内容正文:
Exploration& Transfer
—Apply what you have learned to do some practical writing.
Learning objectives:
1.Form a basic writing frame for each different writing type by analyzing the language features, contents and structures.
2. Apply what you have learned to do some practical writing.
3. Polish your writing with the help of each checklist and remarks.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm a Chinese exchange student studying in London now.①I can hardly wait to apply to take part in the performance
of traditional dances of the world in our community(我迫不及待地想申请参加我们社区的世界传统舞蹈表演).
I have been practicing traditional Chinese dance since I was six,②which has helped me win several prizes in dance competitions(这帮我在数次舞蹈比赛中获奖,非限制性定语从句)at the national level.③Moreover,before coming here, I belonged to my school dance club and was responsible for teaching newcomers.
If I'm given the precious opportunity ④If given the precious opportunity(用状语从句的省略句升级),I’ll spare no effort to show the unique beauty of traditional Chinese dance.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.申请信
1-1仿写再借鉴
假定你是李华,正在伦敦交流学习。你所在社区将举办各国传统舞蹈表演活动,请你用英语给活动组委会写一封邮件,申请参加此活动。内容包括:1.写信目的;2.相关经验;3.希望获准。
注意:写作词数应为80左右
好词
be responsible for 对……负责
Dear Sir or Madam,
(说明工作信息,提出申请)I’m a student taking summer courses in London now. Learning volunteers are needed for the coming Chinese painting exhibition in your local art gallery, I can't wait to apply for the position.(先用“现在分词作状语十被动句”,说明信息内容,再用固定句式,表明自己迫切的心情)
(详述个人优势和能做的事情)Firstly, my fluent English enables me to communicate smoothly with British painting lovers. Moreover, with a wide knowledge of Chinese painting, I can introduce the art form better.
(利用介词短语说明自己的第二个优势)Better yet, I've participated in several similar activities, which equipped me with relevant experience. (非限制性定语从句十高级表达,说明相关工作经验)
(表达决心,期待回复)If accepted,I will spare no effort to introduce those paintings on display and
(省略句式简洁明了,再次为文章添彩)
answer questions patiently. I'd appreciate it if you could consider my application.
Yours,
Li Hu
1.申请信
1-2 实践演练
(全国卷I改编)假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
好词
①enable sb. to do sth.使某人能够做某事 ②spare no effort 不遗余力 ③on display 展出
Dear Steven,
I can't wait to inform you a rope skipping competition will be held on our school playground next Friday. ①I'd like to invite you to participate(我想邀请你参加).
To encourage us students to stay healthy and energetic, the competition will be held in the form of single skipping rope and team skipping rope. The student or the team who skips most will win first prize. Furthermore, many prizes will be given to the players who rank in top 10.
②Surely, it will be a fantastic activity,and ③I'd appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience(如尽早确认你的参与,我将不胜感激).
Yours,
Li Hua
2.邀请信
2-1 仿写再借鉴
假定你是李华,你校将于下周五举办跳绳比赛,请给你校交换生Steven写封信邀请他参加,内容包括:
1.时间和地点;2.目的和形式;3.设置的奖项。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
好词
in the form of 以……的形式;single/ team skipping rope单人/团体跳绳
Dear Caroline,
(自我介绍,发出邀请)I am Li Hua,a student in charge of our Campus Broadcasting Station. (利用“同位语十介词短语作后置定语”介绍自己身份,简洁明了)I'm writing to sincerely invite you to an interview in our program.
(节目介绍,说明访谈的时间和话题)Mainly focusing on our varied and colorful campus life, 高级词汇十现在分词作状语,介绍节目,简明扼要
“Talk and Talk” enjoys great popularity among us. Actually, fully aware of your abundant experience in teaching and rich knowledge of literature, we desire a talk concerning how to improve writing ability.(高级词汇+形容词短语作状语,说明访谈话题) Would 3:00 pm this Saturday be convenient for you?
