专题04 Unit1 ～Unit4书面表达串讲【考点清单】-2024-2025学年八年级英语上学期期中考点大串讲（牛津译林版）

专题04 Unit1 ~Unit4书面表达串讲 1. 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 Unit1 本单元以“朋友”为话题,要求学生对朋友的外貌特征、个人品质及未来计划进行描述,同时给出一些建议。 素材积累 1. 描写人物外貌和品格的常用词汇: Appearance: tall // short // fat // thin // slim // beautiful // pretty // good-looking // handsome // lovely // cute // strong... Personality: clever // smart // polite // friendly // kind // generous // hard-working // helpful // honest // humorous // patient... 假如梅是你的好朋友,住在你家隔壁,你们既是邻居又是最好的朋友。请根据下列内容,写一篇短文介绍她。 外　貌 大眼睛,圆脸,长直发,是朋友中最苗条的,总是面带微笑 个　性 1. 慷慨大方,乐意和朋友分享 2. 心地善良,从不说别人的坏话 3. 乐于助人,有烦心事的时候,我总是找她倾诉 4. 可以告诉她任何事,因为她总能保守秘密 特　长 有好的嗓音,歌唱得好;擅长骑自行车 未来计划 长大后想当一名歌手并周游世界 写作提纲 [高分范文] May is both my neighbour and my best friend. We are now studying at a mixed school. She has a round face with big eyes. She has long straight hair. She is the slimmest of my friends. She always wears a smile on her face. May is generous and is willing to share her things with friends. She is kind and never says a bad word about anyone. She is also very helpful. She always listens to my problems carefully and gives me some help. I can tell her anything because she can always keep a secret. She has a good voice and sings well. She is also good at riding a bike. She wants to be a singer and travel around the world when she grows up. 写作任务 请根据下面提示, 以“My best friend”为题写一篇短文介绍你的好朋友Daniel。 特点 圆脸, 瘦高个儿; 很幽默, 经常讲笑话让我们开怀大笑。 品行 愿意和朋友分享东西; 对人友善; 时刻准备帮助别人。 爱好 喜欢阅读, 每天看英文报刊和杂志。 喜欢运动, 每周二和周四下午放学后和同班同学们一起打棒球。 喜欢旅行, 希望每周进行一次学校旅行。 未来计划 长大想当……  要求: 1. 表达清楚, 语句通顺, 意思连贯; 2. 短文必须包括所有的信息, 省略号部分适当发挥1~2句; 3. 100 词左右。 My best friend I have a wonderful friend named Daniel. I’d like to tell you something about him. He is tall and thin and has a round face. He has a good sense of humour and often tells us funny jokes to make us laugh. He is generous and always willing to share what he has with others. He is also kind. He is ready to help people in need any time. He has many hobbies. He loves reading and he reads English newspapers and magazines every day. He likes doing sports too. Every Tuesday and Thursday afternoon, he plays baseball with his classmates after school. He also enjoys travelling and he hopes that he can go on a school trip every week. He wants to become a social worker when he grows up, because he would like to help more people. Unit 2 本单元以“学校生活”为话题,要求学生对心中理想的学校生活进行描述,包括课程的开始、结束;课程的内容及作业等。 素材积累 1. 描写学校生活的常用词汇: 科目: Chinese // Maths // English // French // Physics // PE // History // Geography... 运动: badminton // basketball // football // table tennis // tennis // volleyball... 校园俱乐部: Art Club // Chess Club // Dance Club // Reading Club... 2. 描写学校生活的常用重点句型: My ideal school starts at ... and finishes at ... We have an hour for ... I have ... because I think ... is very interesting. I love ..., so I have ... every day. We have lots of ... Every ..., we go on a school trip. 