2025届云南省云南师大附中高三统测小作文（祝贺信）讲义---交换生Terry在你校成语闯关比赛(Idiom Challenge Competition)中荣获二等奖

24年9月5日云南师大附中高三统测小作文（祝贺信） 假定你是李华,交换生Terry在你校成语闯关比赛(Idiom Challenge Competition)中荣获二等奖,请你给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括: 1. 向他表示祝贺 2. 肯定他的付出  要求:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作难点分析 表达祝贺对于平时注意积累考场邮件写作经验的同学来说算不得难事。掌握几个表达祝贺的关键词和句式即可（比如：congratulations on sth, congratulate sb on sth）。 本次写作的难点在于“肯定他的付出”。这需要考生储备有更多的词汇，同时也需要考生具备简要总结他获得成功的原因的能力（也就是具体付出了何种努力）。换句话说，说出Terry获得成功的具体原因是本次写作的难点所在。 语言积累 向他表示祝贺： 1. Congratulations, Terry! Your victory in the Idiom Challenge Competition is a fantastic achievement. 2. We are all so proud of you for claiming the second prize; it's a true reflection of your talent. 3. Your success in the competition is inspiring, and it's a moment of joy for our entire school community. 4. Heartfelt congratulations on your outstanding performance; you've truly made a mark in the competition. 肯定他的付出： 1. Your dedication to learning and understanding Chinese idioms has been nothing short of impressive. 2. The hard work you've invested in mastering these phrases has clearly paid off, and we commend your efforts. 3. Your persistent practice and study have been the cornerstone of your success, and we acknowledge the time and energy you've put in. 4. Your commitment to linguistic excellence is admirable, and your achievement is a testament to the power of perseverance. 写作示范 (113 words)   Dear Terry, Congratulations on winning the second prize in our school's Idiom Challenge Competition! Your achievement is a testament to your hard work and dedication. I am truly impressed by your commitment to mastering Chinese idioms.   Your enthusiasm for learning Chinese culture is truly admirable. It is clear that your passion and effort, including attending extra language workshops and engaging with Chinese native speakers, have greatly contributed to your success. I am confident that you will continue to make significant progress in your Chinese studies and achieve even greater accomplishments in the future.   Once again, congratulations on this well-deserved recognition. I am very proud of you and excited to see what you will achieve next!   Best wishes, Li Hua 写作评析 本文写作的最大亮点是言之有物（writing with substance）。在“肯定他的付出”的时候具体提到了和语言学习相关的概念，比如她把Terry获得成功的原因具体归到“attending extra language workshops and engaging with Chinese native speakers”。 除此之外，在写作中表现出的良好的文化意识（“文化自信”）也是值得大家学习的。比如她在第二段的开头提到 “Your enthusiasm for learning Chinese culture is truly admirable”。 词汇和表达推荐 testament n. 证明 dedication n. 奉献 commitment n. 执着 enthusiasm n. 热情 admirable adj. 令人钦佩的 accomplishment n. 成功 well-deserved adj. 实至名归的 recognition n. 认可 下水文1 Dear Terry, I was thrilled to hear the news that you've won the second prize in our school's Idiom Challenge Competition! Please accept my heartfelt congratulations on this well-deserved achievement. Your dedication and hard work have truly paid off. I know how much effort you've put into learning and mastering these idioms, and it's evident in the way you've impressed everyone with your performance. It's not just about the prize, but also about the journey and the new insights you've gained into our language and culture. Keep up the excellent work, and I look forward to seeing what other accomplishments you'll achieve during your time here. Once again, congratulations on your success! Best wishes, Li Hua 下水文2 Dear Terry, I am writing to extend my warmest congratulations on your remarkable achievement in our school's Idiom Challenge Competition, where you have secured the second prize. It is truly an inspiring accomplishment, and I am delighted for you. Your success is a testament to your commitment and the countless hours you have dedicated to understanding the nuances of Chinese idioms. It is not an easy task for a non-native speaker, but you have shown exceptional dedication and a keen interest in our language. Your efforts have not only earned you this accolade but also a deeper appreciation of Chinese culture. I am confident that this is just the beginning of many more successes for you. Your journey as an exchange student is enriched with such experiences, and I am sure you will continue to excel in all your endeavors. Once again, congratulations on your well-earned victory! Wishing you all the best, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$