读后续写 卡门熊的冒险之旅 讲义-江苏省苏州市2024-2025学年高三上学期期初学业质量阳光指标调研英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 After seeing a program on television about a reporter who had hitchhiked (搭顺风车)across America. My ten-year-old daughter, Ashley said, “I wish I could do that!” Ashley was diagnosed with cancer three years earlier. Although she is cancer-free now after a surgery, numerous tests and the scary procedure of treatments had made her unwilling to risk outside her known world. So I wanted to encourage that spirit of adventure in her. I began trying to think of a way for her to “hitchhike” across the country without leaving home. That’s how Carmen was born. Carmen is a teddy bear Ashley had received while she was in the hospital. We decided to send Carmen in Ashley’s place. So we purchased a notebook as a travel journal and a bag for Carmen to travel in, together with a letter written by Ashley: My name is Ashley and I am ten years old. This is my bear, Carmen. I got her when I was in the hospital. She wants to go to all fifty states just like the reporter guy on TV who hitchhiked across America. But she can’t walk, so will you please help her? Could you let her ride with you and keep her safe, as well as tell her about yourself so she won’t be lonely? Please write a little about yourself in the journal and then introduce her to someone new. She wants to meet as many new people as she can. I think by about September she will be ready to come home. In her coin purse is $5.00. Please put her in a box with her journal and send her to Sac City State Bank. Attention: Caretaker of Carmen Bear. If you would like to hear from Carmen after she gets home, please leave your address in her notebook and we will send you a note and let you know when she gets home safely. Thank you for taking care of Carmen, and thank you for taking the time to write in her notebook. Your new friends, Carmen and Ashley 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 We then took Carmen to our family friend Phil, a highway patrol officer(巡警).___________ _______________________________________▲_____________________________________ _______________________________________▲_____________________________________ _______________________________________▲_____________________________________ _______________________________________▲_____________________________________ Then one day in September the long-expected package with Carmen inside finally arrived. __ _______________________________________▲_____________________________________ _______________________________________▲_____________________________________ _______________________________________▲_____________________________________ _______________________________________▲_____________________________________ 文章大意 这篇文章讲述了一个十岁女孩阿什利，她曾因癌症接受治疗，现在虽然康复但对外界充满戒备。为了鼓励她冒险探索的精神，她的父亲想出了一个计划：让阿什利的泰迪熊卡门代替她进行一次虚拟的全国旅行。他们为卡门准备了旅行日记和背包，并附上阿什利写的信，请求遇到卡门的人帮助她旅行，并在日记中记录下他们的故事。卡门的第一次旅行是由他们的朋友菲尔，一位公路巡警开始的。九月的一天，卡门带着满是故事的日记和照片回到了家，阿什利通过这些记录体验了一次心灵的旅行，感受到了人们的温暖和世界的广阔。这个简单的想法不仅为阿什利带来了快乐，也触动了那些参与其中的人们的心。 在原文中，作者设置了几处伏笔，这些伏笔在续写中得到了回应： 1. 伏笔： 阿什利的愿望和她的健康状况。 回应：父亲为了鼓励阿什利的冒险精神，设计了卡门熊的旅行计划，这直接回应了阿什利想要冒险的愿望，同时也考虑到了她的健康状况。 2. 伏笔：卡门熊的旅行日记和背包。 回应：在续写中，卡门熊的旅行日记被用来记录她遇到的人们和经历的故事，背包则用于携带她的物品和日记，这些都是原文中提到的物品在故事中的使用。 3. 伏笔： 卡门熊的旅行计划和目标。 回应： 续写中详细描述了卡门熊的旅行经历，包括她访问的地方和遇到的人，这些都是对原文中提到的旅行计划的具体展开。 4. 伏笔： 阿什利的信中提到的九月回家。 回应：续写中提到了卡门熊在九月如期返回，这与阿什利信中的预期相呼应。 5. 伏笔：卡门熊的旅行对阿什利的意义。 回应： 续写中强调了卡门熊的旅行如何让阿什利体验到冒险，并通过卡门熊的眼睛看到世界，这回应了原文中提到的阿什利对外界的戒备和对冒险的渴望。 6. 伏笔： 卡门熊旅行的社交互动。 回应： 续写中描述了卡门熊如何与不同的人互动，包括巡警、消防员、农民等，这些都是对原文中提到的社交互动的进一步发展。 7. 伏笔：卡门熊旅行的结束和回家。 回应：续写中描述了卡门熊的回家，以及阿什利和父亲对旅行日记的反应，这为整个故事提供了一个圆满的结局。 这些伏笔和回应共同构成了一个连贯的故事，展示了卡门熊的旅行如何影响了阿什利以及那些参与其中的人们。 