经典例题 请根据提示,以“My ideal school”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。 提示:1. 学校有五幢教学楼、两千多名学生、三百多名教师;2. 教室宽敞明亮,教师亲切,学生友好且乐于助人;3. 早上八点上课,每天上六节课,星期六和星期天不上学;4. 没有许多家庭作业,有许多时间进行课外活动…… 写作提纲 [高分范文] My ideal school My ideal school has five teaching buildings. There are more than 2,000 students and more than 300 teachers in it. The classrooms are bright and big. The teachers are very kind and the students are friendly and helpful. The first class begins at 8 o’clock in the morning. We have six lessons every day. We don’t go to school on weekends. We don’t have too much homework to do every day. Instead, we have much time for after-school activities. We feel very happy in this kind of school. 丰富多彩的“课后服务”活动让我们的校园生活更加充实, 促进我们成长。请以“Colorful Activities at School”为题, 写一篇80 词左右的短文。 要求: 1. 短文应包含思维导图中的所有信息, 可适当发挥; 2. 主要写“课后服务”期间参加的活动, 如作业辅导、社团活动等; 3. 摘抄试卷内容不得分, 文中不得出现考生真实姓名、学校校名。 Colorful Activities at School Places On the playground ... Activities Homework / Drawing ... Reasons I like ... best, because ... Feelings I think ... Colorful Activities at School Since the implementation of the “double reduction” policy, all kinds of “after-school service” activities have enriched our campus life. Let me introduce some of my own activities. First, after school, I usually play basketball on the playground for half an hour. And it will make me full of energy. Then, I finish my homework at school. So I don’t have to do my homework when I go home. Finally, I will take drawing lessons. Because I like drawing things on paper best. I think it’s very relaxing for me. Unit 3 本单元以“出行游记”为话题。要求完成一个短篇游记写作。 素材积累 1. 出行游记的常用词汇: plan // journey // trip // square // museum // arrive (at/in) // reach // get to // places of interest // boring // exciting // interesting // culture // get on // get off // cost // ticket... 出行游记的常用重点句型: We are planning a day out on... We will meet at... We will take the underground/bus to... We will visit/see... We will go back to... The cost is about ... per student. 经典例题 请根据下列提示,以学生会的名义,写一则本周日学校旅行的通知。 1. 地点和费用:浙江西塘古镇,每位80元;2. 周日早上6:30在校门口上车,不要迟到,坐车需要大约两个小时;3. 主要活动:欣赏古镇的美景,了解不同的文化,买礼物送给家人和朋友;4. 在当地一家有名的饭馆吃午餐;5. 下午4点返回学校。 写作提纲 [高分范文] October 20, 2023 Dear all, We will go on a school trip to Xitang—an old town in Zhejiang this Sunday. We will get on the bus at the school gate at 6:30 a.m. this Sunday. Don’t be late. It will take us about two hours to get there. We will enjoy the beautiful sights of the old town and learn about different cultures. We can also buy some presents for family and friends. We will have lunch in a famous local restaurant. We will be back to school at 4 p.m. The cost of the trip is 80 yuan per student. The Students’Union 假如去年“五·一”期间你和你的父母到南通旅游, 你在这次旅游中收获颇丰。请你根据下表所提供的要点, 以“The trip to Nantong”为题, 用英语写一篇短文, 并就这次旅游的所见所闻谈谈你的收获。 活动项目 上午 1. 游览狼山 遇见外国人，与其交谈 (自拟一点收获) 2. 参观园艺博览园 观赏花木，拍摄照片 (自拟一点收获) 下午 1. 参观海底世界 (自拟一点收获) 2. 