2024届高三英语二轮复习写作应用文导学案

高三英语大单元整体学习二轮复习学程 应用文写作专项 Practical Writing 审核：_________________ 审批：_________________ 班级：_________________ 小组：_________________ 姓名：_________________ 应用文写作（Practical Writing） 单元概述 Comment by 泽泽: 本部分从高考应用文写作的命题特点、考察内容和能力要求等方面抒写，凸显本专题的考察价值和意义，特别突出语言能力、文化意识和思维品质等方面的训练。 Over the years, the thesis characteristics of writing questions have insisted on the accomplishment and intention, focusing on students' language ability, cultural awareness and thinking quality. In recent years, the English writing of college entrance examination is based on the core values, traditional culture, ruling the country by law and the spirit of innovation, focus on the core literacy of English (language ability, cultural awareness, learning ability, thinking quality) . The setting of the scene is practical and realistic, the task is suitable for the students' ability level, and it is naturally integrated into the excellent traditional cultural content of our country, which can guide the students to understand the world while using English, pay attention to inheriting and carrying forward the achievements of the Chinese nation's outstanding civilization to enhance cultural confidence, and make it a habit to express Chinese traditional culture in English. Practical writing mainly examines students' language ability, cultural awareness, and applies writing to connect students' learning and life, examines "key points" articles, as well as functional sentences such as "suggestion", "request", "application", "inquiry", "thanks", "apology", "congratulations" and "complaints". 课标要求 Comment by 泽泽: 本部分参照课程标准的语言技能内容要求，主要呈现表达性技能的具体要求。 1. Can collect and prepare materials according to writing requirements; 2. Can draft essays and short messages independently, and revise them under the guidance of teachers; 3. Can use text cohesion means to improve the coherence of expression; 4. Can design a reasonable text structure according to the need of expression; 5. Can write simple paragraphs or operation instructions according to the diagrams or tables given; 6. Can consciously choose and use the language according to the intention of expression and the characteristics of the audience. 单元学习目标 Comment by 泽泽: 综合应用文写作专题的16种类型的文章，引领学生从审题开始，把握该体裁的文体的语言风格、写作要点、篇章结构、时态运用、所选词汇和句式等方面进行整体构思和起草草稿，最终呈现出符合文体特征、表意到位充实的文章。 1. Recognize the 16 different types of practical writing and express the features of them in your own words. 2. Figure out the basic structure of different types of practical writing by appreciating and analyzing the given essays. 3. Write a whole new passage by implementing what you’ve obtained in the previous periods. 4. Reconstruct your own system of practical writing and internalize it after reflection. 单 单元情境任务 Comment by 泽泽: 结合新高考考察的三大主题及常考的话题情境，呼吁学生关注不同生活情境下的措辞、说话方式和语言风格，能保证有效沟通，做一个文明得体的现代人。 Throughout the five years of the college entrance examination, there are various types of practical writing, as many as 16 types, the content around man and self, man and society and man and nature. It can be seen that these genres are closely related to the contemporary social life, fully reflecting the characteristics of The Times. The diversification of genres makes the writing topic more close to the society and personal life experience, which contributes to cultivating students’ innovative spirit and thinking quality. 学习导航 Period Content Task 2 periods Overall Construction Construct your own overall cognition of practical writing in the college entrance examination over the years. 4 periods Exploration & Transfer Understand and master various practical writing styles, and through the study of college entrance examination questions to build their own writing structure and knowledge system. 4 periods Extension & Test Use the skills to practice 16 kinds of practical writing and apply what you have accumulated flexibly. Overall Construction ——Express the methods to deal with the practical writing. 【Learning Objectives】 Comment by 泽泽: 本阶段目标是让学生整体认知构建应用文写作的命题规律、审题技巧、写作步骤和复习策略。能用自己的话说出来，从而内化成自己的认知。 1. Compare and then recognize the special feature of the practical writing. 2. Express the methods to deal with the practical writing based on your own understanding. 3. Form your own cognition of the practical writing by internalizing. 【Context and Task】 With the continuous reform of the college entrance examination, the study of practical writing is not limited to the several styles that we are familiar with. Get the skills and apply them into practice. 1、 写作命题特点 Comment by 泽泽: 让学生能够比较清晰地知道近五年新高考考察的话题和体裁，做到心中有数。 五年真题实况 Comment by 刘雪苹: 添加了2024年和2023年全国卷、浙江卷和山东新高考卷内容 年份 考卷 考察形式 话题 2024 浙江1月卷 投稿 推荐一项适合课间开展的运动 2023 新高考全国Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷 建议信 就英语分组练习口语的问题提出建议 全国甲卷 投稿 描写一位中国历史人物 全国乙卷 投稿 用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历 浙江1月卷 报道 认识我们身边的植物 2022 新高考Ⅰ卷 邀请信 邀请外交做英语节目访谈 全国甲卷 倡议书 保护海洋 全国乙卷 投稿 课外学习英语的调查结果 2021 全国甲卷 咨询信 询问外国人感兴趣的中国传统文化 北京卷写作(一) 道歉信 因故不能赴约外出而道歉 浙江6月卷 宣传稿 学生国画作品宣传稿 浙江1月卷 发言稿 欢迎辞发言稿 2020 新高考Ⅰ卷 报道 越野赛跑活动报道 全国卷1 作文比赛 身边值得尊敬的人 全国卷2 短文 描述一次农场采摘活动 全国卷3 邀请信 邀请外教对于改变剧本进行指导 2019 全国Ⅰ卷 申请信 申请去美术馆当志愿者 浙江6月卷 感谢信 感谢外国友人的帮助 1.多年来写作题的命题特点一直坚持素养立意，重点考查学生的语言能力、文化意识和思维品质。纵观五年内的真题，应用文的体裁多样，多达十四种，内容围绕人与自我、人与社会、人与自然展开。从中可以看出，这些体裁均与当代社会生活密切联系，充分体现时代特色；体裁的多样化使得写作话题更加贴近社会及个人生活经历，有利于培养学生的创新精神和思维品质。 2.传统文化类应用文是近几年的热点，包括：中国传统节日、中国特色食物、中国特色产品、中国非物质文化遗产等内容。应多关注中国传统的文化元素。引导学生在使用英语了解世界的同时，注重传承和发扬中华民族优秀文明成果强文化自信，让用英语表达中国传统文化成为一种习惯。 二、命题规律与趋势 命题规律： 1.从命题形式上看，近五年高考应用文写作均采用了文字提纲的半开放命题形式，留给考生一定的自由发挥的空间,思维量逐渐加大。 2. 写作题材突出了多样化、实用性的特点，取材较为广泛、内容较为丰富活泼，多为日常生活和一般交往所涉及的内容，而且力求融入中国元素，如介绍一位中国古代著名人物、申请做中国画展览的志愿者以及告知英国朋友下次上汉语课的计划等。 3.写作体裁主要以应用文体裁中的书信类为主，但去年开始投稿类和图表类的文章开始增多，之前考察较多的邀请信、告知信、报道的考察频率开始逐渐减少。 命题趋势：未来高考应用文写作仍会以半开放命题形式为主，文体会更加灵活，且题材的内容也会越来越贴近生活。 三、方法技巧 1.明确应用文体，有的放矢。应用文是为特定目的服务的，写作动因与目的非常明确，写作格式和体例也趋于稳定。语言要突出规范性、严肃性，切忌过分繁琐、铺垫太多，文字既要简洁明了又要把要点概括齐全，针对体裁定位要选用适当的语气和语言。 2.合理谋篇布局，有效使用语句间的连接成分、较为复杂的句式结构以及高级表达方式。 在写作之前，根据逻辑关系对材料的要点进行组合、调整，充分展现考生不拘泥于材料的灵活思维。高考鼓励考生尽量使用较复杂的语言结构。较复杂的语言结构通常指以下几种情况 (1)尽量使用复合句，如在一句中加人入定语从句、状语从句、宾语从句、同位语从句、主语从句或表语从句。 (2)使用变化多样的句式，如疑问句、祈使句、倒装句、省略句。 (3)使用非谓语动词、强调句型和其他固定句型。另外，文章中词汇的运用，能够充分体现考生的词汇量和整体英语水平。 3.确保写作时间 确保写作时间包含两个方面:①平时训练不应拖拖拉拉，应限时完成，完成时间通常在15～20分钟;②考试时要提高阅读速度，以确保书面表达有足够的时间高质量地完成。有的老师要求学生在做完完形填空后就做第二卷，最后做阅读，以确保书面表达的时间，这也不失为应试的一种小技巧。 4.高考评分标准 Comment by 泽泽: 这部分内容老师比较熟悉，学生知道的一知半解，可能会因为这样那样的问题导致失分。这部分内容有必要让学生全面了解。 ①评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。 ②词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。评分时应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 ③拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时:应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 ④如书写较差以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 第五档(13～15分) 能写明全部要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达无误。 第四档(10～12分) 能写明全部或绝大部分要点，语言有少量错误，行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚。 第三档(7～9分) 能写明基本要点，语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意。 第二档(4～6分) 能写出部分要点，语言错误多，影响意思表达。 第一档(1～3分) 只能写出一两个要点，语言错误很多，只有个别句子正确。 零分 未作答；内容太少，无法评判；所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。 5.找到失分原因，逐个击破 Comment by 泽泽: 学生作文中最大的问题是小错误太多，拼写、时态、转换词形等，其次是汉语式的表达，还有语言的得体性等。 ①没有分段，结构混乱。不分段或者只写两段的应用文往往给人一种结构不完整的整体印象，判分者很难从文章中迅速找到要点，会影响得分。 ②拼写错误，影响理解。词汇拼写错误反映出基础知识不牢固，说明语言功底不强，比如把“invite”写成“invent”等，会影响理解。 ③内容缺失，要点不全。要点齐全是判断高分与低分的分水岭，要点不全可能会导致分数不及格。 ④句式单一，语言贫乏。整篇都是短句，没有高级词汇或者复杂句式，读起来索然寡味，自然不会得高分。 ⑤衔接断层，结构松散。段与段之间或者句与句之间缺乏连接词或者连接句，给人一种断断续续的印象，影响得分。 ⑥汉式英语，交际欠妥。应用文讲究交际性，在语言、内容等方面都要符合作者的身份和具体应用的场景，使语言规范得体。 四、写作步骤及注意事项 写作步骤： 考生在进行应用文写作时，从审题到成文，可以遵循以下步骤。 第一步 “五定”定审题，“三段”谋篇 审题时，一定题材：确定题材体裁是书信、发言稿或者报道等；二定人称；三定时态；四定要点：要点要全；五定结构：行文逻辑。 第二步 初步定稿 心中有数 按照审题和谋篇的思路，在草稿纸上进行初次写作之后，然后要做到四查：一查内容信息是否完整，要点是否有遗漏；二查句子结构是否完整，如英文句子一定要有主语和谓语，且在人称和数方面要注意主谓一致，两个分句之间一般要有连词；三查是否有单词拼写错误，时态错误等；四看整个语篇是否连贯。 第三步 斟酌词句 设计亮点 高考英语应用文写作评分标准，鼓励考生使用高级词汇，亮点词汇恰当，运用高级句式，如强调句倒装句省略句，各类从句非谓语动词等，可以使文章语言丰富，可读性强，即使只有一处点睛之处，也能给文章增加亮点，让人有耳目一新的感觉 第四步，巧妙过渡 完美呈现 根据行文或段落，需要再聚聚，段与段之间适当增加过渡词语，甚至造句可以使文章浑然一体，同时能充实文章，最后在答题纸上书写时，务必做到字迹工整清晰。 