwhile, Phil took Carmen to the highway while patrolling. When the first driver came into sight, he stopped her politely and explained everything to her. The woman was glad to be a part of this special adventure, and Carmen’s journey began. Ashley, on the other hand, spent an unforgettable summer which was a mixture of anxiety and anticipation. 1 Then one day in September, the long-expected package with Carmen inside finally arrived. Ashley could barely contain her excitement. Carmen, together with the travel journal, lay peacefully inside, safe and sound. With trembling hands, Ashley hugged Carmen tightly and opened the journal. Words of various handwriting appeared before her eyes. Strangers as they were, the drivers shared their stories in the journal, showcasing a colourful world and offering heartwarming encouragement. Ashley found some addresses and began to write back. From then on, Ashley became more positive and adventurous, ready to embrace any challenge in life. 2 六格漫画完成读后续写 cjj@陆高 27216.0 24576.0 33408.0 32640.0 null 43584.0 null 43200.0 $$