Unit 2 Great minds 单元话题满分范文必背-2024-2025学年九年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（沪教牛津版）

Unit 2 Great minds 单元话题满分范文必背 1．第19届杭州亚运会中，20位深圳健儿参赛，拿到了10金5银4铜的好成绩。假如你是小记者李华，采访了乒乓球团体赛冠军林高远，请根据你的采访写一篇报道。内容包括： 1．1995年，林高远出生于广东省深圳市一个普通家庭。 2．4岁时，爱上乒乓球运动。5岁时，正式乒乓球训练。 3．从2009年至今，在国际赛事中拿下超过20个冠军。 4．给大家的建议：保持好心态，永不言弃。 5．补充2点自己对林高远的评价。 参考词汇：普通的ordinary  银牌silver medal  铜牌bronze medal 要求：1．要点齐全，条理清楚，语句通顺，衔接连贯。 2．文中不得出现真实校名、姓名等信息。 3．短文不少于80词。 The 19th Asian Games Hangzhou 2022 turned out to be a great success. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： The 19th Asian Games Hangzhou 2022 turned out to be a great success. We have the pleasure of interviewing Lin Gaoyuan, the champion of the table tennis team competition. He was born in an ordinary family in Shenzhen, Guangdong Province in 1995. At the age of 4, he fell in love with table tennis. Then when he was 5 years old, he began his formal table tennis training. Since 2009, he has won more than 20 international titles, which makes us be proud of him. He thinks whatever difficulties we meet, we should keep a good attitude and never give up. I think he is very modest and honest. He never shows off what he has achieved. Instead, he sticks to practicing every day. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇新闻报道，属于材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍林高远的个人信息； 第二步，阐述林高远的建议； 第三步，阐述自己对其的评价； [亮点词汇] ①fall in love with爱上 ②be proud of骄傲 ③give up放弃 [高分句型] ①Since 2009, he has won more than 20 international titles, which makes us be proud of him（定语从句） ②He never shows off what he has achieved. （宾语从句） 2．假定你是李华，你将在最新的一期学校英语报“Role Models”栏目上介绍我国首位戴眼镜执行飞行任务的航天员桂海潮。 简介 1986年11月出生于云南，毕业于北京航空航天大学； 主要经历 1. 2003年观看杨利伟进入太空，梦想将来可以进入太空； 2. 2005年进入北京航空航天大学学习； 3. 2018年参加航天员选拔，并于2023年7月进入太空。 感悟 ……（请补充至少2点） 注意：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 4. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词：北京航空航天大学Beihang University；选拔test。 Have you heard about Gui Haichao? Below is some detailed information about him. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s learn from Gui. 【答案】例文： Have you heard about Gui Haichao? Below is some detailed information about him. Gui Haichao is the first astronaut with glasses to enter space. He was born in Yunnan in November 1986. In 2003, while he was watching Yang Liwei, the first person in China, fly into space, he had a dream. He wanted to travel into space in the future. He then began to study hard. In 2005, he went to study in Beihang University. In 2018, he took part in the test of becoming an astronaut. After years of hard work, his dream finally came true in July 2023. From my perspective, “No pain, no gain”, as the saying goes. Only with hard work can we succeed. In addition, nothing is impossible if one has a dream and fights hard for it. Let’s learn from Gui. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：根据表格所给提示，介绍有关桂海潮的人生经历和你的感悟。 [写作步骤] 第一步：作文开头已给出，应领悟首句内容衔接好下文； 第二步：介绍桂海潮的人生经历（受到杨利伟的鼓舞，刻苦学习，努力实现航天梦），注意增加细节，使行文连贯； 第三步：说说你的感悟是什么，并号召大家向桂海潮学习。 [亮点词汇] ①enter space进入太空 ②took part in参加 ③came true实现 ④no pain, no gain一分耕耘，一分收获 [高分句型] ①In 2003, while he was watching Yang Liwei, the first person in China, fly into space, he had a dream. (while引导的时间状语从句） ②In addition, nothing is impossible if one has a dream and fights hard for it. (if引导条件状语从句) 3．茅以升是我国著名的桥梁专家，被誉为“现代桥梁之父”。请你根据下列提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍茅以升。 出生地 江苏镇江 个人经历 1、从小对桥梁感兴趣，认真学习； 2、1916年毕业于交通部唐山工业专门学校（Tangshan Engineering College），后赴美留学； 3、1920年回国，投入我国桥梁事业。 主要成就 修建钱塘江大桥（the Qiantang River Bridge）；武汉长江大桥（the Wuhan Yangtze River Bridge） 你的感受 …… 要求： 1. