第21讲 邮件(讲义)-【上好课】2025年高考英语一轮复习讲练测(新教材新高考)

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第21讲 邮件 目录 01 考情透视·目标导航 1 02 知识导图·思维引航 2 03 考点突破·考法探究 2 一 邮件写作技巧 2 知识点1 命题规律 2 知识点2 写作技巧 2 二 邮件类经典必背 3 知识点1 好词好句积累 3 知识点2 满分模板必背 3 04真题练习·命题洞现 4 1.真题实战 4 2.命题演练 5 近年高考真题邮件考点细目表 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2024 新高考I卷 分享公园美术课的感想 邮件 2022 浙江卷 给爱尔兰朋友分析活动收获 邮件 2021 天津卷 给英国Nancy回复询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期的邮件 邮件 一 写作技巧 知识点1 命题规律 英语邮件的写作需要遵循一定的格式和规范,进行礼貌的交流和信息的有效传达。 称呼根据身份选择合适的方式。主题部分应当简洁明了,避免使用特殊符号。写作时遵循“审题--构思--动笔”的步骤;先审题确定文体格式要求,再通过构思列出提纲和写作重点,最后用自己有把握的词语和能熟练运用的句型来表达。正文部分必须涵盖题目中的所有要点。 知识点2 写作技巧 第一段:开门见山,简要说明写邮件的原因。 第二段:正文部分结构清晰,层次分明,直接阐述事情的背景和进展,或明确说明希望对方采取任何行动或给出何种反 馈。 第三段:结尾通常表达祝福或感谢,期待回复。如果是商务邮件,还应包括部门名称。 二 邮件经典必背 知识点1 好词好句积累 【必背开头段】 1. I am writing to you regarding ...我正在写信给你说...... 2. I’m writing to ask/confirm/inform...我正在写信询问、确认、通知......。 3. I am delighted to inform you that...我很高兴地通知你......。 4. I am writing with regard to...我正在写的是关于...... 5. How’s everything going?一切都好吗? 6. I am writing in reference to...我正在写信给有关......。 7. I am writing to in connection with...我正在写信给有关......。 8. Haven’t seen you for ages. Glad to hear from you.好久不见,很高兴收到你的来信。 9. How time flies! It’s three months since the last time I saw you. 时光飞逝!自从上次见到你至今已经有3个月了。 【必背结尾段】 1. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.我期待着很快收到你的来信。 2. Please let me know if you have any questions.如果你有任何问题,请告诉我。 3. If you have any further questions , please do not hesitate to contact me.如果您有任何其他问题,请随时与我联系。 4. Thanks for your patience.谢谢你的耐心。 5. Please feel free to contact me.请随时与我联系。 6. Best regards/wishes最好的问候和祝福 7. All the best,一切顺利, 8. Sincerely, 真诚地, 知识点2 满分模板必背 Dear______, You have told me that ____________________ and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you. In my opinion, you should ____________________. Besides, you had better ____________________.When you ____________________, remember to ____________________ Wish you success! Yours, _______________. 一、 真题实战 (2024年新高考I卷)假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括: (1)你完成的作品; (2)你的感想。 注意: (1)写作词数应为80个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2.(2022·浙江·高考真题)假定你是李华,在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris,现在他已回国,请你给他 写一封邮件,内容包括: 1. 回忆活动经历;2. 分享个人收获;3. 希望保持联系。 注意: 1 . 词数80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.(2021·天津·高考真题)假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家,他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业,并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复,内容包括: (1) 表示感谢并问候; (2) 计划与家人一起做的事情; (3) 你决定选择哪个专业,为学好该专业做何准备。 注意: (1) 词数不少于100; (2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯; (3) 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Nancy, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jin 二、 命题演练 1.(24-25高三上·湖北·开学考试)假定你是李华,上周五你参加了学校举行的课本剧 (the textbook drama) 表演大赛。请你给英国朋友 Chris 写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括: 1. 你的参赛节目; 2. 你的感想。 注意: 1. 词数 80 左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Chris, How is everything going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 2.(24-25高三上·福建福州·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你校每周开设一节劳动课,请你给外国朋友Mike写一封邮件分享其中的一次经历,内容包括: 1.活动过程; 2.你的感想。 注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mike, I’m writing to share with you a class of labor education. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3.(24-25高三上·广东·阶段练习)假定你是李华。外教Hans即将回国,你要为他设计举办欢送会,请写邮件咨询外国好友Jack,内容包括: 1. 你的设想; 2. 寻求帮助。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jack, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4.(2024·内蒙古通辽·模拟预测)假如你是李华,你们学校的体育俱乐部要招聘一位体育老师来帮助学生学习体育技能。作为学生代表,请你给学校的人事招聘部门写一封邮件。 招聘细节要点: 1. 要喜欢孩子,热爱教育; 2. 会多种体育技能; 4. 这份工作不难; 5. 打电话 1234-6688 联系 Ms.Miller 注意:词数应为100左右 Dear Sir/Madam, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5.(24-25高三上·山东·开学考试)假定你是李华,你的朋友 Gabriel 将作为交换生到你的学校进行访问,请你给 Gabriel 写一封邮件表示欢迎,并邀请他参加校庆活动,内容包括: (1)表示欢迎; (2)发出邀请。 注意: (1)写作词数应为 80 个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Gabriel, I am delighted to hear that you will be visiting our school as an exchange student. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 6.(2024·江苏·模拟预测)假定你是李华,将担任学校英文情景喜剧表演大赛的主持人,并正在设计节目串词。请你给外教Mr. Smith写封邮件,请他给予指导。内容包括: 1. 陈述问题; 2. 请求指导。 注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:串词program cue  情景喜剧 sitcom Dear Mr. Smith, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 7.(2024·广东江门·模拟预测)假设你是李华,两周前你网购了一套丛书,昨天才到货,还存在其他问题,请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。要点如下: 1. 陈述写信目的; 2. 投诉内容; 3. 提出你的要求。 注意: 1. 词数80词左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯; 3. 