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08 Unit1 书面表达12篇
1.班里来了一位来自中国的新同学。假如你是Alice,请你根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文,向大家介绍一下这位新同学。
Name: Li Jiaming
Age: 12
From: Guangzhou, China
Pet: dog
Favourite sport: tennis
要求:1.语句通顺,语言流畅;
2.短文应包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
3.不少于60词。
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【答案】One possible version:
Hello! My name is Alice. I have a new classmate. His name is Li Jiaming. He is 12 years old. Li Jiaming is from Guangzhou, China. He likes animals very much. His pet is a white dog. The name of the dog is Coco. It is very cute. It is nice to us and we all like it. Li Jiaming also likes sport. Tennis is his favourite sport. He can play tennis very well. After school, he often plays tennis with us.Would you like to be his good friend? Come and meet him!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的名字以及介绍新同学的名字;
第二步,具体介绍新同学的年龄、国籍、宠物以及最喜欢的运动;
第三步,书写结语,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①be from来自
②the name of……的名字
③would like to do想要做某事
[高分句型]
It is nice to us and we all like it.(and并列句)
2.明天是新学期的第一堂英语课,老师让你们用英语进行自我介绍。请你写一段话为明天英语课上的发言做准备。
要点包括:
1. 姓名,年龄,电话;
2. 最喜欢的颜色是白色,爱整洁;
3. 喜欢运动,放学后总是和朋友们在学校打乒乓球。
要求:50 词左右。短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:我最喜欢的颜色 my favorite color
Hello, everyone! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I want to make friends with you.
【答案】例文:
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. I’m 13 years old. My telephone number is 258-7968. My favorite color is white. I’m tidy. I like playing sports. I always play table tennis with my friends after school.
I want to make friends with you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为发言稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点中给出的关键信息,写一段话进行自我介绍,为发言做准备。
[写作步骤]
第一步,问候大家并根据要点提示介绍自己的姓名、年龄、电话、最喜欢的颜色,表示自己爱整洁、爱运动,放学后总和朋友们一起打乒乓球;
第二步,表示想要和大家交朋友。
[亮点词汇]
①基数词+years old ……岁
②tidy 整洁的
③play sports 做运动
④after school 放学后
[高分句型]
I always play table tennis with my friends after school.(with表示“和”)
3.在校英语社团迎新活动中,为了让成员之间更快更好地了解彼此,社团负责人建议大家围坐在一起互相介绍。假如你叫王明,请你根据下表提示信息,用英语写一篇自我介绍,在活动中发言。
Name
Wang Ming
Age
13
From
Tianjin
Family members
parents, brother, dog Kaka
Favourite
food: Beijing roast duck
sport: swimming
Hobby
play the piano
注意:
1)短文必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥;
2)文中不得出现与你真实身份相关的信息;
3)词数:70左右,开头已给出,不计入总数。
Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Ming. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Ming. I am 13 years old. I am from Tianjin, China, but now I live in Beijing with my parents and my brother. We have a pet dog and its name is Kaka. My favourite food is Beijing roast duck. It is very delicious and I think you like it too. I like music and sport a lot. My favourite sport is swimming. And I play the piano every weekend.
Would you like to be my friend?
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意要包含表格中的所有内容,适当增添细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,介绍自己的基本信息,包括姓名、年龄、籍贯和家庭成员;
第二步,介绍自己最喜欢的食物和运动以及爱好;
第三步,最后表达“你想成为我的朋友吗?”
[亮点词汇]
①live in住在
②a lot非常
③would like to do想要做
[高分句型]
It is very delicious and I think you like it too. (and并列句,宾语从句)
4.每年的7月30日是国际友谊日,为庆祝这一节日,某校英文报发起了以 “My best friend”为主题的征文活动。假设你是该校学生王洁,请根据以下要点提示,写一篇英文短文介绍你最好的朋友Alice。
Name
Country
Age
Favourite animals
Hobbies
Alice Green
Canada
13
Pandas
Read books, sing songs, and fly kites
要求:1. 包含所给信息,可适当发挥; 2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;3. 60词左右。
My best friend
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【答案】One possible version:
My best friend
Hello, I’m Wang Jie. This is my best friend. Her name is Alice Green. Her first name is Alice and her last name is Green. She comes from Canada. She is thirteen years old now. Alice loves pandas. She thinks that they are very cute. In her free time, Alice often reads books at home. She also likes singing songs and flying kites.
