内蒙古赤峰市2024-2025学年高三9月联考英语读后续写 放下镜头，面对真实 讲义

续写题目 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The waiter carefully placed our food on the table. "Enjoy your meal. Let me know if you need anything," he said with a polite smile as he walked off to serve the other guests in the restaurant. Raul lifted his fork to begin eating before I interrupted him, "Wait, can I take a picture for my blog?" He sighed, "Go ahead." I took out my cell phone and took the picture. Then, I spent the next thirty seconds deciding on how to make a perfect post. By the time our ice cream dessert came around, I was getting ready to take my fifth picture of the night. Raul rolled his eyes. I quickly had a shot of the dessert before asking him, "Sorry, am I bothering you by taking pictures?" "I'm not going to lie. It's a little annoying," he said hesitantly. "But it's okay. I want you to do what makes you happy. " I put away the phone, a little bit embarrassed, and decided to just enjoy our dinner. While we conversed over dessert, his statement lingered（逗留）in the back of my mind. It wasn't until I reached home that I really thought over the issue. Did taking pictures of my life to show someone whom I barely spoke to make me happy? Well, there was definitely that indescribable feeling I felt when my post gained over twenty likes. It felt good; it felt like I won. But, what was the prize? I looked through the stream of photos that I had posted of Raul and me. Most were of our time spent at fine restaurants or the latest attractions near our city, and the brand name gifts we bought each other on holidays. I clicked on the profiles of other people I knew and noticed a similar trend. Well, when my post gained over twenty likes, it felt good. But does it really matter? 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Para 1: I called Raul that night. Para 2: “How about doing something meaningful for at least the next year?” I answered. 文章大意 文章讲述了主人公在餐厅与朋友Raul共进晚餐时，因为频繁拍照记录而忽略了与朋友的真实互动。在Raul的委婉提醒下，主人公开始反思自己的行为，意识到社交媒体上的点赞和关注并不能带来真正的满足感。回家后，主人公审视了自己过去在社交媒体上发布的照片，意识到这些照片并不能代表他们之间真正的关系和经历。在与Raul的深夜电话交谈中，主人公提出了一个想法：在未来一年内，他们将不再为了社交媒体而生活，而是专注于真实的体验和创造有意义的回忆。这个决定标志着他们将从追求虚拟的认可转向追求真实的生活体验。 在原文中，有几处伏笔为续写部分提供了基础： 1. 拍照行为的频繁：主人公在餐厅频繁拍照，这不仅影响了与Raul的用餐体验，也暗示了主人公对社交媒体的依赖。 2. Raul的微妙反应：Raul对主人公拍照行为的不满，虽然他没有直接表达，但从他的眼神和语气中可以感受到。 3. 主人公的自我反思：在对话中，主人公开始质疑自己追求社交媒体认可的行为是否真的让她快乐，这为后续的改变埋下了伏笔。 4. 社交媒体的虚幻满足：主人公意识到社交媒体上的点赞虽然让她感到短暂的满足，但这种满足是虚幻的，这促使她思考更深层次的满足感。 在续写部分，这些伏笔得到了回应： 1. 改变拍照习惯：主人公在电话中向Raul表达了想要改变频繁拍照的习惯，这直接回应了原文中拍照行为的频繁。 2. Raul的支持：Raul在电话中的支持和理解，回应了原文中他微妙的不满和对主人公幸福的关心。 3. 追求真实体验：主人公提出不再为了社交媒体而生活，而是专注于真实的体验，这回应了她在原文中的自我反思和对社交媒体虚幻满足的质疑。 4. 一年之约：主人公提出的“至少未来一年”的承诺，是对原文中她对社交媒体依赖的直接回应，也是她决心改变的明确表示。 这些伏笔和回应构成了故事的连贯性，推动了情节的发展，并揭示了主人公内心的变化和成长。 参考范文 Para 1: I called Raul that night. "Hey, it’s me," I said, my voice tentative. "I've been thinking and I can't help but wonder if I'm missing something more meaningful in life." There was a pause on the line. "You know," he finally replied, his tone thoughtful, "Sometimes, it just felt like you were more focused on capturing the moment than actually living it." His honesty struck a chord. Staring out at the flickering lights, I admitted, "I don’t want that to define our moments together." As I imagined him nodding slowly, he uttered, “I get that,” his voice steady, “What do you suggest?” Para 2: “How about doing something meaningful for at least the next year?” I answered. My pulse quickened as I envisioned us embarking on adventures that transcended the digital realm. “Let’s put our phones away when we’re together and focus on real experiences—explore the world, volunteer, or even try out new hobbies.” I could sense a spark in him as he leaned into my idea. “I’d like that,” he replied, a smile blossoming through the speaker. At that moment, a new resolve ignited within me, shimmering with infinite possibilities. I knew, instead of chasing ephemeral likes that eroded, we would be creating memories that endured. 下水文1 Para 1: I called Raul that night, my mind racing with the realizations of the day. "Raul, I've been reflecting on our dinner conversation," I said, my voice filled with a newfound clarity. "The constant need to capture every moment for social validation... it's been overshadowing the joy of the moment itself." I could sense his attention, his patience as he listened. "I think it's time for a change," I declared, feeling a resolve I hadn't known I possessed. "I want to live our experiences fully, without the filter of a camera lens." There was a thoughtful silence on the other end of the line, and I held my breath, waiting for his response. Para 2: "How about doing something meaningful for at least the next year?" I answered, my excitement growing with each word. "Let's make a pact to live in the moment, to truly enjoy our time together without the pressure of documenting it for social media." I could hear the smile in his voice as he responded, "I like the sound of that. Let's do it." We discussed ideas for experiences that would enrich our lives, from volunteering at a local charity to taking up a new hobby together. The conversation was filled with enthusiasm and a sense of adventure, and as we hung up, I felt a renewed sense of purpose. It was time to shift the focus from likes and shares to laughter and memories. 下水文2 Para 1: I called Raul that night, my thoughts swirling with the implications of our earlier discussion. "Raul, I've been mulling over what you mentioned at the restaurant," I ventured, my voice tinged with a hint of uncertainty but also a spark of resolve. "The way I've been treating our outings—turning them into photo ops for social media—it's not really about us, is it?" I paused, allowing the question to hang between us. "I've been so focused on the online approval, on the virtual pats on the back, that I might have lost sight of the real treasure: the time we spend together." I could almost feel Raul nodding on the other end, his understanding and support palpable even through the phone line. Para 2: "How about we make a commitment to live more authentically, at least for the next year?" I suggested, my words gaining momentum as the idea took shape in my mind. "Let's challenge ourselves to engage with life beyond the confines of our screens. We can explore new places, try out different activities, and most importantly, let's do it for the sake of the experience, not the 'likes'." I could hear the smile in Raul's voice as he replied, "I'm in. Let's make this year about creating memories that matter, not just for others to see, but for us to feel and cherish." And with that, we embarked on a new journey, one that promised to be less about digital footprints and more about the footprints we left on each other's hearts. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$