2024-2025学年高一上学期英语作文（1）建议类 导学案

Writing of Book4, M2 写作任务 天府之国的成都交通问题日益严重，上下班高峰期拥堵，事故频发。为了改善这种状况，市政府向市民征集建议。请以此写一篇120词左右的短文，提出自己的建议，建议要点如下： ①修缮公路 ②建立交桥 ③控制汽车产量 Step 1: analyse the task Q1: What is the writing purpose? Q2: What is the main tense you are going to use? Step 2: determine the structure Q3: How many paragraphs should be included? Reference passage [para.1]With the development of modern society, pollution caused by human activities is becoming a more and more serious problem. Smoke from factories and gases from vehicles are the main reasons for air pollution. Rivers are polluted when people throw waste into them, or when factories pour waste water into them. Modern lifestyle and modern ways of production also cause noise pollution. As a result, many species are dying out. More and more people are suffering from health problems. [para.2]Enough attention should be paid to this problem and measures should be taken. Firstly, we should make laws to prevent factories from pouring waste water into rivers and sending smoke into the air without being dealt with. Secondly, we should raise people’s awareness of the serious problem and call on more people to protect the environment. [para.3]Only by working together can we help the environment! The purpose of para 1. is to The purpose of para 2. is to The purpose of para 3. is to Step 3: determine key points of each para. 交通问题日益严重 上下班高峰期拥挤 事故频频发生 修缮公路 控制产量 采取措施take measures 解决问题solve the problem 减少意外lower / reduce the accident rate Step 4: finish the composition 天府之国的成都交通问题日益严重，上下班高峰期拥堵，事故频发。为了改善这种状况，市政府向市民征集建议。请以此写一篇120词左右的短文，提出自己的建议，建议要点如下： ①修缮公路 ②建立交桥 ③控制汽车产量 Step 4: present students’ composition(s) and sum up 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$