内容正文:
Using Language
Unit 1
People of Achievement
Introduce someone you admire
Learning objectives
At the end of class, you will be able to:
know the structure and the language features of a biography.
meet more people of achievement, especially those ordinary individuals and learn their good qualities.
write an introduction to someone you admire.
Brainstorm
Can you guess who he is ?
a Jewish
worked in the Swiss patent office
Get Nobel Prize for Physics in 1921
E=mc²
The theory of relativity
Albert Einstein
Now let's come to know more about him!
While Reading
Listen and fill in the timetable
Time Events
He was born in Germany.
He passed the entrance exam and entered university in Switzerland.
He graduated from the university.
He worked in the Swiss patent office and earned a dectorate in physics.
He was awarded the Nobel Prize in Physics.
He had to flee Germany to America.
He passed away.
In 1879
In 1896
In 1900
In 1905
In 1921
In 1933
In 1955
What kind of text is it?
biography 传记
in ______ order
time
Born in Germany
1879
1896
1955
1933
Failed to enter university
1895
Entered university
Graduated from university
1900
Took a job
as a clerk in the Swiss patent office
1902
1905
Entered research full-time at a university
1909
Awarded the Nobel Prize for Physics
1922
Fled
Germany
Passed away
Read the text and complete the timeline. Then introduce Einstein's life story and achievements in your own words.
Make a timeline
Making a timeline that shows when different events happened can help you understand how the events are connected to each other.
Earned a doctorate in physics and published four extraordinary physics papers
Title
Para1: Brief Intriduction
Para 2: Educational experience
Para 3: Work experience & achievement
Para 4: Mid-life crisis([ˈkraɪsɪs] 危机)
Para 5: Appearance &Personality
Para 6: Death
beginning
Body
Ending
Reading
— for the structure
Post reading---Organisation
General Introduction to Einstein
Review: not only a 1. ______, but a 2.________ and kind figure
Contribution: the theory of relativity
and the famous formula E=mc².
genius
courageous
The life as a student
He 3. ________ to enter university in Switzerland after studying for another year in 1896 and graduating in 1900.
managed
1. Out of 5. ______ for knowledge, he continued to study and earned a 6. ________ in physics.
2. He published four 7. ___________
four physics papers and became famous throughout the world.
3. He was 8. ________ the 1921 Nobel Prize for Physics.
passion
doctorate
The reason of fleeing Germany
Because he was Jewish and found the doors of academic institutions closed to him, he had to flee Germany.
The life as a 4. ____ in Swiss patent office
clerk
extraordinary
awarded
Post reading---Organisation
Post reading---Organisation
Einstein's character and funny stories
1.appearance:He had a thick moustache and long white hair.
2. personality: He was loved by his friends and neighbours despite his 9.__________.
He was 10.___________ to ask for help.
peculiarities
The loss of the greatest scientist
encountered
Simile(明喻)& Personification(拟人):
He had a thick moustache and long white hair, which sometimes stood on end as though he had just received an electric shock.
like, as, as...as, as if(though)
Reading
— for the language feature
What rhetorical devices(修辞手法) are used in the passage?
Metaphor(暗喻):
He found the doors of academic institutions closed to him.
He has a heart of stone.
The world is a stage.
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After reading-Summary
What aspects are included while writing a biography or introduction of a certain person?
Personality
Appearance
Brief introduction
Achievements
Impressive story
Comments on the person
如何写一篇人物简介
【文体感知】
伟人总是给我们榜样的力量, 那么, 我们如何对伟人做人物简介呢? 人物介绍是高中生基础写作任务中常见的一种话题类型。它涉及人的出生、家庭背景、教育、生平经历、成就和评价等。同学们要注意其文体应该是记叙文, 同时还要注意人称和时态的合理使用。
Body
Ending
Beginning
Basic information
(Name, identity...)
Experience
Achievements
Impressive story
The reason why you
admire him/her.