开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear sir or madam, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 8.(24-25高三上·广东·开学考试)假定你是李华,暑假期间你在市公共图书馆做志愿者,请给英国好友Chris写一封邮件分享此次经历。内容包括: 1.你负责的工作; 2.你的感想。 注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you my experience of volunteering in a public library. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 9.(2024·河北保定·二模)假定你是李华,你打算下周日参加学校对面的社区组织的义务劳动。请你用英语给你校交换生John写一封邮件,告知他此事,内容包括: 1. 时间和地点; 2. 具体安排; 3. 发出邀请。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear John, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 10.(24-25高三上·广西·阶段练习)假定你是李华, 你班在校园英语诗歌大赛中获得一等奖, 外教James打算为此庆祝。他委托你调查同学们喜欢的庆祝方式。请你根据下图所示的调查结果, 给外教写一封邮件, 内容包括: 1. 感谢信任; 2. 简述调查结果; 3. 提出个人建议。 注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Findings on Preferred Celebration Activities ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究! 1 / 9 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$ 第21讲 邮件 目录 01 考情透视·目标导航 1 02 知识导图·思维引航 2 03 考点突破·考法探究 2 一 邮件写作技巧 2 知识点1 命题规律 2 知识点2 写作技巧 2 二 邮件类经典必背 3 知识点1 好词好句积累 3 知识点2 满分模板必背 3 04真题练习·命题洞现 4 1.真题实战 4 2.命题演练 7 近年高考真题邮件考点细目表 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2024 新高考I卷 分享公园美术课的感想 邮件 2022 浙江卷 给爱尔兰朋友分析活动收获 邮件 2021 天津卷 给英国Nancy回复询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期的邮件 邮件 一 写作技巧 知识点1 命题规律 英语邮件的写作需要遵循一定的格式和规范,进行礼貌的交流和信息的有效传达。 称呼根据身份选择合适的方式。主题部分应当简洁明了,避免使用特殊符号。写作时遵循“审题--构思--动笔”的步骤;先审题确定文体格式要求,再通过构思列出提纲和写作重点,最后用自己有把握的词语和能熟练运用的句型来表达。正文部分必须涵盖题目中的所有要点。 知识点2 写作技巧 第一段:开门见山,简要说明写邮件的原因。 第二段:正文部分结构清晰,层次分明,直接阐述事情的背景和进展,或明确说明希望对方采取任何行动或给出何种反 馈。 第三段:结尾通常表达祝福或感谢,期待回复。如果是商务邮件,还应包括部门名称。 二 邮件经典必背 知识点1 好词好句积累 【必背开头段】 1. I am writing to you regarding ...我正在写信给你说...... 2. I’m writing to ask/confirm/inform...我正在写信询问、确认、通知......。 3. I am delighted to inform you that...我很高兴地通知你......。 4. I am writing with regard to...我正在写的是关于...... 5. How’s everything going?一切都好吗? 6. I am writing in reference to...我正在写信给有关......。 7. I am writing to in connection with...我正在写信给有关......。 8. Haven’t seen you for ages. Glad to hear from you.好久不见,很高兴收到你的来信。 9. How time flies! It’s three months since the last time I saw you. 时光飞逝!自从上次见到你至今已经有3个月了。 【必背结尾段】 1. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.我期待着很快收到你的来信。 2. Please let me know if you have any questions.如果你有任何问题,请告诉我。 3. If you have any further questions , please do not hesitate to contact me.如果您有任何其他问题,请随时与我联系。 4. Thanks for your patience.谢谢你的耐心。 5. Please feel free to contact me.请随时与我联系。 6. Best regards/wishes最好的问候和祝福 7. All the best,一切顺利, 8. Sincerely, 真诚地, 知识点2 满分模板必背 Dear______, You have told me that ____________________ and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you. In my opinion, you should ____________________. Besides, you had better ____________________.When you ____________________, remember to ____________________ Wish you success! Yours, _______________. 一、 真题实战 (2024年新高考I卷) 假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括: (1)你完成的作品; (2)你的感想。 注意: (1)写作词数应为80个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers. The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted. In a word, It was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信, 分享在公园上美术课的经历。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 决定:decide→determine 整个的:entire→whole 提供:offer→provide 总之:in a word→in short 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers. 拓展句:Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, which was surrounded by blooming flowers. 【点睛】[高分句型1]We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. (that引导的定语从句) [高分句型2] I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.(as引导的时间状语从句) 2.(2022·浙江·高考真题)假定你是李华,在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris,现在他已回国,请你给他 写一封邮件,内容包括: 1. 回忆活动经历;2. 分享个人收获;3. 希望保持联系。 注意: 1 . 词数80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Chris, How are you doing these days? It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much. I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago. It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history. We really enjoyed ourselves there. What’s far more important is that we became good friends then. Though I felt a little sorry that you left China last year, I am pleased to know you are leading a happy life in your hometown.    I hope we can keep in touch often. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在文化节上结识的外国朋友写一封信叙旧。 【详解】1.词汇积累 返回:come back to → return to 思念:miss→ yearn 分享:share → exchange 玩得开心:enjoy oneself→ have a good time → have fun 开心的:pleased→ happy →delight→ content 过着快乐的生活:lead a happy life→ live a happy life 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句: It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much.   