(再次邀请,期待回复)Your presence will definitely impress and benefit us considerably. (用两个副词强调程度,说明邀请的诚挚,得体自然)I'd appreciate it if you could confirm your coming at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2.邀请信
2-2 实践演练
(2022·新高考I卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请你给外教 Caroline 写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:1.节目介绍;2.访谈的时间和话题。注意:写作词数应为80左右。
好词 ①in charge of 负责 ②focus on 主要讲述;专注于 ③be fully aware of 充分认识到
Dear Mr Henry,
How is everything going these days?①I’m writing to seek help from you .(我写信向你求助).
While preparing to attend MUN next week, I have some difficulty with concepts and expressions of the current affairs and speech skills. I'm wondering if I could borrow your Dictionary of English Media.②Furthernore, I'm at a loss how to make my speech convincing and persuasive. Could you be so kind as to offer me some advice?
③I’d appreciate it if you could spare some time to give me face-to-face instructions(如果你能抽时间面对面指导我,我将不胜感激).
Yours,
Li Hua
3. 求助信
3-1 仿写再借鉴
假定你是李华,下周将参加英语模联(MUN)活动,请你用英语给外教 Henry写封邮件,内容包括:
1.借用《英语媒体词典》(Dictionary of English Media); 2.请教英文演讲技巧;3.请求当面指导。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
好词
persuasive adj.有说服力的
Dear Miss Evans,
(说明写信目的)How is everything going? I’m writing to ask you for advice regarding a play we have adapted from our textbook. (利用高级词汇regarding和定语从句,说明求助事项)
(说明具体困难)The play is about how money influences the attitude of people treating others. However, what we're uncertain
(however话锋一转,引入下文,what引导的
is whether the plot is complete.Besides, we are eager to know how to correct our tone and pronunciation in order to perform the
主语从句+whether引导的表语从句,表述第一个困难.)
play perfectly. Therefore, I'm wondering if it is convenient for you to guide us at ten am tomorrow in the school hall.
(利用I’m wondering和宾语从句,礼貌得体地商定时间、地点)
(希望得到帮助,期待早日回复)I’d appreciate it if you could do usa favor. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
3 求助信
3-2 实践演练
(2020·全国卷II改编)假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。请你给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。内容包括:1.剧情简介;2.指导内容;3.商定时间、地点。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
好词
①adapt... from...改编自······ ②do sb.a favor 帮某人一个忙③be eager to do sth.渴望做某事
Dear Jack,
As for how to use your free time more effectively,①I'd like to offer you some practical suggestions(我想给你一些实用的建议).
②First of all, reduce your screen time and stop using any before school and at mealtimes. ③Furthermore, increase real-time communication with your friends and family and be “present”and connected.④What's more,it makes sense to lead an active life,so⑤make the most of your free time to get actively involved in some after-school activities(充分利用业余时间积极参加一些课外活动).
⑥I hope my advice will be of some help to you(我希望我的建议能对你有所帮助).
Yours,
Li Hua
4. 建议信
4-1 仿写再借鉴
假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Jack来信说他的课余生活十分单调,他每天花大量的课余时间在电子设备上,请你给他回信,就如何安排课余时间提出建议。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
好词
①make sense 有意义②lead an active life 过积极的生活
Dear Jim,
(写信意图)As for your letter asking about how to avoid being infected at this particular time, I'd like to offer you some practical suggestions.
(具体的建议及理由)First of all,my suggestion is that you stay at home and avoid going out unless necessary, which is beneficial to yourself and others. (表语从句中的虚拟语气十省略句十非限制性定语从句,句式丰富,说明第一个建议及理由。)Furthermore, do wear a protective mask outdoors and wash hands frequently and properly. (“助动词十动词原形”,强调戴口罩的重要性)What's more, strengthen your immune system and exercise regularly, thus enabling you to stay away from any infections.
