Unit3 My School单元话题写作思路点拨 - 2024-2025学年七年级英语上学期单元话题写作思路点拨（人教版2024）

2024-2025学年七年级英语上学期单元话题写作思路点拨（人教版2024） Unit3 My School 单元话题 本单元的话题是“我的学校”，属于“人与自我’主题范畴中的“生活与学习”主题群，一般要求学生能够简单介绍自己学校的情况。 词汇积累 建筑：building,library,lab,sports field,dining hall.. 位置：behind,near,between...and...,in front of... 物品：schoolbag,map,computer,desk,chair.. 美文鉴赏学习 Hello， I’m Cindy.Look！This is my new school.It is Sunshine Middle School.It is very big and beautiful.There are 800 students and 120 teachers in our school.There is a tall building with 50 classrooms.It is the classroom building and we have different lessons in different classrooms.The science building is in front of the classroom building. We have science lessons there.The library is behind the lab building.The dining hall is on the left of the lab building.The office building is next to the classroom building.A sports hall is behind the office building.Students often play basketball there.Is there a sports field？ Yes， it’s in the middle of the school. 1.What is Cindy’s school like？ _________________________________________________________　 　 2.How many teachers are there in Cindy’s school？ _________________________________________________________　　 　 3.Where is the science building？ _________________________________________________________　 　 4.What is on the left of the lab building？ _________________________________________________________　　 　 5.Who often plays basketball in the sports hall？ _________________________________________________________　　 典例分析 假如你是Lisa，你的朋友Mike想了解你的新学校。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示给Mike写一封电子邮件， 介绍你的新学校。 第一步：审题。 文体：记叙文 人称：第一人称 时态：一般现在时 第二步：列提纲。 第三步：列出主要的短语。 1.又大又漂亮 large and beautiful　 　 2.在……对面　across from　 　 3.在……前面　in front of 　 4.我最喜欢的地方　my favourite place 　 5.做体操　do exercises 　 6.许多种食物　many kinds of food 第四步：重点句子仿写。 1. There is…+方位介词+… 有……在…… 2. My favourite place is…because… 我最喜欢的地方是……因为…… 第五步： 用and、or、so、because、but、first、then 等连接词将以上要点连成文章，并注意句型多样化。 Dear Mike， This is my new school. _________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about your school？Could you tell me about it？ Yours， Lisa (2) 假设你是张丽,你的美国笔友Paul想了解你的学校，请你用英文写一封电子邮件,向他介绍你的学校。 内容包括： （1）学校建筑物的数量及名称； （2）各个建筑物的位置； （3）你对学校的感受。 注意： （1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。 （2）语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Paul, I am very happy to tell you something about my school._______________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Zhang Li 实战演练 （1） 学校是我们成长的摇篮，是我们放飞梦想的地方。请你以“My School”为题写一篇短文介绍你的新学校。 内容：（1）图中学校建筑物的位置； （2）你对学校的感受。 要求： （1）不能照抄试卷原文； （2）约60词。（作文的题目已给出） My School _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2） 假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Peter想了解你的学校。请看下图并根据提示问题，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，介绍你的学校。 注意：根据提示，完成一篇不少于 70 词的电子邮件，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 所给参考词汇仅供选用；请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 参考词汇：in the middle of..., behind, between...and..., on the left, lessons, sports, beautiful 提示问题： ○How many buildings are there in your school? ○Where are they? ○Do you like your school? Why? Dear Peter, I’m writing to introduce my school to you.__________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let me know about your school. Write to me soon, please. Yours, Li Hua （3） 假如你叫Millie，请以“My School”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，内容包括： 1. 我在阳光中学 (Sunshine Middle School) 上学，学校不是很大，但是很干净； 2. 有一个现代化的操场和一幢大楼； 3. 大楼有五层，每层楼都有一间办公室、两个卫生间和四间教室； 4. 学校还有一个礼堂、一个图书馆和一间阅览室，图书馆是我最喜欢的地方； 5. 老师和同学们都很友好，我非常喜欢我的学校。 My School _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） 创建美好校园是每一位中学生义不容辞的责任。假如你校英语报正在以“How to Build a Better School”为题进行征稿，请你根据下面图示信息，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 注意： 1.短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3.词数80~100（短文题目已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 How to Build a Better School ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （5） 在教育局组织的“手拉手”活动中，来自乡村小学校的李小朋对于他所看到的城市学校很有感触，于是他写了一篇作文向他的同班同学做了介绍。假设你就是李小朋，根据下面的提示，以“Their School”为题，写一篇作文。以there be句式为主，60个词左右。 提示：1.学校很大很漂亮，有许多树和花，像花园一样； 2.有图书馆、电脑房、实验室等； 3.学生能够学到很多知识。 Their School ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年七年级英语上学期单元话题写作思路点拨（人教版2024） Unit3 My School 单元话题 本单元的话题是“我的学校”，属于“人与自我’主题范畴中的“生活与学习”主题群，一般要求学生能够简单介绍自己学校的情况。 词汇积累 建筑：building,library,lab,sports field,dining hall.. 位置：behind,near,between...and...,in front of... 物品：schoolbag,map,computer,desk,chair.. 美文鉴赏学习 Hello， I’m Cindy.Look！This is my new school.It is Sunshine Middle School.It is very big and beautiful.There are 800 students and 120 teachers in our school.There is a tall building with 50 classrooms.It is the classroom building and we have different lessons in different classrooms.The science building is in front of the classroom building. We have science lessons there.The library is behind the lab building.The dining hall is on the left of the lab building.The office building is next to the classroom building.A sports hall is behind the office building.Students often play basketball there.Is there a sports field？ Yes， it’s in the middle of the school. 1.What is Cindy’s school like？ _________________________________________________________　 　 2.How many teachers are there in Cindy’s school？ _________________________________________________________　　 　 3.Where is the science building？ _________________________________________________________　 　 4.What is on the left of the lab building？ _________________________________________________________　　 　 5.Who often plays basketball in the sports hall？ _________________________________________________________　　 参考答案： 1.It is very big and beautiful. 2.120./There are 120 teachers in her school.　  3.It is in front of the classroom building. 4.The dining hall./The dining hall is on the left of the lab building.　  5.Students./Students often play basketball in the sports hall.　  典例分析 假如你是Lisa，你的朋友Mike想了解你的新学校。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示给Mike写一封电子邮件， 介绍你的新学校。 第一步：审题。 文体：记叙文 人称：第一人称 时态：一般现在时 第二步：列提纲。 第三步：列出主要的短语。 1.又大又漂亮 large and beautiful　 　 2.在……对面　across from　 　 3.在……前面　in front of 　 4.我最喜欢的地方　my favourite place 　 5.做体操　do exercises 　 6.许多种食物　many kinds of food 第四步：重点句子仿写。 1. There is…+方位介词+… 有……在…… 2. My favourite place is…because… 我最喜欢的地方是……因为…… 第五步： 用and、or、so、because、but、first、then 等连接词将以上要点连成文章，并注意句型多样化。 Dear Mike， This is my new school. _________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about your school？Could you tell me about it？ Yours， Lisa 参考范文： Dear Mike， This is my new school. It is Sunshine Middle School.My school is large and beautiful.(总体印象) Let me introduce it to you.  There is a sports field in front of the classroom building.We often play soccer there after class.Every morning we raise the flag there.A science building is next to the classroom building.We have science lessons there.(建筑的方位及用途)   My favourite place is the library.It’s behind the science building.I like it best because it’s quiet and I enjoy reading there.(最喜欢的地方及理由)  What about your school？Could you tell me about it？ Yours， Lisa (2) 假设你是张丽,你的美国笔友Paul想了解你的学校，请你用英文写一封电子邮件,向他介绍你的学校。 内容包括： （1）学校建筑物的数量及名称； （2）各个建筑物的位置； （3）你对学校的感受。 注意： （1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。 （2）语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Paul, I am very happy to tell you something about my school._______________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Zhang Li 参考答案： Dear Paul, I am very happy to tell you something about my school.My school is big and beautiful. In my school, there are four buildings—a science building, a classroom building, a dining hall and a library. The classroom building is next to the sports field. The library is in the middle of the school.Lots of students love to read books in the library. Between the classroom building and the library is the science building. The dining hall is in front of it. I love my school. It is amazing. Yours, Zhang Li 实战演练 （1） 学校是我们成长的摇篮，是我们放飞梦想的地方。请你以“My School”为题写一篇短文介绍你的新学校。 内容：（1）图中学校建筑物的位置； （2）你对学校的感受。 要求： （1）不能照抄试卷原文； （2）约60词。（作文的题目已给出） My School _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2） 假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Peter想了解你的学校。请看下图并根据提示问题，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，介绍你的学校。 注意：根据提示，完成一篇不少于 70 词的电子邮件，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 所给参考词汇仅供选用；请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 参考词汇：in the middle of..., behind, between...and..., on the left, lessons, sports, beautiful 提示问题： ○How many buildings are there in your school? ○Where are they? ○Do you like your school? Why? Dear Peter, I’m writing to introduce my school to you.__________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let me know about your school. Write to me soon, please. Yours, Li Hua （3） 假如你叫Millie，请以“My School”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，内容包括： 1. 我在阳光中学 (Sunshine Middle School) 上学，学校不是很大，但是很干净； 2. 有一个现代化的操场和一幢大楼； 3. 大楼有五层，每层楼都有一间办公室、两个卫生间和四间教室； 4. 学校还有一个礼堂、一个图书馆和一间阅览室，图书馆是我最喜欢的地方； 5. 老师和同学们都很友好，我非常喜欢我的学校。 My School _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） 创建美好校园是每一位中学生义不容辞的责任。假如你校英语报正在以“How to Build a Better School”为题进行征稿，请你根据下面图示信息，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 注意： 1.短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3.词数80~100（短文题目已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 How to Build a Better School ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （5） 在教育局组织的“手拉手”活动中，来自乡村小学校的李小朋对于他所看到的城市学校很有感触，于是他写了一篇作文向他的同班同学做了介绍。假设你就是李小朋，根据下面的提示，以“Their School”为题，写一篇作文。以there be句式为主，60个词左右。 提示：1.学校很大很漂亮，有许多树和花，像花园一样； 2.有图书馆、电脑房、实验室等； 3.