注意事项 在应用文写作的过程中，要注意信息覆盖的全面性结构，组织条理性与逻辑性语言使用的准确性，文体格式的正确性。一篇好的应用文应该还有以下几点： 1、 包括所有需要表达的要点，内容完整； 2、 自然流畅，语法词汇标点等运用准确； 3、 有效的采用多种衔接手法，文字连贯层次清晰； 4、 运用较高级的词汇和语句句型； 5、 格式与语义的使用恰当得体； 6、 书面整洁。 5、 复习策略 1.以读促写 每完成一篇应用文写作后，注意留心观察，吸收养分。好词、短语、句子，都可能成为写作中的亮点。把它们积累下来，增加写作储备。 2．以记促写 古人云“读书破万卷，下笔如有神”，也就是说，要博览群书，在写作时就会得心应手，所以平时刻意去背诵一些好词好句是很有必要的。本部分第二讲的前四节主要集合了高中阶段的精华语料，从而助力写作获取高分。 3．以练促写 光看不练，光记不练，终究无法了解自己是否掌握以及掌握了多少内容。无论是单句表达，还是语篇写作，都应积极实操，在实际的写作中操练句子结构和文章结构，最后对比参考答案找差距，思考自己的问题出在哪里，从而得到提升。 六、写作示例 Comment by 刘雪苹: 具体解析见课件 【2023新高考全国Ⅰ卷】假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括； 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右： 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan I’m Li Hua from Class 3. 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Yours sincerely, Li Hua 七、构建梳理 Exploration& Transfer —Apply what you have learned to do some practical writing. 【Learning objectives】 1.Form a basic writing frame for each different writing type by analyzing the language features, contents and structures 2. Apply what you have learned to do some practical writing. 3. Polish your writing with the help of each checklist and remarks 【Context and Task】 With the continuous reform of the college entrance examination, the study of practical writing is not limited to the several styles that we are familiar with. Let's get to know and understand all kinds of practical writing methods and apply these methods in writing. Passage 1: 申请信 [文体概述] 申请信包括求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请等，其目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就以及愿望等，故个人情况的介绍是申请信的主体，应尽可能向对方说明自身优势。 ( 3.表达感谢，简述获准后的打算，期待对方优先考虑 ) ( 2.详述个人优势，简述个人要求 ) ( 1.点明目的，自我简介，点出信息来源 ) [常用句式] 夺人眼球开头句（开篇表意，提出申请） 1.Interested in your recently advertised position for guides to welcome the coming foreign students, I'm gladly writing to apply for the job. 我对贵公司最近刊登的招聘外国留学生导游的广告很感兴趣，我很乐意写信申请这份工作。 2.Learning that volunteers are needed for the coming Chinese painting exhibition, I can't wait to apply for the position.得知即将到来的中国画展览需要志愿者，我迫不及待地申请这个职位。 亮点出彩篇中句（阐述优势：资格、性格特征、交际能力、语言能力和相关经验） 1. Having acquired a good knowledge of Chinese and reasonable teaching methods, I'm confident that I'm qualified to teach foreigners to learn Chinese.我精通中文而且有合理的教学方法，我相信我能胜任教外国人学习中文。 2.Sociable and responsible, I do believe I'm perfectly qualified to work in your art gallery as a volunteer. 我善于交际，有责任心，我相信我完全有资格在你们美术馆做志愿者。 3. Not only am I outgoing and energetic, but I'm also optimistic and enthusiastic.我外向开朗精力充沛，而且乐观热情。 4.1 have a good command of oral English, enabling me to communicate with foreign visitors with great case.我英语口语很好，能很轻松地与外国游客交流。 5.My previous volunteering experience will qualify me for the position.我以前做志愿者的经验使我能胜任这个职务。 6.I have organized several such great activities, equipping me with relevant experience.我组织过几次这样的大型活动，积累了相关经验。 韵味无穷结尾句（结尾点题，盼回复） 1.If you consider I'm the perfect person for the job, please contact me at your earliest convenience.如果您认为我是这份工作的最佳人选，请尽早联系我。 2.Should you treat my application favorably, I would spare no effort to offer my best service.如果您看中我的申请，我将不遗余力地提供我最佳的服务。 3.I'd appreciate it if I'm offered the opportunity. I＇m certain I can be of great help to you. 如果能给我这个机会，我将不胜感激。我相信我会对您大有帮助的。 4. If given the opportunity to be the guide,I'll spare no effort to do everything I can.如果有机会做导游，我会竭尽全力。 [仿写再借鉴] 假定你是李华，正在伦敦交流学习。你所在社区将举办各国传统舞蹈表演活动，请你用英语给活动组委会写一封邮件，申请参加此活动。内容包括： 1．写信目的；2．相关经验；3．希望获准。 注意：写作词数应为80左右 Dear Sir or Madam, I'm a Chinese exchange student studying in London now.①___________________________________（我迫不及待地想申请参加我们社区的世界传统舞蹈表演）. I have been practicing traditional Chinese dance since I was six,②_____________________________（这帮我在数次舞蹈比赛中获奖，非限制性定语从句）at the national level.③ _______________,before coming here, I belonged to my school dance club and was responsible for teaching newcomers. If I'm given the precious opportunity ④_________________________________________（用状语从句的省略句升级），I＇ll spare no effort to show the unique beauty of traditional Chinese dance. Yours, Li Hua 好词：be responsible for 对……负责 [实践演练] （全国卷I改编）假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括： 1．写信目的；2．个人优势；3．能做的事情。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2: 邀请信 [文体概述] 近5年高考全国14套卷共考查邀请信4次，对内容和格式要求较宽松，说明活动内容、时间、地点即可。 ( 3.期待参加，期盼回复 ) ( 2.介绍活动相关信息 ) ( 1.说明写信意图，发出邀请 ) [常用句式] 夺人眼球开头句（开篇表意） 1.There will be a music festival to be held in our school next Friday. I'd like to invite you to take part.下周五我们学校将举行音乐节。我想邀请你参加。 2. To enrich our after-class life, our school will organize a cultural festival next Sunday. I'm delighted to invite you to participate in it.为丰富我们的课余生活，我们学校将于下周日举行文化节，我很高兴邀请你参加。 3.A volleyball club has been formed recently in our school. Learning you are enthusiastic about it，I＇m writing to invite you to join it.我们学校最近成立了一个排球俱乐部。知道你喜欢排球，我写信邀请你加入俱乐部。 亮点出彩篇中句（介绍邀请对方要参加的活动或俱乐部等） 1. The activity is to promote the traditional Chinese culture as well as improve our ability to appreciate art.活动的目的是弘扬中国传统文化，提高我们欣赏艺术的能力。 2. The activity is scheduled to last approximately three hours， from 8：30 am to 11：30 am．活动从上午8：30到11：30，时间约三个小时。 3.As scheduled, the festival is to be held in our city hall next Friday.按计划，节日将于下周五在我们的市政厅举行。 4.If you are interested in table tennis, register for our school team by July 20th．如果你对乒乓球感兴趣，请在7月20日前报名参加我们的校队。 5.This is such a golden chance to experience traditional Chinese art that it can't be missed. 这是体验中国传统艺术的绝佳机会，不容错过。 韵味无穷结尾句（望应邀，盼回复） 1.I sincerely long for your attendance if you are available. Eagerly looking forward to your early reply.如果你有时间，我渴望你能来。热切期待你的早日回复。 2.My family/classmates and I would feel much honored if you could accept my invitation.如果你能接受我的邀请，我和我的家人／同学们将会感到非常荣幸。 3. I'd appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early convenience.如果你能尽早确认参加，我将不胜感激。 4.I do hope you will seize the opportunity to join the club and have fun.我真的希望你能抓住机会加入俱乐部并玩得开心。 [仿写再借鉴] 假定你是李华，你校将于下周五举办跳绳比赛，请给你校交换生Steven 写封信邀请他参加，内容包括： 1．时间和地点；2．目的和形式；3．设置的奖项。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Dear Steven, I can't wait to inform you a rope skipping competition will be held on our school playground next Friday. ①_________________________________（我想邀请你参加）. To encourage us students to stay healthy and energetic, the competition will be held in the form of single skipping rope and team skipping rope. The student or the team who skips most will win first prize. Furthermore, many prizes will be given to the players who rank in top 10. ②___________________________, it will be a fantastic activity,and ③_____________________（如尽早确认你的参与，我将不胜感激）. Yours, Li Hua 好词：in the form of 以……的形式；single/ team skipping rope单人/团体跳绳 [实践演练] （2022·新高考I卷）假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请你给外教 Caroline 写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。 内容包括： 1．节目介绍； 2. 访谈的时间和话题。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3: 求助信 [文体概述] 求助信是针对自己目前遇到的困难，写信请求对方给予帮助的信件类型，整篇文章应用一般现在时。 ( 2.求助事由 ) ( 1.开门见山表明求助意图（针对陌生对象需自我介绍） ) ( 3.期待回复并表示感谢 ) [常用句式] 夺人眼球开头句（开篇表意） 1.I'm writing to seek help from you/ask you to do me a favor, as I meet with/come across some problems while planning a Green Campus campaign. 我写信请你帮忙，因为我在策划一个绿色校园活动时遇到了一些问题。 2. I am eager to get your timely help. /I'm eager for your timely help.我渴望得到你及时的帮助。 3.The reason why I am writing to you is that I wonder if you could do me a favor.我写信给你是想知道你能否帮我。 4.Faced with/In face of so challenging a problem, I have no alternative but to turn to you for help. 面对这个难题，我只得向你求助。 亮点出彩篇中句（说明求助内容） 1.What bothers me is that I am at a loss/have no idea how to review what I have learned by myself at home.困扰我的事情是我不知道如何在家里复习功课。 2.I have much trouble/bother in concentrating on online classes， making me really frustrated.我很难专心上网课，这使我很苦恼。 3.I'm stuck and wondering if you could offer me some practical advice as I know you have organized similar activities.我被难住了，知道你组织过类似活动，所以我想知道你是否可以给我一些实用的建议。 4.I feel greatly stressed, so would you be kind enough to offer me some advice on how to relieve stress？我现在压力很大，你能给我一些减压的建议吗？ 