读后续写---破碎与修复:一段友谊的重生 讲义-2025届福建省漳州市高三毕业班第一次检测(一模)英语试题

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In June’s room stands a bright blue clay vase. Not a perfect or beautiful vase, it is broken in several places. It has been mended, but spiderlike cracks (裂痕) remain. It tells a story of two girls’ friendship. Amy and June met on a plane returning from Bangkok, where their fathers, business partners, attended meetings. June sat behind Amy. Midway, Amy hesitantly turned around and gave June a bright blue clay vase. It was a small gesture, but a simple friendship between two 4-year-olds was established. Years flew by. Amy and June grew up together, played together, studied together and became each other’s closest friend. However, people change as they grow up. Even the most special friendships can be destroyed. As Amy’s interest s broadened, she started to see loss and loss of June. Though hurt, Jun e tried to be understanding. She was still there for Amy when Amy needed support. But when she tried to bring up her difficulties, Amy brushed her off by saying, “Later.”     June couldn’t take it anymore. So one day she invited Amy to her house, hoping to figure their problem out. Instead, a terrible quarrel broke out. “What am I to you? Your friend or just your little dog?” June cried. To her shock, Amy was defensive and screamed back. “June, I hate you!” With these words, Amy stormed out of June’s room, shutting the door hard behind her. A blue vase on the shelf jumped and fell onto the floor, crashing into several pieces. A friendship of ten years was broken, just like the vase. One year passed. It was June’s fifteenth birthday. Instead of feeling happy, June only felt depressed. She remembered her fourteenth birthday. It’d been a great one, and they’d been so happy. Bittersweet tears filled June’s eyes. She could still remember the image of four- year-old Amy holding out the blue vase to her. Suddenly, the doorbell rang. June jumped up and rushed to open the door. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 At the doorstep stood Amy, holding a small package. __________________________________________________________ Going to her room, June sat down on her bed and opened the gift. _____________________________________________________________ 在这篇短文中,有几处伏笔在续写中得到了回应: 1. 伏笔: 蓝色粘土花瓶的破损和修复。 回应: 在续写中,花瓶再次出现,象征着他们的友谊经历了破裂和修复的过程。Amy 修复花瓶并将其作为礼物送给 June,表示她希望修复他们的关系。 2. 伏笔: Amy 和 June 从四岁开始的友谊。 回应: 续写中提到了他们从四岁开始的友谊,以及 June 回忆起 Amy 给她的第一个蓝色花瓶,这强调了他们关系的长久和重要性。 3. 伏笔:Amy 对 June 的忽视和冷淡。 回应:续写中,Amy 意识到了她的错误,并表达了她对 June 的思念和愿望,希望能够弥补过去的错误。 4. 伏笔:他们之间的争吵和友谊的破裂。 回应: 续写中,Amy 的出现和她的道歉是对之前争吵的直接回应,表明她想要修复这段破裂的友谊。 5. 伏笔: June 在自己十五岁生日时感到的孤独和忧郁。 回应:续写中,Amy 的出现和礼物给了 June 一个惊喜,这可能预示着他们友谊的重生,给 June 的生日带来了快乐和希望。 6. 伏笔: 蓝色花瓶在争吵中的破碎。 回应: 续写中,花瓶的修复象征着他们愿意努力修复彼此的关系,就像修复花瓶一样。 这些伏笔和回应在续写中形成了一个完整的故事弧线,展示了角色之间的情感发展和转变。 续写提纲 第一段:Amy 的道歉和礼物 1. 描述 Amy 站在门口的情景,她的表情和手中的小包裹。 2. 阐述 Amy 向 June 表达的歉意,以及她对过去一年中自己行为的反思。 3. 描述 Amy 递给 June 的礼物,以及她希望通过这个礼物传达的和解愿望。 4. 揭示礼物的内容——修复后的蓝色粘土花瓶,以及它对两人友谊的象征意义。 第二段:June 的反应和内心感受 1. 描述 June 收到礼物后的反应,她如何小心翼翼地打开包装。 2. 描述花瓶的外观和它对 June 的情感影响,以及她对花瓶修复的深刻理解。 3. 揭示花瓶旁边的信件内容,Amy 对 June 的承诺和对未来友谊的展望。 4. 描述 June 内心的转变,她如何感受到原谅的可能,以及她对重建友谊的希望和决心。 参考答案 At the doorstep stood Amy, holding a small package. Her eyes were filled with a mixture of regret and hope. "June," she began, her voice trembling slightly, "I know I've been a terrible friend. I've taken our friendship for granted and I'm so sorry." She extended the package towards June, her hands shaking slightly. "This is for you. I hope it can be a symbol of our friendship, mended and stronger than before." Going to her room, June sat down on her bed and opened the gift. Inside was a carefully wrapped bright blue clay vase, not the original one, but one that resembled it closely. It was a replica, but with a difference – it had no cracks. June's eyes welled up with tears as she realized the meaning behind the gift. It was Amy's way of saying that their friendship could be like this new vase, whole and unbroken, if they chose to forgive and start anew. The vase was a promise, a commitment to rebuild what had been shattered. June knew then that their friendship was worth fighting for, and she was ready to give it another chance. 下水文1 At the doorstep stood Amy, holding a small package. Her face was a canvas of emotions, a blend of nervousness and determination. "June," she said softly, "I've missed you." She held out the package, a peace offering of sorts. "I've been thinking a lot about us, and I realized how much I've taken our friendship for granted. This is a small token of my apology and my wish to mend what's broken." Going to her room, June sat down on her bed and opened the gift. Nestled within the wrapping was the original blue clay vase, now carefully mended with delicate care. The cracks were still visible, but they were no longer a symbol of their broken friendship. Instead, they represented the resilience and the history of their bond. A note accompanied the vase, "Just like this vase, our friendship has its cracks, but it's still beautiful and strong. I want to be there for you, as you've always been for me." June's heart swelled with a mix of emotions, and she knew that forgiveness was the first step towards healing their friendship. 下水文2 At the doorstep stood Amy, holding a small package. Her eyes were red-rimmed, betraying the tears she had shed in the past year. "June," she said, her voice barely above a whisper, "I've been wrong. I've been so focused on myself that I forgot what truly matters." She held out the package with a trembling hand, a gesture of reconciliation. "This is for you. It's a piece of our past, and I hope it can be a part of our future." Going to her room, June sat down on her bed and opened the gift. Inside was the blue clay vase, now meticulously repaired with love and care. The cracks were still there, but they were no longer a sign of damage; they were the marks of a friendship that had been tested and had come out stronger. Alongside the vase was a letter, "June, this vase is like our friendship. It's been broken, but it's been mended. I promise to be a better friend, to cherish the bond we share, and to never take you for granted again." As June read the words, she felt a warmth in her heart, a warmth that told her that forgiveness was possible, and that their friendship could be as vibrant and enduring as the blue vase that sat before her. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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