专题12 书面表达精选12篇【考题猜想】-2024-2025学年高一英语上学期期中考点大串讲（上海）

2024-2025学年高一上学期期中考点大串讲（上海） 专题12 面表达精选12篇 （原题版） 1．（23-24高一上·上海黄埔·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 100—120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假定你是中学生李华，你的美国朋友Eric下个月将要来中国交流学习，体验中国文化。请你写一封信向他简单介绍一下中国特有的文化、习俗或现象，并举一到两个事例加以说明。(如：语言、教育、礼仪、饮食、生活习惯、婚姻家庭等方面) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24高一上·上海长宁·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 80—100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 进入高中学习已经有一段时间了，你是否已经适应新的校园生活?请结合自身经历，给以前的班主任写一封信，描述一下现在的高中生活及感受。(可以从校园环境、课程设置、社团活动及人际交往等选择1~2方面进行描述) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（23-24高一上·上海嘉定·期中）当你未来的儿子或女儿即将要开启高中阶段的生活。请你以未来父母的名义写一封建议信给他(她)。 注意：1.建议不能少于 3 条。 2.信中要有爱的真情流露。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（22-23高一上·上海普陀·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120 — 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高一学生李明，你在The Evening News这份报纸上看到一篇关于改造你所在的城市的文章，文中提到了将河边的一块空地改造成自然保护区（nature reserve）。你认为这个改造方案的提议不受年轻人欢迎，请写一封信给该报的编辑，谈谈你的看法，你的文章必须包括： 1. 你不赞同建自然保护区的原因； 2. 提出一个替代的方案并说明原因。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（22-23高一上·上海杨浦·期中）Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的高三学生李华。为了更贴近学生生活，满足学生需求，你所在的学校计划在校园网站上增加一个栏目，拟从四个栏目里选择个一个：“学生来信”、“心理聊天室”、“职业发展规划”和“校园热搜”。学校正在向全体师生征求建议，给校方写一封信。信中必须包含： 1. 你会选择增加的栏目； 2. 你的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（22-23高一上·上海宝山·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的李华，你校外籍教师Chris将在文化周期间做一个有关西方文化的讲座，现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请给Chris写一封电子邮件，邮件必须包含以下内容： 1.你喜欢的讲座话题（从建筑、绘画或风俗中任选其一）； 2.选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容； 3.希望从中有何收获。 7．（22-23高一上·上海徐汇·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是启明中学的高一学生李华，你的外地朋友王敏打算寒假独自来上海旅游，想听听你的建议。请回复一封邮件给他，内容包括： 1) 提议他住在你家； 2) 推荐一到两个景点，并说明理由。 8．（22-23高一上·上海嘉定·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是学生李华，你校学生会正在征集下学期开设的社团活动方案。请你向学生会写一封信，提出你组建社团的申请，你的信中必须包括： 1.、社团名称； 2、组建该社团的理由； 3、社团活动的主要内容。 9．（22-23高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack下周来上海度假，他刚发e-mail给你，想请你为他介绍一个上海的著名景点，具体内容包括： 1. 景点的详细介绍； 2. 门票价位、开放时间等。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（22-23高一上·上海浦东新·期中）Directions：Write an English composition in 100— 120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你校英文网站为倡导低碳生活（low-carbon lifestyle）而开设了论坛。同学们纷纷发帖，交流各自的低碳生活方式。你对此话题也深有感触，准备参与讨论。请在该论坛上发表一个帖子，包括以下内容：（1）介绍你所倡导的低碳生活方式 （2）说明如此做的原因或优点。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．（22-23高一上·上海奉贤·期中）Directions: Write an English letter in 80-100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是吴英，方明是你的初中好友，他现在就读于市区的一所名牌高中。上周，你收到他的来信，你能感受到他面临全新高中生活的焦虑。请你回一封信给他，并提一些合理的建议。（信中不能出现学校名字等） Dear Fang Ming, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Wu Ying 12．（22-23高一上·上海交大附中·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below. Angela wants to write a letter to a travel agency asking for help in arranging a one-week family trip to Shanghai. Help her write a letter to the travel agency. Angela 给某旅行社写信，想要旅行社为其一家安排去上海进行为期一周的旅行。请帮她完成这封信，具体询问旅行的住宿，饮食以及景点的安排等。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！5 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年高一上学期期中考点大串讲（上海） 专题12 面表达精选12篇 （解析版） 1．（23-24高一上·上海黄埔·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 100—120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假定你是中学生李华，你的美国朋友Eric下个月将要来中国交流学习，体验中国文化。请你写一封信向他简单介绍一下中国特有的文化、习俗或现象，并举一到两个事例加以说明。(如：语言、教育、礼仪、饮食、生活习惯、婚姻家庭等方面) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Eric, I am excited to hear that you will be coming to China next month to experience our culture. As a Chinese high school student, I would like to briefly introduce some unique cultural customs or phenomena that you might encounter here. Firstly, our language is widely spoken and has many nuances. For example, the word “ma” can mean “horse” or “mother” depending on the intonation. Secondly, education is highly valued in China, and students work tremendously hard to meet the expectations of their families and society. In terms of etiquette, we have many traditional customs, such as bowing, exchanging gifts, and respecting elders. Moreover, our foods and drinks are diverse and can be quite exotic to foreigners, such as street food like stinky tofu and hotpot. I hope these examples can give you some insights into our unique culture. I am looking forward to showing you more aspects of China when you arrive. Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Eric写一封信向他简单介绍一下中国特有的文化、习俗或现象，并举一到两个事例加以说明。 【详解】1.词汇积累 遇到：encounter→ come across 首先：firstly→ first of all 例如：for example→ for instance 珍惜：value→ treasure 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Firstly, our language is widely spoken and has many nuances. 拓展句：Firstly, our language is widely spoken, which has many nuances. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As a Chinese high school student, I would like to briefly introduce some unique cultural customs or phenomena that you might encounter here.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】I am looking forward to showing you more aspects of China when you arrive.（运用了动名词作宾语以及when引导的时间状语从句） 2．（23-24高一上·上海长宁·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 80—100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 进入高中学习已经有一段时间了，你是否已经适应新的校园生活?请结合自身经历，给以前的班主任写一封信，描述一下现在的高中生活及感受。(可以从校园环境、课程设置、社团活动及人际交往等选择1~2方面进行描述) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Teacher, I hope this letter finds you well. I have been in my new high school for a while now, and I thought I would write to you and share my experiences. The campus of my new high school is very beautiful. The buildings are new and well-equipped with modern facilities. The classrooms are spacious and bright, and the teachers are very knowledgeable and passionate about teaching. The curriculum is challenging, but I am enjoying the opportunity to learn new things and expand my horizons. Although it has been challenging at times, I am enjoying the experience and feel that I am growing and developing as a person. Best regards 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的信件。要求考生给以前的班主任写一封信，向其描述自己进入高中学习后的生活和感受。 【详解】1.词汇积累 热情的：passionate→ fervent 博学的：knowledgeable → erudite 机会：opportunity → chance 偶尔：at times→ once in a while 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The curriculum is challenging, but I am enjoying the opportunity to learn new things and expand my horizons. 拓展句：While the curriculum is challenging, I am enjoying the opportunity to learn new things and expand my horizons. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I hope this letter finds you well.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】Although it has been challenging at times, I am enjoying the experience and feel that I am growing and developing as a person.（运用了although引导的状语从句和that引导的宾语从句） 3．（23-24高一上·上海嘉定·期中）当你未来的儿子或女儿即将要开启高中阶段的生活。请你以未来父母的名义写一封建议信给他(她)。 注意：1.建议不能少于 3 条。 2.信中要有爱的真情流露。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Future Son/Daughter,    As you are going to senior high school, we want to offer some advice.      Firstly, create a study plan and manage your time effectively. Seek help from teachers and don’t hesitate to ask questions. Secondly, get involved in extracurricular activities to develop skills and make friends. These activities will not only expand your skill set but also enhance your communication, leadership, and organizational abilities. Lastly, prioritize your health by exercising, eating well, and getting enough rest. Your physical health is the foundation and guarantee for a successful three-year high school experience.    Remember, we’re here to support you always. With love, Your Future Parents 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生以未来父母的名义写一信给你未来的儿子或女儿，给他(她)的高中生活一些建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 提供：offer→provide 建议：advice→suggestion 扩展：expand→develop 加强：enhance→improve 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Seek help from teachers and don’t hesitate to ask questions. 拓展句：Seek help from teachers, who can provide guidance and answer any questions you may have. 【点睛】[高分句型1] As you are going to senior high school, we want to offer some advice.   (as引导的时间状语从句) [高分句型2] Secondly, get involved in extracurricular activities to develop skills and make friends.(祈使句型以及不定式作目的状语) 4．（22-23高一上·上海普陀·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120 — 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高一学生李明，你在The Evening News这份报纸上看到一篇关于改造你所在的城市的文章，文中提到了将河边的一块空地改造成自然保护区（nature reserve）。你认为这个改造方案的提议不受年轻人欢迎，请写一封信给该报的编辑，谈谈你的看法，你的文章必须包括： 1. 你不赞同建自然保护区的原因； 2. 提出一个替代的方案并说明原因。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear editor, I am Li Ming from Mingqi High School. Here I am writing to respond to your article about establishing a nature reserve by the river. Actually, I don’t think it popular among young people. Although a nature reserve can be beneficial in providing habitats for wild animals and plants and protecting our environment, it should be acknowledged that a city with such a large population cannot afford to spare a vast space to function simply as a nature reserve. There may be a more feasible and beneficial plan, which can take into account both the wild lives and the citizens. A recreational wetland park, I believe, is an alternative for you to consider. In this park, for one thing, the wild lives, especially those birds, can seek shelter and the water quality can be improved. For another, the citizens, as they appreciate the natural ecology and gain relief, can have more options to have various activities. To illustrate, teenagers can go biking or hiking and the family with children can go camping. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给报纸的编辑写信，针对河边空地的改造方案提出想法，需说明不赞同建自然保护区的立场和原因，并提出替代方案和原因。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 回应：respond to→reply to, react to 实际上：actually→in fact, in reality, in truth 有益的：beneficial→advantageous, favorable, rewarding 可行的：feasible→viable, practical 考虑：take… into account→take… into consideration, consider 选择：option→choice, selection 例如：to illustrate→for example, for instance, to exemplify 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Actually, I don’t think it popular among young people. 拓展句：Actually, I don’t think that it will be popular among young people. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Although a nature reserve can be beneficial in providing habitats for wild animals and plants and protecting our environment, it should be acknowledged that a city with such a large population cannot afford to spare a vast space to function simply as a nature reserve.（运用了although引导的让步状语从句、that引导的主语从句） 【高分句型2】There may be a more feasible and beneficial plan, which can take into account both the wild lives and the citizens.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 5．（22-23高一上·上海杨浦·期中）Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的高三学生李华。为了更贴近学生生活，满足学生需求，你所在的学校计划在校园网站上增加一个栏目，拟从四个栏目里选择个一个：“学生来信”、“心理聊天室”、“职业发展规划”和“校园热搜”。学校正在向全体师生征求建议，给校方写一封信。信中必须包含： 1. 你会选择增加的栏目； 2. 你的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Sir/Madam, I am very happy to know that the school plans to add a column on the campus website to get close to students’ life and meet their needs. As for me, I choose the “Psychological Chat room” section. The reasons are as follows. On the one hand, with the increasing academic pressure, many students are unable to adapt to the life of senior three and do not know how to deal with the psychological burden caused by study. There are even some students in low mood or lacking enthusiasm and depression, so it is necessary to actively and effectively relieve psychological pressure to cultivate good values. And also physical and mental health is conducive to the growth of students. On the other hand, as far as I am concerned, in addition to what mentioned above, many students also have a lot of confusion about how to deal with interpersonal relations. Opening this program can not only give students guidance in making friends, but also broaden our vision. I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestion. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生关于学校校园网上增加某个栏目给学校写一份建议信，信中必须包含：选择增加的栏目以及理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 愉快的：happy→ delighted 建议： suggestion→ advice 处理：deal with→ cope with 必要的：necessary→ essential 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：On the one hand, with the increasing academic pressure, many students are unable to adapt to the life of senior three and do not know how to deal with the psychological burden caused by study. 拓展句：On the one hand, as the academic pressure increases, many students are unable to adapt to the life of senior three and do not know how to deal with the psychological burden caused by study. 【点睛】【高分句型1】On the one hand, with the increasing academic pressure, many students are unable to adapt to the life of senior three and do not know how to deal with the psychological burden caused by study. （运用了with复合结构和过去分词作定语） 【高分句型2】On the other hand, as far as I am concerned, in addition to what mentioned above, many students also have a lot of confusion about how to deal with interpersonal relations.（运用了what引导的宾语从句） 6．（22-23高一上·上海宝山·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的李华，你校外籍教师Chris将在文化周期间做一个有关西方文化的讲座，现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请给Chris写一封电子邮件，邮件必须包含以下内容： 1.你喜欢的讲座话题（从建筑、绘画或风俗中任选其一）； 2.选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容； 3.希望从中有何收获。 【答案】Dear Chris, I am Li Hua, a student from Class one, Grade three. I am very glad to hear that you will give us a lecture on the western culture during the coming Cultural Week. I am very interested in western architecture. I do wish you could choose it as your topic. In my opinion, architecture is the perfect combination of art and engineering. As is known to all, so many well-known ancient and modern structures stand out in the world, the Egyptian Pyramids, The Roman Colosseum, Sydney Opera House and so on, all of which are excellent architectural works. Although I have some knowledge of architecture, I still want to have a deep understanding of it. In view of this reason, I hope you can give me a detailed explanation of the history of western architecture, including its origin, development and evolution. I am looking forward to your excellent lecture. yours truly, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于建议信。