读后续写 守护与团结：街头的温暖救援 讲义-四川绵阳南山中学2023-2024学年高二下学期期末热身英语试题

四川绵阳南山中学2023-2024学年高二下学期期末热身英语试题读后续写---守护与团结：街头的温暖救援 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A Cooperative Help It was a beautiful morning. I was in the middle of a busy day, with my mind on what I had to do next. As I drove along a busy street, I noticed a young boy walking out from the entrance to an apartment complex(公寓群)on the other side of the street. I couldn’t see beyond the entrance with trees and bushes shading it but I hoped that his family was there, about to appear behind him. The boy was young, maybe four years old, and it was a strange sight to see him alone near the busy street, even if just for a little while. I continued to look behind me but I didn’t see anyone else coming out to join him as cars ran swiftly past him. Then, I saw him turning around and running back toward the entrance. I smiled in relief, as I hoped that he was heading back towards his family. Still, I felt I should check to be sure he was safe and did a U-turn as soon as I was able. As I drove back to where I first saw him, I was expecting to see him was safe, with his family around him. Instead, as I got closer, I saw that he had changed directions again, crossed the median(隔离带)and was quickly running in the opposite direction of the apartment buildings. I pulled my car over quickly and as I did so, all the cars on both sides of the street suddenly stopped as well, as if just realizing the potential danger of the situation.     I crossed the street and went up to him. He stopped as I approached, looking at me cautiously and backed away slightly towards the road. I didn’t want to scare him so I bent down a bit. Seeing a piece of paper in his hand, I asked him where his parent were but he did not answer. Instead, he said he was going to where his dad worked and then continued to run away from me along the median. 注意：1．续写词数应为150左右。 2．请按以下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 At this point, a man in another car asked if I needed help and I said yes. ___________________________________________________________________ I saw his dad racing towards us and heard him calling out the boy’s name. _______________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 文章描述了作者在忙碌的早晨注意到一个小男孩独自在繁忙街道的公寓群入口处徘徊。起初，作者希望孩子的家人就在附近，但随着小男孩独自穿过马路并跑向相反方向，作者意识到孩子可能迷路了。作者掉头回去，和其他司机一起停下车来，共同关注这个潜在的危险情况。作者和一位停下车的男士一起安抚小男孩，并试图了解他的情况。小男孩手里拿着一张纸，但并未透露父母信息，只是说他要去父亲工作的地方。在他们试图帮助小男孩时，他的父亲及时赶到，对作者和那位男士的援助表示感激。这个事件凸显了社区成员在紧急情况下的合作精神，以及对儿童安全的共同关注。 在原文中，有几处伏笔为续写部分提供了基础： 1. 小男孩独自一人：文章开头提到小男孩独自一人在繁忙街道的公寓群入口处，这为续写中小男孩迷路和需要帮助的情节埋下了伏笔。 2. 小男孩手里的纸：作者注意到小男孩手里拿着一张纸，这暗示了可能与他的目的地或家人有关，为续写中可能通过这张纸找到他的家人提供了线索。 3. 作者的担忧和行动：作者对小男孩的安全感到担忧，并采取了行动去确认他是否安全，这为续写中作者和其他司机共同帮助小男孩的情节埋下了伏笔。 在续写部分，这些伏笔得到了回应： 1. 小男孩迷路：续写中明确了小男孩迷路的情况，他试图前往父亲工作的地方，但方向错误，这回应了原文中小男孩独自一人的伏笔。 2. 社区成员的合作：续写中描述了作者和另一位司机共同帮助小男孩，这回应了原文中作者对小男孩安全的担忧和采取行动的伏笔。 3. 小男孩的父亲出现：续写中小男孩的父亲及时出现，这为小男孩手里的纸可能包含有用信息的伏笔提供了一个合理的解释，尽管在续写中没有直接提到这张纸的内容。 4. 安全意识的强调：续写中通过小男孩的父亲对作者和另一位司机的感谢，以及作者对事件的反思，强调了社区合作和对儿童安全的警觉性，这与原文中作者对小男孩安全的担忧相呼应。 通过这些伏笔和回应，文章构建了一个关于社区合作和儿童安全的故事，强调了在紧急情况下人们相互帮助的重要性。 主旨升华句 1. In this busy world, the vigilance and care of each of us can become a safety net for the vulnerable. 2. The unity and cooperation within a community reveal the warmest and strongest aspects of human society. 3. Even the briefest encounters can leave a profound impact on another's life. 4. Every small act of kindness is an important brick in building a more harmonious society. 5. Our reactions in emergencies reflect not only individual character but also the values of our society. 【答案】读后续写参考范文一 At this point, a man in another car asked if I needed help and I said yes. Then he walked towards the boy, saying softly that we were just trying to help him. Hearing his gentle words, the boy eventually walked slowly out of the median and followed us to the sidewalk. He handed us the piece of paper, insisting on going to his dad’s office. There was nothing but some graffiti. Feeling confused, we had no choice but to comfort him. So we accompanied him at the entrance of the apartment until he suddenly cried “Dad”. I saw his dad racing towards us and heard him calling out the boy’s name. He ran to us swiftly through the crowd of cars. As he held his son tightly in his arms, he showed his gratitude sincerely, explaining that he had only been away for a moment and didn’t expect his son to wander off. He apologized for the inconvenience caused and promised to be more careful in the future. As they walked away, hand in hand, I felt a sense of warmth and joy, knowing that my small act of kindness had made a difference in someone’s life. 