读后续写--共同守护的绿色记忆：社区花园的保卫战 讲义-江苏省南通市如皋市2024-2025学年高三上学期期初调研测试英语试卷

江苏省南通市如皋市22024-2025学年度高三年级第一学期期初调研测试英语试卷读后续写--共同守护的绿色记忆：社区花园的保卫战 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 After getting up late on a sleepy Sunday, I saw my dad at the kitchen table reading the Sunday edition of the local newspaper. I made a sandwich and sat down next to him, asking him what was new. He turned sadly to me and said that the municipal council (市议会) was planning to introduce a measure to tear up the community garden nearby. He mentioned that he used to work on it with his dad, so the place had some fond childhood memories for him. He then put down the paper, walked over to the closet and — after a bit of searching — pulled out a thick, black binder (活页夹). Inside, there was a whole bunch of old photographs. After thumbing through a few pages, my dad found the one of him and his dad together at the community garden, just like he’d said. “Wow, your cheeks were super rosy back then!” I said, surprised. With nothing planned for the afternoon, my dad and I decided to take a trip over to the community garden to see how it was doing these days. Not great, as it turned out. Crumpled (皱巴巴的) soda cans, cigarette butts (烟头) and other trash were everywhere. Pots of soil were still there, but the few plants that remained were either dead or dying. We looked at each other and knew what we had to do. After gathering some tools and garbage bags, we went straight to work cleaning up the place. I phoned up some of my school friends and, soon enough, a half-dozen people were collecting trash bags and sweeping paths. Someone had even brought bags of fresh seeds and soil along with new flowers, so we uprooted| the old dead plants and flowers and planted a new. After only a few hours, the community garden looked tally changed. Despite our hard work, there was still the matter of the upcoming council vote. We created a plan: take photos of the garden and spread the news about the vote. Using the photographs, we would then collect signatures to show continued local interest and then present these to the council. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右:2. 请按如下格式在答题 卡的相应位置作答。 After two weeks, it came time to present at the local council meeting. ____________________________________________________________ In the end, our efforts paid off. _________________________________________________________ 文章大意 这篇文章讲述了作者和父亲在得知市议会计划拆除附近的社区花园后，如何采取行动来保护这个充满父亲童年回忆的地方。他们首先去花园实地查看，发现花园状况不佳，到处都是垃圾和枯死的植物。于是，他们决定自己动手清理，并召集了作者的一些学校朋友一起帮忙。经过一番努力，花园焕然一新。为了阻止市议会的拆除计划，他们制定了一个计划：拍摄花园的照片，传播即将到来的投票消息，并收集签名以证明社区对花园的兴趣。在市议会会议上，他们展示了花园的改造前后照片和请愿书，最终成功说服了市议会重新考虑拆除计划。文章强调了社区团结的力量和为保护共同历史和环境而共同努力的重要性。 在这篇文章中，有几处伏笔在续写中得到了回应： 1. 伏笔： 市议会计划拆除社区花园的消息。 回应： 作者和父亲通过清理花园和收集社区签名来反对市议会的决定，最终在市议会会议上成功地展示了花园的价值和社区的支持。 2. 伏笔：父亲童年在社区花园的美好回忆。 回应：父亲和作者一起清理花园，这个行动不仅是为了保护花园，也是为了维护父亲与祖父之间的情感联系和传承。 3. 伏笔：社区花园的破败状态。 回应： 作者和父亲以及他们的朋友通过清理和种植新的植物，将花园恢复了生机，这表明了社区对花园的关心和愿意采取行动来改善它。 4. 伏笔：作者和父亲决定采取行动。 回应：他们不仅清理了花园，还制定了一个计划来保护花园，包括拍照、传播消息和收集签名，这些行动最终在市议会会议上得到了回报。 5. 伏笔：社区花园对社区居民的重要性。 回应： 通过收集签名和在市议会会议上的演讲，作者和父亲展示了花园对社区居民的重要性，这促使市议会重新考虑他们的决定。 这些伏笔和回应在文章中形成了一个完整的故事弧线，展示了作者和父亲如何通过社区的力量和努力来保护一个重要的社区资产。 续写要点 第一段：市议会会议前的准备 1. 描述作者和父亲如何收集社区成员的签名，以及他们如何准备市议会会议的演讲。 2. 阐述他们如何整理花园改造前后的照片，以及这些照片在他们的演讲中的作用。 3. 讲述他们如何准备请愿书，以及这些文件如何成为他们论点的有力支持。 第二段：市议会会议及结果 1. 描述市议会会议的氛围，以及作者和父亲如何展示他们准备的材料。 2. 阐述市议会成员对作者和父亲演讲的反应，以及他们如何被花园改造的故事所打动。 3. 讲述市议会的最终决定，以及这个决定对社区花园和社区居民的意义。 读后续写参考答案（25分） After two weeks, it came time to present at the local council meeting. My dad and I, along with several of my school friends, arrived early, each of us carrying a stack of photos showing the garden’s transformation. The meeting room was packed, and when it was our turn to speak, we shared our story and passion for preserving this green space. We passed around the photos, highlighting the beauty and potential of the garden. To our surprise, several council members expressed their support, mentioning that they had received numerous calls and emails from concerned citizens, all thanks to our campaign .In the end, our efforts paid off. The council voted to not only preserve the community garden but also allocate funds for its maintenance and further development. The news spread quickly, and soon, more volunteers joined in, helping to restore the garden to its former glory. My dad and I, seeing