读后续写--飞行故障，紧急迫降课件 -2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

续写：紧急迫降 1 01 续写原文 Taylor Hash wanted to be a career pilot. She had just started building up hours of flight time when disaster struck. As she guided the Diamond Star plane off the runway at Oakland County International airport, on her third-ever independent flight, the front tyre(轮胎) of her plane fell off. Taylor was unaware at that point that she had just lost crucial landing equipment. “I didn’t feel anything on the takeoff roll(起飞滑跑),” she said. Experienced pilot Chris Yates, though, saw something on the takeoff roll and immediately took action. He knew that Taylor would have to make a difficult emergency landing. He radioed the control tower and said, “The Diamond Star that just took off lost its nose (头部) wheel tyre on the runway.” But the control tower operators didn’t know what to do. They’d never seen such a thing happen before. Yates asked them to put him through to Taylor so he could help her. When Taylor learned what had happened, she was in panic. With only 57 total flight hours under her belt, she didn’t know what her options were and could only imagine how this was going to end.“ I didn’t know what to do in that moment,” said Taylor later. “I’m just panicking and figuring out how I’m going to land this plane safely.” But Yates knew what to do. He knew that the most important thing would be to keep Taylor calm so that she could follow his instructions effectively. Yates started by reassuring (使安心) Taylor that everything was going to turn out just fine: “Taylor, this is Chris Yates. My daughter’s name is Taylor, and I taught her to fly! We’re gonna be just fine. Just take your time.” He told her that she could circle the field until she was ready to land. “When you touch down, I just want that stick (操纵杆) all the way back. You’re gonna hold that stick back like you don’t want that nose to touch,” he coached her. Paragraph 1: Despite feeling scared and unsure, Taylor trusted Yates and followed his instructions. Paragraph 2: Taylor went up to Yates after she stepped out of the plane safely. 02 原文情节 1.Chris Yates和Taylor Hash是父女吗？ 2.Taylor听从了Yates什么样的指令（followed his instructions）？ 3.结尾如何设计？ 1. Chris Yates 和 Taylor Hash 是父女吗? “Taylor, this is Chris Yates. My daughter's name is Taylor, and I taught her to fly!”两个女孩碰巧都叫 Taylor, 但 Yates和 Taylor并不是父女。这个细节看起来很简单，但可惜得是很多学生在写的时候都搞错了。 2. Taylor 听从了 Yates 什么样的指令(followed his instructions） He told her that she could circle the field until she was ready to land.“\Vhen you touch down, I just want that stick (操纵f) all the way back. You're gonna holdthat stick back like you don't want that nose to touch,” he coached her. 3. 结尾如何设计? 两种方法:哲理式、情景式 我偏向情景式。因为哲理对学生的总结概括能力要求很高。而且这篇文章前面已经把临危不惧、镇定写了很多篇幅，如果结尾再写就重复了。情景结尾我们可以这样设计:当泰勒向耶茨告别并离开跑道时，她每迈一步都充满自信，她确信自己在追求航空事业的道路上取得了实质性的进步。 03 情节设计 三、微情节设计 Paragraph 1: Despite feeling scared and unsure, Taylor trusted Yates and followed his instructions. 角色   触发事件   情绪   动作/语言/心理 Taylor   听从指令 Taylor   Yates镇定的指令   Taylor   做好准备降落 Taylor   成功着陆   根据第一段段首句和第二段段首句确定第一段的故事发展阶段 Taylor went up to Yates after she stepped out of the planesafely. 角色   触发事件   情绪   动作/语言/心理 Taylor   着陆后去找Yates   Yates   Taylor的迫降 Taylor   Yates的鼓励 Taylor   离开机场 根据第二段段首句和续写主题确定第二段的故事发展走向 04 连词成篇 四、连词成篇 Para1: Despite feeling scared and unsure, Taylor trusted Yates and followed his instructions. (1)她按照指示在场地上转圈，深呼吸以安抚她的神经. She circled the field as instructed, taking deep breaths to soothe her nerves. (2)在Yates平静而令人安心的声音的引导下，泰勒设法恢复了镇静 With Yates' calm and reassuring voice guiding her, Taylor managed to regain her composure. (3)她耐心地在跑道上绕了一圈又一圈，专心地听着Yates的指示，为前方令人望而却步的紧急迫降做好准备。 