2025届高三上学期第一次联考英语写作应用文写作指导 讲义

2025届高三第一次联考英语写作应用文写作指导及范文 应用文写作一 假设你是李华，今年暑假你和同学相约南昌梅岭风景区，进行了为期一天的徒步活动，请你以A Hiking Experience为题给校英文报写一篇短文分享这次经历，内容包括：活动的过程；采取的防护措施；个人感受 参考范文： This summer vacation, I joined my classmates for a hiking trip in the Meiling Scenic Area in Nanchang. We took proper preparations, applying sunscreen, wearing long sleeves, and carrying bug repellent and enough water. We began with a gentle climb and took regular breaks under the shade. The hiking was tough, but the support from friends made it enjoyable. Reaching the peak, we were rewarded with a breathtaking view.This trip was more than an escape from the city heat. We returned home with not only a sunkissed glow but also a heart full of cherished memories. 段1：活动过程、防护措施 1） 【写作思路】开门见山，描述事件：时间，我，做了某事 2）和某人一起，I joined XXX 或 I went for a hiking trip along with my classmates. 3）措施：（合适/充分）准备 take (proper/ full) preparations涂防晒霜：apply sunscreen 穿长袖：wear long sleeves带驱虫液：carry/ bring bug repellent（repel驱赶，-ent动作的执行者） 带水：carry water 【语料补充】（2024新课标一卷阅读A）Bring layers for changing weather and a raincoat if necessary. Bring a personal water bottle, sunscreen, and a lunch.4）活动过程：步履轻快：with a gentle climb树荫下乘凉：take breaks under the shade 5）活动感受：先抑后扬先抑：艰难 tough 后扬：朋友支持，愉悦之旅 enjoyable6）收获美景：be rewarded with a breathtaking view 拓展：美的 attractive, eye-catching, picturesque 段2：总结 7）【写作思路】not only … but also … 8）避暑 an escape from heat9）心中充满珍贵的回忆 a heart full of cherished memories 应用文写作二 请你写一篇短文向校英文报"My community and Me"栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项合适在社区开展的志愿者活动，内容包括：介绍这项活动；说明推荐理由。 参考范文 Embark on a fulfilling journey with me — greening our community through a hands-on volunteer activity. The initiative involves planting trees and flowers in designated public spaces, such as parks, school grounds, and neighborhood streets. Armed with shovels, watering cans, and a passion for nature, we can work either in teams or individually to dig holes, turn the soil and water the plants. Not only does this activity beautify our surroundings, but it also promotes environmental awareness and fosters a sense of ownership among residents. The satisfaction of watching a barren space bloom into a vibrant oasis is incomparable. So, let's get our hands dirty for a good cause! Join the greening movement and leave a lasting mark on our beloved community. 本篇应用文改编自“24年浙江首考向同学推荐一项适合课间的运动”，首段引入话题可运用 When it comes to 句型如：When it comes to picking a suitable volunteer activity in the community, greening our surroundings is the clear winner.（仿写自2024新课标II卷完形填空精读） 本篇范文值得借鉴的地方1.同义词替换：1）initiative, movement 替换 activity；2）surroundings 替换 community；3）green 替换 beautify2.活动安排：合作或独自完成 work either in teams or individually3.活动意义：培养主人翁精神 foster a sense of ownership4.活动感受：XXX is incomparable. XXX是不可比拟的 = Nothing can compared with XXX.如：Nothing can be compared with the satisfaction of watching a barren space bloom into a vibrant oasis. 应用文写作三 假定你是校学生会主席李华，下个月将组织举办一场校园慈善音乐会。请给你校的英国留学生Chris写一封邮件邀请他来参与演出，内容包括：1.活动介绍；2.表演形式建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80词左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答 参考范文： Dear Chris, I'm thrilled to invite you to be part of something truly special! We're putting together a charity concert next month with the goal of raising funds to support students from economically disadvantaged families. It'll be a night filled with heartwarming music and shared smiles in our school auditorium. Now, here's where you come in. We've been fans of your performances, and we'd be absolutely excited to have you share your gift with us. Here are a few ideas that might suit your style: If you fancy taking center stage, how about a solo piano performance of a classical piece? It would be a showstopper! Or, if you're up for it, a duet with other student musicians could be a magical collaboration that our audience would love. I'd like to hear what you think. Just let me know by the end of this week. Looking forward to your reply and hopefully seeing you on stage! Yours, Li Hua 赏析： 段1：写作目的、活动介绍（目的+结果） 1）情感铺垫 + 写作目的：I'm + 情绪 + to + 目的，最常见的这类句子 I'm sorry to hear XXX. 2）邀请 invite you to be part of XXX 或 have you with us 3）筹备 put together 替换 hold/ organize 4）为了 with the goal of 替换 to/ in order to/ for the purpose of  5）贫困的 economically disadvantaged（委婉说法）替换 poor/ poverty-stricken 拓展：disadvantaged （生活、教育等）处于劣势的，处于不利地位的  6）结果：这将是一个充满XXX的夜晚 It'll be a night filled with XXX. 升级：It promises to be a night filled with XXX. 段2：表演形式建议 7）过渡 here's where you come in. 轮到你上场/ 参与了。 8）交代邀请背景：fans, excited 9）表演形式建议一：喜欢站在舞台中央， 钢琴独奏 建议二：合作表演 10）喜欢：fancy 替换 like/ love，后接动词 ing 11）be a showstopper 非常精彩 12）be up for it 准备好了，替换 be ready/ prepared for it 段2：征询建议、期待回复/ 表演 13）征询建议：I'd like to hear what you think. 我想知道你的想法。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$