现在分词作状语,使得该建议更有说服性
(表达祝愿)I hope my advice will be of some help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
4. 建议信
4-2 实践演练
假定你是李华,你的澳大利亚的朋友Jim所居住的地区最近出现了新冠病毒患者,他感到很害怕,向你征求建议。请你给他提出建议,内容包括:1.你的建议和理由;2.表达祝愿。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
好词
①at this particular time 在这个特殊时期 ②strengthen immune system 增强免疫力 ③stay away from远离
5.告知信
5-1 仿写再借鉴
假定你是李华,是2022年北京冬奥会的志愿者,元宵节在奥运村度过。请你写信告诉你的英国朋友Peter这个难忘的元宵节的情况,内容包括: 1. 你的经历; 2.你的感受; 3.你表达期待。注意写作词数应为80左右Dear Peter, How is everything going ? ①I’d like to share with you my memorable Lantern Festival spent in the Olympic Village.(我想告诉你我在奥运村度过的难忘的元宵节情况) With red lanterns looking good against the snow, the Village saw my joyful Lantern Festival with other volunteers .② Additionally, there were various activities, including doing paper - cuts, guessing lantern riddles, and making lanterns. We enjoyed delicious tangyuan, and I had fun guessing riddles. The memorable Lantern Festival not only got me immersed in a traditional festival atmosphere but deepened my understanding of the new motto of the Olympics - Together. ③ Eagerly looking forward to your coming to ski with me(热切地期待着你来和我一起滑雪). Yours , Li Hua 好词:① memorable adj. 难忘的 ② get sb. immersed in 使某人沉浸于.....
5.告知信
5-2 实践演练
(全国卷 II 改编)假定你是校排球队队长李华,请你写封邮件告知你的队友 Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包括: 1.比赛信息; 2.赛前准备; 3.表达期待。
注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris ,
(告知比赛信息) I’m excited to inform you our team is to compete in an important volleyball match next week .
(介绍比赛具体信息和赛前的训练安排) As scheduled, the event will be held in our school gym at 9 am next Sunday.
To make full preparations for it , I have made a specific training plan. All the team members are supposed to take the
非谓语动词作状语+高级词汇,是增分点
training punctually. Additionally , we are expected to practice a lot in an effort to improve our skills and cooperate better with each other . (被动句十高级词汇,说明训练目的) I do hope we can do a good job through joint efforts .
(表达期待) Eagerly looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
Li Hu
好词:1.as scheduled 如期 2. in an effort to do sth
6.咨询信
6-1 仿写再借鉴
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Terry 一行人要来你市体验元宵节,他请你帮他们预定酒店。请你给他回复一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.表示欢迎; 2.询问到达时间; 3.询问具体要求(价位、房间数等)。注意:写作词数应为80左右。Dear Terry, Delighted to learn you’ re coming to have a taste of the Lantern Festival in our city, I’d like to reserve a hotel for you in advance. But I need some details of your travel. ① Firstly, I ' d like to know what time your flight will arrive at the airport so I can pick you up. ②Besides/ Additionally, prices of a hotel room range from ¥399 to ¥999, so which kind of rooms do you prefer ? ③Finally,how many rooms do you exactly need ? Only if I figure out all of the questions can I make reservations for you. ④ Any early reply will be highly appreciated.(如能尽早回复,我将非常感激)
Yours , Li Hua 好词: ① have a taste of 领略;体验 ② range from ... to ...从......到......不等 ③ figure out 弄清...... ④ make reservations for 为......预订
6.咨询信
6-2 实践演练
(全国卷I)假定你是李华。计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。
Dear Sir or Madam .
(说明身份和目的) I’m Li Hua , planning to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.
使用非谓语动词让阅卷老师眼前一亮
I’m wondering if you can offer me information concerning your six - week English course .
用 concerning 比 about 更高级
(询问情况) Firstly, I’d appreciate it if you could tell me when the course will start and how many class hours there are per week. Besides, what about the class size? Additionally, I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Finally, what deserves my special attention is whether there will be any host families or university dormitories. what 引导的主语从句更能引起关注
(表达感激) Any early reply will be highly appreciated.