Structure
引出人物---简要介绍基本信息如生平,教育,职业等
介绍人物主要经历---挑比较重要的事迹进行描写,贡献或成就等
人物评价及对作者的影响---人格,贡献,闪光点
注意:运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用 ,而描写人物的出生地、教育背景、经历、事迹时常用 ____________
一般现在时
一般过去时
人物介绍的写作要点可分为三部分:
请根据以下材料, 写一篇介绍我国明代(Ming Dynasty)医学家(medical scientist)李时珍的文章。
出生年代: 1518
著作: 《本草纲目》
内容: 中草药(herbs)总集, 包含近2 000种中草药, 数百万字(characters)
写作经历: 访民间, 走群山, 尝百草, 亲身做实验
成书时间: 1578年, 历时37年
评价: 对我国医学(medicine)发展做出了重大贡献
Reading for writing1
Writing---Outline
Beginning
General introduction
● background
● age
medical scientist
Ming Dynasty
born in 1518
Body
Achievement
Details and examples
Use specific details
Give examples
Ben Cao Gang Mu
visited mountains
called on ordinary people
tasted herbs
Ending
Difficulty and Contribution
37 years to finish the task
make a great contribution
1. 李时珍是中国明朝时期的一个著名医学家。
Li Shizhen ____________a famous medical scientist in Ming Dynasty.
2. 他出生于1518年。
He ___________1518.
Writing---making sentences
was known as
was born in
Known as a famous medical scientist in Ming Dynasty, Li Shizhen was born in 1518.
3. 他写了一本叫作《本草纲目》的书。
He wrote a book which _______Ben Cao Gang Mu.
4. 《本草纲目》是一本中国中草药总集, 其中包含了2 000多种中草药, 数百万字。
Ben Cao Gang Mu is a collection of Chinese herbs ______ _______over 2, 000 Chinese herbs with millions of characters.
Writing---making sentences
is called
includes
He wrote a book called Ben Cao Gang Mu, which is a collection of Chinese herbs including over 2,000 Chinese herbs with millions of characters.
which
Writing---making the essay
Known as a famous medical scientist in Ming Dynasty, Li Shizhen was born in 1518.
He wrote a book called Ben Cao Gang Mu, which is a collection of Chinese herbs including over 2, 000 Chinese herbs with millions of characters. In order to finish the task, he visited mountains, called on ordinary people, tasted different kinds of herbs and even did experiments by himself.
It took him 37 years to finish the task, and his book is considered to be a great contribution to the development of Chinese medicine.
Reading for writing 2
姓名: 袁隆平
出生: 1930年,北京
毕业院校: 西南农学院
职业: 科学家
工作经历: 大学毕业后,他从事农业教学何研究工作
在1975年,他成功培育出了杂交水稻,
成就: 提高了水稻产量,有助于消除世界饥饿
被誉为“杂交水稻之父”
西南农学院:
Southwest Agricultural College
他从事农业教学和研究工作
agricultural teaching and research
培育出了杂交水稻
breed hybrid rice
杂交水稻之父
the father of hybrid rice
提高了水稻产量,
有助于消除世界饥饿
improve the rice production and help rid the world of hunger
参考词汇
出生于:___________________ 酷爱:_______________
在……方面有天赋:_______________从某大学毕业:__________
be born in
have/show a passion for
be talented in...
graduate from
1.引出人物:--- 简单介绍人物背景
语料积累
(出生日期/出生地+职业/兴趣)
2.介绍人物主要经历
做…工作:____________
把…奉献给…:___________________
起关键性作用:_______________ 坚定的决心___________________
在…获得巨大的成功:___________________
使某人能够做某事:_____________________
下定决心做某事:_____________________
work as
devote oneself/entire life to...
play a crucial role in
strong will and determination
achieve great success in...
enable sb to do sth
/ take up a position as
make up one’s mind to do
/ be determined to do sth
3.人物评价及对作者的影响---重要词汇
为某人赢得好名声:_______________ 高度评价__________________
做出巨大贡献:________________________ 被授予……:________________
作为……而闻名:__________________ 被尊称为________________________
树立好榜样:_________________
值得我们崇拜和尊重:_________________________________
earn sb a good reputation
make great contributions to
be awarded...
be known/famous as
be honored as
set a good example
deserve our admiration and respect
think highly of
1.Graduating from Peking University in 1993, he worked as a teacher in Wuhan University.