拓展句: It has been a year since you came back to Ireland and I miss you so much. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago.(运用了定语从句) 【高分句型2】It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history.(运用了强调句型和定语从句) 【高分句型3】What’s far more important is that we became good friends then.(运用了主语从句和表语从句) 3.(2021·天津·高考真题)假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家,他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业,并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复,内容包括: (1) 表示感谢并问候; (2) 计划与家人一起做的事情; (3) 你决定选择哪个专业,为学好该专业做何准备。 注意: (1) 词数不少于100; (2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯; (3) 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Nancy, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jin 【答案】 Dear Nancy, I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best. Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I'm going toTian 'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy the elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for consultation. Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient. Yours, Li Jin 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家,他母 亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业,并询问你将如何安排高中最后一 个假期。请你用英语回复,内容包括:表示感谢并问候;计划与家人一起做的事情;你决定选择哪个专业,为学好该专业做何准备。 【详解】1.词汇积累 照顾:take care of→look after 另外,此外:in addition→besides→what’s more 雇佣:employ→hire 既然:now that→since 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. 拓展句:As the Internet industry develops rapidly,the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. (运用了now that引导的原因状语从句) 二、 命题演练 1.(24-25高三上·湖北·开学考试)假定你是李华,上周五你参加了学校举行的课本剧 (the textbook drama) 表演大赛。请你给英国朋友 Chris 写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括: 1. 你的参赛节目; 2. 你的感想。 注意: 1. 词数 80 左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Chris, How is everything going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Chris, How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you an exciting experience I had last Friday. Our school held the textbook drama competition, and I participated in it with my classmates. We acted out a scene from William Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet. I played the role of Romeo, and it was a challenging but rewarding experience. We spent several weeks preparing for the competition, practicing our lines. On the day of the competition, we were all nervous but also excited to perform. Despite some nerves, I think we did a great job and received a lot of positive feedback from the audience. Participating in the competition was a great opportunity for me to improve my acting skills and confidence. It also allowed me to work with my classmates and develop our teamwork skills. I learned a lot from the competition, and I’m grateful for the experience. What have you been up to lately? I hope you’re having a great time. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就参加的课本剧 (the textbook drama) 表演大赛给英国朋友 Chris 写一封邮件分享这次经历。 【详解】1.词汇积累 激动人心的:exciting→ thrilling 举办:hold→ launch 参加:participate in→ take part in 尽管:despite→  in spite of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句: We acted out a scene from William Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet. 拓展句: We acted out a scene from William Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet, which was an unforgettable experience for us. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 Despite some nerves, I think we did a great job and received a lot of positive feedback from the audience.(运用了省略that的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】Participating in the competition was a great opportunity for me to improve my acting skills and confidence. (运用了动名词作主语的结构) 2.(24-25高三上·福建福州·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你校每周开设一节劳动课,请你给外国朋友Mike写一封邮件分享其中的一次经历,内容包括: 1.活动过程; 2.你的感想。 注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mike, I’m writing to share with you a class of labor education. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mike, I’m writing to share with you a class of labor education. We were divided into groups and assigned to clean the school garden. Weeding, watering plants, and picking up litter, we worked hard together. The fresh air and teamwork made the task enjoyable. Afterwards, seeing the garden neat and tidy, I felt a great sense of achievement. This experience, which involved physical effort and collaboration, taught me the value of hard work and team spirit. It was truly rewarding! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校每周开设一节劳动课,要求考生给外国朋友Mike写一封邮件分享其中的一次经历。 【详解】1.词汇积累 垃圾:litter → rubbish 任务:task → mission 令人愉快的:enjoyable → delightful 真正地:truly → really 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:I’m writing to share with you a class of labor education. 