畅游美丽濠河 (自拟一点收获) 活动感受 (自拟旅游的感受) ( 自拟旅游的感受) 注意: 1. 短文必须包含所给要点, 可适当发挥; 2. 词数不少于90, 开头已写好, 不计入总词数; 3. 文中不得提及真实的校名和人名。 参考词汇: the Wolf Hill 狼山; the Horticultural Exposition 园艺博览园; the Undersea World 海底世界; the Haohe River 濠河 The trip to Nantong Last May Day holiday, my parents and I went to Nantong. This experience impressed (给……留下印象) me.In the morning, we went sightseeing on the Wolf Hill. I met a foreigner and talked with him in English when we climbed the hill. I was very happy that I found it useful to learn English. Then we went to the Horticultural Exposition. We saw many kinds of flowers and took lots of photos. We learned a lot about the flowers. In the afternoon, I learned a lot about the names of fish when we went to the Undersea World. Later that day, we took a boat trip on the Haohe River. I enjoyed the beautiful views and sang happily all the way. We had such an exciting trip that we will never forget it. We hope to visit Nantong again some day. Unit 4 本单元的话题与DIY有关。现在DIY在青少年中越来越受欢迎。他们喜欢动手做各种各样的物品。在写关于DIY的短文时,要包括DIY的目的、内容、过程、结果以及收获的喜悦之情。 1. DIY 的常用词汇: instructions // tool // paint // brush // glue // rope // scissors // tape // fix // repair // decorate // stick // put in // put up // fill...with... // make a mistake // cut out // mix // tidy up // go wrong // correct 2. DIY 的常用重点句型: I decide to ... by myself. ... help me with ... We had fun working together. It took me ... minutes/hours to finish it. I made some mistakes when ... In the end, ... When I completed ... , ... 经典例题 假如你是一个DIY迷,请你根据下面的提示写一篇短文,介绍你的DIY。提示: 要求:1. 短文应包括提示中所给的信息,可以适当发挥;2. 句意连贯,语句通顺;3. 80词左右。 写作提纲 [高分范文] I am crazy about DIY, and I often do some things with my own hands in my free time. Sometimes I have to read the instructions carefully. Last week, I thought my bedroom was boring, so I decided to paint it yellow. My mum told me to stop, but I kept on painting until the walls and the ceiling were yellow. Yesterday I put up a shelf above my bed, and put many storybooks on it. Now it is very easy for me to get the books because I don’t have to go to the study to get them any more. 近年流行DIY, DIY 源于为节省费用人们在闲暇时自行整修房屋的行为, 渐渐地DIY 的概念也被扩及到所有可以自己动手做的事物上。请以“My View on DIY”为题写一篇英语短文。 要求: 1. 词数80 左右, 书写工整, 语句通顺, 意思连贯; 2. 文中不得提及真实的人名和校名等个人信息。 要点: * What do you think of DIY? * What DIY job did you once do? * What tools and materials did you use? * Was your work well done? * What do you learn from DIY? My View on DIY DIY is very popular now. I think DIY can help improve our abilities in doing something and it can make us use less money. My parents never let me do anything. But on Mother’s Day, I wanted to make my mother surprised. I planned to make the card for her by myself. I used some tools and materials, such as paper, glue, scissors and so on. Although I didn’t do it well, my mother was still happy. It is very important for me and I am sure DIY will help me more. Let’s DIY from now on to make us act better in the future. 