Alice is really nice. I like her. I’m glad to have her as my friend.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为 “一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍我最好朋友的特征;
第二步,对朋友表达喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
①come from来自
②in one’s free time在某人空闲时间
③be glad to do sth高兴做某事
[高分句型]
①She thinks that they are very cute. (that引导宾语从句)
5.最近我校正在评选新时代好少年 (the Good Teenagers of New Age) 请根据以下表格写一篇英语自我介绍为自己“拉票”,词数70左右。
个人简历
姓名
Li Hua
班级
Class 2
出生年月
2010.08
年级
Grade 7
表现
study …; do well
能力
can sing songs,…
性格
kind, help
竞选口号
your best friend
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名和地名。
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I would like to be the Good Teenagers of New Age. Here are my reasons (理由).
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I would like to be the Good Teenagers of New Age. Here are my reasons (理由).
Let me tell you something about myself first. I was born in August, 2010. I am in Class 2, Grade 7. I study very hard and do well at school. I can sing songs, dance and play the piano. And I am good at playing basketball, too. I’m kind and I’m always ready to help others. What’s more, I can get on well with everyone, classmates and teachers.
All in all, choose me as the Good Teenagers of New Age. I will be your best friend!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的学习情况;
第二步,介绍自己的兴趣爱好;
第三步,呼吁大家给自己投票。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②be ready to准备好
③get on well with sb.和……相处得很好
④all in all总而言之
[高分句型]
I’m kind and I’m always ready to help others.(and并列两个句子)
6.假如你是李华,你们学校英语广播站正在开展以“朋友”为主题的征文活动。征文要求介绍自己,并陈述你的朋友观。请根据以下提示信息,写一篇英语短文参赛。
基本信息
性别
男
年龄
12岁
外貌
又高又瘦, 不戴眼镜,留着短发
性格
活泼开朗……
爱好
听音乐、打网球……
我的观点
性格不同,互相帮助……
要求:
1. 语句通顺,表达正确,可适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右;
3. 不要出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
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【答案】例文:
My name is Li Hua. I am a 12-year-old boy. I am tall and thin. I don’t wear glasses and keep short hair. I am lively and outgoing. I am also willing to help others. I enjoy listening to music, playing tennis and basketball. If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball or tennis with my friends on weekends. I think friends can have different personalities, but we should help each other. Because there are no two identical items in the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作目的。介绍自己;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“个人情况、我的观点”等角度具体介绍自己的朋友观。
[亮点词汇]
①tall and thin又高又瘦
②keep short hair留短发
③be willing to do乐意做某事
[高分句型]
①If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball or tennis with my friends on weekends.(条件状语从句)
7.假如你叫李明,你的笔友Paul想认识更多的中国朋友。请根据以下信息给他发一封英文邮件,介绍你的好朋友王勇的基本情况。
要求:
(1)要点齐全,表达正确,语句通顺,书写规范;
(2)内容包括所有提示信息,并适当发挥;
(3)词数60左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Paul,
I can tell you something about my friend Wang Yong.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Paul,
I can tell you something about my friend Wang Yong. Wang Yong is 13 years old. He is a student in No.5 Middle School. He is friendly to his classmates. His favourite food is apples. He thinks they are healthy. But he doesn’t like ice cream. He thinks it’s not healthy. Of all the sports, tennis is his favourite. He always plays tennis with his friends after school. He doesn’t like ping-pong. He thinks it is boring. Do you want to make friends with him? Write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:注意分层,从食物运动两个层面介绍喜欢与不喜欢并且说明原因,注意使用不同句式结构。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍朋友的个人基本信息;
第二步,从食物运动和科目方面分别介绍喜欢与不喜欢;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to对……友好
②make friends with sb.和……交朋友
[高分句型]
But he doesn’t like ice-cream. He thinks it’s not healthy.(but表转折,宾语从句)
8.初中生活开始了,快来向新的老师和同学介绍自己吧!请写一份个人简介,内容包括姓名、年龄、喜爱的运动和食物及其他爱好,并在简介中表达希望更多的同学认识你、和你成为朋友的愿望。
要求:1. 表达正确,语句通顺;
2. 字迹工整,书写规范;
3. 不少于60 词;
4. 不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! My name is John and I am really excited to meet all of you.
I am 13 years old. I love sports, especially football and basketball. After school, I always play with my friends in the playground. Besides sports, I have a passion for food. I enjoy trying different types of food. My hobbies also include drawing and reading. Drawing helps me relax and express my emotions.