拓展句:I’m writing to share with you a class of labor education we had last week. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Weeding, watering plants, and picking up litter, we worked hard together.(运用了现在分词作伴随状语) [高分句型2] This experience, which involved physical effort and collaboration, taught me the value of hard work and team spirit. (运用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句) 3.(24-25高三上·广东·阶段练习)假定你是李华。外教Hans即将回国,你要为他设计举办欢送会,请写邮件咨询外国好友Jack,内容包括: 1. 你的设想; 2. 寻求帮助。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jack, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jack, Hans is going back to his country soon. I want to hold a farewell party for him. I plan to invite some of his friends and make some delicious food. I also want to prepare some gifts for him. However, I’m not sure what kind of gifts to choose. Can you give me some suggestions? I hope the party will be a great success and leave a good memory for Hans. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国好友Jack写一封邮件,咨询他关于为即将回国的外教Hans举办欢送会的建议和帮助。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 邀请:invite→ask 准备:prepare→ready 举办:hold→organize 建议:suggestion→advice 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:I plan to invite some of his friends and make some delicious food. 拓展句:I plan to invite some of his friends who he has known for a long time and make some delicious food that they will enjoy. 【点睛】[高分句型1]I plan to invite some of his friends and make some delicious food.(不定式作宾语) [高分句型2]I hope the party will be a great success and leave a good memory for Hans.(省略that的宾语从句) 4.(2024·内蒙古通辽·模拟预测)假如你是李华,你们学校的体育俱乐部要招聘一位体育老师来帮助学生学习体育技能。作为学生代表,请你给学校的人事招聘部门写一封邮件。 招聘细节要点: 1. 要喜欢孩子,热爱教育; 2. 会多种体育技能; 4. 这份工作不难; 5. 打电话 1234-6688 联系 Ms.Miller 注意:词数应为100左右 Dear Sir/Madam, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Hua, a student representative of the sports club. I am writing to tell you that the sports club of our school is looking for a PE teacher to help students learn sports skills. I hope you can write an official recruitment ad for us and post it online.       The required PE teachers should like children, love education and be good at a variety of sports skills. The job is not difficult. Anyone who is interested in becoming a physical education teacher can contact Ms. Miller at 1234-6688.                                                                                                            Yours,                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给学校的人事招聘部门写一封邮件,告诉他们你们学校的体育俱乐部要招聘一位体育老师来帮助学生学习体育技能。 【详解】1.词汇积累 告诉:tell→inform 帮助:help→assist 正式的:official→formal 寻找:look for→seek for 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:I am Li Hua, a student representative of the sports club. 拓展句:I am Li Hua, who serves as a student representative of the sports club. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing to tell you that the sports club of our school is looking for a PE teacher to help students learn sports skills. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] Anyone who is interested in becoming a physical education teacher can contact Ms. Miller at 1234-6688. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句) 5.(24-25高三上·山东·开学考试)假定你是李华,你的朋友 Gabriel 将作为交换生到你的学校进行访问,请你给 Gabriel 写一封邮件表示欢迎,并邀请他参加校庆活动,内容包括: (1)表示欢迎; (2)发出邀请。 注意: (1)写作词数应为 80 个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Gabriel, I am delighted to hear that you will be visiting our school as an exchange student. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Gabriel, I am delighted to hear that you will be visiting our school as an exchange student. I would like to extend a warm welcome to you and invite you to join us in celebrating our school’s anniversary next month. The school anniversary is an important event for us, filled with various activities such as performances, sports competitions, and cultural exhibitions. It will be a great opportunity for you to experience our school spirit and get to know more about our traditions and culture. I look forward to meeting you soon and showing you around our campus. If you have any questions or need any assistance before your arrival, please feel free to reach out to me. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生写封邮件欢迎交换生Gabriel的到来并邀请他参加校庆活动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 重要的:important →significant 充满:filled with → full of 比赛:competition → match 机会:opportunity → chance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:The school anniversary is an important event for us, filled with various activities such as performances, sports competitions, and cultural exhibitions. 