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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Our group had stopped to remove our boots before a small stream crossing after a morning of exploring the seaside foothills of Canada’s Torngat Mountains National Park in Newfoundland and Labrador. I looked up and there it was, about 150 yards away, staring at us: a polar bear. Our guides had warned us about the dangers of polar bear country, but I thought I’d be lucky if I saw one in the wild. I’ve seen plenty of black bears, but never anything this big. This guy was a bruiser. We gathered together and began shouting at the bear, but when that didn’t frighten it, our guide, Rich, shot a flare（照明弹）. The bear escaped to a ledge, and we crossed the stream into camp. It stayed there as we cooked and ate our dinner. When bedtime rolled around, I glanced up. The bear hadn’t moved. I started cycling through all the worst- case scenarios that could hap- pen, but I tried to remember everything we’d prepared to keep us safe. Our guides had put up an electric fence meant to frighten bears away from our tents. It ran off a couple of batteries like you would put in a flashlight. The outfitter said if we touched it, the shock would blow us out of our hiking boots. I crawled into my tent and tried to get some rest. I lay awake, trembling with anxiety, but eventually, sleep got the best of me. A few hours later, I stepped out of my tent to go to the bathroom, and the bear was gone. I felt relieved. The sounds of rain and snow made me back to sleep. Around 2:30 a. m., movement out. side woke me. I had been sleeping on my back and looked up to see a shadow towering over my tent. I recognized the shape immediately; two big bear legs, Obviously, the electric fence didn’t work. I screamed, and tried to take flight. ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Then, I heard a swoosh— Rich had about off a flare. _____________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 读后续写参考范文 文章大意 这篇文章讲述了作者在加拿大纽芬兰与拉布拉多的托恩盖特山国家公园海边丘陵探险时的一次惊险经历。在一次小溪穿越时，他们意外地遇到了一只野生北极熊。尽管团队采取了喊叫和发射照明弹等措施试图吓走熊，但熊并未离开。晚上，尽管他们搭建了电网保护帐篷区，作者仍然感到非常害怕。在半夜，熊接近了作者的帐篷，使得作者惊慌失措。幸运的是，导游Rich及时发射了照明弹，再次吓退了熊。这次经历让作者深刻体会到了野外探险的危险性和自然力量的强大，同时也凸显了在野外生存时准备和应对措施的重要性。 在原文中，有几处伏笔为续写部分提供了基础： 1. 遇到北极熊的意外：文章开头提到在探险时意外地遇到了一只北极熊，这为续写中作者对熊的持续关注和恐惧埋下了伏笔。 2. 导游的警告和应对措施：导游之前对北极熊危险的警告，以及他们采取的应对措施（如喊叫、发射照明弹），为续写中再次使用这些措施提供了背景。 3. 电网的设置：提到了为了保护帐篷区而设置的电网，这为续写中电网失效和熊接近帐篷的情节埋下了伏笔。 4. 作者的恐惧和焦虑：作者表达了对北极熊的恐惧和对最坏情况的担忧，这为续写中作者半夜醒来发现熊靠近帐篷时的恐慌反应提供了动机。 在续写部分，这些伏笔得到了回应： 1. 电网失效：续写中提到电网并未能吓退北极熊，这直接回应了原文中提到的电网设置。 2. 照明弹的使用：续写中再次提到了照明弹的使用，这是对原文中导游使用照明弹吓退熊的情节的延续。 3. 作者的恐慌和逃生尝试：续写中作者半夜醒来发现熊靠近帐篷时的恐慌和尝试逃跑，直接回应了原文中作者的恐惧和焦虑。 4. 导游的及时救援：续写中导游Rich及时发射照明弹救援，这回应了原文中导游在遇到熊时的领导和保护作用。 通过这些伏笔和回应，文章构建了一个关于野外探险中遇到野生动物的紧张故事，强调了准备和应对措施的重要性，以及在面对危险时团队合作和冷静应对的价值。 续写要点 第一段续写纲要： - 描述作者半夜醒来发现北极熊靠近帐篷的恐慌情景。 - 叙述作者试图逃离帐篷的混乱行为和心理活动。 - 描述其他团队成员的反应和集体行动。 - 强调导游Rich发射照明弹的及时性和其对团队安全的重要性。 第二段续写纲要： - 讲述照明弹发射后北极熊的反应和熊与人之间的紧张对峙。 - 描述团队成员在Rich的领导下如何保持冷静并采取进一步的安全措施。 - 反思整个事件对作者的心理影响和对野外生存挑战的新认识。 - 总结作者对自然力量的敬畏和未来探险活动中准备与应对措施的重视。 One possible version: I screamed, and tried to take flight.But there was no way out and the extreme terror made me rooted to the ground. The creature crashed down on top of me and started clawing at me through the fabric. I covered my head with my hands as its massive teeth reached for my face. Next thing I knew, my head was in its jaws. The bear started running, dragging my helpless body away from our campsite. I. could feel the bones cracking where the bear was biting my neck. My fear gave way to desperation. Then, I heard a swoosh Rich had shot off a flare. The bear dropped me and withdrew about 50 yards away. I tried to get up, but I was too broken to move. And the danger wasn’t gone: the bear was inching closer. Rich shot another flare, and this time, it was scared away. My trip- mates carried me back to camp and gave me simple treatment. I could hear someone trying to call for help on a satellite phone and a helicopter was on the way. Despite the pain, relief washed over me. I was alive and that’s what mattered most. What a thrilling experience! 下水文1 I screamed, and tried to take flight. In a panic, I scrambled to my feet, fumbling with the tent's zipper in a desperate bid to escape. My heart pounded in my chest as I envisioned the bear's massive paws swiping down at any moment. The sudden realization that our safety measures had failed sent a surge of adrenaline through my body, fueling my frantic efforts to break free from the confines of the tent. As I finally burst out into the open, I could see the others in the camp were also awake, their faces a mirror of my own terror. Then, I heard a swoosh— Rich had just shot off a flare. The night sky was momentarily illuminated, casting an eerie light on the scene. The flare's bright light seemed to momentarily disorient the bear, buying us precious seconds. Rich's quick thinking and calm under pressure were a stark contrast to the chaos and fear that had gripped the rest of us. As the bear retreated, taking cautious steps back towards the shadows, we all let out a collective sigh of relief. It was a stark reminder of the raw power of nature and the importance of being prepared when venturing into the wilderness. The rest of the night was spent in a state of heightened vigilance, with none of us daring to let our guards down until the first light of dawn chased away the darkness. 下水文2 I screamed, and tried to take flight. The initial shock gave way to a surge of adrenaline as I grappled with the tent's entrance, my hands shaking uncontrollably. The bear's looming presence just outside my tent was a terrifying reality I had not prepared myself for. As I finally managed to unzip the tent and stumble out, I was greeted by the sight of the rest of my group, their faces etched with a similar blend of fear and determination. We instinctively huddled closer together, our eyes fixed on the enormous silhouette that was the polar bear. Then, I heard a swoosh— Rich had just shot off a flare. The sudden burst of light pierced the darkness, casting a dramatic glow over the scene. The flare's incandescent trail arced through the air, momentarily capturing the bear's attention. It was a risky move, but it worked; the bear, seemingly more curious than aggressive, stepped back, giving us the chance to regroup and reassess the situation. Rich's decisive action and the flare's bright light provided a brief respite from the tension, allowing us to regain some semblance of control over the situation. As we huddled together, watching the bear's every move, we were reminded of the delicate balance between humans and the wild, and the need for respect and preparedness when in such close quarters with nature's most formidable creatures. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$