被动语态比主动语态更吸睛
Yours ,
Lihua
好词:1.concerning prep. 关于 2. deserve special attention 值得特别关注
7.回复信
7-1仿写再借鉴
假定你是高三学生李华,你的英国好友 Jim 在你们学校网站上看到了学生参加学农活动的照片,很感兴趣,发来邮件询问,内容包括: 1.学农活动的相关信息(时间、内容......); 2.你参加学农活动的感受。注意:写作词数应为80左右。Dear Jim , ①I’m delighted you are fascinated about the “Learning from farmers” activity organized by our school last Saturday, I’d like to share with you some details.(我很高兴你对我们学校上周六组织的学农活动很感兴趣,我想告诉你一些细节). At 9 am my classmates and I took a bus to a farm in northern Beijing ② It was at 9 am my classmates and I took a bus to a farm in northern Beijing(用强调句升级), where we helped the farmers pick apples the whole day. I’m delighted that I could do my bit to help the farmers through my work.③ Additionally, I learned for the first time of the difficulty getting fruits onto the kitchen table. Looking forward to hearing from you again . Yours , Li Hua 好词: 1.do one’s bit to do sth尽力做某事 2.for the first time 首次;第一次
7.回复信
7-2 实践演练
(全国卷 I 改编)假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友 Terry 将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括: 1.到达时间; 2.合适的礼物; 3.餐桌礼仪。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Dear Terry ,
(说明回信的目的) It’s great to learn you are invited to a Chinese friend’s home. As for some Chinese table manners,
利用固定句式,简洁地说明 Terry 应邀去中国朋友家做客
I’d like to share with you some relevant details .
(介绍到达时间、合适的礼物和餐桌礼仪) Firstly , arrive on time or a little earlier because being punctual is
利用" because 引导的状语从句十被动句式",说明到达的时间,
considered polite in China. Additionally , if you’d like to bring a gif, a bunch of flowers or some fresh fruit will be a good
表达地道高级
choice. Most importantly, at table, it’s the elderly who are usually the first to eat since they are well respected in China
利用"强调句式十状语从句十被动句式",说明餐桌礼仪,句式丰富多变, 吸引阅卷老师
If they insist you eat first, just go ahead.
(希望对方做客愉快) Just relax and enjoy your visit.
Yours , Li Hua
好句: 1.relevant adj. 相关的 2.punctal adj. 准时的 3.a bunch of 一束
8.推荐信
8-1 仿写再借鉴
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友 Peter 写信告诉你他对中国古诗很感兴趣,请你给他推荐一本学习中国古诗的书。请你回信,内容包括: 1.推荐的书及原因; 2.如何购买。注意:写作词数应为80左右Dear Peter,
①Knowing your keen interest in classical Chinese poetry, I’d like to recommend Learn Chinese through Tang Poetry to you (得知你对中国经典诗歌很感兴趣趣,我向你推荐《用唐诗学汉语》). It’s a collection of famous Chinese poetry written during the Tang Dynasty ,②the golden age to Chinese poetry(中国诗歌的黄金时代,名词短语作同位语). Intended for beginners , the book mainly focuses on poems that are easy to understand.③Additionally,the book offers English translations of all the poems, which will be of benefit to you. The book is available online. ④ Hope my recommendation can be helpful.(希望我的建议能有所帮助).⑤If you have further questions, do let me know.(如果你还有其他问题,请告诉我). Yours , Li Hua好词:①be intended for sb 为某人准备的 ②focus on 关注;集中于.......
8.推荐信
8-2 实践演练
(北京高考改编)假定你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友 Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;2.推荐他上哪所大学; 3.建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Dear Jim ,
(说明写信目的及要推荐的学校) Delighted at your future education plan in Beijing, I’ m writing to convey my warmest welcome. Knowing your keen interest in Chinese culture, I recommend you apply for Peking University , one of the best universities in China . 利用"虚拟语气和同位语",使推荐更加合情合理
(说明推荐的理由) Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese
高级词汇十定语从句,说明推荐理由,生动简洁
profound history and rich culture. Additionally, it’s a good idea to take some online courses of spoken Chinese so that you
固定句式十状语从句,说明需要做的准备,委婉得体
can adapt to the Chinese language environment .
