Unit1 You and Me单元话题写作思路点拨 - 2024-2025学年七年级英语上学期单元话题写作思路点拨（人教版2024）

2024-2025学年七年级英语上学期单元话题写作思路点拨（人教版2024） Unit1 You and Me 单元话题 本单元的话题是“结识新朋友”，属于“人与社会”主题范畴中的“社会服务与人际沟通”主题群，常从简单介绍自己或他人的个人信息、爱好等角度考查。 词汇积累 个人信息：school,family,friend,age,class,place,country,full/first/last name,telephone number... 兴趣爱好：food,animal,swim,dance,play football/basketball/volleyball,play the guitar,help each other,would like to/want to... 美文鉴赏学习 I’m Wang Liang.My English name is Eric.I’m 13 years old.I’m now living with my family in Beijing.My telephone number is 834⁃5672.I like playing basketball.Playing basketball makes me strong.I have a brother.His name is Wang Tao.He is 11 years old.Basketball is also his favourite sport， so we often play basketball together after school. 1.What is Eric’s family name？ __________________________________________________________________ 　 2. Where does Eric live now？ __________________________________________________________________ 　 3.What is Eric’s telephone number？ 　__________________________________________________________________ 　 4.How old is Eric’s brother？ __________________________________________________________________ 　 　 5.What do Eric and his brother often do after school？ __________________________________________________________________ 　 参考答案： 1. Wang./His family name is Wang.　 2. In Beijing./He lives in Beijing now.　 3. 834⁃5672./His telephone number is 834⁃5672.　  4. 11./He is 11 years old.　  5. Play basketball./They often play basketball after school.　  典例分析 （1） 假设你是鲍勃·史密斯(Bob Smith)，来自英国。经过一个多月的学习生活，相信你已经认识了不少新同学。为了让大家更好地了解你，并结交更多的朋友，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇演讲稿。 写作要求： 1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 2.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。 3.语句连贯，词数60左右。演讲稿的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数 思路点拨： 第一步：审题。 文体：记叙文 人称：第一人称　 　时态：一般现在时 第二步：列提纲。 第三步：列出主要的短语。 1.来自　 be/come from 　 2.第一中学　No.1 Middle School　  　 3.七年级三班　 Class 3， Grade 7 4.友好的　friendly　 5.最喜欢　like…best/my favourite…　  6.放学后　 after school　 7.例如　 such as 8.和某人交朋友　make friends with sb.　  第四步：重点句子仿写。 I’m…/My name is… 我叫…… I study in/I am a student in… 我在……上学。 Many of my school things are…， such as… 我的许多学习用品都是……，比如…… 第五步：用and， or， so， because， but等连接词将以上要点连成文章，并注意句型多样化。 My self⁃introduction Good morning，everyone.I want to introduce myself here._____________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all.Thank you. 参考范文： My self⁃introduction 　　Good morning， everyone.I want to introduce myself here. I am Bob Smith from England.I am 12 years old and my birthday is on June 14.(姓名、年龄) I study in No.1 Middle School and I’m in Class 3， Grade 7.I am friendly.(学校)  At school， I like maths best.Basketball is my favourite sport， and I like playing basketball after school.(爱好)My favourite color is blue， so many of my school things are blue， such as my schoolbag， rulers and pens.(喜欢颜色)My best friend is Eric， but he is in England now.(好朋友)  I am glad to meet all of you here.If you want to make friends with me， please write down my QQ number—167900246.(表达交友愿望)  That’s all.Thank you. （2） 假设你叫王海，你学校的《英语周报》正在举行以“我的自我介绍”为主题的征文比赛，你对此很感兴趣，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文投稿。 注意： （1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 （2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。 （3）语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone. I want to tell you something about myself. ___________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Would you like to be my friend? 参考范文： Hello, everyone. I want to tell you something about myself. My full name is Wang Hai. I'm a middle school student. I'm in Class 3, Grade 7. I like playing football very much. I often play it with my friend after school. My favourite colour is blue. My school things are blue. My coat and shoes are blue too. I like Mapo tofu best. It is very delicious. Would you like to be my friend? 实战演练 (1) 假如你是李华，想参加China Daily举办的以“梦想职业体验”为主题的冬令营活动。请你给主办人Mr. Smith写一封60词左右的电子邮件介绍个人情况。要点如下： 1.个人信息：13岁，来自合肥，就读于振华中学七年级32班。 2.学校情况：又大又漂亮，简述学校概况。 3.兴趣爱好：读书，运动。 4.你的梦想职业。 注意： 1.请适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现与本人相关的真实信息； 3.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Smith, I am so happy to know about the Dream Job Winter Camp. Now let me tell you something about myself. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please allow me to join you. Thank you. Yours, Li Hua （2） 下面表格是李华的个人信息，假如你是Li Hua，请根据表格内容，用英语做一个自我介绍，词数不少于60词。 