Unit 4 Writing 课件 2024-2025学年沪教牛津版（广州深圳沈阳通用）九年级英语上册

writing Unit3 Family life Learning objectives At the end of this class, you are able to: (1) know how to ask for help when you have problems; (2) write a composition about the topic. Principle: don’t criticize, condemn or complain What can we do when we have problems in getting along with others? Lead-in Before-writing 书面表达 假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Mike来信说他在人际交往方面感到迷茫,希望得到你的帮助。请你根据下面的内容要点,写一封回信给他,内容包括: 1. 对Mike表示理解和安慰; 2. 给Mike提供建议:①了解自己的优缺点;②与父母沟通你的感受;③……; 3. 表达对Mike的祝愿。 布局结构 第一段 第二段 第三段 表示理解与安慰 介绍3条建议 表达祝愿 人称、时态 第一人称、第二人称为主 一般现在时 1.交代问题:Mike在人际交往方面感到困惑。 Presentation Dear Mike, How’s everything going?_ 2.表示理解与安慰;引出下文建议 Para.1 interpersonal communication人际交往 confused (adj.) 感到困惑的 It’s normal to have such feelings. The followings are some of my suggestions. 解锁短语与句型 1.很抱歉听说你在人际交往方面感到困惑。 2.有时有这种感觉是十分正常的。 3.承上启下。 It is completely normal to have such feelings... The followings are some of my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows./... 宾语从句 I’m sorry to hear that you feel confused about... Para.1 Dear Mike, How’s everything going? (问候) I’m very sorry to hear that you are feeling confused about interpersonal communication.(问题) It’s completely normal to have such feelings sometimes, so don’t be upset.(理解与安慰) The followings are some of my suggestions(承上启下) . Presentation Para.2 介绍3条与人相处的建议: (1)了解自己的优缺点; (2)与父母沟通你的感受; (3)...... suggestions 建议1:了解自己的优缺点。(It is+adj.+for sb. to do sth.) 拓展:如果你擅长聆听,你可以用这项技能去建立更好的人际关系。 _ First of all, it’s very important for you to be aware of your strengths and weaknesses. For example, if you are good at listening, you can use this strength to build better relationship. suggestions 建议2:与父母沟通你的感受。(communicate with sb.) 拓展:父母有更多的生活经验,可以给你一些有价值的建议。 _ Second, you should communicate with your parents. They have more life experience and can give you valuable advice. suggestions 建议3:与同学参加一些活动。(take part in some activities) 拓展:这是让你们更加了解彼此的好机会。之后你们可能会成为好朋友。 _ _ Last but not least, you can take part in some activities with your classmates. It’s a good chance for you to learn more about each other, and you may become good friends after that. Brain storming Para.2 First of all, it’s very important for you to be aware of your strengths and weaknesses. For example, if you are good at listening, you can use this strength to build better relationship. Second, you should communicate with your parents. They have more life experience and can give you valuable advice. Last but not least, you can take part in some activities with your classmates. It’s a good chance for you to learn more about each other, and you may become good friends after that. Presentation Para.3 表达对Mike的祝愿: 希望建议对你有帮助,你能够与周围的人建立密切的关系。 _ I hope these suggestions can help you and you can have a close relationship with people around you. Writing 20 minutes One possible version: Dear Mike, How’s everything going? I’m very sorry to hear that you are feeling confused about interpersonal communication. It’s completely normal to have such feelings sometimes, so don’t be upset. The followings are some of my suggestions. First of all, it’s very important for you to be aware of your strengths and weaknesses. For example, if you are good at listening, you can use this strength to build better relationship. Second, you should communicate with your parents. They have more life experience and can give you valuable advice. Last but not least, you can take part in some activities with your classmates. It’s a good chance for you to learn more about each other, and you may become good friends after that. I hope these suggestions can help you and you can have a close relationship with people around you. Thank you! $$