(表示期待) Hope my recommendation can be helpful. If you have further questions , do let me know.
Yours , Li Hua
好词:1. be soaked in 沉浸在........ 2.profound adj. 深厚的
Dear Tim,
①I’m writing to apologize for my bad manners(因我的没礼貌我写信道歉)when receiving your gift at my birthday party. Though I never meant to hurt you,you might have felt uneasy.
The fact is ②that I forgot the differences between Chinese and American cultures(我忘记了中美文化的差异,表语从句)when giving and receiving gifts. A Chinese usually does not open a gift in the presence of the giver, while an American tends to open it immediately when getting it.③Actually, I like your gift very much.
④Please forgive my thoughtlessness and accept my apology(请原谅我的粗心并接受我的道歉).I will learn more about American culture and prevent such things happening again.
Yours,
Li Hua
9. 道歉信
9-1 仿写再借鉴
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Tim在你的生日晚会上送给你一件礼物,当时你只说了谢谢,但没有打开。现在你意识到自己的做法会让美国人觉得不礼貌。请你用英语给他写一封道歉信。内容包括:
1.表达歉意;2.做出解释;3.做出承诺(多学习等)。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
好词
①in the presence of sb.在某人面前
②immediately adv. 立即;直接地 conj.一… …就
Dear Bob,
(表达歉意)I'm writing to apologize to you for being unable to accompany you to the bookstore tomorrow as planned.
(解释失约原因) The reason is that I will attend a family get-together tomorrow when my cousin Peter will return home from Beijing. (利用表语从句,说明失约的原因)Actually, Peter and I grew up together when we were kids and later he went to study in Beijing.Therefore, it's exciting for me to see him again after half a year.
(请求对方接受道歉并另约时间)I hope you can understand mysituation and accept my apology. Would you mind if I suggested we go to the bookstore next weekend? (利用疑问句和虚拟语气委婉地另约时间) Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
9. 道歉信
9-2 实践演练
全国卷II假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约,请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
好词
①accompany 陪伴 ②as planned 按计划
Dear Jim,
I am Li Hua.①I’d like to convey my sincere gratitude to you for your picking up my cellphone and returning it to me.(我想诚挚地感谢你拾到我的手机并归还给我).
Actually, whenever I look at my cellphone, I will think of you,a kind and honest young American. I became nearly mad the moment I found my new cellphone missing, since I bought it with my own hard-earned money after working part time for months at weekends.②All in all ,③words fail to convey my gratitude(我无法用语言表达我的感激).
Hopefully, you will come someday and then ④I will show you around Beijing to repay your kindness(为回报你的好意,我会带你游玩北京).
Yours,
Li Hua
10. 感谢信
10-1 仿写再借鉴
假定你是李华,你不慎丢失的手机被来中国旅游的美国青年Jim捡到并归还,现Jim已经回国。请你根据下面的要点提示,写封邮件表示感谢。
1.写信目的;2.感谢的理由;3.你的愿望。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
好词
the moment 一… …就
Dear Alex,
(表达感谢)It's really hard to say goodbye to you! But meanwhile, I'm eagerly writing to express my gratitude to you for your help.
(回顾Alex的帮助)I still remember what you have devoted to improving my oral English and written English.
高级句式+宾语从句,说明自己诚挚的谢意
Additionally, you also frankly shared your learning experience with me. Most importantly, without your advice and assistance, I would not have made such unbelievable progress in English and would not have even ranked first in the recent English speech contest. (利用虚拟语气,说明对方的建议对自己的帮助)All in all, words fail to convey how grateful I am.
(再次致谢并临别祝愿)Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
10. 感谢信
10-2 实践演练
(浙江高考)假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;3.临别祝愿。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
好词
①be devoted to doing sth致力于做某事 ②frankly 坦率地
Dear Mr.Henry,
I'm Li Hua, one of your customers.①I’m writing to complain about the disappointing service of your online store.(我写信投诉贵网店令人不满的服务).