5.Learning you have rich experience in organizing opera performances, I was wondering if you could lend me a hand.我知道你组织话剧演出经验丰富，因此我想知道你是否能帮我。 6.I find it difficult/challenging/tough for me to fit in with others in the new surroundings.我发现在新的环境中我很难与他人融洽相处。 韵味无穷结尾句（表达感谢，期待回复） 1.I would be very grateful if you could take the trouble to help me deal with the problem.如果你能费心帮我处理这个问题，我将不胜感激。 2. Your timely help/assistance will be highly appreciated.非常感谢你及时的帮助。 3. I'd appreciate it if you could give me some guidance／instructions／help／assistance.如果你能给我一些指导／帮助，我将不胜感激。 [仿写再借鉴] 假定你是李华，下周将参加英语模联（MUN）活动，请你用英语给外教 Henry 写封邮件，内容包括： 1．借用《英语媒体词典》(Dictionary of English Media); 2．请教英文演讲技巧； 3．请求当面指导。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Dear Mr Henry, How is everything going these days?① ________________________________（我写信向你求助）. While preparing to attend MUN next week, I have some difficulty with concepts and expressions of the current affairs and speech skills. I'm wondering if I could borrow your Dictionary of English Media.②________________, I'm at a loss how to make my speech convincing and persuasive. Could you be so kind as to offer me some advice? ③ _____________________________________________________________________________（如果你能抽时间面对面指导我，我将不胜感激）. Yours, Li Hua 好词：persuasive adj.有说服力的 [实践演练] （2020·全国卷皿改编）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。请你给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。内容包括： 1．剧情简介；2．指导内容；3．商定时间、地点。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 4: 建议信 [文体概述] 建议信通常是写给亲朋好友，就对方在生活、学习和工作中遇到的问题或困难提出看法或建议，或就对方不明智的举动给予劝勉、告诫或展开讨论的应用文。 ( 1.表明写信意图 ) ( 2.给出具体的建议及理由 ) ( 3.其他（如指出采纳建议的好处，表达祝愿等） ) [常用句式] 夺人眼球开头句（开篇点题，表明意图） 1.You have asked me for advice regarding how to learn Chinese well, and I'm offering some practical suggestions.你向我征求关于如何学好汉语的建议，我给你一些实用的建议。 2.I'm delighted to receive your letter, in which you asked me for advice on how to focus on online courses.我很高兴收到你的来信，你在信中向我征求如何专心上网课的建议。 3.As for how to improve calligraphy, I'd like to offer you some advice.关于如何提高书法，我想给你一些建议。 4.I'm willing to give you a hand and offer some practical suggestions at your request.我愿意帮助你并按你的要求提一些实用的建议。 亮点出彩篇中句（引出具体建议） 1.Personally/As far as I'm concerned, it would be a wise choice if you stay at home and avoid going outdoors unless necessary.在我看来，除非必要，待在家里避免出门是明智的。 2.Why not join a volunteer club? If you do this, you can not only help others but make friends 为什么不参加志愿者俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，你不仅能帮助他人也会交到朋友。 3.In addition, I strongly suggest/advise you arrive on time or a little earlier.此外，我强烈建议你准时或早一点到。 4.Another suggestion is that you should wear protective mask to prevent yourself from getting infected if you go outdoors.另一个建议是，戴上防护口罩，以防外出时被感染。 5.If I were you/Were I you,I would work out regularly in order to keep healthy.如果我是你，我会经常锻炼以保持健康。 6.You'd better exercise regularly, which is the most important way to help you stay away from any infections.你最好经常锻炼，这是帮你远离感染的最重要的方法。. 韵味无穷结尾句（望采纳建议，盼回复） 1. Hope my suggestions will be of some help/benefit to you.希望我的建议对你有所帮助／有益。 2.Personally, it would be beneficial if you follow my advice and have faith in yourself.我认为， 如果你采纳我的建议并相信自己的话会有益处的。 [仿写再借鉴] 假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack来信说他的课余生活十分单调，他每天花大量的课余时间在电子设备上，请你给他回信，就如何安排课余时间提出建议。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Dear Jack, As for how to use your free time more effectively,①_________________________________（我想给你一些实用的建议）. ②______________________________,reduce your screen time and stop using any before school and at mealtimes. ③____________________________, increase real-time communication with your friends and family and be “present”and connected.④________________________,it makes sense to lead an active life,so⑤________________________________________________________________________________ （充分利用业余时间积极参加一些课外活动）. ⑥___________________________________________（我希望我的建议能对你有所帮助）. Yours, Li Hua 好词：①make sense 有意义②lead an active life 过积极的生活 [实践演练] 假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚的朋友Jim所居住的地区最近出现了新冠病毒患者，他感到很害怕，向你征求建议。请你给他提出建议，内容包括： 1．你的建议和理由； 2．表达祝愿。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 5: 告知信 [文体概述] 告知信是应用文中考察最多的类型之一，2019年全国II卷和2017年全国I卷曾考查告知信。告知信是告诉对方有某事要发生或某个情况或活动的书信。 ( 3.期盼回复 ) ( 2.相关事宜 ) ( 1.告知某人某事（写信背景、目的） ) [常用句式] 夺人眼球开头句（开篇问候，表明目的） 1.How is everything going ? I’d like to tell you some details / information regarding / concerning / related to my taking online course. 一切都好吗？我想告诉你一些关于我上网课的细节／信息。 2.Here is a piece of exciting news. There will be a volleyball match next month. 我有个好消息要告诉你。下个月有一场排球赛。 3.I’ m eager / excited to inform you of a voluntary activity that you may be interested in. 我迫切/激动地告诉你一个你可能感兴趣的志愿者活动。 4.I can hardly wait to share with you the exciting news that a folk music festival is to be held in our city.我迫不及待地告诉你一个令人激动的消息，我们市即将举行民间音乐节。 5.I feel greatly honored to contact you, informing you that the cultural exchange program will be launched next week. 很荣幸能与您联系，告诉您文化交流项目将于下周启动。 亮点出彩篇中句（说明相关情况） 1.The next class is about calligraphy, for which you should make some preparations. 下一节课是书法，你应做好上课准备。 2.Not only does the activity arouse students interest in reading , but it also cultivates students’ love for knowledge. 这次活动不仅激发了学生的阅读兴趣，而且培养了学生对知识的热爱。 3.As for campus culture in our school, I’m delighted / pleased to tell you something about our campus slogans. 至于我们学校的校园文化，我很高兴告诉你一些关于我们校园的标语。 4.I hope the change of the course arrangement will not cause you too much trouble / inconvenience. 我希望课程安排的变化不会给你带来太多麻烦／不便。 5.In preparation for the coming event, you are supposed to collect some materials regarding the traditional festival.为了准备即将到来的活动，你应该收集一些关于这个传统节日的材料。 韵味无穷结尾句（结尾点题，表示期待） 1.I' d appreciate it if you could give me a reply at your earliest convenience. 如能尽早回复，我将不胜感激。 2. Come and experience real Chinese culture yourself .来亲自体验真正的中国文化吧。 3.I find it’s a good idea to first learn things by myself and then discuss them with my classmates and teacher.我发现首先自己学东西，然后再与我的同学和老师们讨论它们是个好主意。 [仿写再借鉴] 假定你是李华，是2022年北京冬奥会的志愿者，元宵节在奥运村度过。请你写信告诉你的英国朋友Peter这个难忘的元宵节的情况，内容包括： 1. 你的经历； 2.你的感受； 3.你表达期待。 注意写作词数应为80左右 Dear Peter， How is everything going ? ①___________________________________________________（我想告诉你我在奥运村度过的难忘的元宵节情况） With red lanterns looking good against the snow, the Village saw my joyful Lantern Festival with other volunteers .②______________________________________, there were various activities, including doing paper - cuts, guessing lantern riddles, and making lanterns. We enjoyed delicious tangyuan, and I had fun guessing riddles. The memorable Lantern Festival not only got me immersed in a traditional festival atmosphere but deepened my understanding of the new motto of the Olympics - Together. ③___________________________________________________________________________________（热切地期待着你来和我一起滑雪）. Yours , Li Hua 好词：① memorable adj. 难忘的 ② get sb. Immersed in 使某人沉浸于..... [实践演练] （全国卷II改编） 假定你是校排球队队长李华，请你写封邮件告知你的队友 Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括： 1.比赛信息；2.赛前准备；3.表达期待。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Chris, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 6: 咨询信 A Letter of Inquiry [文体概述] 询问信主要用于询问与活、广告及安排相关的具体信息，写作时要注意用不同的句式询问细节信息。具体写作结构为： ( 自我介绍并阐明写信目的 — 咨询信息 ) ( 咨询具体信息，强调所需信息的重要性 ) ( 表达 想获取信息的强烈愿望，提供联系方式并表示感谢。 ) [常用句式] 夺人眼球开头句（说明写信目的） 1.I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding / concerning the English summer camp. 我写信是想看看您是否能给我提供有关英语夏令营的信息。 2.I' m writing to you in the hope of getting some details of the two - week journey. 我写信给您是想了解这两周旅行的一些细节。 3.I was wondering if / whether you could / would offer some specific information related to your advertisement. 我想知道您是否能够提供一些有关你们广告的具体信息。 亮点出彩篇中句（陈述要咨询的信息） 1.Could you be so kind as to tell me the detailed arrangement for those online courses ? 我这些网课的具体安排吗？ 2.Another point I’m uncertain is whether the meals are covered in the total expenses . 我还不确定的另一点是餐费是否包含在全部费用之中。 