02 深圳卷英语作文解读 - 2024年中考英语作文真题解读及五年满分作文汇编

2024年中考英语作文真题解读及五年满分作文汇编 02 深圳卷 真题在线 假如你是李华，你的作品在“the Beauty of Nature”主题摄影展上获得了一等奖。你的英语老师邀请你在“英语一分钟演讲”上给同学们做分享。要点如下： 1. 拍摄的时间，地点，内容； 2. 选择这张照片的原因； 3. 参赛感受。 Dear________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all! Thank You! 文本解读 写作内容是摄影比赛获奖感言。从题目来看,考查写作类型是演讲稿,属于应用类作文，选材贴学生的实际生活。在进行写作时考生要联系生活实际，在对可能存在的真实情境的观察和思考中表达自己的想法，从而对更好地表达自己的观点和对自然的热爱。这个写作考查了学生的语言运用能力和写作功底，考查学生能不能将学到的知识运用在实际的生活场景中。 写作内容以与贴近考生学习、生活，为考生所熟知的话题为内容，创设了真实的语言情境，引导考生运用己有的英语语言知识和能力，结合现实的生活实践解决考题中的问题。 总体分析 （1）题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； （2）时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主； （3）提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。 写作步骤 第一步，首先介绍演讲的主题，即介绍自己在摄影展上获得一等奖的照片； 第二步，介绍照片拍摄的时间、地点以及内容； 第三步，阐述选择这张照片的原因； 最后，表达自己的参赛感受。 满分范文 Dear classmates, My name is Li Hua, who is interested in photography. Here I would like to share my picture with you. The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in April, which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green grass. If you are careful enough, you will also find a few birds jumping in the grass in the picture. How cute they are! It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic contest. Actually, it also shows us the harmony between the animals and nature. Taking part in this competition makes me realize the beauty of nature and let us protect our Earth together! That’s all! Thank you! 强化训练 （1） 成功源于勤奋，但部分人想成功，却不努力。假如你叫李华，是九年级八班的学生，请你以“Success comes from working hard”为话题，写一篇演讲稿，为全校师生做演讲，阐明成功源于努力学习、努力工作的道理。 要点如下：1. 简短自我介绍； 2. 列举生活、学习中的实例； 3. 感悟。 要求：1. 文章应条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明，80词左右；（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） 2. 文章中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名等信息。 参考词汇：shortcut(n.捷径) Dear my teachers and schoolmates, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your listening. （2） 时光荏苒，转眼间初中生活即将结束。相信你在三年的学习生活中一定取得了很大的进步。近来，你班将举办一个以“The big progress I’ve made”为主题的班会，请你根据以下图片提示内容写一篇英文演讲稿。 The big progress I’ve made 要点 ①What difficulties you ever had (你曾经遇到的困难) ②How did you get it over (你怎样克服这个困难) ③The progress you’ve made (你所取得的进步) ④Your feelings… (你的感受) 要求： 1. 可根据表格提示，亦可适当发挥； 2. 注意时态，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。） Good morning, everyone! I’m very happy to give a speech here. My topic is “The big progress I’ve made”._______________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! （3） 初中三年的学习生活中，总有一些美好的瞬间令人难以忘怀。请选择一个你经历过的美好时刻，与大家分享你的故事和感受。以“一次美好而难忘的经历”为主题内容，写一篇演讲稿，参加我们的征文比赛。内容须包括： 1.What story is it? 2.What have you learned from it? 注意： 1.字数100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数； 2.内容必须包括上述所有信息，并作适当的发挥； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息； 4.语言规范，信息完整，结构连贯，书写工整。 Good morning，everyone! _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening. （4） 漫漫人生，有得有失。幸运的是，我们拥有许多美好。活在当下，请珍惜身边的一切美好。假如你是李华，你们学校将于下周举行以“珍惜”为主题的演讲比赛。根据表格信息，完成一篇英语演讲稿。 参考词汇: value v. 珍惜;  respect v. 尊敬;  relatives n. 家人;  safety n. 安全 写作要求： 1.语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范。 2.词数60—80左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 3.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息。 Value Important Things Around Us Good morning, everyone! I am Li Hua. Life is colourful. There are many important things we should value in our daily life._________________________________________________________  ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening. （5） 坚持做好一件事情，成就更好的自己。请以“One thing I keep doing every day”为话题，根据以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇发言稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。 提示： （1）你每天在坚持做什么； （2）你坚持这么做的理由； （3）它会给你带来怎样的影响或改变。 要求： （1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； （2）词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Good morning, everyone!      I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic of my speech is one thing I keep doing every day.      _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! （6） 某班开展主题为“感受生活中的美”的主题班会活动，号召大家拥有发现美的眼睛。活动要求每位同学根据自己的经历或者见闻写一篇演讲稿，和同学们分享自己在生活中发现的美及感受。假如你是该班的同学，请你结合自己的经验，写一篇演讲稿。 内容包括： ·Tell a story about how you find the beauty in life. ·Express your feelings. 要求： 1. 词数不少于80； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （7） 为了提高同学们的英语听说能力，英语老师在你班举行了一次听力口语测试，假如你是Alice，你在这次测试中成绩优异，英语老师邀请你在本周的英语总结表彰活动中向全班同学进行经验介绍。请根据以下提纲准备一份英文发言稿： 1. 你是如何准备本次考试的？ 2. 你从中获得怎样的收获与感受？ 3. 你对提高英语听说能力的建议？ 要求： 1. 不少于80词，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Good morning, everyone! I’m Alice. It’s my honor to be here to share with you my opinions. The listening and speaking test has been over. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! （8） 走进艺术世界，感受艺术魅力。你校英语社团正在组织“Enjoy Art”学习交流活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下图式，写一篇英语发言稿参加活动。 注意： (1)词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)发言稿应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； (3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Enjoy Art Hello, I am Li Hua. I’m happy to give you a speech on enjoying art. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening! 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024年中考英语作文真题解读及五年满分作文汇编 02 深圳卷 真题在线 假如你是李华，你的作品在“the Beauty of Nature”主题摄影展上获得了一等奖。你的英语老师邀请你在“英语一分钟演讲”上给同学们做分享。要点如下： 1. 拍摄的时间，地点，内容； 2. 选择这张照片的原因； 3. 参赛感受。 Dear________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all! Thank You! 文本解读 写作内容是摄影比赛获奖感言。从题目来看,考查写作类型是演讲稿,属于应用类作文，选材贴学生的实际生活。在进行写作时考生要联系生活实际，在对可能存在的真实情境的观察和思考中表达自己的想法，从而对更好地表达自己的观点和对自然的热爱。这个写作考查了学生的语言运用能力和写作功底，考查学生能不能将学到的知识运用在实际的生活场景中。 写作内容以与贴近考生学习、生活，为考生所熟知的话题为内容，创设了真实的语言情境，引导考生运用己有的英语语言知识和能力，结合现实的生活实践解决考题中的问题。 总体分析 （1）题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； （2）时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主； （3）提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。 写作步骤 第一步，首先介绍演讲的主题，即介绍自己在摄影展上获得一等奖的照片； 第二步，介绍照片拍摄的时间、地点以及内容； 第三步，阐述选择这张照片的原因； 最后，表达自己的参赛感受。 满分范文 Dear classmates, My name is Li Hua, who is interested in photography. Here I would like to share my picture with you. The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in April, which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green grass. If you are careful enough, you will also find a few birds jumping in the grass in the picture. How cute they are! It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic contest. Actually, it also shows us the harmony between the animals and nature. Taking part in this competition makes me realize the beauty of nature and let us protect our Earth together! That’s all! Thank you! 强化训练 （1） 成功源于勤奋，但部分人想成功，却不努力。假如你叫李华，是九年级八班的学生，请你以“Success comes from working hard”为话题，写一篇演讲稿，为全校师生做演讲，阐明成功源于努力学习、努力工作的道理。 要点如下：1. 简短自我介绍； 2. 列举生活、学习中的实例； 3. 感悟。 要求：1. 文章应条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明，80词左右；（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） 2. 文章中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名等信息。 参考词汇：shortcut(n.捷径) Dear my teachers and schoolmates, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your listening. （2） 时光荏苒，转眼间初中生活即将结束。相信你在三年的学习生活中一定取得了很大的进步。近来，你班将举办一个以“The big progress I’ve made”为主题的班会，请你根据以下图片提示内容写一篇英文演讲稿。 The big progress I’ve made 要点 ①What difficulties you ever had (你曾经遇到的困难) ②How did you get it over (你怎样克服这个困难) ③The progress you’ve made (你所取得的进步) ④Your feelings… (你的感受) 要求： 1. 可根据表格提示，亦可适当发挥； 2. 注意时态，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。） Good morning, everyone! I’m very happy to give a speech here. My topic is “The big progress I’ve made”._______________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! （3） 初中三年的学习生活中，总有一些美好的瞬间令人难以忘怀。请选择一个你经历过的美好时刻，与大家分享你的故事和感受。以“一次美好而难忘的经历”为主题内容，写一篇演讲稿，参加我们的征文比赛。内容须包括： 1.What story is it? 2.What have you learned from it? 注意： 1.字数100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数； 2.内容必须包括上述所有信息，并作适当的发挥； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息； 4.语言规范，信息完整，结构连贯，书写工整。 Good morning，everyone! _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening. （4） 漫漫人生，有得有失。