读后续写 传承与选择:赛道上的价值观 讲义-重庆市2025届高三第一次质量检测英语试题

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Both of my parents have taught me the values of service and compassion from a young age. Growing up, they both chose service professions—my mother as a dedicated nurse and my father as a passionate teacher. They not only worked tirelessly in their respective fields but also spent their nights and weekends volunteering, emphasizing the importance of helping others in need. Their dedication and selflessness gave me a lesson that a life dedicated to serving others is one that is truly fulfilling and meaningful. Inspired by their examples, I pursued a career in medicine, becoming a physician. For the past 11 years, I have been working closely with the homeless community, providing them with much needed medical care and support. It has been a challenging yet rewarding journey, as I witness firsthand the impact I can make on improving the lives of those who are often overlooked and marginalized (被边缘化).     And my commitment to these things is the spirit that I have passed to my son. I am a proud mother to a boy who shares my enthusiasm for adventures as well as the love for others. He is an enthusiastic bike riders, and I have always encouraged him to pursue his passion while instilling (灌输) in him the values of empathy and kindness. I vividly remember his first biking race, where he fearlessly took the lead and even managed to catch some air with his daring jumps. It was an exhilarating moment for him, and I couldn’t have been prouder. However, it was the last moment in the race that surprised me that day. As the race progressed, competitors were approaching the finishing line. My son was still in the lead during the race, with the second-place rider closely behind him. Suddenly, the rider behind him crashed, flying off his bike. The sound of piercing screams filled the air. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Upon hearing this, my son stopped his bicycle and turned to look behind him. _____________________________________________________________________________ In the end, my son missed the chance to win the championship. _________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 这篇文章讲述了作者从父母那里学到了服务和同情的价值,并选择了医学作为自己的职业,特别是为无家可归者提供医疗服务。作者的儿子也继承了这些价值观,他是一个热爱自行车运动的孩子。在一次比赛中,尽管儿子领先,但当看到另一位选手摔倒时,他停下来帮助对方,展现了同情心和体育精神。尽管因此错过了赢得比赛的机会,但他的行为赢得了观众的尊敬和赞赏,体现了真正的体育精神和人性的光辉。作者为儿子的行为感到骄傲,认为他的行为是父母传递给他的价值观的体现。 在原文中,有几处伏笔为续写部分提供了基础: 1. 父母的服务和同情价值观:文章开头提到作者的父母都是服务行业的专业人士,他们不仅在工作时全心全意,还在业余时间做志愿者。这为作者选择医学职业和为无家可归者提供服务的行为埋下了伏笔。 2. 儿子的自行车运动爱好:作者提到儿子是一个热情的自行车手,这为续写中描述儿子参加自行车比赛的场景提供了背景。 3. 灌输的价值观:作者强调了向儿子灌输同情和善良的价值观,这为续写中儿子在比赛关键时刻选择帮助他人的行为提供了动机。 在续写部分,这些伏笔得到了回应: 1. 儿子在比赛中的行为:儿子在比赛中停下来帮助摔倒的对手,这直接回应了作者强调的同情和善良的价值观。 2. 观众的反应:观众对儿子的行为表示赞赏,这回应了文章中提到的服务和同情的价值观是值得尊重和鼓励的。 3. 作者的骄傲:作者对儿子的行为感到骄傲,这回应了文章开头提到的父母对作者的影响,以及作者对儿子的期望。 4. 体育精神的体现:儿子虽然错过了赢得比赛的机会,但他的行为体现了真正的体育精神,这与文章中提到的服务和同情的价值观相呼应。 通过这些伏笔和回应,文章构建了一个关于家庭价值观传承和个人选择的故事,强调了同情和善良在现代社会中的重要性。 续写要点 第一段续写要点: - 描述儿子在听到其他选手摔倒后的反应和行动。 - 展现儿子的同情心和责任感,他选择停下来帮助受伤的选手。 - 描述现场观众和比赛官员对这一突发事件的反应。 - 强调儿子的行为与作者从小灌输的价值观相一致。 第二段续写要点: - 讲述儿子错过赢得比赛的机会,但赢得了观众和官员的尊重和赞赏。 - 描述作者对儿子行为的骄傲和满意,以及这如何体现了家庭价值观的传承。 - 强调儿子的行为如何向在场的每个人展示了真正的体育精神和人性的光辉。 - 总结作者对儿子未来能够继续传承这些价值观的期望和信心。 范文: Upon hearing this, my son stopped his bicycle and turned to look behind him. He saw the fallen rider clutching his arm in pain. Without hesitation, my son rushed over, his concern evident as he checked on the injured competitor. “Are you okay?” he asked, his voice filled with genuine worry. The other racers sped past them, focusing on the finish line, but my son remained by the fallen rider’s side. He helped him up gently and supported him as they walked together towards the finish line. Despite the pain, the injured rider managed a grateful smile. In the end, my son missed the chance to win the championship. However, witnessing this act of kindness filled me with immense pride. As we drove home that evening, I couldn’t help but reflect on how our family’s commitment to serving others had truly shaped his character. I recalled how he carefully helped the injured rider to his feet, supporting him as they made their way off the track together. His hands were steady yet gentle, his movements deliberate and comforting. It was moments like these that reaffirmed my belief in the power of leading a life dedicated to helping those in need.     下水文1 Upon hearing this, my son stopped his bicycle and turned to look behind him. Without a moment's hesitation, he dismounted and rushed to the fallen rider's side. The crowd, initially stunned by the sudden turn of events, began to cheer him on as he helped the injured boy up and made sure he was okay. My son's actions were a testament to the values we had instilled in him, and it was a heartwarming sight to see him prioritize compassion over competition. In the end, my son missed the chance to win the championship. But as he crossed the finish line, he was greeted with applause and admiration from the spectators, who recognized the true spirit of sportsmanship he had displayed. The race organizer even awarded him a special commendation for his sportsmanship and kindness. It was a day I'll never forget, as it solidified the belief that the lessons of empathy and service are the ones that truly define us, and my son's actions were a shining example of the legacy my parents had passed down to me and that I, in turn, had passed on to him. 下水文2 Upon hearing this, my son stopped his bicycle and turned to look behind him. His eyes widened with concern as he saw the other rider lying on the ground, his bike a twisted heap a few feet away. My heart swelled with pride as I watched my son make the decision to help his competitor. He ran back, dropped his bike, and knelt beside the fallen boy, asking if he was alright and offering comfort. The race officials and medical team quickly arrived, but my son's immediate response was a clear reflection of the empathy we had nurtured in him. In the end, my son missed the chance to win the championship. Yet, as he stood by the injured rider, ensuring he received the necessary care, he won something far more valuable. The crowd's applause was not for a race victory but for the display of humanity and sportsmanship that my son had shown. His actions that day taught everyone present a lesson in character and compassion. It was a proud moment for me, knowing that the values my parents had instilled in me had taken root in my son, and that he had chosen to act with kindness and integrity, even when it meant sacrificing his own success. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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