I ordered five packs of adult masks from your online store three weeks ago, but I didn't receive them until yesterday. Besides, when opening the package, I found it was the type for children. ②Worse still , I have tried to contact your customer service, but there has been no reply. Please return my money or exchange the type for adult for me.
③I hope you can solve the problem as soon as possible.(我希望您能尽快处理此事).
Yours,
Li Hua
11. 投诉信
11-1 仿写再借鉴
假定你是李华,你在英国学习,某天你在网站订购了五包成人口罩。但收到口罩后发现了几个问题。请你用英语给网店老板Mr.Henry写一封投诉信,主要内容包括:
1.陈述投诉原因:收到的是儿童口罩;客服不回应;2.提出解决办法。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
好词
exchange 更换; customer service 客服
Dear Sir or Madam,
(自我介绍,提出投诉)I'm Li Hua, one of your customers, writing to make a complaint about the poor service of your waiters.利用现在分词呈现不一样的开头
(说明投诉的问题,提出要求)It was yesterday that I went toyour restaurant to have lunch but I had an awful experience. I was having beef noodles when suddenly I found two flies in them,which made me disgusted.
(固定句式be doing sth.when...+which引导的非限制性定语从句,说明投诉的事由之一)
What's worse, I asked the waiter to change for another dish, only to be completely ignored by him. 利用only to do作结果状语,说明服务员恶劣的服务态度,投诉的事由之二 Therefore, I'd like you to investigate the matter seriously and make a formal apology to me.
(表示期望)I’d appreciate it if you could give due attention to the matter.
Yours,
Li Hua
11. 投诉信
11-2 实践演练
假定你是李华,你在英国学习,昨天你有一次不愉快的就餐经历,你对餐厅服务员的态度非常不满意,于是请你给该餐厅老板写信投诉。内容包括:1.问题:牛肉面(beef noodles)里有苍蝇(fly),服务员态度恶劣;2.要求:餐厅赔礼道歉;3.希望能改进服务。注意:写作词数应为80左右。
好词
make a formal apology to sb.正式向某人道歉
The Most Influential Book to Me
Among the books I've read, the Little Prince influences me most ①it is the Little Prince that influences me most(用强调句升级加黑体部分).
It's about a pilot who crashes his plane and is stuck in the desert until he meets the little prince from another planet. The little prince tells the pilot stories of his magical journey from his little planet and of his encounters with different grown-ups.
Simple as the story is, it inspires me in many ways. ②Besides, I've not only realized the importance of company but also learned to open my heart and love the people around me. ③not only have I realized the importance of company but also learned to open my heart and love the people around me. (用倒装句升级加黑体部分).
12. 参赛短文&教育
12-1 仿写再借鉴
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你以“对我影响最大的一本书”为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.书籍简介;2.对你的影响。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
好词
①in the presence of sb.在某人面前
②immediately adv. 立即;直接地 conj.一… …就
Youth and Me
(简要介绍读报经历)It has been 10 years since Youth was founded. In my memory, it is Youth that accompanies me through my whole high school.用强调句强调报纸对自己的重要性,开篇就表达不俗
(谈论自己喜爱的栏目)When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes numbers of imaginative stories.状语从句省略句十定语从句,说明自己喜爱的栏目之一
Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but they can also broaden my horizons.用not only倒装句说明栏目对自己的益处,满分吸睛句Besides,the column that benefits my English study a lot is the one that carries articles about foreign cultures and the most efficient ways of learning English.