拓展句:The school anniversary is an important event for us,which is filled with various activities such as performances, sports competitions, and cultural exhibitions. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It will be a great opportunity for you to experience our school spirit and get to know more about our traditions and culture.(运用了it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正主语的句型) 【高分句型2】If you have any questions or need any assistance before your arrival, please feel free to reach out to me.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句) 6.(2024·江苏·模拟预测)假定你是李华,将担任学校英文情景喜剧表演大赛的主持人,并正在设计节目串词。请你给外教Mr. Smith写封邮件,请他给予指导。内容包括: 1. 陈述问题; 2. 请求指导。 注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:串词program cue  情景喜剧 sitcom Dear Mr. Smith, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to seek your guidance as I’m going to host our school’s upcoming English sitcom competition. What challenges me most is designing the program cues, especially when it comes to creating smooth transitions between programs and incorporating appropriate humor. I have long heard of your expertise in drama and performance, so I wonder if you could kindly provide me with suggestions on structuring the program cues effectively and maintaining a lively atmosphere throughout the competition. Any advice on my hosting work would be greatly appreciated. I’m eager for your precious guidance. Looking forward to your early reply. Sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生将担任学校英文情景喜剧表演大赛的主持人,并正在设计节目串词。要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写封邮件,请他给予指导。 【详解】1.词汇积累 合适的:appropriate→proper 比赛:competition→contest 建议:suggestion→advice 维持:maintain→sustain 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:I’m eager for your precious guidance. 拓展句:I would appreciate it if you could offer your precious guidance. 【点睛】[高分句型1] What challenges me most is designing the program cues, especially when it comes to creating smooth transitions between programs and incorporating appropriate humor. (运用了what引导主语从句) [高分句型2] I have long heard of your expertise in drama and performance, so I wonder if you could kindly provide me with suggestions on structuring the program cues effectively and maintaining a lively atmosphere throughout the competition. (运用了if引导宾语从句) 7.(2024·广东江门·模拟预测)假设你是李华,两周前你网购了一套丛书,昨天才到货,还存在其他问题,请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。要点如下: 1. 陈述写信目的; 2. 投诉内容; 3. 提出你的要求。 注意: 1. 词数80词左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯; 3. 开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear sir or madam, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear sir or madam, I am one of your customers. I am writing to complain about an order. I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing. I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either refund my money or deliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,就网购的一套丛书的问题表示投诉,要点如下:1. 陈述写信目的;2. 投诉内容;3. 提出你的要求。 【详解】1.词汇积累 缺损的:missing→defective 另外:besides→moreover 更糟糕的是:to make matters worse→worse still 处理:deal with→cope with 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句:And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. 拓展句:And I was disappointed that the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. 【点睛】[高分句型1] And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. (运用了so...that...引导的结果状语从句) [高分句型2] I hope that you either refund my money or deliver a new set of books to me. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 8.(24-25高三上·广东·开学考试)假定你是李华,暑假期间你在市公共图书馆做志愿者,请给英国好友Chris写一封邮件分享此次经历。内容包括: 1.你负责的工作; 2.你的感想。 注意: 1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you my experience of volunteering in a public library. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you my experience of volunteering in a public library. On our arrival, we were divided into groups and assigned tasks respectively. For the duration of the event, I was involved in managing the catalogues and shelving of the books, ensuring that all the books were placed in the correct categories. Besides, I also participated in an exhibition themed Creative Literature Journey, setting up the exhibition space and introducing the books on display. Volunteering at the city public library was incredibly rewarding. Not only did I improve my personal ability but also experienced the sense of achievement in serving the community. I hold the view that each of us have the responsibility to contribute to the community in which we live. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国好友Chris写一封邮件分享自己暑假期间在市公共图书馆做志愿者的经历。 【详解】1.