要求考生给外籍教师Chris写一封电子邮件，就其西方文化讲座话题提出建议并说明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴：glad → happy/pleased 接下来的：coming → following 在我看来：in my opinion → in my view 著名的：well-known → famous 2.句式拓展 原句：I am very interested in western architecture. I do wish you could choose it as your topic. 拓展句：Since I am very interested in western architecture, I do wish you could choose it as your topic. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I am very glad to hear that you will give us a lecture on the western culture during the coming Cultural Week. (运用了that引导 宾语从句) [高分句型2] Although I have some knowledge of architecture, I still want to have a deep understanding of it. (运用了although引导让步状语从句) 7．（22-23高一上·上海徐汇·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是启明中学的高一学生李华，你的外地朋友王敏打算寒假独自来上海旅游，想听听你的建议。请回复一封邮件给他，内容包括： 1) 提议他住在你家； 2) 推荐一到两个景点，并说明理由。 【答案】Dear Wang Min, Glad to hear that you are fascinated by the modernization of Shanghai and planning to take a trip during your winter vacation, I’m writing to express my warm welcome and provide you with some practical suggestions. Because of your being alone to Shanghai, it’s a wise idea that I should provide accommodation for you, which is a guarantee of your safety. As for the tourist attractions, the amazing Oriential Peals Tower is a must-see spot, from the top of which you can overlook the roaring Huangpu River, getting the bird’s-eye view. Additionally, beside the tower lies the Bund. Going there, you can have a big party with many young strangers full of passion and energy. Finally, I firmly believe that Shanghai won’t let you down. Waiting for your coming.                                        Yours,                                        Li Hua 【分析】这是一篇应用文。朋友王敏打算来上海旅行，你写信给她，就她的旅行提供一些建议。 【详解】1.词汇拓展 此外，而且：additionally→what’s more 被……所吸引：be fascinated by→be attracted by 我坚信：I firmly believe→I hold the firm belief that 高兴的：glad→delighted 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Going there, you can have a big party with many young strangers full of passion and energy. 拓展句：Going there, you can have a big party with many young strangers, all of whom are passionate and energetic. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Additionally, beside the tower lies the Bund.（此句用了完全倒装） 【高分句型2】As for the tourist attractions, the amazing Oriential Peals Tower is a must-see spot, from the top of which you can overlook the roaring Huangpu River, getting the bird’s-eye view.（此句用了非限制性定语从句和现在分词作伴随状语） 8．（22-23高一上·上海嘉定·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是学生李华，你校学生会正在征集下学期开设的社团活动方案。请你向学生会写一封信，提出你组建社团的申请，你的信中必须包括： 1.、社团名称； 2、组建该社团的理由； 3、社团活动的主要内容。 【答案】Dear leaders of the Students' Union， To enrich our life, we will set up a dance club. As is known to us, dancing is a good form of exercise. It can build up our body and keep us in good health. In addition, it will develop our confidence and improve our social skills. Dance club activities are held once a week for two classes. The content is mainly divided into dance basic skills training, soft opening training of each part of the body, focusing on the students' movement coordination ability, giving play to students' imagination and creativity, and increasing their understanding of dance. Finished dances are studied every three to four weeks, covering a wide range of dance I sincerely hope that the Students' Union can accept our application. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是学生李华，你校学生会正在征集下学期开设的社团活动方案。请你向学生会写一封信，提出你组建社团的申请。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建立：set up→build 说所周知：as is known to us→as we know 集中于：focus on→concentrate on 举行，举办：hold→take place 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Finished dances are studied every three to four weeks, covering a wide range of dance 拓展句：Finished dances are studied every three to four weeks, which covers a wide range of dance. 【点睛】[高分句型1] As is known to us, dancing is a good form of exercise.  (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] To enrich our life, we will set up a dance club.  (运用了动词不定式作目的状语) 9．（22-23高一上·上海·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack下周来上海度假，他刚发e-mail给你，想请你为他介绍一个上海的著名景点，具体内容包括： 1. 景点的详细介绍； 2. 门票价位、开放时间等。