Unit 3 Period Five Part Ⅱ Writing An Event Description-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第一册（北师大版2019）

UNIT 3 CELEBRATIONS Part II Writing-An Event Description 答案精解P 审题谋篇 写作指导 [审题] 本单元的写作任务是描述一个事件。应注 写作要求是描述为母亲庆祝生日的事情 意以下几点: 写作时应注意以下几点: 1.写明你为什么要描述这个事件; 1.确定文体:这是一篇记叙文,写作中应注 2.写明事件发生的地点、时间,场合和人物; 意记叙文的常规格式 3.用行为动词和描述性连词把这些要素按 2.主体时态:文章应以一般过去时为主 正确的顺序排列起来; 3.主体人称:由于是描写为母亲过生日的事 4.最后描述自已的感受 情,所以人称应该以第一人称和第三人称 [常用表达 为主。 1. It was a fine day and I... [谋篇] 2. One day, I happened to do... 第一段:交代背景; 3. When I was walking in the street .. 第二段:描述庆祝生日的过程; 4. Last week, my friend and I... 第三段:表达自己的感受。 5. On my way to school, I came across.. 遣词造句 6. In the end, I succeeded in doing.. [核心词汇 7. To my relief, it.. 1.度过快乐的一天 8. From this experience: I learned that. 2.秘密地进行交谈 9. This is how I.. 3.零花钱 10. I was deeply moved by his... 4.对......惊讶 佳作构建 5.下班回家 6.因......而感谢某人 假如你是李华,上周日是你母亲的生日,你 [连词成句] 和父亲还有弟弟一起为母亲庆祝了生日。请根 1.我的父亲、弟弟和我进行了秘密地交谈。 据下面的提示,用英语把这件事描述一下。 My father, brother and I 1.上周日是母亲的五十岁生日 secretly. 2.家人都为她准备了生日礼物; 2.我们讨论了怎样庆祝母亲的生日。(疑问词十 3.父亲下厨做了好吃的饭菜; 不定式) 4.大家一起祝母亲生日快乐,感谢她为家里 We discussed 所做的一切。 3.我们到家时,看到一张桌子已经摆好了。(主 注意:1.词数80左右; 语十谓语十宾语十宾补) 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 When we got home. .99. 英语 必修 第一册 课堂学案 过(BS) 4.桌子上有很多好吃的食物。(therebe句型) 实战演练 假设你是红星中学高一的学生李华,你们学 5.我们都对她说“生日快乐!” 校举办了丰富多彩的元旦庆祝活动,请你根据图 表中的相关信息写一篇短文,给校刊《英语角》投 6.我们感谢母亲为家里所做的一切。(what宾 稿。内容包括: 语从句) 活动名称 We all thanked her for 元旦联欢晚会 时间 [句式升级] 12月30日晚上7:00~9:00 1.请把句1和句2用现在分词作伴随状语合成 地点 学校礼堂 一句话。 节目 唱歌、小游戏、京剧等 My father, brother and I had a talk secretly, 观众反应 鼓掌、欢呼等 你的感受 ..... 2.请把句3和句4用with复合结构合成一句话 When we got home, we saw a table laid 注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可适当添加细节,以使行文连贯。 3.请把句5和句6用现在分词短语作伴随状语 参考词汇:礼堂auditorium 合成一句话。 We all said"Happy Birthday!" to her. 组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再 加上联想内容,组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。 完成P课时作业(十五) 完成P.UNIT3 单元知识强基练 完成PUNIT3 题型专项强化练 , 完成P. UNIT3 综合测评 .100.4. take up 5. look ahead 6. move in 7. at the time 随堂演练 核心素养落实 8. on the way 9. over and over (again) I.单句语法填空 10. catch sb's eye 11. fall off 12. pass away 1. be told 2. down 3. as 4. selected 5. broken 13. take out 14. no longer 15. come to mind 6. had been lying 7. calmly 8. satisfied 9. out 10. trying III.经典句式 IlI.完成句子 1. what to do 2. telling him about the presents 1. foolish of her not to follow 3. followed by Christmas pudding 4. it's;that 2. have been selected 语基输入 助力语言输出 3. got broken 1. (2)as far as (3)as long as (4)as long as 4. keep/stay/ remain calm (5)as soon as 5. is nowhere to be seen 2.(2)to (3)suitable (4)to wear (5)suits (6)fit Part II Writing-An Event Description (7)matches 3.(2)are making every effort 佳作构建 (3)will spare no effort(s) (4)effortlessly 遣词造句 4.(2)himself (4)representatives (3)as 核心词汇 5.(2)unfortunate (4)Fortunately (3)to have 1. have a merry day 2. have a talk secretly (5)making a fortune 3. pocket money 4. be surprised at (5)拿起 (2)接受(3)占据(4)继续 6.(1)开始从事 5. come back from work 6. thank sh for sth 7.(2)patience (3)with (4)patiently 连词成句 8.(2)for (3)on (4)in 1. had a talk (3)down (4)into (5)into 9.(2)behind 2. how to celebrate my mother's birthday (3)to put 10. (2)to settle 3. we saw a table laid (4)to choose (5)to do 4. There were many delicious foods on the table 11. (2)It was: that (3)Was it: tha 5. We all said"Happy Birthday!"to her (4)What was it that (5)did 6. what she had done for our family 随堂演练 核心素养落实 句式升级 I.单句语法填空 1. discussing how to celebrate my mother's birthday 1. up 2. patience 3. away 4. waved 5. branches 2. with many delicious foods on it 6. an/every 7. appropriately 8. slightly 10.in 3. thanking her for what she had done for our family 9. behaviour II.完成句子 组句成篇 1. made a mess of One possible version: 2. as far as I know We had a merry day last Sunday, for it was my mother's 3. It was in this old bouse tha fiftieth birthday. 4. who to turn to for help Several days before, my father, brother and I had a talk 5. With patience and confidence secretly, discussing how to celebrate my mother's birthday. On 6. Whenever I think of festivals Sunday morning, my brother and I got up early and went to buy some flowers using our pocket money. When we got home, we Period Five Writing Workshop & saw a table laid with many delicious foods on it. My mother was Other Parts of the Unit so surprised at what she saw when she came back from work! Part I Language Points We all said "Happy Birthday!" to her, thanking her for what she had done for our family. 新知感悟 自测基础知识 I love my family and I will remember the happy day forever! I,重点单词 实战演练 1. event 2. awesome 3. downstairs 4. nowhere One Possible Version: 5. uniform 6. description;describe 7. select;selection To welcome the arrival of the New Year, our school held a 8. calm; calmly New Year's Eve party in the school auditorium from 7:oo p. m. II.核心短语 to 9:oo p. m. on Dec. 3o. We enjoyed ourselves a lot during the 1. prepare for 2. in one's seventies 3. calm dowr two hours. 4. fill . with... 5. quite a few 6. look forward to The party first began with a song, followed by various III.经典句式 performances. There were also some interesting games which 1. got dressed really lit up the atmosphere. Every one of us got really excited 2. it took auite a long time for them to calm down when some students performed Beijing Opera. They were so 语基输入 助力语言输出 skillful that we couldn't stop clapping. When the party ended. 1.(2)as (3)for (4)from (5)selection all the audience stood up and applauded. 2.(2)calmed down (3)calm yourself down The auditorium was full of applause and I did have a lot of (4)keep calm (5)calm; still; quiet: silent fun that evening. This is really an unforgettable experience. 3.(2)hurt (3)married (4)annoyed (5)separated which perfectly finished the old year and welcomed the new one. ·180·