读后续写参考范文二 At this point, a man in another car asked if I needed help and I said yes. We exchanged a quick glance. I caught the boy’s attention, trying to persuade him to walk out of the median in a soft voice. The man quickly got out of his car, approaching the boy quietly. Then he gently grabbed the boy’s arm and took him to the pavement safely. We unfolded that paper, expecting to find a certain address or phone number. To our disappointment, nothing but the boy’s graffiti. We comforted and entertained the boy until he suddenly cried “Dad”. I saw his dad racing towards us and heard him calling out the boy’s name. The young boy excitedly ran to his father and embraced him tightly. Witnessing their heartwarming reunion, I felt a sense of relief wash over me. The father expressed his gratitude for our assistance and explained that the boy had sneaked out of the office while he was asleep. This experience reminded me of the importance of remaining watchful and always being ready to lend a helping hand to those in need. 下水文1 At this point, a man in another car asked if I needed help and I said yes. He got out of his car and together we tried to calm the boy down, assuring him that we were there to help him find his dad. The boy's eyes were filled with fear, but he seemed to trust us more as we spoke gently and with reassurance. The man suggested we take the boy to the nearest police station, but just as we were about to move, a woman from the apartment complex ran towards us, panting and clearly distressed. She explained that she was the boy's babysitter and had lost sight of him for just a moment. We decided to stay with the boy until his parents could be contacted to confirm her identity. I saw his dad racing towards us and heard him calling out the boy’s name. Relief washed over the boy's face as he recognized his father's voice, and he ran towards him with open arms. The father, out of breath and clearly shaken, hugged his son tightly, tears of gratitude in his eyes. He thanked us profusely for our help, explaining that he had just arrived at work when he received a call from the babysitter about what had happened. It was a close call, and it served as a reminder to all of us about the importance of vigilance and the community's role in looking out for one another's children. The incident ended well, but it was a stark reminder of how quickly things can go wrong if we're not paying attention. 下水文2 At this point, a man in another car asked if I needed help and I said yes. He quickly joined me, and together we tried to coax the boy to safety. The boy, still clutching the piece of paper, seemed hesitant but less fearful with the two of us approaching him with soft voices and open arms. As we gently took his hand, I could see the man discreetly taking out his phone, likely to call for help. The boy, now more at ease, allowed us to guide him to the sidewalk, away from the traffic. We sat down with him, trying to engage in conversation to keep him calm and to gather more information about his family. I saw his dad racing towards us and heard him calling out the boy’s name. It was a heart-wrenching sight to see the father's face, a mixture of panic and relief as he sprinted towards his son. The boy's eyes lit up, and he broke into a run, nearly tripping over his own feet in his haste to reach his dad. The father scooped him up, hugging him close and checking him over for any signs of harm. He turned to us, his voice choked with emotion as he thanked us for our intervention. It was clear that a mere moment of inattention could have had dire consequences, and the community's quick response had made all the difference. This incident was a stark reminder of the power of cooperation and the importance of always being vigilant, especially when it comes to the safety of children. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$