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Dear Jack, Hello, Jack! Long time no see! I have received your e-mail and know you will come to Shanghai next week. As you know, Shanghai has changed a lot in the past years. A lot of new places of interest appear one after another. But I think one place is still worth visiting—Yu Yuan garden. Yu Yuan garden is located in the northeast part of the old town of Shanghai. It is not far from the Bund. It is one of the best-known places of interest in Shanghai. Yu Yuan Garden is famous for its typical(典型的) Chinese architecture. There are over 40 buildings, ancient trees, ponds, bridges and sculptures. As one walks through the garden, the view changes with every step. The construction of Yu Yuan took 19 years to complete. Later, it was badly damaged in the mid-19th century. After several reconstructions since 1949, Yu Yuan was finally opened to the public in 1961. The garden is known as “an architectural miracle in the south of Yangtze River”. The garden with beautiful scenery and artistic architecture each year attracts a large number of visitors at home and abroad. It is not expensive to go there. It costs nothing to go in Yu Yuan Garden. But admission fee is 25 yuan for each person who wishes to visit Inner garden. It is open from 8:00-17:00. I am sure you will have a good time there and it will be an interesting and unforgettable experience for you. Yours, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Jack写信，介绍一个上海的著名景点。 【详解】1.词汇积累 值得参观：worth visiting→worth a visit   坐落：located→situated   最著名的：best-known→ very famous   完成：complete→finish 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Yu Yuan garden is located in the northeast part of the old town of Shanghai. It is not far from the Bund. 拓展句：Yu Yuan garden is located in the northeast part of the old town of Shanghai,which is not far from the Bund. 【点睛】[高分句型1]As you know, Shanghai has changed a lot in the past years.（运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句） [高分句型2]As one walks through the garden, the view changes with every step.（运用as引导的状语从句） 10．（22-23高一上·上海浦东新·期中）Directions：Write an English composition in 100— 120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你校英文网站为倡导低碳生活（low-carbon lifestyle）而开设了论坛。同学们纷纷发帖，交流各自的低碳生活方式。你对此话题也深有感触，准备参与讨论。请在该论坛上发表一个帖子，包括以下内容：（1）介绍你所倡导的低碳生活方式 （2）说明如此做的原因或优点。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I believe any low-carbon act can slow the pace of global warming. My way to reduce greenhouse gas emissions is simple but effective—making some changes to my refrigerator. First, I put a list on the fridge door. It shows what kind of food is inside with the actual number in store. With that clear information in mind, the frequency of door-opening can be reduced, and thus electricity consumption is reduced. Second, I tidy up my fridge once a month. Discarding expired products is both good for your health and for your fridge. Meanwhile, defrosting can also greatly reduce the energy wasted. And one more thing, the fridge is not a store room. Read the instructions on the wrappings and you may find you have put too many unnecessary things into the ice-box. Some food can be easily bought from nearby convenience stores and the errands can help you stay healthy. The ecological environment is to human beings what water is to fish. One small effort may not stop sea levels from rising, but with our joint effort, we can make the difference. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生写一个帖子，介绍自己所倡导的低碳生活方式以及原因或优点。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁： 说明文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。 结构：总分总法    总分总法指先总说后分说，再总说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求：1.介绍所倡导的低碳生活方式       2.说明如此做的原因或优点       3.呼吁共同努力 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） low-carbon; the pace of; global warming; greenhouse gas emissions; making some changes; put a list on; kind of; in mind; electricity consumption; tidy up; is good for; one more thing; tay healthy; …is to…what…is to; with our joint effort 第三步：连词成句 1. I believe any low-carbon act can slow the pace of global warming. 2. My way to reduce greenhouse gas emissions is simple but effective — making some changes to my refrigerator. 3. I put a list on the fridge door. It shows what kind of food is inside with the actual number in store. 4. With that clear information in mind, the frequency of door-opening can be reduced, and thus electricity consumption is reduced. 5. I tidy up my fridge once a month. 6. Discarding expired products is both good for your health and for your fridge. 7. And one more thing, the fridge is not a store room. 8. Some food can be easily bought from nearby convenience stores and the errands can help you stay healthy. 9. The ecological environment is to human beings what water is to fish. 10. One small effort may not stop sea levels from rising, but with our joint effort, we can make the difference. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First, Second 2.表并列补充关系：and, Meanwhile, one more thing 3.表转折对比关系：but 4.表因果关系：thus 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】【高分句型1】I believe any low-carbon act can slow the pace of global warming.（省略连接词that的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】Read the instructions on the wrappings and you may find you have put too many unnecessary things into the ice-box. （省略连接词that的宾语从句） 【高分句型3】The ecological environment is to human beings what water is to fish.