参考答案 We then took Carmen to our family friend Phil, a highway patrol officer(巡警). He offered to launch Carmen on her journey by taking her on his route for a day. That afternoon, when he stopped a driver who was not using a seatbelt, he urged her to wear the belt. He then introduced Carmen and asked the driver if she would like to take Carmen on the next part of her journey. Naturally, she agreed. That kicked off Carmen’s USA tour. Meanwhile, for Ashley, the following summer was a mix of anxiety and anticipation, as she checked daily for her package, only to be told “Not today,” each time. Then one day in September, the long-expected package with Carmen finally arrived. Eagerly, we opened the box to explore the traces of Carmen’s adventures. There were postcards from the Grand Canyon, a shell from a Florida beach, and a tiny replica of the Statue of Liberty. For us, each souvenir was a snapshot of the kindness and generosity Ashley had encountered through Carmen. The notes in the journal painted a vivid picture of the people who had taken Carmen into their hearts. It was a heartwarming gift that our family treasured, inspiring us as Ashley bravely faced her path to health. 下水文1 We then took Carmen to our family friend Phil, a highway patrol officer. He was the first to embark on Carmen's journey, taking her along his daily routes and introducing her to the people he encountered. Phil's colleagues, intrigued by Carmen's mission, eagerly wrote in her journal, sharing their stories and experiences. Each entry was a testament to the kindness and curiosity of those who met Carmen, making her journey all the more enriching. Then one day in September, the package containing Carmen arrived as promised. Ashley's eyes sparkled with excitement as she unwrapped the parcel. Inside, Carmen was nestled with a journal brimming with tales from her travels and a collection of photos that captured the essence of her adventures. The final entry was from Phil, who had seen Carmen off on her way home. His words expressed the joy and fulfillment he felt from participating in Carmen's journey, and he requested to be informed of her safe return. Ashley and I were touched by the heartfelt messages and the community that had formed around Carmen's mission, proving that even in challenging times, the spirit of exploration and the bonds of humanity can inspire and uplift us all. 下水文2 We then took Carmen to our family friend Phil, a highway patrol officer. He was more than happy to be Carmen's first stop on her cross-country adventure. Phil took Carmen on his daily patrols, introducing her to the diverse individuals he met along the way. From fellow officers to passing motorists, everyone was charmed by Carmen's mission and willingly contributed to her travel journal. Each person took a moment to share a bit about their life, their dreams, and their hopes, creating a rich tapestry of stories that Carmen would carry with her. Then one day in September, the package with Carmen inside arrived just as we had hoped. Ashley's eyes were filled with anticipation as she carefully opened the package. Carmen was returned to us, her journey complete, and with her, a journal that had grown thick with the accounts of the people she had met and the places she had seen. The stories were as varied as the people who had written them, from the simple pleasures of a day at the beach to the awe-inspiring views from the top of a mountain. Each page was a reminder of the kindness and generosity that Carmen had encountered on her travels. It was a heartwarming conclusion to an adventure that had not only brought joy to Ashley but had also touched the lives of many who had taken the time to share their stories with Carmen. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$