She made repeated circuits of the field patiently,  listening intently to Yates' words and readying herself for the daunting emergency landing ahead. (4)最终，当她准备好时，她驶近跑道，紧紧抓住操纵杆，按照Yate’s的指示回拉操纵杆到底。 Ultimately, when she was in readiness, she approached the runway, clutching the stick firmly and pulling it all the way back on Yate’s instructions. (5)她的心激动得怦怦直跳，她设法驾驶飞机安全着陆，避免了一场潜在的灾难。 With her heart thumping with thrill, she managed to navigate the plane to a safe landing, avoiding a potential catastrophe. Para2: Taylor went up to Yates after she stepped out of the plane safely. (6)“非常感谢。”宽慰和感激的泪水涌出了她的眼睛。泰勒流着泪，感谢耶茨在这段伤脑筋的经历中给予她的指导和支持。 “Thank you so much.” Tears of relief and gratitude spilled out of her eyes. Brimming with tears, Taylor thanked Yates profusely for his guidance and support during the nerve-wracking experience. (7)耶茨带着安慰的微笑，温柔地拍了拍她的背，对她镇定自若的表现表示自豪。 Yates, with a reassuring/humble smile, patted her tenderly on the back, expressing his pride in her calm and collected performance. (8)泰勒受到耶茨分享的专业知识和智慧的启发，加强了她成为一名专业飞行员的决心 Taylor, inspired by the expertise and the wisdom shared by Yates, reinforced her resolve to become a professional pilot. (9)当泰勒向耶茨告别并离开跑道时，她每迈一步都充满自信，她确信自己在追求航空事业的道路上取得了实质性的进步。 As Taylor bid farewell to Yates and walked away from the runway, with each confident stride she was convinced that she had made substantial progress in her pursuit of a career in aviation. Despite feeling scared and unsure, Taylor trusted Yates andfollowed his instructions. While Taylor was circling the field, herinitial panic slowly gave way to calmness and determination“It’s time!” Taylor gritted her teeth, preparing for thechallenging emergency landing ahead. With one hand clenchingthe stick, Taylor started to operate the, decent of the plane. Shegot closer and closer to the ground. Just as advised, she pulledthe stick all the, way back the moment the aircraft contacted therunway. The next thing she know, the plane was bumping alongthe runway and finally came to a complete stop.(89w) Taylor went up to Yates after she stepped out of the planesafely. Heart still pounding, she wrapped her arms around him,“Thank you so much!” Tears of relief and gratitude spilled outof her eyes. “But for your quick thinking and act,l couldn’ thave landed safe and sound.” Patting Taylor on the should Yates pointed out that it was her calm and courage underpressure that mattered most in aviation. That day, Taylor had never felt better. Not only because she had survived a terrifyingadversity,but she had also found a mentor and friend, whowould serve as a role model on her jqurney towards being a distinguished career pilot. (100w) 下水文： Despite feeling scared and unsure, Taylor trusted Yates and followed his instructions. After circling the airport a few times, she got ready to make the emergency landing. With Yates talking to her all the way, a sense of calm washed over her. “You’re doing great,” he encouraged, “Keep that stick all the way back.” Taylor could see the runway coming up quickly. The plane touched down, the nose hitting the ground. Taylor felt the plane shaking and bouncing until it came to a complete stop. She made it! (77 w) Taylor went up to Yates after she stepped out of the plane safely. With tears of gratitude in her eyes, she hugged him tightly and thanked him for his guidance during the crisis. “Had you not seen the wheel fall off,” uttered Taylor, “it’s hard to think about what could have happened.” Yates praised her that she had done a great job in landing the plane safely with such limited flight experience. Through misty eyes, Taylor could see the path to her career as a pilot become clearer than ever. (77 w) 范文： $$