2.When he was a boy, he showed a passion formaths.
3.Born in Shanghai, on September 12th, 1980, Yao Ming is one of the best basketball players in China.
4.In order to ..., he made up his mind to do... 为了…,他决定做…..
5.With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in...
凭借坚强的意志和坚定的决心,他在……方面取得了巨大的成功……
功能句背诵
6.Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them.
尽管有许多困难,他/她还是设法克服了
7.He/She put his/her heart into …and made great contributions to…
他/她全心全意投入…, 并为…做出了巨大贡献…
8.As a great...,he/she will be remembered by us forever.
作为一个伟大的……,他/她将被我们永远铭记。
9.It is his determination that inspires me to go on when I have difficulty in learning.
正是他的决心激励我在学习有困难时继续前进。
10.Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
他为我们树立了一个伟大的榜样,是一个非常优秀的人,值得我们钦佩和尊重
可以先分解成两个句子。
袁隆平1930年9月7日出生于北京。
他刻苦学习,酷爱农业科学。
Yuan Longping was born in Beijing on 7th September 1930.
He studied hard and showed a passion for agricultural science.
袁隆平1930年9月7日出生于北京,刻苦学习,酷爱农业科学。
Yuan Longping was born in Beijing on 7th September 1930, who studied hard and showed a passion for agricultural science.(非限制性定语从句)
Born in Beijing on 7th September 1930, Yuan Longping studied hard and showed a passion for agricultural science.(分词做状语)
1.引出人物:--- 简单介绍人物背景
(出生日期/出生地+职业/兴趣)
西南农学院
Southwest Agricultural College
他从事农业教学和研究工作
agricultural teaching and research
培育出了杂交水稻
breed hybrid rice
杂交水稻之父
the father of hybrid rice
After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College, he spent most of his time on agricultural teaching and research. Despite many difficulties, he managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in breeding hybrid rice, which improved the rice production and helped rid the world of hunger. So he is known as the father of hybrid rice.
提高了水稻产量,有助于消除世界饥饿
improve the rice production and help rid the world of hunger
2.介绍人物主要经历
3.人物评价及对作者的影响
Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
The Person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. The person I respect most is Yuan Longping. Born in Beijing in 1930, Yuan Longping studied hard and showed a passion for agricultural science. After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College, he spent most of his time on agricultural teaching and research. Despite many difficulties, he managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in breeding hybrid rice, which improved the rice production and helped rid the world of hunger. So he is known as the father of hybrid rice. Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
Homework
假定你是李华,你校正在组织征文活动,请以主题为“The person I respect”为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.人物简介;
2.受尊敬或爱戴的原因。
注意:1. 次数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。开头已为你写好。
The Person I respect
There are many respectable people around us.____________
_________________________________________________
The Person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. Among them, the person I respect most is Zhong Nanshan, who has become a household name for his devotion to defeating viruses. Being a medical scientist, Zhong Nanshan is a leading figure in the battle against SARS in 2003 and COVID-19 in 2019. Every time I see the pictures, in which he is fighting to save people’s lives, I can’t help having an idea that I want to stand by his side. What impresses me most is that he rushed to the front line without hesitation at the beginning of the outbreak of epidemic. After many day’s hard work, the COVID-19 was eventually under control. It is his dedication to work and to people that makes me respect him most and inspires me to be a person needed.
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