Unit 1 People of Achievement Using Language作文评讲课课件 2024-2025学年高中英语人教版选择性必修第一册

英语家作： 1.完成英语周报第二期，C和D篇阅读不用做。 2.写一篇英语作文“介绍你钦佩的人”，80个单词以上。 本次作文出现的问题： 1.抄袭现象严重。 2.没有分三段来写。 3.作文没有新意。写屠呦呦、爱因斯坦、袁隆平的人很多。 4.作文的逻辑性不强。 5.不交或者没写完整。 Write an introduction about someone you admire. admire v.敬佩；钦佩；欣赏 admiration n. 钦佩 admirable adj. 令人敬佩的 1. Choose the person you are going to write about. It should be someone you think is great in some way. It can be an ordinary person, such as a parent, a relative, or a friend. 2.May a list of things that need to be included in your introduction. 3.Use your notes to write your introduction and sum up how you feel about this person. The person I admire most is _______(人）. Born in _______(地点/时间）, _______（人），who is one of the greatest _______(职业）, showed a passion for___________(方面） After graduating from __________(学校）, he/she spent most of his /her time in doing/on___________. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in_________, which made him _____________(成就）. Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect. 我最崇拜的人是_______(人）. 出生于_______(地点/时间）, _______（人），是最伟大_______(职业）的人之一, 表现出对___________(方面）的热情。 在__________(学校）毕业后, 他/她大部分时间都花在做___________上。尽管有许多困难，他/她还是设法克服了。凭借坚强的意志和坚定的决心，他在_________取得了巨大的成功，这使他_____________(成就）. 为我们树立了一个伟大的榜样，他是一个非常优秀的人，值得我们钦佩和尊重。 写英雄/伟人/敬佩的人的模板 The person I admire most is Yuan Longping. Born in Beijing in 1930 , Yuan Longping , who is one of the greatest scientist, showed a passion for researching rice. After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College, he spent most of his time on agricultural teaching and research. Despite many difficulties, he managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in breeding hybrid rice, which improved the rice production and helped rid the world of hunger. So he is known as the father of hybrid rice. Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect. 全文：110 小作文衔接词 第一点：First of all/ Firstly/ First and foremost/ Above all/ To start with 第二点：Secondly/ More importantly/ What’s more 第三点：Thirdly/ Finally/ Last but not least/ In addition/ Besides 总结：In conclusion/To sum up/All in all 小作文高分短语积累1 1. sb. have a passion for sth. 某人对某事热爱 2. sb. show respect to sb. 向某人表示敬意 3. not only...but (also)... 不仅...并且... 4. try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力去做某事 5. sb. be interested in doing sth./sth. 某人对某物感兴趣 小作文高分句式积累1 1. It is well known that + 完整句子 “众所周知，........” 例：It is well known that Zhong Nanshan is a genunie national hero. 众所周知，钟南山是一位真正的民族英雄。 2. There is no doubt that+完整句子 “毫无疑问，......” 例：There is no doubt that health is better than wealth. 毫无疑问，健康胜于财富。 3. It is +形容词+(for sb.)+to do sth. 例：Nowadays, it is convenient for people to pay bills with the mobile phone. 现在人们用手机支付账单非常方便。 The person I admire (most) is Sun Yingsha. It is well known that she is a young and talented table tennis player. She has a passion for table tennis. There are some reasons why I admire Sun Yingsha. Firstly, she has obtained a number of achievements at such a young age, winning many titles and medals. Her skills and speed on the table are amazing. Secondly, Sun Yingsha is famous for her positive attitude and sportsmanship. She always shows respect to her opponents and plays fairly, which is vital in sports. In conclusion, Sun Yingsha is not only a great athlete but also a good role model. Her diligent and friendly personality inspire me to try my best to do everything. 我最敬佩的人是孙颖莎。众所周知，她是一位年轻且有天赋的乒乓球运动员。她酷爱乒乓球。 我敬佩孙颖莎的原因有以下几点。首先，她在如此年轻的时候就取得了许多成就，赢得了许多头衔和奖牌。她在台上的技术和速度令人惊叹。其次，孙颖莎以她积极的态度和体育精神而闻名。她总是尊重对手，公平竞争，这在体育运动中至关重要。 总之，孙颖莎不仅是一个伟大的运动员，也是一个好榜样。她的勤奋和友好的个性激励我尽最大努力做好每一件事。 The person I admire (most) is my grandmother. She is a kind and wise woman who has lived through many challenges with grace and determination. My grandmother taught me the importance of hard work and never giving up. Despite her age, she continues to learn new things and inspire everyone around her. Her gentle smile and warm hugs make every day brighter, and I hope to be as strong and loving as she is when I grow up. She sets a great example for me to follow. 我最敬佩的人是我的祖母。她是一位善良睿智的女性，以优雅和坚定的态度经历了许多挑战。 我的祖母教会了我努力工作和永不放弃的重要性。尽管年事已高，她仍在不断学习新知识，激励着身边的每一个人。 她温柔的微笑和温暖的拥抱让我的每一天都充满阳光，我希望长大后也能像她一样坚强、充满爱心。她为我树立了学习的榜样。 $$