3.I would be grateful if you could let me know if there are any special requirements for taking part in the voluntary activity. 如果您能告诉我您对参加这个志愿者活动是否有任何特殊要求，我将不胜感激。 4.If there is anything else that needs to be paid special attention to, please inform me at your convenience. 如果还有什么需要特别注意的地方，请在方便的时候告诉我。 5.What deserves my special attention is whether there is enough time for shopping. 我特别关注的是是否有足够的时间购物。 6.Nothing can be better if you can take the trouble to offer me some relevant materials about the course.如果您能给我提供一些这门课的相关资料，那就再好不过了。 韵味无穷结尾句（望回复并致谢） 1.Thank you for your kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated. 谢谢您的好意，如能及时关注此信，我将不胜感激。 2.Please share with me some specific information about your schedule. Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible. 请告诉我一些有关你们日程安排的具体信息。盼望尽快收到您的回信。 3.I would appreciate it if you could give me more detailed information about your schedule. 您能给我更详细的日程安排，我将不胜感激。 [仿写再借鉴] 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Terry 一行人要来你市体验元宵节，他请你帮他们预定酒店。请你给他回复一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.表示欢迎； 2．询问到达时间； 3．询问具体要求（价位、房间数等）。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Dear Terry， Delighted to learn you’ re coming to have a taste of the Lantern Festival in our city, I’d like to reserve a hotel for you in advance. But I need some details of your travel. ① ____________________________, I ' d like to know what time your flight will arrive at the airport so I can pick you up. ②____________________________, prices of a hotel room range from ¥399 to ¥999, so which kind of rooms do you prefer ? ③_______________________________________, how many rooms do you exactly need ? Only if I figure out all of the questions can I make reservations for you. ④ ________________________________________________________________________________ （如能尽早回复，我将非常感激） Yours , Li Hua 好词： ① have a taste of 领略；体验 ② range from ... to ..．从......到．....．不等 ③ figure out 弄清．..... ④ make reservations for 为．....．预订 [实践演练] 1. （全国卷I）假定你是李华。计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）。 ( Dear Sir or Madam , _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ) 注意写作词数应为80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 7: 回复信 [文体概述] ( 说明活动或事情的意义或体会等 ) ( 具体介绍与对方所问的活动或事情相关的信息 ) 回复信是针对询问信的回复，往往是针对对方询问的某项活动或中国传统文化风俗方面的相关情况的答复。第一个说明对方所问是有，二、具体介绍与对方所问的活动或事情相关的信息，三、说明活动或事情的意义或体会等 ( 说明对方所问事由 ) [常用句式] 夺人眼球开头句（开篇表明目的） 1.Learning you are enthusiastic about the art festival，I’m delighted to share with you some details. 得知你对艺术节很感兴趣，我很高兴告诉你一些细节。 2. As for your last letter asking about the cultural exchange program , I’d like to share with you the arrangements in detail. 对于你上封信中问及的文化交换项目的事情，我想告诉你一些具体的安排。 3.Delighted to have received your letter , in which you are deeply fascinated by traditional Chinese culture, I’m writing to give you a brief introduction . 很高兴收到你的来信，在信中你对中国传统文化有浓厚的兴趣，我写信向你简单介绍。 4. I’m more than pleased to have received your email, saying what appeals to you most is shadow play. Now I can’t wait to share what I know about it with you. 很高兴收到你的邮件，说你最喜欢的是皮影戏。现在我迫不及待地想和你讲述我了解的情况。 5. Here is some relevant information that you are deeply concerned about. 下面是你非常关心的相关信息。 亮点出彩篇中句（具体介绍活动或其他情况） 1.Aimed at promoting traditional Chinese culture, the exhibition was held in the local museum last Sunday.为了弘扬中国传统文化，该展览于上周日在当地博物馆举行。 2.At 10 am we were shown around the art center, where we appreciated various artworks created by famous artists. 上午10点我们参观了艺术中心，在那里我们欣赏了著名艺术家创造的各种艺术作品。 3.Books on this topic are available online, which may give you a more specific explanation . 这个主题的书籍网上有，也许会给你一个更具体的解释。 4.Not only was the activity a fabulous feast for the eyes but it also inspired us to work harder .活动不仅是一场视觉盛宴，也激励我们更加努力地工作。 5. The activity did offer us a golden opportunity to have a taste of the most advanced technology . 这次活动确实给我们提供了一次体验最先进技术的绝佳机会。 韵味无穷结尾句（说明活动意义或自身体会） 1.If you want to know anything else，please don’t hesitate to contact me. 你如果想知道其他事情，请尽管联系我。 2.Hope what is said above can give you a better understanding of traditional Chinese shadow play. 希望以上内容能让你更好地了解中国传统皮影戏。 [仿写再借鉴] 假定你是高三学生李华，你的英国好友 Jim 在你们学校网站上看到了学生参加学农活动的照片，很感兴趣，发来邮件询问，内容包括： 1．学农活动的相关信息（时间、内容．.....); 2．你参加学农活动的感受。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Dear Jim , ①________________________________________________________________________________ （我很高兴你对我们学校上周六组织的学农活动很感兴趣，我想告诉你一些细节）. At 9 am my classmates and I took a bus to a farm in northern Beijing ② ________________________________________________________________________（用强调句升级）, where we helped the farmers pick apples the whole day. I’m delighted that I could do my bit to help the farmers through my work.③ __________________________________________, I learned for the first time of the difficulty getting fruits onto the kitchen table. Looking forward to hearing from you again . Yours , Li Hua 好词1.do one ' s bit to do sth尽力做某事 2.for the first time 首次；第一次 [实践演练] （全国卷 I 改编）假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友 Terry 将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括： 1．到达时间； 2．合适的礼物； 3．餐桌礼仪。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lihua Passage 8: 推荐信 [文体概述] 推荐信是推荐事物（包括人文历史，旅游观光和文体娱乐等）、某事或某人的书信，写作时应先点题，表明收到对方的邮件，然后主体部分陈述详细的推荐理由。具体写作结构为: 说明写信目的及要推荐的对象，熟人需要寒暄，与陌生人需要进行自我介绍，，期待自己的推荐能让对方感到满意 ( 期待自己的推荐能让对方感到满意 ) ( 说明写信目的及要推荐的对象，（熟人需要寒暄语，陌生人需要进行自我介绍 ) ( 主体部分：阐述推荐理由 ) [常用句式] 夺人眼球开头句（开篇表明推荐） 1. I’m delighted to learn that you are keen on traveling to China , so I’m writing to strongly recommend that you pay a visit to Xi’an. 我很高兴得知你很想去中国旅游，我写信强烈建议你去西安游玩。 2. Learning from your last letter that you are eager to explore traditional Chinese culture , I think the ancient poetry is your best choice. 从你上一封信中得知你渴望探索中国传统文化，我认为古诗是你最好的选择。 3. Delighted you show great interest in Chinese martial arts, and that you desire to learn, I’d like to recommend a martial arts teacher to you. 高兴你对中国武术很感兴趣，并且想学习武术，我推荐一位武术老师给你。 亮点出彩篇中句（推荐理由及内容） 1.The ancient city is highly recommended for the following reasons. 强烈推荐你去古城，理由如下。 2.Additionally, with a history of hundreds of years , the Summer Palace reflects typical ancient Chinese architectural art and wisdom. 此外，有着数百年历史的颐和园反映了典型的中国古代建筑艺术和智慧。 3.As one of the world wonders, the Great Wall is regarded as the symbol of China, which you can’t afford to miss. 长城是世界奇观之一,是中国的象征,不容错过。 4.Visiting the Summer Palace by yourself is bound to greatly promote your understanding of the profound traditional Chinese culture. 游览颐和园一定会大大促进你对中国悠久传统文化化的了解。 韵味无穷结尾句(望采纳,表祝愿) 1.I sincerely hope that my recommendation can be of some help to you . 我真诚地希望我我的推荐能对你有所帮助。 2.If there still exist further questions, please contact me without hesitation . 如果还有其他问题,请尽管与我联系。 4. I do hope you can take my recommendation into account and whenever you need help , don’t hesitate to let me know. 我希望你能能考虑我的建议,无论何时你需要帮助,请及时让我知道。 5. Hope my recommendation will help you. Wish you a good time / journey. 希望我的推荐能帮到你。祝你玩得/旅途愉快。 [仿写再借鉴] 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Peter 写信告诉你他对中国古诗很感兴趣，请你给他推荐一本学习中国古诗的书。请你回信，内容包括： 1.推荐的书及原因； 2．如何购买。 注意：写作词数应为80左右 Dear Peter, ①_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(得知你对中国经典诗歌很感兴趣趣,我向你推荐《用唐诗学汉语》). It’s a collection of famous Chinese poetry written during the Tang Dynasty , ②___________________________________(中国诗歌的黄金时代,名词短语作同位语). Intended for beginners , the book mainly focuses on poems that are easy to understand.③____________________,the book offers English translations of all the poems, which will be of benefit to you. The book is available online. ④ _________________________________________________________(希望我的建议能有所帮助).⑤_____________________________________________(如果你还有其他问题,请告诉我). Yours , Li Hua 好词：①be intended for sb 为某人准备的 ②focus on 关注；集中于....... [实践演练] （北京高考改编）假定你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友 Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括： 1． 表示欢迎；2．推荐他上哪所大学； 3．建议他做哪些准备工作。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Dear Jim, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 9: 道歉信 [文体概述] ( 3.