内容正文:
Writing: Perfect the Content
Teaching Objectives
review the requirements
perfect the content
learn to
2023高考蓝皮书:融合我国传统文化
The 20th National Congress of the CPC: Cultural Confidence and Strength
二十大报告关键词:推进文化自信自强
Activity 1
假定你是李华,上周二下午你班举行了一次以“增强文化自信”为主题的班会课,请你给校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1. 班会目的;2. 班会过程;3. 班会反响。
A Themed Class Meeting
Writing Task
What does cultural confidence refer to?
Standard for Evaluation
Content/Idea
Logic/Structure
Language
The combination of the three main aspects makes a good practical writing.
Activity2
type of the writing
tense
person
报道(夹叙夹议),不要写成记叙文、书信或活动通知。
第二段用一般过去时,第一段和第三段用一般过去时或者一般现在时。
第二段用第三人称,第一段和第三段第一人称。
Review the requirements
Para 1: The overview of the activity
(with purpose included)
Para 2: The process of the class meeting (body part)
Para 3: The students' response to the activity (positive feedbacks)
Content
What's the structure of the writing?
the structure is wrong
Disscussing: What is wrong with the supporting ideas?
Content
off the point
Para 2: The process of the class meeting
Content
too general
What can we do in the class meeting?
deliver/make presentations
watch videos/documentaries
What can we do in the class meeting?
hold debates
hold outdoor class meeting
From general to specific
增加宾语从句(object clause)说明活动的具体内容
From general to specific
适当增加修饰词,如名词(noun)说明活动的内容
traditional culture
revolutionary
culture
modern development
From general to specific
add a topic sentence; 用非谓语(non-predicate)说明活动的意义
From general to specific
用非限定性定语从句(non-restrictive attributive clause)说明活动的意义
perfect the content
Activity3
1. Why is it important to establish cultural confidence?
2. How can we students practice cultural confidence?
Activity 4
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