读后续写 赛道上的温情瞬间 讲义-重庆市南开中学校2024-2025学年高三上学期开学英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Both of my parents have taught me the values of service and compassion from a young age. Growing up, they both chose service professions—my mother as a dedicated nurse and my father as a passionate teacher. They not only worked tirelessly in their respective fields but also spent their nights and weekends volunteering, emphasizing the importance of helping others in need. Their dedication and selflessness gave me a lesson that a life dedicated to serving others is one that is truly fulfilling and meaningful. Inspired by their examples, I pursued a career in medicine, becoming a physician. For the past 11 years, I have been working closely with the homeless community, providing them with much needed medical care and support. It has been a challenging yet rewarding journey, as I witness firsthand the impact I can make on improving the lives of those who are often overlooked and marginalized (被边缘化).     And my commitment to these things is the spirit that I have passed to my son. I am a proud mother to a boy who shares my enthusiasm for adventures as well as the love for others. He is an enthusiastic bike riders, and I have always encouraged him to pursue his passion while instilling (灌输) in him the values of empathy and kindness. I vividly remember his first biking race, where he fearlessly took the lead and even managed to catch some air with his daring jumps. It was an exhilarating moment for him, and I couldn’t have been prouder. However, it was the last moment in the race that surprised me that day. As the race progressed, competitors were approaching the finishing line. My son was still in the lead during the race, with the second-place rider closely behind him. Suddenly, the rider behind him crashed, flying off his bike. The sound of piercing screams filled the air. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Upon hearing this, my son stopped his bicycle and turned to look behind him. _________________________________________________________________________ In the end, my son missed the chance to win the championship. __________________________________________________________________________ 文章的大意 这篇文章讲述了作者从父母那里继承了服务和同情的价值观，并选择了医学作为职业，特别是为无家可归者提供医疗服务。作者的儿子也继承了这些价值观，他是一位热情的自行车手。在一次比赛中，尽管他领先，但在看到另一位选手摔倒后，他停下来帮助对方，展现了他的同情心和公正精神。尽管因此错过了赢得比赛的机会，但他的行为赢得了在场所有人的尊重和赞扬，证明了真正的成功不仅仅是赢得比赛，而是在过程中展现的品质和性格。 在原文中，有几处伏笔为续写部分提供了基础： 1. 父母的服务精神：文章开头提到父母都是服务行业的专业人士，他们不仅在工作时全心全意，还在业余时间做志愿者。这为作者选择服务职业和儿子展现同情心的行为埋下了伏笔。 2. 作者的职业选择：作者选择了医学职业，并为无家可归者提供服务，这表明了作者对服务和帮助他人的承诺，这为儿子在自行车比赛中展现同理心和帮助他人的行为提供了背景。 3. 儿子的自行车爱好：文章提到儿子是一个热情的自行车手，这为续写中描述的自行车比赛场景提供了直接的背景。 在续写中，这些伏笔得到了回应： 1. 儿子在比赛中的行为：儿子在比赛中停下来帮助摔倒的对手，这直接回应了父母服务精神的伏笔，展示了他继承了家庭的价值观。 2. 儿子的同情心：儿子的同情心和帮助他人的行为是对作者作为医生为无家可归者提供服务的直接回应，体现了家族价值观的传承。 3. 比赛结果与价值观的对比：儿子虽然错过了赢得比赛的机会，但他的行为赢得了尊重和赞扬，这与文章开头提到的父母服务精神和作者的职业选择相呼应，强调了价值观比胜利更重要的主题。 总的来说，续写部分通过儿子在自行车比赛中的行为，回应了原文中关于家庭价值观和服务精神的伏笔，展现了这些价值观在下一代中的传承和实践。 续写要点 第一段：儿子在比赛中的行动 - 儿子在领先的情况下，听到其他选手摔倒的声音，立即停下自行车，转身查看情况。 - 他迅速跑到摔倒的选手身边，表现出关心和同情，询问对方的状况，并提供帮助。 - 这一行为体现了他从父母那里学到的服务精神和同情心，尽管这意味着他可能会失去赢得比赛的机会。 第二段：比赛结果与价值观的体现 - 尽管儿子错过了赢得比赛的机会，但他的行动赢得了在场所有人的尊重和赞扬，包括其他家长和观众。 - 他的行为展示了真正的成功不仅仅是赢得比赛，而是在过程中展现的品质和性格，这是他从家庭中学到的价值观的体现。 - 儿子的这种自我牺牲和对他人的关怀，成为了比赛日最难忘的记忆，也向所有人展示了同情和公正比个人成就更为重要。 范文： Upon hearing this, my son stopped his bicycle and turned to look behind him. He saw the fallen rider clutching his arm in pain. Without hesitation, my son rushed over, his concern evident as he checked on the injured competitor. “Are you okay?” he asked, his voice filled with genuine worry. The other racers sped past them, focusing on the finish line, but my son remained by the fallen rider’s side. He helped him up gently and supported him as they walked together towards the finish line. Despite the pain, the injured rider managed a grateful smile. In the end, my son missed the chance to win the championship. However, witnessing this act of kindness filled me with immense pride. As we drove home that evening, I couldn’t help but reflect on how our family’s commitment to serving others had truly shaped his character. I recalled how he carefully helped the injured rider to his feet, supporting him as they made their way off the track together. His hands were steady yet gentle, his movements deliberate and comforting. It was moments like these that reaffirmed my belief in the power of leading a life dedicated to helping those in need.     下水文1 Upon hearing this, my son stopped his bicycle and turned to look behind him. Without a moment's hesitation, he dismounted and rushed to the fallen rider's side. The crowd, initially stunned by the sudden turn of events, watched in silence as my son helped the injured boy to his feet, ensuring he was not seriously hurt. He then assisted the competitor in getting back on his bike, even though it meant sacrificing his own lead. This act of sportsmanship and kindness was a testament to the values we had instilled in him, and it was a moment that will forever be etched in my memory. In the end, my son missed the chance to win the championship. However, he gained something far more valuable that day—a lesson in empathy and the understanding that victory is not just about crossing the finish line first. His actions resonated with everyone present, and he received a standing ovation for his selflessness. As we left the venue, I could see the pride in his eyes, not for the race he could have won, but for the compassion he had shown. It was a day that taught us both that the true measure of success is not always found in the results, but in the character we display along the way. 下水文2 Upon hearing this, my son stopped his bicycle and turned to look behind him. His eyes widened with concern as he saw the other rider lying on the ground, his bike several feet away. The race was momentarily forgotten as my son sprinted back, his heart racing with a new sense of urgency. Kneeling beside the fallen competitor, he gently asked if he was okay, his voice a soothing balm amidst the chaos. The other boy, wincing in pain, managed a nod, and together they waited for the medical team to arrive. In the end, my son missed the chance to win the championship. Yet, as we walked away from the race, his head held high, I knew he had won something far more significant. The other parents and spectators had applauded his bravery and sportsmanship, and his actions had become the talk of the day. More importantly, he had demonstrated that true strength is not about being the fastest or the strongest, but about having the courage to put others before oneself. That day, my son taught me that the most memorable victories are those that are built on compassion and character, leaving a lasting legacy far beyond the racetrack. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$