2025届高考英语一轮复习之活动类应用文写作课件

活动类应用文 写作提升 some inappropriate aspects in our composition The structure of the article is disorderly. The article lacks logic. Too many short sentences,lacking advanced sentences. 假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了“学农活动”——参观绿色蔬菜基地，了解科学种植，同时参与实践活动。请你以“An Agricultural Activity”为题，写篇报道。内容包括： 1.活动目的； 2.活动过程； 3.你的感想。 报道：介绍已经举办过的一个活动 报道：学校举办的“学农活动” What’s the main idea of each paragraph? P1 A brief introduction to the activity（when，where，who，what (theme)，purpose…） P2 Activity process P3 Gains and insights P1 How can we manage to put the time, theme organizer,and purpose of the activity in one sentence? non finite verbs +passive voice Aimed at helping students to study some important knowledge of agriculture, an agricultural activity was held by our school last sunday. P1 the PURPOSE of an activity To enrich our extracurricular activities To fuel our passion for… To raise our awareness of… To enhance our knowledge of… To encourage us to appreciate the beauty and diversity of… Aiming to enhance our knowledge of growing vegetables and enrich our extracurricular activities,an unforgettable /a memorable activity themed agriculture was held by our school last Sunday. non finite verbs +passive voice inanimate subject+attributive clause Last Sunday witnessed/saw an activity themed ... launched by our school....,which turned out to be a hit.(结果大获成功） When we describe the activity process, how can we make it P2 more logical ? time order ①第一，首先 firstly to begin with first of all in the first place at the beginning of ②第二，其次，更多 secondly, besides, next then, moreover, in addition what's more, furthermore ③最后，简言之 finally eventually in a word all in all to sum up on the whole last but not the least generally speaking When we describe the activity process, how can we make it P2 more logical ? Before starting out/As scheduled, a presentation was given by a knowledgeable professor/expert about how rich the vegetable base is. Subsequent to that, I was led to the vegetable base to appreciate breathtaking vegetables ranging from…to… At the end of the activity, I was fortunate to get hands-on experience growing vegetables. P2&3 What advanced sentence patterns can we employ to describe the activities? subjective clause attributive clause emphatic sentence inverted sentence special sentence structure What impressed me the most was a marvelous short film released by experts from the vegetable base, which showcases the growth process of vegetables My favorite part is a short film released by experts. This short film showcases the growth process of cooked vegetables. for example subjective clause attributive clause P2What advanced sentence patterns can we employ to describe the activities? What impressed us most was an awesome/a marvelous /incredible...,which… It was a fun and creative way to have the opportunity to get hands-on experience by… One of the highlights of the activity was when we saw the enchanting... awesome .. and pleasant.... P3 What advanced sentence patterns can we employ to express our insights? It was through this activity that I realized we’d better to attach great significance to…. So breathtaking/appealing was it that l lingered on without any idea of leaving. 太精彩了以至于我流连忘返 THANK YOU! $$