幸运的是，我们拥有许多美好。活在当下，请珍惜身边的一切美好。假如你是李华，你们学校将于下周举行以“珍惜”为主题的演讲比赛。根据表格信息，完成一篇英语演讲稿。 参考词汇: value v. 珍惜;  respect v. 尊敬;  relatives n. 家人;  safety n. 安全 写作要求： 1.语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范。 2.词数60—80左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 3.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息。 Value Important Things Around Us Good morning, everyone! I am Li Hua. Life is colourful. There are many important things we should value in our daily life._________________________________________________________  ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening. （5） 坚持做好一件事情，成就更好的自己。请以“One thing I keep doing every day”为话题，根据以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇发言稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。 提示： （1）你每天在坚持做什么； （2）你坚持这么做的理由； （3）它会给你带来怎样的影响或改变。 要求： （1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； （2）词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Good morning, everyone!      I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic of my speech is one thing I keep doing every day.      _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! （6） 某班开展主题为“感受生活中的美”的主题班会活动，号召大家拥有发现美的眼睛。活动要求每位同学根据自己的经历或者见闻写一篇演讲稿，和同学们分享自己在生活中发现的美及感受。假如你是该班的同学，请你结合自己的经验，写一篇演讲稿。 内容包括： ·Tell a story about how you find the beauty in life. ·Express your feelings. 要求： 1. 词数不少于80； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （7） 为了提高同学们的英语听说能力，英语老师在你班举行了一次听力口语测试，假如你是Alice，你在这次测试中成绩优异，英语老师邀请你在本周的英语总结表彰活动中向全班同学进行经验介绍。请根据以下提纲准备一份英文发言稿： 1. 你是如何准备本次考试的？ 2. 你从中获得怎样的收获与感受？ 3. 你对提高英语听说能力的建议？ 要求： 1. 不少于80词，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Good morning, everyone! I’m Alice. It’s my honor to be here to share with you my opinions. The listening and speaking test has been over. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! （8） 走进艺术世界，感受艺术魅力。你校英语社团正在组织“Enjoy Art”学习交流活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下图式，写一篇英语发言稿参加活动。 注意： (1)词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)发言稿应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； (3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Enjoy Art Hello, I am Li Hua. I’m happy to give you a speech on enjoying art. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening! 参考答案： (1) Dear my teachers and schoolmates, My name is Li Hua and I’m from Class 8, Grade 9. If you open the books about the great persons or famous persons, you will find that their success has one thing in common—hard working. There is no shortcut for success. Take me for example, I used to have trouble in English listening. My English teacher told me that if I wanted to make much progress in my English listening, I must practice listening more and try to memorize the pronunciation. I took the advice and practiced in the morning and before the bed time every day. After one month, I made much progress in my English listening test. In a word, success comes from hard working. That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your listening. 【详解】题干解读：题目要求以“Success comes from working hard”为话题，写一篇演讲稿；要求演讲稿包括自我介绍、学习中的实例以及感悟。 写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，采用第一人称口吻。此作文可分为4段落格式，第一段：自我介绍，点明观点；第二段：列举学习中的实例说明成功源于努力学习的道理；第三段：自我总结和感悟；最后一段：感谢全校师生的倾听。 (2) Good morning, everyone! I’m very happy to give a speech here. My topic is “The big progress I’ve made”. I used to be afraid of speaking in public. Last year, our school held a School Art Festival in which some students sang, some danced and others played the piano. And my teacher encouraged me to sing a song that I loved best. He helped me practice the song again and again. Keeping my teacher’s words “Believe in yourself! Everything will go well.” in mind, I stood on the stage bravely. At that moment, I was so proud of myself. Now, I have changed a lot and taken an active part in different kinds of after-school activities. Thank you for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的关键信息，并加上自己的感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明演讲主题； 第二步，讲述自己遇到的困难，克服困难的方法，最后取得了什么进步，并谈谈自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①used to be afraid of...