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 Mao Yisheng was a pioneer in bridge building. Let me introduce him to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Mao Yisheng was a pioneer in bridge building. Let me introduce him to you. He was born in Zhenjiang, Jiangsu Province. He was interested in bridges when he was young and studied very hard. He graduated from Tangshan Engineering College in 1916 and later studied abroad in the United States. In 1920, he returned to China and invested in the bridge industry. He built the Qiantang River Bridge, the Wuhan Yangtze River Bridge, and so on. I am proud of his achievements. I also want to study hard and contribute my own strength to the suggestions of my country in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍他的个人经历和主要成就； 第二步，介绍自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be born in出生于 ②be interested in对……感兴趣 ③be proud of以……为傲 [高分句型] ①Let me introduce him to you.（祈使句） ②He was interested in bridges when he was young and studied very hard. （when引导时间状语从句） 4．假设你是李华，读完《袁隆平的故事》一书，你准备为《青年杂志》中的“我心目中的伟人”栏目投稿，致敬袁隆平爷爷。 袁隆平(1930-2021)，出生于北京，是我国杰出的农业科学家，被称为“杂交水稻之父”。当时农民贫困，粮食短缺，他决心研究杂交水稻。由于他的努力，中国的水稻产量大幅度提高。 要点： 1）介绍袁隆平(身份、经历、成就……)； 2）人们对袁隆平的评价；缅怀袁隆平同志； 3）谈谈袁隆平故事给你的启示。 提示词： 杂交水稻之父Father of Hybrid Rice 杂交水稻hybrid rice 农业的agricultural 要求： 80词左右；语法、拼写正确，表达通顺、流畅，适当扩展。 The greatest man in my heart is Yuan Longping. He is___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文    The greatest man in my heart is Yuan Longping. He is called the “father of hybrid rice”. He made a great contribution to the agriculture of the world. He solved the problem of food for millions of people.    He was born in Beijing in 1930. In 1964, he started a special study about rice. In 1974, he developed a new kind of rice—Hybrid Rice. In 1980, he began to help people grow more rice not only in China but also in many other areas around the world. In 2021, he died in Changsha.    I think we should save food in our daily life to remember him. Never waste any food from now on. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。 ③提示：文章为第三人称，介绍科学家袁隆平，要点介绍完整，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍袁隆平的身份、成就及评价； 第二步，具体介绍其生平事迹； 第三步，缅怀袁隆平爷爷，以及获得的启发。 [亮点词汇] ① not only...but also不仅……而且 ② make a great contribution to做出巨大的贡献 ③ millions of数百万 ④ began to开始 ⑤ around the world全世界 ⑥ daily life日常生活 ⑦ from now on从现在起 [高分句型] ①I think we should save food in our daily life to remember him.（宾语从句） 5．从古至今，我们从未缺少英雄：他们可能是功勋卓著的大人物，也可能是默默无闻的身边人。假如你是李辉，请写一篇演讲稿，参加学校以“The hero in my heart”为题的英语演讲比赛。 内容要点如下： 1. 你心中的英雄是谁； 2. 说明理由； 3. 你想对他/她说的话。 注意： 1. 词数80～100，开头已写好，不计入总词数； 2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hui. Today, I’d like to talk about the hero in my heart. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hui. Today, I’d like to talk about the hero in my heart. As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr. Zhong Nanshan is my hero in my heart. He graduated from Beijing Medical College. He is one of the famous doctors in China. In the winter of 2019, the COVID-19 broke out in China and across the whole world. Zhong Nanshan not only led but also took an active part in the battle against it. He worked hard day and night treating the patients. With the help of him, soon the COVID-19 was under control. He is a good doctor as well as a great hero in my heart. I think a hero should not only be brave, but also be ready to help others. I want to tell him that you are the pride of us Chinese people. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示信息介绍自己心中的英雄，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你心中的英雄是谁； 第二步，说明为什么他是自己心中的英雄； 第三步，介绍你想对他/她说的话。 [亮点词汇] ①graduate from从……毕业 ②break out爆发 ③take an active part in积极参加 [高分句型] I think a hero should not only be brave, but also be ready to help others. (宾语从句) 6． 英语课上，老师分享了李白《铁杵成针》的故事后，要求同学们写出感受，并推荐一位自己最喜欢的中国的其他名人。请你根据以下写作要求，用英语写一篇发言稿与同学们分享。 写作要求： 1)你从李白身上学到了什么； 2)你推荐的人是谁，为什么推荐他/她，请写出理由； 3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 4)词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to stand here and share my thoughts with you.