练习 1.假如你是校报的英语记者李平,请你根据以下信息,给新入学的学弟学妹们写一封信,欢迎他们来到新学校,并对他们在学校如何做合格的中学生提出建议。 写作要点:1.欢迎他们来到新学校。 2.介绍学校:(1)课程有趣;(2)有多名外教;(3)课外活动丰富。 3.请对他们在学校如何做合格的(qualified) 中学生提出具体建议。 写作要求:1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。 3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4.至少80词。 Dear new friends, It’s my pleasure to write you this letter.  Best wishes! Yours, Li Ping [思路点拨] ①题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作。首先欢迎新生来到新学校,然后从课程、外教及课外活动方面对学校进行介绍,最后对新生在学校如何做合格的中学生提出建议。 ②写作指导:题目中给出了具体的写作内容,我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息,不能遗漏要点,并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称,通过分析可知,这篇短文应使用一般现在时。 [标准范文] Dear new friends,  It’s my pleasure to write you this letter. Welcome to our school!  At first I’ll introduce the school to you. There are many interesting subjects in our school, such as painting, swimming and music. You can learn a lot from the subjects. There are also many foreign teachers in our school. They are well trained and have much teaching experience. We also have many colourful activities in our school. How to be a qualified student? Here’s some advice. First, you should obey the school rules. Second, work hard and make progress every day. Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it. Third, learn to get on well with your classmates at school. Fourth, you can ask your teachers or friends for help when you’re in trouble. I hope you can grow as a person in our school. Best wishes!  Yours, Li Ping  [高级语块] 重点 句型 Second, work hard and make progress every day. 努力学习,每天进步。(and连接两个简单句,并列句) Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it.如果你用心投入,没有什么是困难的。(if引导条件状语从句) 重点 短语 such as例如;make progress取得进步;put your heart into...用心投入到…… 2.你们班将于期中考试后外出游玩一天,参观扬州名胜。请你以班长的名义写一封信,向全班同学发出邀请,并对行程和交通工具做出安排。 要点:1.上午8∶00在校门口集合上车;参观瘦西湖(the Slender West Lake)和个园(the Geyuan Garden)并拍照。 2.午饭后到茱萸湾风景区(the Zhuyu Bay Scenic Spot)看熊猫并欣赏美景。 3.傍晚到东关街购物,品尝扬州小吃,在DIY商店学做水果色拉。 4.每人费用100元。旅行结束后会把照片放在网上供同学们浏览。 5.希望每个同学会喜欢本次旅行并玩得开心。 注意:1.词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 2.邀请信必须包括所有内容要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺。 Dear classmates, I hope all of you will have a good time then. Yours, John [思路点拨] ①题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作。首先写上午、下午和傍晚的游玩计划,然后介绍费用及注意事项。 ②写作指导:本文应该主要用第一人称来写;时态以一般将来时为主;写游玩计划时,要加一些连词,使短文连贯、通顺。 [标准范文] Dear classmates,  After the mid-term exam, we’ll visit places of great interest in Yangzhou. At 8∶00 a.m., we’ll meet at the school gate and get on the bus. After we get to Yangzhou, we will visit the Slender West Lake and the Geyuan Garden. We can take some beautiful photos there. After lunch, we’ll go to the Zhuyu Bay Scenic Spot to see the pandas and enjoy the beautiful scenery. In the late afternoon, we’ll go to Dongguan Street to do some shopping, enjoy Yangzhou snacks and learn to make fruit salad in the DIY store. The cost is 100 yuan per person. After the visit, I will put the pictures on the Internet for students to see. I hope all of you will have a good time then.  