过去害怕…… ②encourage me to sing a song鼓励我唱首歌 ③take an active part in积极参加 [高分句型] ①Last year, our school held a School Art Festival in which some students sang, some danced and others played the piano.(in which引导定语从句) ②And my teacher encouraged me to sing a song that I loved best.(that引导定语从句) (3) Good morning, everyone! My junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories. Of them, I’d like to share my favorite story about a basketball game with you. Our team got a good start by beating two strong teams. However, our captain hurt his finger during the third game. He is the brain of our team. When thinking of losing of the center, we were all down and couldn’t pay attention to the next match. Our captain found this and encouraged us to fight on and cheered us up. With the help of our captain, we played as well as the first two games. Seeing our captain waving his injured finger, we made our biggest efforts in the following games. With the cheers of our students, we won the champion. During the celebrations, we threw our captain into the air. Just as the saying goes, “One tree does not make a forest.” I will never forget it because I have understood the importance of teamwork since then. Thank you for listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主，表达从此处经历学到的东西时，用“现在完成时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，写作意图开头已给出，写作时可直接描写一次美好而难忘的经历。 第二步，主要围绕“从这次经历中学到的东西”展开，丰富细节。 第三步，书写结语，重述主题，表达感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①a lot of许多的 ②would like to do sth.想要做某事 ③hurt+身体部位 伤到…… ④think of认为 ⑤pay attention to注意 ⑥encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事 ⑦cheer sb. up使某人高兴 ⑧With the help of…通过……的帮助 ⑨as well as和 ⑩make one’s biggest efforts尽某人最大的努力 [高分句型] ①I will never forget it because I have understood the importance of teamwork since then. (because引导的原因状语从句) (4) Value Important Things Around Us Good morning, everyone! I am Li Hua. Life is colourful. There are many important things we should value in our daily life. First, we should value our lives. We should stay away from dangerous things like fire.We should pay attention to our safety. Second, we should value our health. We should do exercise to make us healthy. We should also get enough sleep so that we can do everything well. Thirdly, we should value our relatives and friends. We should show love and respect.We had better spend more time communicating with them. For friends, we should trust each other and help them in need. We should get on well with them. Finally, we should value the time and make good plans for our study. Don't waste time on useless things. Thanks for your listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出本文主题； 第二步，分别从珍惜生命，珍惜健康，珍惜亲朋好友，珍惜时间等方面介绍。 [亮点词汇] ①stay away from远离 ②pay attention to注意 ③spend time doing sth花时间做某事 ④get on well with sb与某人和睦相处 [高分句型] ①There are many important things we should value in our daily life.（there be句型） ②We should do much exercise to make us healthy. （动词不定式作目的状语） ③We should also get enough sleep so that we can do everything well.（so that引导目的状语从句） (5) Good morning, everyone! I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic of my speech is one thing I keep doing every day. I love running and I have kept running for three years. When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at sports and running was always my weakness. I often failed in my running test. In order to catch up with my classmates, I began to practice running every day after school. Sometimes, I was so tired that I really wanted to give up. But I kept telling myself that I could make it. No matter what kind of difficulty I faced, I tried my best to keep running. Now I do much better in running and I’m very proud of myself. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：文章的写作要点已经给出，根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍演讲的主题； 第二步，具体介绍在坚持做的某件事，及坚持做这件事的理由； 第三步，说明坚持做这件事给自己带来的影响并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②in order to为了 ③catch up with赶上 [高分句型] ①No matter what kind of difficulty I faced, I tried my best to keep running.（no matter what引导的让步状语从句） ②When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at sports and running was always my weakness.（when引导的时间状语从句） ③Sometimes, I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.（so…that引导的结果状语从句） (6) Life is full of beauty. If we put our heart to appreciate it, we will discover the simple but great beauty of life. The heartwarming scene on the road is still fresh in my mind. An old man fell down on the road by accident. A middle school student walked forward to hold the man up. She was careful and gentle. And then, the people around them called 120. They took care of the old man until the ambulance arrived. Thanks to those kind people, I realized that life was full of beauty. Many people will give others a hand when they are in trouble. And the experience makes it possible for me to always do right things. 【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作主题。点明主题“生活中充满美以及用心感受美”； 第二步，具体阐述故事内容。描述自己生活中发现美的经历； 第三步，书写感受。分享自己发现美的感受。 【亮点词汇】①be full of充满 ②fall down摔倒 ③take care of照顾，照料 ④thanks to多亏了，由于 【高分句型】①If we put our heart to appreciate it, we will discover the simple but great beauty of life（if引导条件状语从句） ②They took care of the old man until the ambulance arrived.（until引导时间状语从句） (7) Good morning, everyone! I’m Alice. It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions. The listening and speaking test has been over. In order to get a good result, I focused on every English lesson. After class, I read and recited those topics carefully according to our English teacher’s demand. Also, I did listening exercises almost every day. To my surprise, I’m not afraid of speaking English before others any more. What’s more, I am better at listening and speaking. Although I feel tired, I am very happy and become more confident. Here is my advice on how to improve them. First of all, take an active part in class activities. Watch more English films if possible. Moreover, it’s a good way to improve your ability by learning English songs. Thank you for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出英语听力口语测试的话题； 第二步，具体阐述如何准备本次考试； 第三步，讲述从中获得的收获与感受以及作者对提高英语听说能力的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①focus on sth. 集中注意力于某事上 ②be afraid of doing sth. 害怕做某事 ③be better at sth. 更擅长于做某事 ④take an active part in 积极参加 [高分句型] ①In order to get a good result, I focused on every English lesson. (in order to引导目的状语从句) ②Although I feel tired, I am very happy and become more confident. (Although引导让步状语从句) ③Watch more English films if possible. (祈使句) ④Moreover, it’s a good way to improve your ability by learning English songs. (it作形式主语） (8) Enjoy Art Hello, I am Li Hua. I’m happy to give you a speech on enjoying art. Art is especially important in our lives. There are different forms of art in the world, such as film, painting, dance, music and so on. My favourite art form is painting. I can feel the beauty when I’m painting. I can also learn a lot about different cultures around the world. I think painting is without boundaries, because it can make us know about the styles not only in China but also in other countries. We need art in our lives! I hope everybody can experience the value of art. That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，围绕“Enjoy Art”来写，注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，自我介绍，引出主题； 第二步，介绍艺术是什么； 第三步，介绍自己喜欢的艺术形式及喜欢的理由； 第四步，书写结尾，提出希望并感谢别人的倾听。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②and so on等等 ③know about了解 ④not only…but also…不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①I think painting is without boundaries, because it can make us know about the styles not only in China but also in other countries.（省略that的宾语从句；because引导原因状语从句） ②I can feel the beauty when I’m painting.（when引导时间状语从句) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$