再次表明歉意，请求谅解，并提出补救措施 ) ( 2. 说明道歉的具体原因 ) ( 1.点明目的，自我简介，点出信息来源 )道歉信应对自己具体的过失和疏忽作出解释（一般要求考生自由发挥），道歉的原因一定要真实而且容易接受，语言要得体委婉，表示出诚意。 [常用句式] 夺人眼球开头句（表明写信意图） 1.I'm writing to convey my sincere apologies to you for not accompanying you to the gallery at our appointed time.我写信向你表达我诚挚的歉意，因为我没有在我们约定的时间陪你去画廊。 2.I hate to say sorry, but there is a change in my school arrangement, so I can't attend your birthday party.很抱歉，我学校的安排有变动，所以我不能参加你的生日聚会了。 亮点出彩篇中句（说明道歉原因） 1.The reason why I won't be available at that time as planned is that my grandfather fell ill suddenly yesterday and I have to care for him. 我不能按计划届时到场，因为我祖父昨天突然生病了，我必须照顾他。 2.I have just found I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause too much trouble.我刚发现我那天下午要参加一个重要的班会。我希望这个变化不会造成太大的麻烦。 3.I feel so sorry for not keeping my word, but would you give me a chance to say sorry to you face to face？我很抱歉没有信守诺言，但你能给我个机会当面向你道歉吗？ 4.Much to my regret, I was unable to keep my appointment to discuss Chinese paintings with you.非常遗憾，我不能如约和你讨论中国画。 5.I would appreciate it if you could allow me to fix another time. If not, please keep me informed in advance of what time suits you best.如果您能允许我另安排时间，我将不胜感激。如果不能，请提前告诉我何时最适合您。 韵味无穷结尾句（再次致歉，请求谅解） 1. I sincerely apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by the unexpected change.对于这个意外的变化给您带来的不便，我深表歉意。 2.Hope you can accept my apologies for this unhappy experience and understand my situation.对于这次不愉快的经历，希望你能接受我的道歉并理解我的处境。 3.Please allow me to say sorry again, and I'll try to make up for my fault.请允许我再次致歉，我将尽力弥补我的过错。 [仿写再借鉴] 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tim在你的生日晚会上送给你一件礼物，当时你只说了谢谢，但没有打开。现在你意识到自己的做法会让美国人觉得不礼貌。请你用英语给他写一封道歉信。内容包括： 1．表达歉意；2．做出解释；3．做出承诺（多学习等）。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Dear Tim, ①__________________________________________（因我的没礼貌我写信道歉）when receiving your gift at my birthday party. Though I never meant to hurt you,you might have felt uneasy. The fact is ②__________________________________________（我忘记了中美文化的差异，表语从句）when giving and receiving gifts. A Chinese usually does not open a gift in the presence of the giver, while an American tends to open it immediately when getting it.③________________,I like your gift very much. ④___________________________________________________（请原谅我的粗心并接受我的道歉）.I will learn more about American culture and prevent such things happening again. Yours, Li Hua 好词：①in the presence of sb.在某人面前 ②immediately /adv. 立即；直接地 conj .一… …就 [实践演练] 全国卷II假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约，请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1．表示歉意； 2．说明原因； 3．另约时间。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 10: 感谢信 [文体概述] 感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的个人或集体表示感谢的书信。感谢信要行文得体、语气礼貌恭敬、用词规范，感情真挚尤为重要。 ( 3.再次表示感谢，表达回报的心情 ) ( 2. 描述事件经过和自己的感受 ) ( 1.点明写信目的 ) [常用句式] 夺人眼球开头句（表明写信目的） 1.I'd like to express/convey my great appreciation for your timely help and support.我想对你给予我的及时帮助和支持表示感谢。 2.I'm writing to convey my heartfelt gratitude to you for your kind help and tender care during my stay in Canada, without which I couldn't have enjoyed myself so much.我写信向您表达我衷心的感谢，感谢您在我逗留加拿大期间给予我的善意帮助和亲切关怀，没有您的帮助，我不可能过得这么愉快。 3.With the deepest gratitude, I'm writing to you to express my thanks to you for your kindness when I was traveling in London. 我怀着最深的感激写信给你，感谢你在我伦敦旅行时对我的关怀。 亮点出彩篇中句（描述事情经过和感受） 1.Undoubtedly, it was your encouragement and support that cheered me up when I was faced with difficulties in English learning.毫无疑问， 当我在英语学习中遇到困难时，是您的鼓励和支持使我振作。 2.Thank you so much for the gift you sent me. It's one of the most wonderful gifts I have ever got. 非常感谢你给我寄来的礼物。这是我至今为止收到的最好的礼物之一。 3.During the week, the comfortable accommodation, delicious meals and your friendly family members all made me warm, leaving me ever lasting memories. 在这一周中，舒适的房间，美味的饭菜，友好的家人都让我感到温暖，给我留下了永远的回忆。 4.It was your generous help that enabled me to have a better understanding of your country.是你的慷慨帮助使我对贵国有了更好的了解。 5.Had it not been for your assistance and kindness,I couldn＇t have made such great progress.如果没有你的帮助和关怀，我不可能取得如此大的进步。 韵味无穷结尾句（再次致谢表示回报） 1. Words fail to express my thanks/gratitude/ appreciation to you.我无法用言语来表达我对你的谢意。 2.Thanks again for your help and I'm sincerely looking forward to showing you around in order to repay your kindness.再次感谢你的帮助，我真诚地期待着带你到处看看，以报答你的好意。 [仿写再借鉴] 假定你是李华，你不慎丢失的手机被来中国旅游的美国青年Jim捡到并归还，现Jim已经回国。请你根据下面的要点提示，写封邮件表示感谢。 1．写信目的； 2．感谢的理由； 3．你的愿望。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Dear Jim, I am Li Hua.①________________________________________________________________（我想诚挚地感谢你拾到我的手机并归还给我）. Actually, whenever I look at my cellphone, I will think of you,a kind and honest young American. I became nearly mad the moment I found my new cellphone missing, since I bought it with my own hard-earned money after working part time for months at weekends.②___________________________,③______________________________________________________________________________________（我无法用语言表达我的感激）. Hopefully, you will come someday and then ④_________________________________________（为回报你的好意，我会带你游玩北京）. Yours, Li Hua 好词：the moment一… … 就 [实践演练] （浙江高考）假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．表示感谢； 2．回顾Alex对你的帮助； 3．临别祝愿。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 11: 投诉信 [文体概述] 投诉信常被用来解决诸如消费者利益受损正常生活或工作受到干扰等问题。投诉信不同于申请信或邀请信，要直截了当、掷地有声地表达自己的观点，不能拖泥带水。 ( 2. 说明投诉的原因、问题的经过及产生的后果 ) ( 3.提出解决方案，表示感谢 ) ( 1.表明身份，交代要投诉的问题 ) [常用句式] 夺人眼球开头句（表明身份，提出投诉） 1. I'm writing to express my disappointment/ dissatisfaction with the rude attitude of your waiters to us.我写信表达我对你们服务员粗鲁态度的失望／不满。 2.Dissatisfied with your poor service, I couldn't feel more annoyed so I can not help but make an immediate complaint.我很不满意你们恶劣的服务，我生气得只得立即投诉。 3.I'm Li Hua, a customer who bought a book from your website a week ago. There exists something wrong with several pages. That's why I'm writing to complain.我是李华，一周前在你们网站买了一本书。有几页有问题，所以我写信投诉。 亮点出彩篇中句（说明投诉事由／结果） 1.Personally, it's time your service should be improved to live up to the customers＇ expectations.依我看，现在是改进服务以满足顾客期望的时候了。 2.Worse still, several pages in the book are missing, which makes it impossible for me to make sense of the book. 更糟糕的是，书里少了几页，这让我无法理解这本书。 3. Much to my dissatisfaction, the cellphone is not easy to operate, causing me much inconvenience. What's worse, it often breaks down for no reasons， which shows its poor quality.令我很不满意的是，手机不容易操作，给我带来了很多不便。更糟糕的是，它经常毫无理由地坏掉，这说明它的质量很差。 4. I'm annoyed to have been provided with such poor service, and I'm certain I have the right to ask you to deal with the problem.我对你们提供的恶劣服务感到很恼火，我确信我有权要求你来处理这个问题。 韵味无穷结尾句（提出解决方法，表示期待） 1. Hopefully, you will take the matter seriously and get it solved.我希望你能认真对待这件事，并解决这个问题。 2.I do hope you will take my complaint seriously and get it settled as soon as possible.我真的希望你能认真对待我的投诉，并尽快处理它。 3.I wonder if I can get my money back, or I wish you could have it repaired or changed. I hope you will do what you can to settle the problem.我想知道能否把钱拿回来，或者我希望你能把它修好或换掉。我希望你能尽力解决这个问题。 [仿写再借鉴] 假定你是李华，你在英国学习，某天你在网站订购了五包成人口罩。但收到口罩后发现了几个问题。请你用英语给网店老板Mr.Henry写一封投诉信，主要内容包括： 1．陈述投诉原因：收到的是儿童口罩；客服不回应； 2．提出解决办法。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Dear Mr.Henry, I'm Li Hua, one of your customers.①________________________________________________（我写信投诉贵网店令人不满的服务）. I ordered five packs of adult masks from your online store three weeks ago, but I didn't receive them until yesterday. Besides, when opening the package, I found it was the type for children. ②_________,I have tried to contact your customer service, but there has been no reply. Please return my money or exchange the type for adult for me. ③__________________________________________________（我希望您能尽快处理此事）. Yours, Li Hua 好词：exchange 更换； customer service 客服 [实践演练] 假定你是李华，你在英国学习，昨天你有一次不愉快的就餐经历，你对餐厅服务员的态度非常不满意，于是请你给该餐厅老板写信投诉。内容包括： 1．问题：牛肉面（beef noodles）里有苍蝇（fly），服务员态度恶劣； 2．要求：餐厅赔礼道歉； 3．希望能改进服务。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 12: 参赛短文&教育 [文体概述] 参赛短文是叙述某个活动、自己的经历或事物，介绍活动时应条理清楚。时态常用一般现在时或一般过去时。 ( 2. 简要介绍活动/事物 ) ( 3.简要评价/感想 ) ( 1.简要概括事物/活动 ) [常用句式] 夺人眼球开头句（开篇点题） 1.There are many valuable experiences in our life. As for me, cooking for my mother on her birthday is an unforgettable one.在我们的生活中有许多宝贵的经历。对我来说，在妈妈生日那天为她做饭让我无法忘怀。 2.Organized by the student union, weparticipated in a one-day trip to the Forest Park last Sunday, which intended us to get close to nature and love nature.为了让我们亲近自然，热爱自然，上周日学生会组织我们去森林公园一日游。 3.With graduation approaching, I can't help considering my college major.随着毕业的临近，我不得不考虑我的大学专业。 亮点出彩篇中句（说明学习内容） 1.What impresses me most is the friendship formed in the period.给我印象最深的是那段时期建立的友谊。 2.It was the first time I had cooked and somehow the eggs ended up burnt.这是我第一次做饭，果鸡蛋煳了。 3.At 7 am, we started on foot and it took about one and a half hours before we reached our destination．早上7点，我们步行出发，大约一个半小时后到达目的地。 4.During the walk, not only did we breathe the fresh air but we also appreciated the fantastic surrounding views.在散步的过程中，我们不仅呼吸了新鲜的空气，还欣赏了周围美妙的景色。 韵味无穷结尾句（评价） 1.Not only does the activity allow us students to relax in a stressful school life, but it also prepares us for the future both physically and mentally. 这个活动不仅让我们学生在紧张的学校生活中放松，还让我们在身心上为未来做好准备。 2.Thanks to this opportunity to experience nature, this activity rewarded us with an unforgettable memory.这次活动让我们有机会体验大自然，给我们留下了难忘的回忆。 3.Autumn provides us with an opportunity to feel the sweetness of laboring together with farmers.秋天让我们有机会感受和农民一起劳动的喜悦。 [仿写再借鉴] 你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你以“对我影响最大的一本书”为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括： 1．书籍简介； 2．对你的影响。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 The Most Influential Book to Me Among the books I've read, the Little Prince influences me most ①_________________________（用强调句升级加黑体部分）. It's about a pilot who crashes his plane and is stuck in the desert until he meets the little prince from another planet. The little prince tells the pilot stories of his magical journey from his little planet and of his encounters with different grown-ups. Simple as the story is, it inspires me in many ways. ②___________________, I've not only realized the importance of company but also learned to open my heart and love the people around me ③____________________________________________________________________________________（用倒装句升级加黑体部分）. 好词：open one’s heart 敞开心扉 [实践演练] （2021·新高考I卷）你校英文报 Youth 正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1．读报的经历； 2．喜爱的栏目； 3．期望和祝福。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．短文题目已给出。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 13: 倡议书 [文体概述] 倡议书是由个人或组织发出倡导做某事的应用文，常涉及公益功德方面的主题。格式大致与书信相同，也应有称呼和落款。具体写作结构为: ( 列举倡议的内容和目的 ) ( 发出倡议 ) ( 说明倡议的背景和原因 ) [常用句式] 夺人眼球开头句（呼吁／倡议的背景） 1.I’m appealing to you to pay attention to proper and frequent hand washing. 我呼吁大家正确而且经常洗手。 2.Our handwriting is not as good as it was in the past. To solve the problem, we should do as follow. 我们的书写不如过去好。为解决这个问题，我们应采取如下做法。 3. In order to ease the present serious situation, all students had better do as follow. 为缓解目前的严重情况，所有学生最好做以下事情。 4. It develops rapidly and now has become one of the hottest topics. But still, problems cannot be overlooked. 它发展迅速，现在已成为最热门的话题之一。但问题仍然不容忽视。 亮点出彩篇中句（列举倡议的内容） 1. Never does it produce pollution, contributing to a low - carbon lifestyle. 它从不产生污染，有助于低碳的生活方式。 2. It’s everyone’s responsibility to protect the environment. If we can change our way of life, we can make a big difference to the earth. 保护环境是每个人的责任。如果我们能改变我们的生活方式，我们就能使地球大为改观。 3. Our environment can benefit from such a sport, which can make our world a better place to live in. 这样的运动有益环境，它能使世界成为一个更宜居住的地方。 4.Everyone ought to have a positive attitude to the campaign against the disease. 人人都应对抗击疾病持积极的态度。 韵味无穷结尾句（发出呼吁） 1. Let' s work hand in hand to overcome anxiety and do our bits. 让我们一起努力克服焦虑，尽好我们的一份力。 2. Hoping to see you participate in the activity ! Take action now and you won’t regret it ! 到你参加活动！现在就采取行动，你不会后悔的！ 3. Let' s take action right now ! I’m convinced our efforts will eventually pay off. 让我们现在就采取行动吧！我相信我们的努力最终会有回报的。 4. Please keep in mind that a small action can make a huge difference. 请记住，一个小小的行动可以产生巨大的影响。 5. Let’s make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment. 让我们共同努力，创造一个绿色和谐的环境。 [仿写再借鉴] 假设你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，请你围绕"低碳生活，保护环境"的主题，根据下面所给提示，用英语给你校学生写一封倡议书。内容包括： 1．保护环境的重要性；2．如何低碳生活； 3．发出倡议。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Dear fellow students, With the development of modern industry, the environment is becoming worse and worse.①_________________________________________________（是我们立即采取行动的时候了） or we would have nowhere to live .②__________________________________________,we students can protect our environment by living a low - carbon life. Firstly, do turn off lights and other switches when not using them to save electricity.③__________________, if we go out, we should walk, ride or take public transport instead of driving. Finally, reusing paper and bottles in our daily life is also highly recommended. ④_________________________________________________________________________________（让我们现在从小事做起，使我们的环境越来越好）. Li Hua 好词: ① with the development of 随着....．的发展 ② instead of 代替 [实践演练] 假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你校正在开展"创建美丽校园"的活动。请你用英语给全校学生写一封倡议书。内容包括： 1．创建美丽校园的重要性；2．校园内存在的不文明现象； 3．你的态度。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Dear fellow students, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua Passage 14: 报道 [文体概述] 写报道首先要交代事件或活动的时间、地点、目的和参与者；其次，叙述事件或活动的过程；最后对事件或活动进行评价。具体写作结构为: ( 介绍活动或事件的过程 ) ( 简要进行评价或总结 ) ( 简要概括活动或事件 ) [常用句式] 夺人眼球开头句（简要叙述活动的时间、地点、人物和事件） 1.Our school organized an activity called " Learning from Farmers ", where we students helped the farmers pick apples on a farm. 我校组织了一次学农活动，我们学生在农场帮助农民们摘苹果。 2.To raise our awareness of labor, the social practice was held at the Gardening Base near our school last Friday. 为提高我们的劳动意识，社会实践活动于上周五在我们学校附近的园艺基地举行。 3.To promote Chinese folk culture, the Art Festival was held last Sunday at the Art Theatre downtown.为促进中国民间文化，艺术节于上周日在市中心艺术剧院举行。 4. Last week I took part in a farm practice with my classmates , which has impressed itself on our memory.上周我和我的同学参加了一个农场实践活动，给我们留下了深刻的印象。 which they benefited a lot ．这是一次有益的经历，他们从中受益匪浅。 5.In order to encourage students to pay more attention to physical exercise, an exciting tug of war was held on our school playground last Sunday. 上周日，为鼓励学生们更加重视体育锻炼，我们学校在操场上举行了一场激动人心的拔河比赛。 亮点出彩篇中句（活动发生的主要细节） 1.On arriving at the farm , we began with the area of fruit trees and then moved on to the vegetable field. 一到农场，我们就从果树区开始，然后转到菜地。 2. While picking melons, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields. 在摘瓜时，我意识到在地里劳作太辛苦了。 3.The activity began with a video showing the history of painting facial masks in Peking Opera. 活动从一段展示京剧脸谱画历史的视频开始。 4.We joined a bird watching in the city park last Sunday , getting a close view of the birds. 上周日，我们在市公园参加了观鸟活动，近距离观赏了鸟儿。 韵味无穷结尾句（对活动进行简要的总结和评论） 1.It is through the fruit - picking activity that we are aware of the value of working hard . 过采摘活动，我们才意识到劳动的价值。 2.It turns out to be a rewarding experience, from which they benefited a lot. 这是一次有益的经历，他们从中受益匪浅。 3. Through the activity, we benefited a lot. Not only did it enrich our school life, but it let us further realize the importance of building up our body and working as a team. 通过这次活动，我们受益匪浅。活动不仅丰富了我们的学校生活，而且让我们进一步认识到锻炼身体和团队合作的重要性。 [仿写再借鉴] 昨天，你校举办了一场学生艺术作品展。请为你校校刊（英文版）写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。内容包括： 1．活动背景； 2．展览简介； 3．个人感受。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 An Art Exhibition Held in Our School ①___________________________________________________________________（昨天在我校大厅成功举行了一场学生艺术展), intended to show artistic achievements of students and develop our school culture. ②__________________________, the schoolmaster gave a speech, and then various pieces of painting, photography, sculpture and paper - cut were on show. Some paintings were so good that people in them looked like real. ③________________________________________________________________________（这次艺术展览受到了师生们的高度评价）, through which we not only have acquired some knowledge , but we have also seen something new and wonderful ④____________________________________________________________________________________((用倒装句升级加黑体部分). 