Yours, John [高级语块] 重点 句型 After we get to Yangzhou, we will visit the Slender West Lake and the Geyuan Garden. 到达扬州后,我们将参观瘦西湖和个园。(after 引导时间状语从句) I hope all of you will have a good time then.我希望你们都能玩得开心。(hope后跟宾语从句,省略引导词that) 重点 短语 places of great interest名胜; do some shopping购物; have a good time玩得开心 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题04 Unit1 ~Unit4书面表达串讲 1. 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 Unit1 本单元以“朋友”为话题,要求学生对朋友的外貌特征、个人品质及未来计划进行描述,同时给出一些建议。 素材积累 1. 描写人物外貌和品格的常用词汇: Appearance: tall // short // fat // thin // slim // beautiful // pretty // good-looking // handsome // lovely // cute // strong... Personality: clever // smart // polite // friendly // kind // generous // hard-working // helpful // honest // humorous // patient... 假如梅是你的好朋友,住在你家隔壁,你们既是邻居又是最好的朋友。请根据下列内容,写一篇短文介绍她。 外　貌 大眼睛,圆脸,长直发,是朋友中最苗条的,总是面带微笑 个　性 1. 慷慨大方,乐意和朋友分享 2. 心地善良,从不说别人的坏话 3. 乐于助人,有烦心事的时候,我总是找她倾诉 4. 可以告诉她任何事,因为她总能保守秘密 特　长 有好的嗓音,歌唱得好;擅长骑自行车 未来计划 长大后想当一名歌手并周游世界 写作提纲 May is both my neighbour and my best friend. We are now studying at a mixed school. 写作任务 请根据下面提示, 以“My best friend”为题写一篇短文介绍你的好朋友Daniel。 特点 圆脸, 瘦高个儿; 很幽默, 经常讲笑话让我们开怀大笑。 品行 愿意和朋友分享东西; 对人友善; 时刻准备帮助别人。 爱好 喜欢阅读, 每天看英文报刊和杂志。 喜欢运动, 每周二和周四下午放学后和同班同学们一起打棒球。 喜欢旅行, 希望每周进行一次学校旅行。 未来计划 长大想当……  要求: 1. 表达清楚, 语句通顺, 意思连贯; 2. 短文必须包括所有的信息, 省略号部分适当发挥1~2句; 3. 100 词左右。 My best friend I have a wonderful friend named Daniel. I’d like to tell you something about him. Unit 2 本单元以“学校生活”为话题,要求学生对心中理想的学校生活进行描述,包括课程的开始、结束;课程的内容及作业等。 素材积累 1. 描写学校生活的常用词汇: 科目: Chinese // Maths // English // French // Physics // PE // History // Geography... 运动: badminton // basketball // football // table tennis // tennis // volleyball... 校园俱乐部: Art Club // Chess Club // Dance Club // Reading Club... 2. 描写学校生活的常用重点句型: My ideal school starts at ... and finishes at ... We have an hour for ... I have ... because I think ... is very interesting. I love ..., so I have ... every day. We have lots of ... Every ..., we go on a school trip. 经典例题 请根据提示,以“My ideal school”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。 提示:1. 学校有五幢教学楼、两千多名学生、三百多名教师;2. 教室宽敞明亮,教师亲切,学生友好且乐于助人;3. 早上八点上课,每天上六节课,星期六和星期天不上学;4. 没有许多家庭作业,有许多时间进行课外活动…… 写作提纲 My ideal school We feel very happy in this kind of school. 丰富多彩的“课后服务”活动让我们的校园生活更加充实, 促进我们成长。请以“Colorful Activities at School”为题, 写一篇80 词左右的短文。 要求: 1. 短文应包含思维导图中的所有信息, 可适当发挥; 2. 主要写“课后服务”期间参加的活动, 如作业辅导、社团活动等; 3. 摘抄试卷内容不得分, 文中不得出现考生真实姓名、学校校名。 Colorful Activities at School Places On the playground ... Activities Homework / Drawing ... Reasons I like ... best, because ... Feelings I think ... Colorful Activities at School Unit 3 本单元以“出行游记”为话题。要求完成一个短篇游记写作。 素材积累 1. 