（…is to…what…is to句型，表示……之于……相当……之于……） 11．（22-23高一上·上海奉贤·期中）Directions: Write an English letter in 80-100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是吴英，方明是你的初中好友，他现在就读于市区的一所名牌高中。上周，你收到他的来信，你能感受到他面临全新高中生活的焦虑。请你回一封信给他，并提一些合理的建议。（信中不能出现学校名字等） Dear Fang Ming, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Wu Ying 【答案】Dear Fangming, I'm sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time in your new school. I can totally understand your anxiety about the new high school life. Actually, most people will feel homesick and anxious when they leave home and come to a new place. So don't worry too much. Here are some tips for you. First, you'd better try to change some of your habits so that you can get used to the new environment as soon as possible. Second, make more new friends, who can share their hobbies and ideas with you. You will feel less homesick with many friends around. Third, you take part in some social activities. It will help learn more about the local customs and cultures. I do hope you will find these ideas useful and feel better soon. Yours, Wu Ying 【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以吴英的身份给方明写一封信。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般将来时和一般现在时。 写作背景︰方明是你的初中好友，他现在就读于市区的一所名牌高中。在信中你能感受到他面临全新高中生活的焦虑。 回信内容∶1)表示理解并给与安慰。2)提出建议并给出理由。 注意事项：本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） understand your anxiety about the new high school life; feel homesick and anxious; here are some tips for you; you'd better; make more new friends; take part in some social activities等等。 第三步：连词成句 1. I'm sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time in your new school. 2. I can totally understand your anxiety about the new high school life. 3. Actually, most people will feel homesick and anxious when they leave home and come to a new place. 4. Here are some tips for you. 5. First, you'd better try to change some of your habits so that you can get used to the new environment as soon as possible. 6. Second, make more new friends, who can share their hobbies and ideas with you. 7. Third, you take part in some social activities. 8. I do hope you will find these ideas useful and feel better soon. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First, Second， Third， 2.表转折对比关系：Actually， 3.表因果关系：So, 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time in your new school.（宾语从句的运用） [高分句型2] Second, make more new friends, who can share their hobbies and ideas with you. （定语从句的运用） 12．（22-23高一上·上海交大附中·期中）Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below. Angela wants to write a letter to a travel agency asking for help in arranging a one-week family trip to Shanghai. Help her write a letter to the travel agency. Angela 给某旅行社写信，想要旅行社为其一家安排去上海进行为期一周的旅行。请帮她完成这封信，具体询问旅行的住宿，饮食以及景点的安排等。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to ask your travel agency to arrange a trip to Shanghai for the three members of our family in the middle of June. Your travel agency's reputation has always been very good, which is why I chose your travel agency. I want to know about some information about accommodation and food. More importantly, I want to know whether Shanghai Disneyland is included in the tourist attractions, as in my opinion it is a must-see attraction for a trip to Shanghai. It should be stressed that we don't need too much shopping guidance, and we just want to enjoy ourselves in the scenic area. Looking forward to your early reply.                                                                  yours truly,                                                                     Angela 【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：Angela 给某旅行社写信，想要旅行社为其一家安排去上海进行为期一周的旅行。请帮她完成这封信，具体询问旅行的住宿，饮食以及景点的安排等。时态应为一般现在时。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； travel agency（旅行社），arrange（安排），accommodation and food（食宿），tourist attractions（旅游景点）， reputation（名声）及must-see（必看的）等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。 【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有a trip to（……之旅），in one’s opinion（依某人的观点），enjoy oneself (玩得开心)，arrange sth for sb（为某人安排某事）以及look forward to（期待），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句和表语从句“Your travel agency's reputation has always been very good, which is why I chose your travel agency.”，宾语从句和状语从句 “More importantly, I want to know whether Shanghai Disneyland is included in the tourist attractions, as in my opinion it is a must-see attraction for a trip to Shanghai.”，主语从句“It should be stressed that we don't need too much shopping guidance, and we just want to enjoy ourselves in the scenic area.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！5 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$