词汇积累 确保:ensure→make sure 参加:participate in→take part in 对……做出贡献:contribute to→make contributions to 有意义的:rewarding→beneficial 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:On our arrival, we were divided into groups and assigned tasks respectively. 拓展句:As soon as we arrived, we were divided into groups and assigned tasks respectively. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I also participated in an exhibition themed Creative Literature Journey, setting up the exhibition space and introducing the books on display. (运用了过去分词短语作后置定语和现在分词短语作状语) 【高分句型2】I hold the view that each of us have the responsibility to contribute to the community in which we live. (运用了that引导的同位语从句和介词+关系代词which引导的定语从句) 9.(2024·河北保定·二模)假定你是李华,你打算下周日参加学校对面的社区组织的义务劳动。请你用英语给你校交换生John写一封邮件,告知他此事,内容包括: 1. 时间和地点; 2. 具体安排; 3. 发出邀请。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear John, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear John, I am excited to inform you about an upcoming community volunteer event that I will be participating in, and I would love for you to join me. Next Sunday at 9:00 am, we will gather at the gate of the community across from our school to engage in various meaningful activities. The tasks for the day include cleaning up the neighborhood to make it more beautiful, planting trees, and working on a community garden project to promote sustainable living practices. Your participation will be greatly appreciated, and it’s a wonderful opportunity to give back to the community together. Please let me know if you can join, and I can provide more details if needed. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生John写一封邮件,告诉他下周日打算参加学校对面的社区组织的义务劳动活动的情况,并向他发出邀请。 【详解】1.词汇积累 激动的:excited →thrilled 参加:participate in →take part in 各种各样的:various →a variety of 机会:opportunity →chance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:The tasks for the day include cleaning up the neighborhood to make it more beautiful, planting trees, and working on a community garden project to promote sustainable living practices. 拓展句:What the tasks for the day include are cleaning up the neighborhood to make it more beautiful, planting trees, and working on a community garden project to promote sustainable living practices. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I am excited to inform you about an upcoming community volunteer event that I will be participating in, and I would love for you to join me.(运用了不定式短语作原因状语和that引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】Your participation will be greatly appreciated, and it’s a wonderful opportunity to give back to the community together.(运用了不定式短语作定语修饰名词opportunity) 10.(24-25高三上·广西·阶段练习)假定你是李华, 你班在校园英语诗歌大赛中获得一等奖, 外教James打算为此庆祝。他委托你调查同学们喜欢的庆祝方式。请你根据下图所示的调查结果, 给外教写一封邮件, 内容包括: 1. 感谢信任; 2. 简述调查结果; 3. 提出个人建议。 注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Findings on Preferred Celebration Activities ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Possible Edition Dear James, Thank you for trusting and inviting me to investigate us students’ preferred celebration activities. I’m writing to show you the result and offer my own opinion. According to the survey result, up to 88% of us would like to have an outing at the weekend, while around 59% fancied watching English movies, and 32% preferred sharing food and drinks. Just like the majority of the students, I highly recommend an outing at weekends, as it will build up health and nourish the mind. What’s more, to cater to most of us, we can combine watching open-air movies and eating with the outing, which will enrich our weekend and strengthen the bond. I truly hope my survey and suggestions would be of great help. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教James写一封邮件,介绍针对庆祝方式的调查结果,并提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议:recommend→suggest 此外: what’s more→besides 增强体质:build up health→improve health 对……有帮助:be of great help→be very helpful 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:Thank you for trusting and inviting me to investigate us students’ preferred celebration activities. 拓展句:Thank you for trusting and inviting me to investigate the celebration activities that we students might prefer. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Just like the majority of the students, I highly recommend an outing at weekends, as it will build up health and nourish the mind.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句) 【高分句型2】What’s more, to cater to most of us, we can combine watching open-air movies and eating with the outing, which will enrich our weekend and strengthen the bond.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究! 1 / 19 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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