the change we had brought, felt a sense of accomplishment and joy. The garden became a symbol of community unity and a reminder that sometimes, all it takes to make a difference is a little initiative and determination. We continued to visit the garden often, watching it grow and thrive, knowing that we had played a part in saving a piece of our town’s history and creating a space for future generations to enjoy. Another possible version: After two weeks, it came time to present at the local council meeting. My dad and I, accompanied by a few of my school friends, stood in front of the council chamber, our hearts pounding with a mixture of nervousness and excitement. We projected our photographs, signatures, and a heartfelt plea, each of us silently praying that our efforts would not go unnoticed. To our delight, the council members’ eyes widened in disbelief and appreciation as they witnessed the stunning transformation: from a trash-filled space to a vibrant, green oasis. We also expressed our hope that the garden could be filled with children playing, families picnicking, and neighbors gathering to share stories and laughter. The applause that followed was deafening. In the end, our efforts paid off. As the council members announced their decision to reconsider and explore ways to maintain the community garden, my dad and I exchanged a glance, both of us beaming with relief and joy. I knew that our victory was not just about saving the garden; it was about inspiring others to take action and care for their community. Every time I visited the garden thereafter, I couldn’t help but feel a sense of accomplishment. I would walk through the lush greenery, admiring the flowers and vegetables that had sprung up from the barren soil, and I would think to myself, “This is ours. We did this.” 下水文1 After two weeks, it came time to present at the local council meeting. Armed with the before-and-after photos and a petition (请愿书) signed by dozens of community members, my dad and I walked into the council chamber with a mix of nerves and determination. We spoke passionately about the garden's history, its importance to the community, and the recent revitalization efforts. The council members listened intently, their expressions a blend of surprise and interest as they viewed the evidence of our hard work and the community's support. In the end, our efforts paid off. The council voted against the measure to tear up the garden, choosing instead to allocate funds for its ongoing maintenance and improvement. The victory was sweet, not just because we saved a plot of land, but because we had come together as a community to preserve a piece of our shared history and to ensure a green space for future generations to enjoy. The community garden, once on the brink of destruction, was now a symbol of unity and the power of collective action. And for my dad and me, it was a project that brought us closer, as we continued to work together on the garden, just as he had done with his father years before. 下水文2 After two weeks, it came time to present at the local council meeting. With a stack of signed petitions and the photographs showcasing the garden's transformation, my dad and I entered the meeting with a sense of purpose. We spoke about the garden's historical significance, the community's collective effort in its recent cleanup, and the potential it held for educational programs and environmental initiatives. The council members were visibly moved by our presentation, and a lively discussion ensued, with several members expressing their support for preserving the garden. In the end, our efforts paid off. The council decided to postpone the vote on the measure, opting instead to conduct a thorough review of the garden's value to the community. They also agreed to organize a public hearing to gather more input from residents. This was a significant step, and it was clear that our presentation had made a difference. As we left the meeting, I could see the pride in my dad's eyes, not just for what we had achieved, but for the community's response and the renewed hope for the garden's future. The garden had become more than just a plot of land; it was a testament to the power of community spirit and the enduring bond between fathers and sons. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$