(期望和祝福)It’s my sincere hope that Youth will be more popular among用主语从句表达期望和祝福,满分结尾句
12. 参赛短文&教育
12-2 实践演练
(2021·新高考I卷)你校英文报Youth 正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.读报的经历;2.喜爱的栏目;3.期望和祝福。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.短文题目已给出。
好词
①relieve stress减压 ②broaden one’s horizons拓宽视野
13.倡议书
13-1 仿写再借鉴
假设你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华,请你围绕"低碳生活,保护环境"的主题,根据下面所给提示,用英语给你校学生写一封倡议书。内容包括:1.保护环境的重要性;2.如何低碳生活; 3.发出倡议。注意:写作词数应为80左右。Dear fellow students,With the development of modern industry, the environment is becoming worse and worse.①It’s high time that we took/should take immediate action(是我们立即采取行动的时候了) or we would have nowhere to live .②Without doubt,we students can protect our environment by living a low - carbon life.Firstly, do turn off lights and other switches when not using them to save electricity.③Moreover, if we go out, we should walk, ride or take public transport instead of driving. Finally, reusing paper and bottles in our daily life is also highly recommended.④Let’s start with small things now to make our environment better and better.(让我们现在从小事做起,使我们的环境越来越好).
好词: ① with the development of 随着.....的发展 ② instead of 代替
13.倡议书
13-2 实践演练
假定你是某国际学校的学生李华,你校正在开展"创建美丽校园"的活动。请你用英语给全校学生写一封倡议书。 内容包括: 1.创建美丽校园的重要性;2.校园内存在的不文明现象; 3.你的态度。注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Dear fellow students,
(说明倡议的背景) I’m writing to call on everyone to take an active part in building a beautiful campus. An attractive campus can make our learning pleasant and thus improve our grades.
(说明倡议的内容) However, some students can be seen running on the lawn , picking flowers or throwing
利用被动句说明不文明现象,利用 which 引导的非限制性定语从句
rubbish everywhere , which harms our school environment. Without doubt, it’s high time that immediate
其对校园的危害
measures should be taken to change the present situation. In my view, everyone is responsible for the beauty of our campus. Moreover , if we all avoid doing anything improper, our campus will become much more beautiful.
状语从句的使用,使文章富有文采
(发出呼吁) Every effort matters. Let’s take action now.
LiHua
好词:1.call on 呼吁;号召 2.be responsible for 对......负责
14.报道
14-1 仿写再借鉴
昨天,你校举办了一场学生艺术作品展。请为你校校刊(英文版)写一篇短文,介绍这次活动。
内容包括: 1.活动背景; 2.展览简介; 3.个人感受。注意:写作词数应为80左右。 An Art Exhibition Held in Our School①Yesterday witnessed a student art exhibition successfully held in our school hall(昨天在我校大厅成功举行了一场学生艺术展), intended to show artistic achievements of students and develop our school culture.②First, the schoolmaster gave a speech, and then various pieces of painting, photography, sculpture and paper - cut were on show. Some paintings were so good that people in them looked like real.③The art exhibition was highly thought of by teachers and students(这次艺术展览受到了师生们的高度评价), through which we not only have acquired some knowledge , but we have also seen something new and wonderful ④not only have we acquired some knowledge , but we have also seen something new and wonderful ((用倒装句升级加黑体部分).好词:artistic achievement 艺术成就
14.报道
14-2 实践演练
(2020.新高考 I 卷)假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括: 1.参加人员;2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;3.活动反响。注意:写作词数应为80左右。
A Cross - Country Running Race
(说明活动和参与人员) Last Sunday witnessed a 5km cross - country running race , in which both
利用 witness 的拟人手法和"介词十关系代词"引导的定语从句
students and teachers of our school participated.
说明活动,开头就吸引阅卷老师
(说明赛跑路线和赛跑过程) The route started from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. The whole course was extremely challenging, especially the part near the mountain, narrow and rough. However difficult it was, no participants gave up halfway. At last , all the runners held on to the finish line .
however 引导的让步状语从句,说明困难和参与人员的毅力
(说明活动反响) The activity was highly thought of, because not only did it provide a chance for us to
not only ... but also 倒装句,说明活动的意义,结尾与众不同
exercise , but it was also of great benefit to the participants, physically and mentally.