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】例文： Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to stand here and share my thoughts with you. In English class, after the teacher shared the story of Li Bai’s The Tie-pestle Becomes a Needle, I learned from him to persevere. Next, I would like to recommend one of my favorite celebrities. The greatest man in my heart is Yuan Longping. He is called the “father of hybrid rice”. He made a great contribution to the agriculture of the world. He solved the problem of food for millions of people. He was born in Beijing in 1930. In 1964, he started a special study about rice. In 1974, he developed a new kind of rice — Hybrid Rice. In 1980, he began to help people grow more rice not only in China but also in many other areas around the world. In 2021, he died in Changsha. I think we should save food in our daily life to remember him. Never waste any food from now on. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇 演讲稿； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达你从李白身上学到了什么； 第二步，介绍你推荐的人是谁以及推荐的理由； 第三步，书写结语。表达感谢。 [亮点词汇] make a great contribution to对……做出巨大贡献 would like to do sth.想要做某事 agriculture农业 [高分句型] ①I think we should save food in our daily life to remember him. (宾语从句) ②Never waste any food from now on. (祈使句) 7．雷锋是一位伟大的战士。他热爱学习，乐于助人。雷锋永远活在我们心中。某英语报社正开展“Learn from Lei Feng”征文活动。请你根据以下提示，给英语报社投稿。 提示： 1．我们应努力学习、乐于助人。例如：帮助学习有困难的同学，帮助别人就是帮助自己，帮助处于困难中的陌生人……。如果每个人学会帮助别人，我们的世界……； 2．应生活简朴； 3．总之，……。 要求： 1．行文中必须包含所给内容，不可逐字翻译，但可做适当拓展； 2．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3．行文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 4．词数100左右。（文章的标题与开头已给出，但不计入总词数） 参考词汇：study hard，be ready to，in trouble，have a simple life Learn from Lei Feng Lei Feng was a great solider. He loved to learn and he was always ready to help others. As a student, … … ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version Learn from Lei Feng Lei Feng was a great solider. He loved to learn and he was always ready to help others. As a student, what should we learn from him? Firstly, it’s our duty to study hard. We had better help our classmates who are weak in study. They really need us. We must believe that if everyone can do a little favour, our world will become better and better. Secondly, it’s good manners to help those in trouble. Helping others is helping ourselves. As the saying goes, “Roses given, fragrance in hand.” Thirdly, we are supposed to live a simple life instead of wasting anything. All in all, we should learn from Lei Feng forever and be always ready to help others. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”的要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，谈谈自己对雷锋精神的理解。 第二步，具体阐述我们应学习雷锋的什么品质。 第三步，书写结语，号召大家一起向雷锋学习。 [亮点词汇] ①had better do sth最好做某事 ②be ready to do sth准备好做某事 ③better and better越来越好 ④instead of代替，而不是 [高分句型] ①We had better help our classmates who are weak in learning.（who引导的定语从句） ②As the saying goes, “Roses given, fragrance in hand.”（引用谚语） 8．根据下面的提示，以“My hero—Florence Nightingale”为题介绍你心目中的英雄——佛罗伦斯·南丁格尔。 1. 佛罗伦斯·南丁格尔是一位著名的英国护士，也是现代护理学的创始人(founder of modern nursing)。 2. 她出生于1920年5月12日。 3. 1851年，她被训练为护士。三年后，她去了英国军事医院 (a British military hospital) 以便她能帮助治疗英国士兵。她努力保持医院清洁，从而挽救了士兵的生命。 4. 在1856年当她回到英国时，她成了民族英雄。 5. 南丁格尔写了几本关于护理的书，她还创办了一所培训护士的学校。 6. 1910年8月13日，她在伦敦去世。 注意事项： 1. 短文词数：80左右。 2. 短文必须包含以上内容，但可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。 My hero—Florence Nightingale _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My hero—Florence Nightingale Have you heard of Florence Nightingale? She is the only hero in my heart. She is a famous British nurse and the founder of modern nursing. She was born on 12th May 1820. In 1851, she was trained as a nurse. Three years later, she went to a British military hospital so that she could help British soldiers. She worked hard to make the hospital clean and save soldiers’ lives. When she returned to Britain in 1856, she became a national hero. Nightingale wrote several books about nursing, and she also started a school to train nurses. She died in London on 13th August, 1910. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点信息，可适当发挥，确保上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体介绍人物； 第二部，根据提示材料内容，按时间顺序，具体介绍人物事迹。 [亮点词汇] ①be trained as 被训练为 ②work hard 努力工作 ③save one’s life 拯救某人的生命 [高分句型] ①Three years later, she went to a British military hospital so that she could help British soldiers.  (so that引导目的状语从句) ②She worked hard to make the hospital clean and save soldiers’ lives.  (不定式做目的状语) 9．榜样，就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人，他们为我们指引方向。在你的成长过程中，一定有许多值得你学习的榜样，比如袁隆平、姚明等著名人物，或者你身边的老师、亲人、朋友等普通人。请以“A Person I Admire”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 要点：1）你最喜欢或敬佩的人是谁？2）你为什么欣赏或敬佩他/她？3）你从他/她身上学到了什么? 要求：1）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 2）词数100左右。 A Person I Admire _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: A Person I Admire Yao Ming, an amazing basketball star, is a player I greatly admire. Yao Ming is widely regarded as one of the greatest football players. One of the things that I admire most about Yao is his hard work. Although he faces many challenges, Yao always sticks to his goals and achieved great success. Another thing that I admire about Yao Ming is his kindness. He has always remained ready to help others. This has made him an admirable person. In a word, Yao Ming is not only an amazing football player, but also a role model for people of all ages. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中对榜样的介绍，包括外貌、性格以及钦佩此人的原因。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己最钦佩的人是谁； 第二步，介绍自己最钦佩的人的外貌、性格特征以及钦佩此人的原因； 第三步，介绍你从他/她身上学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①one of +the +形容词最高级+名词复数，表示“……是……中最……之一” ②stick to坚持 ③be ready to准备好 [高分句型] ①One of the things that I admire most about Yao is his hard work.（that引导的定语从句） ②In a word, Yao Ming is not only an amazing football player, but also a role model for people of all ages.（并列连词not only…but also…，连接和强调两个同等句子成分） 10．看着日新月异、逐渐富强的中国，相信每一个中国人的心中，都会升起无以言喻的自豪感。而中国能够摆脱战乱，在短短的几十年时间里发展成为现在的样子，其实离不开中国伟人。英语课上即将进行“中国伟人”为主题的分享活动。请你根据以下图示信息，写一篇英语短文介绍三位中国伟人（请从杨利伟、刘翔和钟南山中选择一位进行补充），并谈谈你的感受。 要求：1．内容须包括所提示的全部信息，可适当发挥； 2．文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称； 3．80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4．不得抄袭试卷原文。 参考词汇：malaria 疟疾；COVID-19 新冠肺炎；110 meters hurdles 110米跨栏 Today, I am honored to introduce three great Chinese to you. They are ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Today, I am honored to introduce three great Chinese to you. They are Zhan Tianyou, Tu Youyou and Zhong Nanshan. Zhan Tianyou is the father of Chinese Railway. He built China’s first railway—the Beijing Zhangjiakou Railway. Tu Youyou is a great scientist and she found new drugs to fight malaria, and her spirit of never giving up is worth people’s learning. Zhong Nanshan is a respiratory specialist in China. Seventeen years ago, he did his best to “fight against SARS”. In early 2020, a disease called Novel coronavirus pneumonia hit Wuhan. As soon as Zhong Nanshan heard the news, he rushed to Wuhan in person in January 2020. He led the medical staff to contain the epidemic and encouraged the people of the country to build confidence to overcome the difficulties. As students, we should learn from them. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，介绍三位伟人的名字；   第二步，介绍他们的伟绩； 第三步，要向他们学习。   [亮点词汇]   ①give up放弃   ②do one’s best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事   ③in person亲自   [高分句型]   ①As soon as Zhong Nanshan heard the news, he rushed to Wuhan in person in January 2020.（as soon as引导时间状语从句）   试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$