Unit 1 Teenage Life Reading for Writing 建议信 课件-2024-2025学年高中英语人教版（2019）必修第一册

Reading for Writing 建议信 课程目标： 1、帮助学生掌握建议信的常见结构和语言特征； 2、通过读写结合，学习写一封语意连贯、结构清晰的建议信 学习目标： 1、通过task1，通过阅读和回答相关问题，了解建议信写作主体结构 2、通过task2，掌握具体写作重点词汇、短语和句式 3、通过task3，小组讨论为相关问题提出建议 4、通过task4，形成初稿并润色文章 Lead-In What is the purpose of an advice letter? What kind of aspects should be included in such kind of letter Susan Luo, an adviser for teenagers, has received a letter asking for some advice. Read her reply and answer the following questions: Task 1 1. What is Worried Friend’s problem? 2. Do you think Ms. Luo’s advice is useful? Why or why not? 3. What other kinds of advice would you give? The problem is his/her friend Chen Lei plays computer games too often and spends too much time online. I think Ms. Luo’s advice is useful because it’s always good to talk to a friend about his or her problems and offer advice. Also, to try a new hobby may help his/her friend to spend less time online. I think he can spend some time playing sports outdoors with friends. He can also learn something about programming instead of just playing games. Or I will encourage him to try new hobbies. A. I know what the problem is. B. I understand how you feel. C. This is my advice and reason(s). D. I think my advice will help. You wrote that you are very woried about your fiend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrild. You think that you friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online. I recommend that you talk to you friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other tings in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage you fiend to ty new hobies. Why not discuss the problem together? I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend. 10 September 2018 Dear Worried Friend, 7 The outline of the passage Paragraph 1：the ____________ of the letter Paragraph 2：the ____________ that you give Paragraph 3：the writer’s ____________ purpose suggestions hope 8 建议信基本结构 9 Preparation for writing: List the words, phrases and sentences Task 2 ①____________ vt.　建议　　　　 ②____________ adj.不健康的 ③____________ vt. 鼓励 ④____________ adj. 有用的 ⑤____________ vt. 忠告，建议 ⑥________________ 闲暇 ⑦____________ 盼望，期望 ⑧________________ 对…… 担心 ⑨____________ 喜爱 ⑩____________ 对……上瘾 ⑪____________ 集中精力于 ⑫___________________ 对……有益处 ⑬____________ 交朋友 ⑭____________ 收到……的来信 ⑮___________________ 玩得愉快 recommend encourage advice look forward to be attracted to concentrate on make friends enjoy oneself/have fun unhealthy useful in one’s spare time be worried about be addicted to be good for/do good to hear from Words and phrases Words and phrases ① _____________________________ n.　建议 ② _____________________________ n. 情况 ③ _____________________________ 交朋友 ④ _____________________________ 做……有困难 ⑤ _____________________________ 接受某人的建议 ⑥_____________________________ 和……同甘共苦 ⑦ _____________________________ 需要 ⑧ _____________________________ 全心全意 tip/advice/suggestion situation make friends have trouble/difficulty in doing... take one’s advice share happiness and sorrow with... call for put one’s heart into 12 Sentences ①知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很抱歉。(have trouble in...) ________________________________________________________________________ ②如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种情况是很容易的。(be＋adj.＋to do) ________________________________________________________________________ ③要交朋友为什么不先做一个朋友呢？(why not) ________________________________________________________________________ ④你和朋友同甘共苦难道不是一个好主意吗？(Wouldn’t it be a good idea...？) ________________________________________________________________________⑤正如一句谚语说的，患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(as a saying goes) ________________________________________________________________________ I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends. The situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Why not be a friend first，if you want to make friends? Wouldn’t it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friend? Just as a saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. 13 Work in groups: Choose one of your classmates and discuss his/her problem. List possible suggestions and reasons. Task 3 Situation Suggestion Reason Expression used My parents won't listen when I tell them things. I always feel lonely after school because m parents work in another city. There is a girl I like in my class, but I'm too shy to talk to her. 添加过渡词和衔接词，突出文章的层次感和逻辑性 一、表逻辑上的先后顺序 ① 首先 first，firstly，in the first place，to begin with ②其次 secondly，in the second place ③最后，最重要的是at last，finally，last，lastly，most importantly 二、表递进关系 ① 也;而且;还 also，too，besides ② 而且 and ③ 此外 in addition to，apart from ④此外furthermore，what’s more ⑤ 不仅……而且…… not only…but also… Task 4 Draft your letter according to the outline below and exchange drafs with your partner and polish it Dear_______, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题). Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下) I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. All the best,(表达愿望). Yours,/Sincerely, Li Hua Post-writing—polishing the passage Exchange your letter with your partner，and pay attention to the following points. □1.Are all the parts of a letter included and organised in good order? □2.Does the writer give reasons for the advice? □3.Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions? □4.Does the writer use commas and stops correctly? □5.Is the handwriting easy to read? 19 亮点表达补充 1.建议信开头常用句式 ①I know you are now having trouble communicating with others，and you may often feel lonely.我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独。 ②I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on... 很高兴收到你就……征求建议的来信。 ③Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you. 这里有帮助你的一些建议。 20 2.表达建议常用句式 ①First(ly)，why not join a club? If you do this，you can make friends. 首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。 ②Second(ly)，you should/can try to talk with others.Then/That way，you will feel better. 其次，你应该尽力与人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。 ③Third(ly)，it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music.By doing this，you will calm yourself down. 第三，如果你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。 ④Last but not least，you should talk with her first. 最后但同等重要的是，你应该先和她谈一谈。 ⑤As far as I am concerned/In my opinion，you should help each other. 就我而言/在我看来，你们应该互相帮助。 21 3.建议信结尾常用句式 ①I hope you will find these ideas useful. 我希望你会发现这些办法有用。 ②As time goes on，people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above advice. 如果你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加了解你，会愿意和你交朋友的 ③I believe that if you follow my advice，you’ll get along well with your classmates. 我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会和同学们相处好的。 22 Thanks $$