出行游记的常用词汇: plan // journey // trip // square // museum // arrive (at/in) // reach // get to // places of interest // boring // exciting // interesting // culture // get on // get off // cost // ticket... 出行游记的常用重点句型: We are planning a day out on... We will meet at... We will take the underground/bus to... We will visit/see... We will go back to... The cost is about ... per student. 经典例题 请根据下列提示,以学生会的名义,写一则本周日学校旅行的通知。 1. 地点和费用:浙江西塘古镇,每位80元;2. 周日早上6:30在校门口上车,不要迟到,坐车需要大约两个小时;3. 主要活动:欣赏古镇的美景,了解不同的文化,买礼物送给家人和朋友;4. 在当地一家有名的饭馆吃午餐;5. 下午4点返回学校。 写作提纲 [高分范文] October 20, 2023 The Students’Union 假如去年“五·一”期间你和你的父母到南通旅游, 你在这次旅游中收获颇丰。请你根据下表所提供的要点, 以“The trip to Nantong”为题, 用英语写一篇短文, 并就这次旅游的所见所闻谈谈你的收获。 活动项目 上午 1. 游览狼山 遇见外国人，与其交谈 (自拟一点收获) 2. 参观园艺博览园 观赏花木，拍摄照片 (自拟一点收获) 下午 1. 参观海底世界 (自拟一点收获) 2. 畅游美丽濠河 (自拟一点收获) 活动感受 (自拟旅游的感受) ( 自拟旅游的感受) 注意: 1. 短文必须包含所给要点, 可适当发挥; 2. 词数不少于90, 开头已写好, 不计入总词数; 3. 文中不得提及真实的校名和人名。 参考词汇: the Wolf Hill 狼山; the Horticultural Exposition 园艺博览园; the Undersea World 海底世界; the Haohe River 濠河 The trip to Nantong Last May Day holiday, my parents and I went to Nantong. This experience impressed (给……留下印象) me. Unit 4 本单元的话题与DIY有关。现在DIY在青少年中越来越受欢迎。他们喜欢动手做各种各样的物品。在写关于DIY的短文时,要包括DIY的目的、内容、过程、结果以及收获的喜悦之情。 1. DIY 的常用词汇: instructions // tool // paint // brush // glue // rope // scissors // tape // fix // repair // decorate // stick // put in // put up // fill...with... // make a mistake // cut out // mix // tidy up // go wrong // correct 2. DIY 的常用重点句型: I decide to ... by myself. ... help me with ... We had fun working together. It took me ... minutes/hours to finish it. I made some mistakes when ... In the end, ... When I completed ... , ... 经典例题 假如你是一个DIY迷,请你根据下面的提示写一篇短文,介绍你的DIY。提示: 要求:1. 短文应包括提示中所给的信息,可以适当发挥;2. 句意连贯,语句通顺;3. 80词左右。 写作提纲 近年流行DIY, DIY 源于为节省费用人们在闲暇时自行整修房屋的行为, 渐渐地DIY 的概念也被扩及到所有可以自己动手做的事物上。请以“My View on DIY”为题写一篇英语短文。 要求: 1. 词数80 左右, 书写工整, 语句通顺, 意思连贯; 2. 文中不得提及真实的人名和校名等个人信息。 要点: * What do you think of DIY? * What DIY job did you once do? * What tools and materials did you use? * Was your work well done? * What do you learn from DIY? My View on DIY 练习 1.假如你是校报的英语记者李平,请你根据以下信息,给新入学的学弟学妹们写一封信,欢迎他们来到新学校,并对他们在学校如何做合格的中学生提出建议。 写作要点:1.欢迎他们来到新学校。 2.介绍学校:(1)课程有趣;(2)有多名外教;(3)课外活动丰富。 3.请对他们在学校如何做合格的(qualified) 中学生提出具体建议。 写作要求:1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。 3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4.至少80词。 Dear new friends, It’s my pleasure to write you this letter.  Best wishes! Yours, Li Ping 2.你们班将于期中考试后外出游玩一天,参观扬州名胜。请你以班长的名义写一封信,向全班同学发出邀请,并对行程和交通工具做出安排。 要点:1.上午8∶00在校门口集合上车;参观瘦西湖(the Slender West Lake)和个园(the Geyuan Garden)并拍照。 2.午饭后到茱萸湾风景区(the Zhuyu Bay Scenic Spot)看熊猫并欣赏美景。 3.傍晚到东关街购物,品尝扬州小吃,在DIY商店学做水果色拉。 4.每人费用100元。旅行结束后会把照片放在网上供同学们浏览。 5.希望每个同学会喜欢本次旅行并玩得开心。 注意:1.词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 2.邀请信必须包括所有内容要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺。 Dear classmates, I hope all of you will have a good time then. Yours, John 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$