读后续写--小改变，大英雄：杰克的成长故事 讲义-江苏省海安高级中学2024-2025学年高三上学期9月月考英语试卷

江苏省海安高级中学2024-2025学年高三上学期9月月考英语试卷读后续写--小改变，大英雄：杰克的成长故事 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On a cold, snowy evening, Jack was at the corner shop, with his sole focus on the Marvel (漫威) superhero figurines (小雕像) . Since then, he had diligently walked a neighbor's dog and weeded his neighbors' gardens to earn money for one figurine. Finally he had enough money for one and raced towards the comer shop. Lost in excitement, he accidentally tripped over a homeless old man seated against a wall in the cold, quickly murmuring an apology before continuing on his way. Inside the shop, Jack glanced at the shelves displaying Hulk, Thor, Captain America, Iron Man, and other beloved heroes. His heart raced as he reached for the Spiderman. “You're a fan, right?” a friendly voice appeared behind him. Jack turned to see the shopkeeper, an elderly man with a warm smile. “Yes, they're amazing!” Jack said. “They're strong, and they help so many people. They have super power. I wish I could be a superhero too.” “You can be,” the shopkeeper encouraged. Surprised, Jack asked, “But how? I don't have any super power.” Smiling softly, the shopkeeper bent down, placing his hands on Jack's arms. “Why would you need them?” he replied kindly. “See that woman over there? She needs to take care of three children. However, she still actively helps the elderly in the community. And do you know Jimmy? He is a firefighter who has saved countless lives. Being a hero isn't about super power; it's about what's in your heart.” Locking eyes with Jack, the shopkeeper smiled. “You don't need super power to be a hero. It starts with your heart.” 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Hearing what the shopkeeper said, Jack was lost in thought. _________________________________________________________ With relief, Jack found the homeless old man still sitting against the wall. ____________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 在寒冷的雪夜，杰克兴奋地来到街角的商店，想要用他辛苦赚来的钱买一个他梦寐以求的漫威超级英雄玩偶。但在去商店的路上，他不小心绊倒了一个坐在墙边的无家可归的老人。进入商店后，杰克被各种超级英雄玩偶所吸引，正当他准备买下蜘蛛侠玩偶时，店主与他展开了对话。店主告诉杰克，成为英雄并不需要超能力，而是需要有乐于助人的心。这番话让杰克陷入了深思，他开始反思自己对英雄的定义。深受启发的杰克离开商店后，再次遇到了那位无家可归的老人。这一次，他没有匆匆离开，而是停下脚步，用自己买玩偶的钱为老人买了食物，并陪他聊天。通过这次经历，杰克意识到，真正的英雄主义不在于拥有超能力，而在于拥有一颗愿意帮助他人的心。他决定从那天起，要用自己的方式，成为一个真正的英雄。 在原文中，有几处伏笔为续写部分提供了基础： 1. 杰克的愿望：杰克渴望拥有一个超级英雄玩偶，这表明他对英雄的向往和模仿愿望，为续写中他的行为转变提供了动机。 2. 无家可归的老人：杰克在去商店的路上不小心绊倒了这位老人，这个事件为续写中杰克可能的补偿行为和对老人的关心埋下了伏笔。 3. 店主的启发：店主告诉杰克，英雄不在于超能力，而在于内心的善良和助人为乐的精神，这为续写中杰克如何理解和实践英雄主义提供了指导。 在续写中，这些伏笔得到了回应： 1. 杰克的反思：杰克在听了店主的话后，开始反思自己对英雄的理解，这回应了原文中他对超级英雄的向往和店主的启发。 2. 对老人的关怀：杰克在续写中对无家可归的老人表现出了关怀，这回应了原文中他绊倒老人的事件，并展示了他如何将店主的话付诸行动。 3. 英雄主义的实践：杰克通过实际行动，如买食物给老人和陪他聊天，展示了他如何理解和实践英雄主义，这回应了原文中店主关于英雄主义的讨论。 通过这些回应，续写部分不仅与原文紧密相连，还展示了杰克如何从一个孩子成长为一个理解并实践英雄主义的个体。 续写要点 第一段：杰克的内心转变 1. 杰克在听到店主的话后，开始反思自己对英雄的看法，认识到英雄主义不仅仅是拥有超能力，而是更关乎于行为和选择。 2. 他回忆起自己对无家可归老人的忽视，感到愧疚，并决定采取行动来纠正这一错误。 3. 杰克决定放弃购买玩偶，转而用这笔钱为老人买食物，体现了他价值观的转变和成长。 第二段：杰克的行动和结果 1. 杰克找到那位无家可归的老人，用他原本用来买玩偶的钱为老人买了食物，并与老人交谈，展现了他的同情心和关怀。 2. 老人对杰克的善举表示感激，这个互动让杰克体会到了帮助他人带来的内心满足感。 3. 杰克离开时，带着一种新的认识——成为一个英雄不在于外在的力量，而在于内心的善意和愿意为他人做出的牺牲。他决心在日常生活中继续实践这种英雄主义。 