内容正文:
新华中学学历案 年级:高一 学科:英语 使用时间:2021.8.15 编写人:高一英语组 审核人:王丹丹 班级: 姓名:
Unit 1 Reading for writing
【课标要求】
1、帮助学生掌握建议信的常见结构和语言特征;
2、通过读写结合,学习写一封语意连贯、结构清晰的建议信
【学习目标】
1、通过task1,通过阅读和回答相关问题,了解建议信写作主体结构
2、通过task2,掌握具体写作重点词汇、短语和句式
3、通过task3,小组讨论为相关问题提出建议
4、通过task4,形成初稿并润色文章
【学习过程】
1、 精引导入:(3min)
What is the purpose of an advice letter?
What kind of aspects should be included in such kind of letter?
二、任务驱动:
Task 1:Susan Luo, an adviser for teenagers, has received a letter asking for some advice. Read her reply and answer the following questions
1. What is Worried Friend’s problem?
2. Do you think Ms. Luo’s advice is useful? Why or why not?
3. What other kinds of advice would you give?
交流分享:The outline of the passage
Paragraph 1:the ____________ of the letter
Paragraph 2:the ____________ that you give
Paragraph 3:the writer’s ____________
Task2:Preparation for writing ——List the words, phrases and sentences
(1)Words and phrases
① vt. 建议 ② adj.不健康的
③ vt. 鼓励 ④ adj. 有用的
⑤____________ vt. 忠告,建议 ⑥________________ 闲暇
⑦ 盼望,期望 ⑧ 对…… 担心
⑨ 喜爱 ⑩ 对……上瘾
⑪ 集中精力于 ⑫ 对……有益处
⑬____________ 交朋友 ⑭________________ 收到……的来信
⑮ 玩得愉快
(2)Phrases
① n. 建议
② n. 情况
③ 交朋友
④ 做……有困难
⑤ 接受某人的建议
⑥ 和……同甘共苦
⑦ 需要
⑧ 全心全意
(3)Sentences
①知道你在交友方面有麻烦,我很抱歉。(have trouble in...)
②如果你采纳我的建议,改变这种情况是很容易的。(be+adj.+to do)
③要交朋友为什么不先做一个朋友呢?(why not)
④你和朋友同甘共苦难道不是一个好主意吗?(Wouldn’t it be a good idea...?)
⑤正如一句谚语说的,患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(as a saying goes)
Task 3:Work in groups.
Choose one of the teenagers and discuss his/her problem. List possible suggestions and reasons.
Situation
Suggestion
Reason
Expression used
My parents won't listen when I tell them things.
I always feel lonely after school because m parents work in another city.
There is a girl I like in my class, but I'm too shy to talk to her.
添加过渡词和衔接词,突出文章的层次感和逻辑性
(一)表逻辑上的先后顺序
① 首先 first,firstly,in the first place,to begin with
②其次 secondly,in the second place
③最后,最重要的是at last,finally,last,lastly,most importantly
(二)表递进关系
① 也;而且;还 also,too,besides
② 而且 and
③ 此外 in addition to,apart from
④此外furthermore,what’s more
⑤ 不仅……而且…… not only…but also…
Task 4:Draft your letter according to the outline below and exchange drafs with your partner and polish it
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).
Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议,如下)
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
All the best,(表达愿望).
Yours,/Sincerely, Li Hua
4、 总结提升:
(一)亮点补充:
①I know you are now having trouble communicating with others,and you may often feel lonely.我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦,你也可能经常感到孤独。
②I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
很高兴收到你就……征求建议的来信。
③Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you.
这里有帮助你的一些建议。
2.表达建议常用句式
①First(ly),why not join a club? If you do this,you can make friends.
首先,为什么不参加一个俱乐部?如果你这样做的话,就会交到朋友。
②Second(ly),you should/can try to talk with others.Then/That way,you will feel better.
其次,你应该尽力与人交谈。这样,你会感觉好点。
③Third(ly),it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music.By doing this,you will calm yourself down.
第三,如果你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做,你会使自己平静下来。
④Last but not least,you should talk with her first.
最后但同等重要的是,你应该先和她谈一谈。
⑤As far as I am concerned/In my opinion,you should help each other.
就我而言/在我看来,你们应该互相帮助。
3.建议信结尾常用句式
①I hope you will find these ideas useful.
我希望你会发现这些办法有用。
②As time goes on,people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above advice.
如果你遵从以上建议,随着时间的推移,人们会更加了解你,会愿意和你交朋友的
③I believe that if you follow my advice,you’ll get along well with your classmates.
我相信,如果你听从我的建议,你会和同学们相处好的。
(二)总结:
1.知识方面: ____________________________________________________
2.能力方面:____________________________________________________
3.我的疑惑:____________________________________________________
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
$$