内容正文:
高考英语一轮写作复习:应用文练习写作提升训练之请求信(写作步骤+套用公式)
任务呈现
假定你是学生会主席李华,你校下周五要举行主题为“My School Life”的英语演讲比赛。你想请你的外国好友Eric帮忙设计一份吸引同学们参加英语演讲的海报。
请根据以下要点给他写一封邮件:1. 请求内容;2. 请求的原因;3. 期待请求得到满足。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
写作步骤
一、任务分析
1. 审题:确定文章的人称和时态
根据写作任务可知,李华想请外国好友Eric帮忙设计一份吸引同学们参加英语演讲的海报,并介绍此次演讲的相关内容,故人称以第一人称和第二人称为主;时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
2. 确定文章结构此邮件的正文可以分为三段。第一段:表明写邮件的目的;第二段:说明请求的内容及原因;第三段:希望请求得到满足,并期待回复。
二、词语、句子罗列
1. 词语
(1) 帮某人一个忙 do sb. a favor
(2) 据我所知 as far as I know/as far as I’m concerned
(3) 对……有天赋 have a gift for …
(4) 吸引某人 appeal to sb.(5) 发送……到…… send … to …
2. 句子
(1) 我写信请求你帮我一个忙。I’m writing to ask you to do me a favor.
(2) 为了展示学生们的才华,我们学校将于下周五举行英语演讲比赛。For students to show their talents, our school will hold an English speech competition next Friday.
(3) 据我所知,你在艺术方面很有天赋,曾经在你们市举办的设计大赛中荣获第一名。As far as I know, you have a gift for art, and you once won first place in the design competition held in your city.
(4) 我相信你设计的精美海报会吸引到更多学生。I’m convinced that your beautiful poster will appeal to more students.
(5) 如果你能在这周五把海报发给我,我将不胜感激。I would be grateful if you could send your poster to me by this Friday.
三、范文 (扩充要点,连句成文)
Dear Eric,
I’m writing to ask you to do me a favor.
For students to show their talents, our school will hold an English speech competition next Friday, the theme of which is “My School Life”. To attract more students to the competition, would you please design a poster for it? As far as I know, you have a gift for art, and you once won first place in the design competition held in your city. I’m convinced that your beautiful poster will appeal to more students. Your contribution will certainly make our competition a huge success.
I would be grateful if you could send your poster to me by this Friday. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,Li Hua
知识储备
请求信常用句式
请求信开头段
●I’m writing to ask you to do me a favor
.●I’m writing to seek your help/assistance in …
●I wonder if you can offer me some advice/suggestions/tips on the following problems.
●I am … I’d like to ask if you have …/can provide me with …
●I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with …
●Would you be so kind as to …?
●I have made up my mind to write to you in the hope that you can give me some help.
●If it is not too troublesome, could you …?
●Facing so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help.
请求信主体段
●The reasons for my urgent need of … are as follows.
●At the same time, I beg you to …
●Could you please give us some advice/suggestions/tips/help?
●I really don’t know what to do and expect you to give me your advice/suggestions/tips/help.
●I have no idea what I should do and I long for/I am eager for your advice/suggestions/tips/help.
●I hope that this request will not trouble you too much.
请求信结尾段
●Thank you for your help with great respect.
●Thank you for your attention to these requests.
●Thank you for your time and patience, and I’m looking forward to your reply.●I would appreciate anything you can do to help me with this matter.
●I would like to thank you for your generous help in this case.
●I believe I can make great progress in … with your help/guidance.
●I hope that your reply could meet all my requirements.
●I would be grateful if you can give me some advice/suggestions/tips on …
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