学生能够学到很多知识。 Their School ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： 例文（1） My School I’m happy to tell you about my school. It’s small but beautiful. There are four buildings in my school. They are a classroom building, a science building, an office building and a school library. The classroom building with 24 classrooms is near the school gate. The playground is between the classroom building and the school library. There is a science building on the left of the playground and an office building on the right. My school is great. I love it very much. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍学校； 第二步，具体阐述了学校的建筑物及位置； 第三步，书写结语，表达对学校的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be happy to do sth很高兴做某事 ②between...and在……之间 ③on the left of在……左边 [高分句型] There are four buildings in my school. (there be句型) 例文（2） Dear Peter, I’m writing to introduce my school to you. There are six buildings in our school. The playground is in the middle of our school. The sports hall is on the left of the gate. The science building is between the dining hall and the sports hall. The office building is on the right of the gate. The classroom building is between the library and the office building. My school is very big and beautiful. I’m very happy in the school. We have eight lessons every day. After class, I always play sports with my friends. In a word, I love my school. Let me know about your school. Write to me soon, please. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是电子邮件； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我写信是为了向您介绍我的学校。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——学校的建筑数量、地址、是否喜欢学校及原因等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“请尽快给我写信”的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①in the middle of……的中间 ②on the right of……的右边 ③between...and...在两者之间 [高分句型] ①There are six buildings in our school. (there be句型） ②Write to me soon, please. (祈使句) 例文（3） My School My name is Millie and I study at Sunshine Middle School. It’s not very big but very clean. There’s a modern playground and a big building in my school. The building has 5 floors and each floor has an office, 2 toilets and 4 classrooms. My school also has a hall, a library and a reading room. And the library is my favourite place. My teachers and classmates are all very friendly. I like my school very much. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为说明文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中我的学校的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请以 ‘My School’ 为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“学校的名字、学校的设施、学校的师生等”几个方面重点介绍我的学校的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达“我非常喜欢我的学校”。 [亮点词汇] ①middle school中学 ②reading room阅览室 ③there be有 ④very much非常 [高分句型] ①There’s a modern playground and a big building in my school. (there be句型) ②My school also has a hall, a library and a reading room. (and表并列) 例文（4） How to Build a Better School As middle school students, it is our duty to make our school a better place. Only in this way can we learn and grow happily in our school. How can we build a better school? First of all, it’s important to keep our school clean and tidy. We can pick up rubbish, keep our classrooms tidy, and protect school property. Besides, taking an active part in club activities is also a good choice. It can bring us together and make our school feel like a big family. What’s more, we are supposed to be kind to everyone. Our school can be warm for everyone when we’re polite and friendly. Let’s just take action to make our school better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“图示信息”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍为什么要让学校变得更好； 第二步，具体阐述怎样让学校变得更好； 第三步，书写结语，号召大家行动起来使校园变得越来越好。 [亮点词汇] ①First of all 首先 ②take action 采取行动 ③pick up 捡起 ④take an active part in 积极参加 ⑤be supposed to 应该 [高分句型] ①Only in this way can we learn and grow happily in our school. (倒装句) ②Our school can be warm for everyone when we’re polite and friendly. (when引导的时间状语从句) 例文（5） Their School Their school is big and beautiful. There are many beautiful flowers and green trees around the school. It’s like a big garden. There are five teaching buildings in the school. In front of the teaching buildings, there are many trees and flowers. On the second floor, there is a big reading room, two computer rooms and three science labs. The students love playing on computers. The reading room opens from Monday to Friday. There are many books in it. Students like reading books there. They learn a lot from those books. They all like their school very much. 【详解】1. 题干解读：文章属于材料作文，主要是以“Their School”为主题展开描写，内容按照题目中给出的信息提示描写，也可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，主要用There be句型展开描述。主要是介绍城市学校的一些情况，主要是建筑以及配套设施等。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！28 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$