I hope you can get to know me better and become good friends with me. I am looking forward to spending a wonderful time in this new class! Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主;叙述时应该符合英语的表达习惯,符合语法结构。注意连词的运用。
[写作步骤]
第一步,和同学和老师打招呼;
第二步,介绍自己的个人信息,内容包括姓名、年龄、喜爱的运动和食物及其他爱好;
第三步,最后表达自己的愿望——希望更多的同学认识自己、和自己成为朋友。
[亮点词汇]
①be excited to do做某事很兴奋
②have a passion for钟爱……
③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①Drawing helps me relax and express my emotions.(动名词作主语)
②I hope you can get to know me better and become good friends with me.(宾语从句)
9.假如你是Alice,新学期你认识了一名来自中国的同学王琳,并且你们成了好朋友。请你根据下面的提示,以“My good friend”为题,写一篇不少于60词的英语短文,介绍一下王琳的情况。
Name: Wang Lin
From: Beijing, China
Age: 12
Living place: London
Pet: Mimi—a white cat
Hobbies: listen to music; sing songs
书写区域 Good writing makes your article better.
My good friend
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【答案】例文
My good friend
My name is Alice. I have a good friend. Her name is Wang Lin. Wang is her family name and Lin is her first name. Wang Lin is from Beijing, China. She is 12 years old. Now she lives in London with her parents. Wang Lin has a pet cat. The colour of the cat is white and its name is Mimi. Mimi is very cute. Wang Lin likes listening to music and singing songs. I’m happy to be friends with Wang Lin.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章要点已经给出,注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,介绍自己有一个好朋友;
第二步,具体介绍好朋友的基本信息,例如姓名、国籍、年龄、现在的居住地、宠物和爱好;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己很开心和王琳成为朋友。
[亮点词汇]
①family name姓
②first name名
③like doing sth.喜欢做某事
④be happy to do sth.很开心做某事
[高分句型]
The colour of the cat is white and its name is Mimi. Mimi is very cute. (and表并列)
10.假如你们班来了一个新同学(男),请根据以下信息介绍你的新同学,可适当增加内容。内容包括:
First name: Jimmy
Telephone number: 456-875
Age: 12
Last name: Brown
WeChat account (微信号): Tintin2017
Hobby (爱好): Reading
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This is my new friend Jimmy Brown. His first name is Jimmy. His last name is Brown. He is from America. He is 12 years old. There are three people in his family. His father is a policeman. His mother is a nurse. They live in China now. We are in the same class. He likes playing basketball and reading. His telephone number is 456-875 and his WeChat account is Tintin2017. Do you want to make friends with him?
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。介绍新同学的基本信息,如姓名、国籍、年龄、爱好、家庭等。
第三步,书写结语。介绍联系方式,欢迎大家与他交朋友。
[亮点词汇]
①be from来自……
②make friends with与……交朋友
③last name姓
④in the same class在同一个班
[高分句型]
①There are three people in his family.(there be结构)
②He likes playing basketball and reading.(like doing句型)
11.朋友是夜空中最美的星星,照亮我们一路前行。假如你是李华,新学期伊始,你结识了一位新朋友。你们很快成了最好的朋友。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,以“My Best Friend”为题,用英文写一篇短文,介绍一下你最好的朋友。
。
注意:
(1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2) 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。
(3) 语句连贯,词数70左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
My Best Friend
Hi, I’m Li Hua. I’m in Grade Seven now. This term, I make a new friend.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My Best Friend
Hi, I’m Li Hua. I’m in Grade Seven now. This term, I make a new friend. His name is Lin Tao. He is a 13-year-boy. He is in Class 2, Grade 7. He is from Guangzhou.
At school, he studies hard. He likes playing basketball and running. After school, he always plays it with me. He is good at drawing pictures and he can play the guitar. He is very friendly to his classmates and often helps me with my study.
I like to play with him because he always helps me a lot.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍最好的朋友”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借用文章开头,点出文章主题;
第二步,根据题干中思维导图的要点,详细介绍好朋友的特点;
第三步,总结并再次说明自己喜欢和他在一起。
[亮点词汇]
①study hard努力学习
②be good at擅长某事
[高分句型]
①He is very friendly to his classmates and often helps me with my study.(and并列句)
②I like to play with him because he always helps me a lot.(because引导原因状语状语从句)
12.假设你是陈红,在新的学年里来到新的班级。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文,向同学们做自我介绍。
注意:
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数70左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I am Chen Hong.
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. I am Chen Hong. My last name is Chen. My first name is Hong. I am 13 years old. My telephone number is 383-8719. You can call me any time. There are three people in my family. My father’s name is Chen Minglang. He is a policeman. My mother’s name is Li Xia. She is a nurse. I like animals very much. There is a beautiful cat in my family. Her name is Lulu.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏关键词,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇向大家做自我介绍;
第二步,介绍家庭成员信息;
第三步,介绍个人爱好。
[亮点词汇]
①last name 姓
②first name名
③telephone number电话号码
④beautiful cat美丽的猫
[高分句型]
①There is a beautiful cat in my family. Her name is Lulu.(There be句型)
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