好词: 1. give up 放弃,停止 2.hold on 坚持 3.be highly thought of 高度评价
4.be of great benefit to 对....有益
15.演讲稿/致辞
15-1 仿写再借鉴
假定你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为" Small Acts Make a Big Difference "的英语演讲比赛,请你写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括: 1.对主题的理解; 2.如何实践。注意:写作词数应为80左右。Ladies and gentlemen , ①It’s a great honor for me to give a speech here today.(今天能在这里演讲,我感到非常荣幸). As a famous historian put it ," Small acts, when they are multiplied by millions of people ② when multiplied by millions of people (用状语从句的省略形式升级), can transform the world ." Don’t undervalue small things: a kind gesture, a cup of coffee, a stranger’s smile - they all add up to big changes in our lives .③What’s more, we can do various small things to brighten the world, for example, we can volunteer at an animal shelter or bring flowers to a nursing home. Hopefully, we can do small things with great love. Thank you.好词:1.undervalue vt. 低估;看轻;轻视 2.brighten vt. 使明亮;使快乐
15.演讲稿/致辞
15-2 实践演练
(2021.浙江高考)假定你是李华,下周有新西兰学生访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿。内容包括: 1.表示欢迎; 2.介绍活动安排; 3.表达祝愿。注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Dear exchange students from New Zealand,
(说明身份,表示欢迎) I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. On behalf of our school, I extend a warm welcome to your arrival.
(介绍具体活动安排) To immerse you in Chinese culture and unique campus culture, a Peking Opera performance will be staged at the School Hall on Monday morning , from 9:00 to 11:00.fter lunch , mini
非谓语动词作状语十被动句,说明第一个活动
workshops including paper - cutting, calligraphy, and porcelain making will be set up at the stadium, where you can have a taste of these traditional crafts by either seeing them in action or trying one by yourself .
非限制性定语从句,说明第二个活动
(表示祝愿) Hopefully, you can seize the opportunity to explore , enjoy and embrace our charming culture.
好词:1.immerse.....in...使......沉浸 于
2.seize the opportunity 抓住机会
3.have a taste of 体验
16. 通知
16-1 仿写再借鉴
假设你是李华,为迎接即将来访的美国某中学生代表团,你校决定举办英语讲故事比赛。请你为校英语报写一则通知,内容包括:1.比赛时间和目的;2.比赛内容:中国传统文化故事;3.报名截止日期。注意:写作词数应为80左右。 Notice ①As scheduled, our school is to launch an English speech competition next Monday. It’s meant as part of our plan to welcome the visiting American students, aimed at promoting our awareness of the richness of Chinese traditions as well as improve our spoken English . ②The speech should be focused on stories related to traditional Chinese culture.(演讲应以与中国传统文化有关的故事为主题).You can tell stories related to the origins of traditional festivals and some legends concerning Chinese culture. Anyone interested in it is supposed to sign up at our office by the deadline, this Friday afternoon. ③You are wecome to share your story with us.(欢迎你与我们分享你的故事). Student Union 好词: ① promote one’s awareness of 提高某人的意识 ② be supposed to 理应;应当
16. 通知
16-2 实践演练
(全国卷 I )你受学生会委托为校宣传栏"英语天地"写一则通知,请大家观看一部英语短片 Growing Together, 内容包括: 1.短片内容:学校的发展; 2.放映时间、地点; 3.欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Notice
(说明目的并介绍短片内容) To learn more about the development of our school, all the students are
利用"不定式作目的状语十被动句式十非限制性定语从句",巧妙地说明
expected to watch an English short film Growing Together , which is related to the history of our school .
短片的内容和观影的目的,一举两得
(说明放映时间、地点) If you are curious about the history of our school or concerned about its future, don’ t miss the golden opportunity ! 巧妙利用条件状语从句,说明观影的必要
As scheduled, the film will be shown in the school hall from 2 to 3 this Friday afternoon .
被动句式,不仅使表达更为丰富,而且显得地道
(欢迎提意见并提供反馈的渠道) We encourage any kind of feedback on the film from our viewers. Hopefully, you can send your advice or opinions to us by the school QQ or WeChat .
Student Union
好词:1. be curious about 对...感到好奇 2.feedback n.反馈
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