好词：artistic achievement 艺术成就 [实践演练] (2020．新高考 I 卷）假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括． 1．参加人员；2．跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；3．活动反响。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 15: 演讲稿/致辞 [文体概述] 演讲主要表达个人或群体的主张；看法；致辞包括欢迎辞、欢送辞和告别辞，常涉及表达情感和祝福，少不了回顾和感想。具体写作结构为: ( 分析问题，提出建议/陈述招待安排，回顾往昔 ) ( 提出解决办法/表示期待 ) ( 明确主题，表欢迎/欢送 ) [常用句式] 夺人眼球开头句（引入主题） 1.It' s my great honor to have the opportunity to share with you my opinion on how to take online courses more effectively. 我很荣幸有机会与大家分享我对如何更有效地上网课的看法。 2.It' s my turn to make a speech here. I’d like to stress the importance of having a positive attitude to study.轮到我在此发言了。我想强调有积极的学习态度的重要性。 3.Today I am honored to have the opportunity to run for the vice president of the English club. 今天我很荣幸有机会竞选英语俱乐部的副主席。 4.It’ s my great honor to stand here on behalf of all the students, and I’d like to offer you my warmest welcome. 我很荣幸能代表所有的学生站在这里，在此向你们表示最热烈的欢迎。 亮点出彩篇中句（表达看法和建议） 1.When it comes to the most important family tradition, the first that comes to my mind is honesty. 谈到最重要的家风时，我首先想到的是诚实。 2.In my view, important though it is for students to have better performance in exams, health is of equal significance. 依我看，虽然考好成绩对学生们而言很重要，但健康也同样重要。 3.No one can deny the fact that the environment pollution is getting increasingly serious. 毋庸置疑，环境污染日益严重。 5.I’m convinced that honesty is the best policy in most situations. 我相信在大多数情况下诚实是上策。 韵味无穷结尾句（总结表达期望） 1.Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today. 从心底感谢你们今天给我这个机会向你们讲话。 2.By way of conclusion, I’d like to quote what Newton once said.我 想借用牛顿曾经说过的话结束我今天的发言。 3.I hope everyone finds your stay here an enjoyable experience and your visit will surely promote our friendship. 我希望大家都在这里过得愉快，你们的来访一定会促进我们的友谊。 4.That’s all I want to say about this point. 关于这一点，我就讲这些。 [仿写再借鉴] 假定你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为" Small Acts Make a Big Difference "的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括： 1．对主题的理解； 2．如何实践。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Ladies and gentlemen , ①__________________________________________________________________________________________（今天能在这里演讲，我感到非常荣幸）. As a famous historian put it ," Small acts, when they are multiplied by millions of people ② _____________________________________（用状语从句的省略形式升级）, can transform the world ." Don’t undervalue small things: a kind gesture, a cup of coffee, a stranger’s smile - they all add up to big changes in our lives .③____________________________,we can do various small things to brighten the world, for example, we can volunteer at an animal shelter or bring flowers to a nursing home. Hopefully, we can do small things with great love. Thank you. 好词：1.undervalue vt. 低估；看轻；轻视 2.brighten vt. 使明亮；使快乐 [实践演练] (2021．浙江高考）假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿。内容包括： 1．表示欢迎； 2．介绍活动安排； 3．表达祝愿。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Dear exchange students from New Zealand， ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 16: 通知 [文体概述] 通知分为书面通知和口头通知，时间、地点、参加者、内容及注意事项 是书面通知的要点，应直截了当一一予以说明。口头通知的语言比较随意。具体写作结构为: ( 陈述具体的内容：时间、地点、参加者等 ) ( 提出要求和注意事项 ) ( 说明通知的事情及目的 ) [常用句式] 夺人眼球开头句（说明通知事宜、目的、地点和时间） 1.In order to encourage us students to take physical exercise and keep healthy, our school is to hold a marathon race. 为鼓励我们学生锻炼身体，保持健康，我们学校将举行一场马拉松比赛。 2.Aiming to promote the traditional Chinese culture, the Student Union is to hold a poetry recitation contest.为了弘扬中华传统文化，学生会将举办一场诗歌朗诵比赛。 3. As scheduled, the contest is supposed to be launched next Sunday in the school lecture hall. 按计划，比赛将于下周日在学校演讲厅举行。 4.Boys and girls, may I have your attention , please ? I have an announcement to make. 同学们，请注意。我有个通知要宣布。 亮点出彩篇中句（陈述具体内容） 1.The lecture is expected to last 3 hours, from 2 pm to 5 pm on Friday in the hall of the main building. 讲座于周五下午2点到5点在主楼大厅举行，预计持续3个小时。 2.The activity focuses on Chinese folk music, aimed at promoting deeper appreciation of traditional Chinese music.活动以中国民族音乐为为主题,旨在促进对中国传统音乐乐的更深的理解。 3. We are informed that from today to tomorrow afternoon, the lift service wil1 be suspended owing to repair. 我们获悉,从今日至至明日下午,电梯将会因维修而暂停。 4. Those interested in the activity are supposed to sign up at our office by the deadline. 对活动感兴趣的人应该在截止日期前到我们办公室报名。 韵味无穷结尾句(提出要求和注注意事项) 1.If there is any change, we will keep you informed ahead of time. 如有任何变化,我们会提前通知您。 2.All the teachers and students are required to be present on time. Your participation will surely make a difference. 要求全体师生按时时参加。你的参与一定会起作用。 3.Everyone is required to attend it on time and do not ask for leave without special reasons. 要求全员按时参加,没有特殊原因不准请假。 4.Make sure you arrive on time and please don’t forget to wear the red vest for the voluntary work. 务必准时到达,且不要忘记穿上上志愿者工作的红马甲。 [仿写再借鉴] 假设你是李华，为迎接即将来访的美国某中学生代表团，你校决定举办英语讲故事比赛。请你为校英语报写一则通知，内容包括： 1．比赛时间和目的；2．比赛内容：中国传统文化故事；3．报名截止日期。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Notice ① _______________________, our school is to launch an English speech competition next Monday. It’s meant as part of our plan to welcome the visiting American students, aimed at promoting our awareness of the richness of Chinese traditions as well as improve our spoken English . ②_________________________________________________________________________________（演讲应以与中国传统文化有关的故事为主题）.You can tell stories related to the origins of traditional festivals and some legends concerning Chinese culture. Anyone interested in it is supposed to sign up at our office by the deadline, this Friday afternoon. ③____________________________________________________（欢迎你与我们分享你的故事）. Student Union 好词: ① promote one’s awareness of 提高某人的意识 ② be supposed to 理应；应当 [实践演练] （全国卷 I ）你受学生会委托为校宣传栏"英语天地"写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片 Growing Together, 内容包括： 1． 短片内容：学校的发展； 2．放映时间、地点； 3．欢迎对短片提出意见。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Extension & Test —Improve your writing skills 【Learning objectives】 1.Accumulate topic chunks to enrich your own writing styles 2. Have a good knowledge of all kinds of writing methods 3. Improve the scoring level and write a full score composition 实效提分训练 1.言之有“规”—单词形式要正确 满分作文的前提是语言要规范，包括单词拼写的规范，语法知识的规范 单词拼写的规范 一定要准确记忆单词，避免出现单词拼写的错误，单词中无论是多、漏、错或颠倒字母，都是作文中最显眼的错误，都会让考生的作文降档。 I know you are interested in table tennis, which is regaded as the nationall ball sport in China, so you'd better take the opprotunity to join the team. 词形、名词的单复数和固定用法要规范 在记忆词汇时，应准确记忆单词的词形变化，遇到名词就应记清该词是可数名词还是不可数名词，动词（规则和不规则），形容词比较级和最高级的变化。还应注意介词、代词等的用法。 If you could provide specific informations,I would be well thanks. 用所给词的正确形式或1个适当的单词补全下面的申请信，并背诵成文。 Dear David, Learning from the website an exhibition of ①_______________________(tradition) Chinese clothing is to be held in your museum, I'd like to apply for the position as a volunteer. Firstly,② ___________________(interest) in clothing design, I've read ③__________________ (vary) books on the costume features of ④____________(differ) dynasties.⑤_________(addition), being a fluent English speaker can enable me to introduce the styles and history to visitors.Most________________ (important), it would be ⑦________________honor to spread our culture and promote cultural exchange between the two countries. If given the opportunity, I'll do what I can to live up to your⑧___________________ (expect). Yours, Li Hua 2.言之有“序”—巧妙过渡衔接 用于句首和句群内的过渡衔接词汇 用于句首的过渡词（词组）：generally speaking，to begin/start with, first of all, in the first place, as we know， as is known to all 等。 Generally speaking, the more you practice, the more skillfully you can write in English. 一般而言，练习得越多，你的英语写作就越娴熟。 表示附加或递进关系的过渡词（词组）：and，and then, also. in addition, additionally, besides,furthermore, moreover, what's more,worse still,to make matters worse, more importantly, last but not least等。 