读后续写——如何刻画人物 讲义-2025届高三英语一轮复习

英语高考读后续写——如何刻画人物 高考英语作文的“读后续写”部分，要求考生根据短文内容，进行续写，并运用恰当的语言描写人物的动作和心理状态。 1. Action Description（动作描述） Tips写作技巧1： 动作表达情感（Action expresses emotion） Avoid vague verbs, use specific and vivid verbs to describe actions.(避免使用模糊的动词，要使用具体而生动的动词来描述动作。) 普通表达:  He walked into the room. 出彩表达:  He strode into the room, his face etched with determination.（他大步走进房间，脸上写满了决心。） 出彩表达: She stormed out of the room, furious with her brother.她怒气冲冲地冲出房间，生她哥哥的气。  More Examples： She flung her arms around him . 她张开双臂搂住他。(她紧紧地抱住他，表达了爱意和激动。) He slammed the door shut . 他砰地关上了门。(他粗暴地关上门，表达了愤怒和失望。) She smiled warmly at him. 她热情地对他微笑。(表达了友好和温暖。) Tips写作技巧2:  Describe the details of the action to reveal the character's personality, state, and emotions.（描述行动的细节来揭示角色的个性、状态和情感。） 普通表达: She was angry. 出彩表达: Her fists clenched, her eyes narrowed, and a vein pulsed in her forehead.（她握紧拳头，眯起眼睛，额头上有一根血管在跳动。） Tips写作技巧3:  Combine the character's action with the surrounding environment for a more vivid portrayal.（将人物的动作与周围的环境结合起来，使人物的形象更加生动。） 普通表达: He sat on the bench. 出彩表达: He slumped onto the bench, his shoulders heavy with despair, as the rain poured down around him.（他瘫倒在长凳上，绝望地压着他的肩膀，大雨倾盆而下。） 2. Psychological Description（心理描述） Tips写作技巧4:  Internal Monologue 内心独白:   Use the character's inner thoughts to directly express their feelings, ideas, and intentions.用角色的内心想法直接表达他们的感受、想法和意图。 出彩表达: "What am I going to do?" she thought, her heart pounding in her chest. "How can I possibly face him?"“我该怎么办呢?”她心里想，心怦怦直跳。“我怎么可能面对他?” More Examples： She was overjoyed when she heard the news.  当她听到这个消息时，她欣喜若狂。(她听到消息后非常高兴。) He was devastated by the loss. 损失使他悲痛欲绝。(他因失去而深感悲伤。) They were inseparable during the vacation.  假期里他们形影不离。(他们在度假期间非常亲密。) Tips写作技巧5: Expression and Body Language表情和肢体语言: Use descriptions of facial expressions and body language to indirectly reveal the character's inner state.使用面部表情和肢体语言的描述来间接地揭示角色的内心状态。 出彩表达: A flicker of fear crossed his face, and he nervously twisted his wedding ring.一丝恐惧掠过他的脸，他紧张地扭动着他的结婚戒指。 出彩表达: Her eyes welled up with tears as she listened to the news" (当她听到这个消息时，泪水夺眶而出). More Examples： He crossed his arms, indicating he was defensive.  (他交叉双臂，表明他是防御性的。) She looked away, showing she was embarrassed .(她避开视线，表明她是尴尬的。) He leaned in, showing he was interested. (他探过身来，表明他是有兴趣的。) Tips写作技巧6: Psychological Activities心理活动:  Describe the character's mental processes, such as thoughts, memories, and fantasies, to delve deeper into their psychological world.描述人物的心理过程，如思想、记忆和幻想，以深入挖掘他们的心理世界。 出彩表达: Memories of their laughter and shared dreams flooded her mind, bringing a bittersweet ache to her heart.他们的欢笑和共同的梦想充斥着她的脑海，给她的心带来了苦乐参半的痛苦。 High-Scoring Sentence Structures高分句型 1.  Parallel Structure平行结构: Emphasize the coexistence of action and psychological state, adding layers to the description.强调动作与心理状态的共存，使描写有层次。 Example:  He clenched his fists, his heart pounding with a mixture of anger and fear.他握紧拳头，又气又怕，心怦怦直跳。 2.  Contrast对比: Highlight the complexity and change in the character's psychology, creating dramatic tension.突出人物心理的复杂性和变化，营造戏剧张力。 Example:  Though a smile played on his lips, a deep sadness lingered in his eyes.虽然他的嘴唇上挂着微笑，但他的眼睛里却闪烁着深深的悲伤。 3. Metaphor隐喻:: Use figurative language to personify the character's emotions, making the description more vivid and impactful.用形象化的语言将人物的情感拟人化，使描写更加生动有力。 Example:  His hope, once a bright flame, flickered and dimmed with each passing day.他的希望，曾经是一束明亮的火焰，随着时间的流逝而闪烁和暗淡。 More Examples： Her heart sank like a stone in the ocean. 她的心像大海里的一块石头一样沉了下去。 Her sorrow was a heavy fog that shrouded the city 悲伤像城市的浓雾笼罩着她。 He was a stormy sea, turbulent and unpredictable . 他是惊涛骇浪的大海，波涛汹涌，变幻莫测。(他像暴风雨一样，动荡和不可预测) She was a ray of sunshine, brightening up the day . 她是一缕阳光，照亮了这一天。 He was a rock, solid and unshakeable.  他坚如磐石，不可动摇。(他像岩石一样，坚固和不可动摇) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$