读后续写范文 Hearing what the shopkeeper said, Jack was lost in thought. The shopkeeper's words echoed over and over again in his mind. “How can I be a superhero without super power?” he thought to himself, Suddenly, the scene of the homeless old man trembling in the cold flashed across his mind. Jack made a crucial decision that instead of buying a superhero figurine, he walked out of the shop with a large shopping bag full of stuff. Hurriedly, Jack ran back to look for the homeless old man. With relief, Jack found the homeless old man still sitting against the wall. He knelt down beside the old man, offering him a warm smile. “I'm sorry for bumping into you earlier,” Jack said sincerely. “Can I get you something to eat or drink?” The old man looked up, surprised by Jack's kindness. With a grateful nod, he accepted Jack's offer. Just then, Jack realized that being a hero wasn't just about saving the world it was about making someone's world a little brighter. 下水文1 Hearing what the shopkeeper said, Jack was lost in thought. He had always believed that heroes were born with extraordinary abilities, but the shopkeeper's words made him realize that heroism was not about flying or shooting lasers from your eyes, but about the choices you made and the kindness you showed. Jack considered the people the shopkeeper mentioned, and he thought about his own actions. He had worked hard to earn money for the figurine, but he had also tripped over a man in need without offering help. This reflection sparked a change in Jack, and he decided that he would try to be more like the heroes he admired, not just by collecting their figurines, but by embodying their spirit of helping others. With relief, Jack found the homeless old man still sitting against the wall. He approached the man, feeling a new sense of purpose. This time, instead of just an apology, Jack offered the old man the hot chocolate he had bought from the shop, and the remainder of the money he had earned. The old man's eyes welled up with gratitude as he accepted Jack's gifts. Jack felt a warmth in his heart that no figurine could ever provide. He understood now that being a hero meant making a difference, no matter how small, and it was a title that anyone could earn through compassion and action. As he walked away, Jack felt taller, not because of any superpower, but because he had taken the first step towards being a hero in his own way. 下水文2 Hearing what the shopkeeper said, Jack was lost in thought. The conversation had illuminated a profound truth: heroism was not defined by superhuman abilities, but by the everyday acts of kindness and courage that anyone could perform. He pondered on how he could embody these values in his own life, not just in his aspirations, but in his actions. The shopkeeper's words resonated with him, and Jack decided that he would start making a difference right away, beginning with how he treated others around him. With determination, Jack found the homeless old man still sitting against the wall. This time, instead of passing by with an absent-minded apology, Jack approached the man with empathy and compassion. He not only offered the old man the sandwich he had bought for himself but also spent time talking to him, listening to his stories and learning about his life. The old man's face lit up with surprise and gratitude, and Jack felt a sense of fulfillment that surpassed any joy a toy could bring. As he walked away, Jack realized that heroism was not about having superpowers, but about showing up for others when they needed it the most. He left the shop that day with more than just a Spiderman figurine; he carried with him a newfound resolve to be a hero in his own small ways, every day. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$