Additionally, I'm open-minded and fond of making friends,which equips me with good qualities that a guide needs.另外，我性格开朗，喜欢交朋友，这让我具备了导游所需要的素质。 Worse still, it got dark and we found ourselves lost in the mountain.更糟的是，天黑了我们在山里迷了路。 表示让步、转折、对比或类比的过渡词（词组）：but，however, although, though, yet, while, instead, in contrast, on the other hand, on the contrary,similarly等 However, I'm afraid I won't be able to keep my appointment to discuss Chinese paintings with you. 不过，恐怕我不能如期与您讨论中国画了。 利用恰当的过渡衔接词汇补全下面的建议信，并背诵成文。 Dear Editor, I'm writing to express my concern about the life of the senior. ①______________,it's a good idea for us students to visit seniors at weekends to keep them company.②_______________, some activities such as singing, dancing or traveling can be organized, thus enabling them to lead a more socially active life.③_________________, conveniences should be provided in public places like supermarkets and hospitals. Caring for the elderly is a traditional virtue, which will contribute to ④________________a happy family but also a harmonious society. ⑤____________________, let's do something to make a difference. Yours, Li Hua 1. 言之有“艺”—特殊句式，风景独好 强调句和倒装句 强调句型“It is／was＋被强调成分＋that／who＋其他成分.”可以加强语气，突出某些人物或事件的重要性；运用部分／全部倒装句以示强调。 It is your detailed explanation on the topic that will appeal to me most.就是你对这个话题详细的解释最吸引我。Following the speech is a one-hour lecture on the history of Chinese music.演讲之后是一小时的中国音乐历史讲座。 虚拟语气和省略句 用虚拟语气可使语气委婉，常用于请求和建议的情景；用省略句可避免不必要的重复。 If it had not been for your assistance, I would not have made such rapid progress.要不是你的帮助，我就不会取得如此快的进步。When asked about happiness, we usually think of something extraordinary， an absolute delight. 当被问及幸福时，我们通常会想到一些不同寻常的事，一种绝对的喜悦。 按照所给汉语提示，利用特殊句式补全或升级下面道歉信中的加黑体句子，并背诵成文。 Dear Nancy, I'm sorry to tell you I cannot go to the show with you next Saturday. I am writing to apologize to you. The reason why I am not available is that we volunteers are to launch a campaign at that time ①____________________________________________________________________________________（用强调句升级）.As a registered volunteer, it is my responsibility to participate in public welfare activities. ② ___________________________________________________________________________（我真的希望你能原谅我，用助动词强调动词).Meanwhile，if it is convenient for you,③_____________ ______________________________________________________（我建议我们另安排日期）.If it is not ④________________（用省略句升级），let me know what time suits you. Sorry again for any inconvenience caused. Yours, Li Hua 2. 言之有“艺”—三大句式添亮点 写作中运用三大从句，可使文章语言更为丰富 运用定语从句，让表述更丰满 在写作中可利用定语从句表达信息或转换句式 This semester our school offers many optional courses to the students, each of which appeals to many students.这学期我校为学生们开设了许多选修课，每门课都吸引了很多学生。 运用名词性从句，让表达更多样 在写作中可利用名词性从句表达信息或转换句式。 It is known that table tennis is a national ball in my country, so that you should know what my favorite sports is. 众所周知，乒乓球是中国的国球，因此你应该知道我最喜欢的运动是什么。 运用状语从句，让逻辑更清晰 在写作中可利用状语从句表达关键信息或转换并列句。 However tough the task is, there is no doubt that we will overcome all the difficulties and succeed. 不管任务多么艰巨，毫无疑问，我们将克服所有的困难并取得成功。 三大从句运用于应用文写作 利用三大从句升级下面感谢信中的加黑体部分或按照汉语提示填空，并背诵成文。 Dear Bill, I’d like to express my sincere gratitude to your whole family for ①__________________________ （当我在伦敦学习时你为我所做的事，宾语从句十状语从句） as an exchange student. Your kindness and consideration made my stay so enjoyable②_______________________________________________ (用主语从句升级). The beautiful scenery, well protected environment and kind local people impressed me so much . Not only did I learn a lot about your rich culture , but I practiced my spoken English. ③________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ （毫无疑问，我和你及你的家人在一起的时光，同位语从句十定语从句） left me a deep impression. Thanks again for your kindness. Yours, Li Hua 3. 言之有“艺”并列句式简约不简单 恰当利用简约的并列句 在读后续写中，如原文中并列句式较多，续写时应沿用原文语言特点，恰当利用并列句；应用文写作中对并列句的合理利用也可使句式简洁。 Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it. 知识是财富，而实践是获取它的钥匙。 However, mobile phones now have so many functions, we can not only send messages, call our friends up, but we can also play games, and some even surf the Interne, 可是，现在手机有那么多功能，我们不仅能发短信，打电话，还可以玩游戏，甚至上网。 根据汉语提示利用并列句填空或利用并列句改写下面的报道中的加黑体部分，并背诵全文。 An Autumn Outing to the Red Leaf Valley Last Sunday, we participated in a one - day trip to the Red Leaf Valley organized by our class, which intended us to get close to nature. At 6 am,①_______________________________________________________________________ (我们步行出发，花了一个小时才到达目的地). During the walk, we breathed fresh air and we appreciated fantastic surrounding views ②___________________________________________________ （用 not only ...but also 改写）. In the valley ,③_____________________________________________ （红叶很迷人，因此我们的压力得以缓解）. We had some beautiful pictures taken and enjoyed a wonderful picnic. This activity rewarded us with an unforgettable memory. 4. 高级句式和过渡衔接词汇用于应用文写作 按要求升级下面的演讲稿中的加黑体部分，并在空白处填写恰当的过渡衔接词汇，最后背诵成文。 Ladies and gentlemen, It’s my great honor to be here on behalf of our school and I’ d like to offer you my warmest welcome. Now, allow me to share with you the arrangements for your stay here. ①_______________________________, we will show you around our school, during which you can get to know about the history of our school. A one - week seminar then follows ②__________________________________________ （用倒装句升级）, where both parties can have a deep understanding of each other. ③___________________________________________________________, we will show you some performances regarding Chinese calligraphy, paintings and Peking Opera ④_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（用被动句升级）. ⑤________________________, you can enjoy your stay. Thank you . Writing 1 从冬奥运动员到探月宇航员再到抗疫工作者，人们在各自的领域发光发热，实现自我的价值。以 My dream job为题给英语校报投稿，内容包括： 1.想要从事的职业；2.选择该职业的原因。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 2 为了培养学生对劳动的理解和热爱，你校将在网上组织一次生活技能展示活动。假设你是学生会负责人李华，请你用英语写一则书面通知，内容包括：1．时间与地点；2．活动内容；3．注意事项。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 11 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 应用文学程答案 整体建构： Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows. To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with. My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together. Thank you for considering my suggestion. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 探究迁移： 1.申请信: 2.邀请信 Dear Caroline, This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration. Yours, Li Hua 3.求助信: 4.建议信 Dear Jim, I’m so sorry to hear that there are some Covid-19 virus in your neighbourhood again. I’ll give you some advice to keep you and your family from the harm. Firstly, it is always of vital importance to develop good hygiene and healthy living habits. Always remember that your immunity is the most solid shield. Secondly, don’t contact or eat animals, which would cut the transmission routes. Thirdly, carry out your daily protection measures like wearing facial masks and keeping the window open. Hope these suggestions would be useful. I sincerely wish you healthy and happy. Yours, Li Hua 5.告知信 6.咨询信 7.回复信 8.推荐信 9.道歉信 10. 感谢信 11. 投诉信 12. 参加短文和教育 Dear editor, As the 10th anniversary ceremony of YOUTH is drawing near, I am writing to take this opportunity to extend my heartfelt congratulations. Ever since I was young, my parents exposed me to various magazines, but YOUTH was my favorite which has gained high praise from many students including me, a regular reader. Not only does it supply me with a platform to broaden my horizon, but its rich content can also spark my burning passion for English. I am fond of all its columns, but what I enjoy most about the paper is its language and writing style, which contributes greatly to my progress in writing. I have thousands of blessings and I keenly wish YOUTH could achieve greater success and gain more popularity. Yours, Li Hua 13. 倡议书 14. 报道 15. 演讲稿 16. 通知 拓展检测阶段： 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$