Name Age From Class Grade Student number Likes Character (性格) Li Hua 11 Nanyang 4 7 2025-3245 sports helpful _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （3） 假设你是王小明，是一名七年级的新生，需要在班里做一下自我介绍，请按以下表格介绍自己。 Name Wang Xiaoming English name Jack Age 13 Family member parents, a sister, grandparents Favorite colors blue, black Telephone number 623-4518 要求： 1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范。 2.所有提示须全部用上，并作适当发挥。 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。 4. 60词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Hello everyone! My name is Wang Xiaoming. ______________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） 假如你是李华，你新交了一位好朋友，请根据下表介绍一下她。 要求：1.包含表中所有信息要点，可适当增加细节； 2. 字数：60词左右； 3. 文中不得出现你的真实信息。 姓名 Jenny Brown 年龄 11岁 电话 346-8729 喜欢的颜色 紫色 现居住地 中国 家庭人员 爸爸 妈妈 哥哥和她 …… …… ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（5） 假如你是Alice，新学期你认识了一名来自中国的同学王琳，并且你们成了好朋友。请你根据下面的提示，以“My good friend”为题，写一篇不少于60词的英语短文，介绍一下王琳的情况。 Name: Wang Lin From: Beijing, China Age: 12 Living place: London Pet: Mimi—a white cat Hobbies: listen to music; sing songs My good friend _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： （1） Dear Mr. Smith, I am so happy to know about the Dream Job Winter Camp. Now let me tell you something about myself. My name is Li Hua and I am 13 years old. Fm from Hefei. I study at Zhenhua Middle School. I am in Class 32, Grade 7. My school is really big and beautiful. There’s a large playground and an amazing reading room. I like my English teacher best, and he is very popular with all the students. I like reading books because books can open my mind and make me think. I also like sports. To keep healthy, I run for half an hour every day. I hope to be a teacher in the future. I think the job is meaningful and I can teach my students how to learn. Please allow me to join you. Thank you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析 ] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的相关信息，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的个人信息； 第二步，介绍学习情况； 第三步，介绍自己的兴趣爱好； 第四步，介绍梦想职业。 [亮点词汇] ①be popular with受……欢迎 ②keep healthy保持健康 ③in the future在未来 [高分句型] ①I like reading books because books can open my mind and make me think.（because引导原因状语从句） ②I hope to be a teacher in the future.（动词不定式作宾语） （2） Hello, everyone. I’d like to introduce myself to you all. My name is Li Hua. I am 11 years old. I come from Nanyang. I am in Class 4, Grade 7. My student number is 2025-3245. I like sports very much. I am a helpful person. I always try to help my classmates and friends. Do you want to make friends with me? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据表格内容进行自我介绍，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出自我介绍； 第二步，具体介绍自己的基本信息； 第三步，介绍自己的兴趣爱好和性格特点。 [亮点词汇] ①come from 来自 ②student number 学号 ③helpful 乐于助人 [高分句型] I always try to help my classmates and friends. (and连接并列成分) （3） Hello everyone! My name is Wang Xiaoming. My English name is Jack. I am 13 years old. There are five people in my family: my parents, my sister, and my grandparents. My favorite colors are blue and black. I like playing basketball. If you want to contact me, my telephone number is 623-4518. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍自己的名字和英文名； 第二步，然后介绍年龄和家庭成员； 第三步，接着介绍自己喜欢的颜色和运动，最后提供联系方式。 [亮点词汇] ①there be有 ②favorite最喜欢的 ③like doing sth喜欢做某事 [高分句型] If you want to contact me, my telephone number is 623-4518.（条件状语从句） （4） My name is Li Hua. My good friend is Jenny Brown. She is 11 years old. Her favorite color is purple. Her telephone number is 346-8729. She lives in China with her family. There are 4 families in her family. They are her father, mother, brother and her. She loves them very much. She also loves reading all kinds of books. 【详解】[总体介绍] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文； ②时态：采用“一般现在时” ； ③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍个人信息，如年龄、号码等； 第二步，介绍家庭成员和爱好。 [亮点词汇] ①telephone number电话号码 ②all kinds of各种各样 [高分句型] ①There are 4 families in her family.（there be句型） （5） My good friend My name is Alice. I have a good friend. Her name is Wang Lin. Wang is her family name and Lin is her first name. Wang Lin is from Beijing, China. She is 12 years old. Now she lives in London with her parents. Wang Lin has a pet cat. The colour of the cat is white and its name is Mimi. Mimi is very cute. Wang Lin likes listening to music and singing songs. I’m happy to be friends with Wang Lin. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章要点已经给出，注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己有一个好朋友； 第二步，具体介绍好朋友的基本信息，例如姓名、国籍、年龄、现在的居住地、宠物和爱好； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己很开心和王琳成为朋友。 [亮点词汇] ①family name姓 ②first name名 ③like doing sth.喜欢做某事 ④be happy to do sth.很开心做某事 [高分句型] The colour of the cat is white and its name is Mimi. Mimi is very cute. (and表并列) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年七年级英语上学期单元话题写作思路点拨（人教版2024） Unit1 You and Me 单元话题 本单元的话题是“结识新朋友”，属于“人与社会”主题范畴中的“社会服务与人际沟通”主题群，常从简单介绍自己或他人的个人信息、爱好等角度考查。 词汇积累 个人信息：school,family,friend,age,class,place,country,full/first/last name,telephone number... 兴趣爱好：food,animal,swim,dance,play football/basketball/volleyball,play the guitar,help each other,would like to/want to... 美文鉴赏学习 I’m Wang Liang.My English name is Eric.I’m 13 years old.I’m now living with my family in Beijing.My telephone number is 834⁃5672.I like playing basketball.Playing basketball makes me strong.I have a brother.His name is Wang Tao.He is 11 years old.Basketball is also his favourite sport， so we often play basketball together after school. 1.What is Eric’s family name？ __________________________________________________________________ 　 2. Where does Eric live now？ __________________________________________________________________ 　 3.What is Eric’s telephone number？ 　__________________________________________________________________ 　 4.How old is Eric’s brother？ __________________________________________________________________ 　 　 5.What do Eric and his brother often do after school？ __________________________________________________________________ 　 典例分析 （1） 假设你是鲍勃·史密斯(Bob Smith)，来自英国。经过一个多月的学习生活，相信你已经认识了不少新同学。为了让大家更好地了解你，并结交更多的朋友，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇演讲稿。 写作要求： 1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 2.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。 3.语句连贯，词数60左右。演讲稿的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数 思路点拨： 第一步：审题。文体：记叙文 人称：第一人称　 　时态：一般现在时 第二步：列提纲。 第三步：列出主要的短语。 1.来自　 be/come from 　 2.第一中学　No.1 Middle School　  　 3.七年级三班　 Class 3， Grade 7 4.友好的　friendly　 5.最喜欢　like…best/my favourite…　  6.放学后　 after school　 7.例如　 such as 8.和某人交朋友　make friends with sb.　  第四步：重点句子仿写。 I’m…/My name is… 我叫…… I study in/I am a student in… 我在……上学。 Many of my school things are…， such as… 我的许多学习用品都是……，比如…… 第五步：用and， or， so， because， but等连接词将以上要点连成文章，并注意句型多样化。 My self⁃introduction Good morning，everyone.I want to introduce myself here._____________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all.Thank you. （2） 假设你叫王海，你学校的《英语周报》正在举行以“我的自我介绍”为主题的征文比赛，你对此很感兴趣，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文投稿。 注意： （1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 （2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。 （3）语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone. I want to tell you something about myself. ___________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Would you like to be my friend? 实战演练 (1) 假如你是李华，想参加China Daily举办的以“梦想职业体验”为主题的冬令营活动。请你给主办人Mr. Smith写一封60词左右的电子邮件介绍个人情况。要点如下： 1.个人信息：13岁，来自合肥，就读于振华中学七年级32班。 2.学校情况：又大又漂亮，简述学校概况。 3.兴趣爱好：读书，运动。 4.你的梦想职业。 注意： 1.请适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现与本人相关的真实信息； 3.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Smith, I am so happy to know about the Dream Job Winter Camp. Now let me tell you something about myself. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please allow me to join you. Thank you. Yours, Li Hua （2） 下面表格是李华的个人信息，假如你是Li Hua，请根据表格内容，用英语做一个自我介绍，词数不少于60词。 Name Age From Class Grade Student number Likes Character (性格) Li Hua 11 Nanyang 4 7 2025-3245 sports helpful _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （3） 假设你是王小明，是一名七年级的新生，需要在班里做一下自我介绍，请按以下表格介绍自己。 Name Wang Xiaoming English name Jack Age 13 Family member parents, a sister, grandparents Favorite colors blue, black Telephone number 623-4518 要求： 1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范。 2.所有提示须全部用上，并作适当发挥。 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。 4. 60词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Hello everyone! My name is Wang Xiaoming. ______________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） 假如你是李华，你新交了一位好朋友，请根据下表介绍一下她。 要求：1.包含表中所有信息要点，可适当增加细节； 2. 字数：60词左右； 3. 文中不得出现你的真实信息。 姓名 Jenny Brown 年龄 11岁 电话 346-8729 喜欢的颜色 紫色 现居住地 中国 家庭人员 爸爸 妈妈 哥哥和她 …… …… ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（5） 假如你是Alice，新学期你认识了一名来自中国的同学王琳，并且你们成了好朋友。请你根据下面的提示，以“My good friend”为题，写一篇不少于60词的英语短文，介绍一下王琳的情况。 Name: Wang Lin From: Beijing, China Age: 12 Living place: London Pet: Mimi—a white cat Hobbies: listen to music; sing songs My good friend _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$