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咨询信
A Letter of Inquiry
假定你是李华,你从网上得知某机构要在暑假期间举行到美国参观的游学活动,请你根据以下要点给该机构写一封咨询信。内容包括:
1. 参观哪些城市及大学;
2. 除了参观之外,还有哪些活动;
3. 花费(包括住宿和机票)是多少。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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Answer the questions.
(2)cities and universities we will visit; activities
1.What is our writing task?
2.How about the type,
person and tense?
3.Who are you? Who are you writing to?
4.How is your relationship between you and addressee? close?
5.Does the addressee know you?
inquire about a study tour program
Li Hua
Dear Sir/Madam
2.Make points and fill in the four squares.
formal
self-introduction
(1)
(3)
(4)
self-introduction
background
the writing purpose
cost: including the airplane tickets and accommodation
expect a reply; express appreciation
self-introduction, background,
the writing purpose
inquire about a study tour program
Li Hua
Dear Sir/Madam,
cities and universities we will visit; activities
cost: including the airplane tickets and accommodation
expect a reply; express appreciation
我对你们在网上公布的教育旅行计划很感兴趣,我写信是想知道你们是否能提供有关这方面的信息。
I’m interested in your program of the educational travel posted on the Internet and I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding/about it.
the program of the educational travel
provide me with information regarding/about
自我介绍、背景信息、写信目的
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self-introduction, background,
the writing purpose
inquire about a study tour program
Li Hua
Dear Sir/Madam,
(2)cities and universities we will visit; activities
cost: including the airplane tickets accommodation
expect a reply; express appreciation
参观哪些城市及大学?
除了参观之外,还有哪些活动?
1.I wonder if you could provide some specific information about..
2.It seems unclear to me that(where/how…) …
First of all, I’m eager to know which cities and which universities we will pay a visit to during the period.
另外,您能告诉我除了参观外我们还将参加哪些活动吗?
In addition, could you tell me what activities we will participate in apart from visits?
self-introduction, background,
the writing purpose
inquire about a study tour
Li Hua
Dear Sir/Madam,
(2)cities and universities we will visit;activities
cost: including the airplane tickets and accommodation
expect a reply; express appreciation
花费(包括住宿和机票)是多少
1.Considering ..., I’m truly concerned about ...
2.I sincerely expect to get informed of details on ... to ensure ... in advance.
3.I wonder if it is convenient for you to inform me of sth
I wonder if it is convenient for you to inform me of the fees including flight tickets and accommodation.
机票:the airplane tickets /flight tickets
住宿accommodation
self-introduction, background,
the writing purpose
inquire about a study tour program
Li Hua
Dear Sir/Madam,
(2)cities and universities we will visit; activities
cost: including the airplane tickets and accommodation
expect a reply; express appreciation
self-introduction, background,
the writing purpose
inquire about a study tour program
Li Hua
Dear Sir/Madam,
cities and universities we will visit; activities
expect a reply; express appreciation
I would appreciate it if you could reply me at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your attention.
cost: including the airplane tickets and accommodation
小组自评 小组互评 师生共同评价
小组自评:square1.共计5分,self-introduction(1分), background(2分), the writing purpose(2分)
小组互评:square2. 共计10分, cities and universities(5分),activities(5分)
小组互评:Square3 共计5分,fees.
师生共同评价:Square 4 共计5分,表达感谢,希望早日得到回复。
展示与评价
inquire about a study tour program
Li Hua
Dear Sir/Madam,
Considering my limited budget, I am truly concerned about the whole cost of this educational travel including the airplane tickets and accommodation.
I would appreciate it if you could reply me at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your attention.
I’m Li Hua, a Senior 3 student.
After seeing your advertisement on the Internet, I would like to inquire some detailed information on your program of the educational travel.
First of all, I’m eager to know which cities and which universities we will pay a visit to during the period. In addition, Could you please tell me what activities we will participate in apart from visits?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. I’m interested in your program of the educational travel posted on the Internet and I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information about it.
First of all, I’m eager to know which cities and which universities we will pay a visit to during the period. Could you tell me what activities we will participate in apart from visits? What’s more, Considering my limited budget, I am truly concerned about the whole cost of this educational travel including the airplane tickets and accommodation.
I would appreciate it if you could reply me at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your attention.
Yours,
Li Hua
self-introduction, background,
the writing purpose
inquire about a study tour program
Li Hua
Dear Sir/Madam,
cities and universities we will visit; activities
cost: including the airplane tickets and accommodation
expect a reply; express appreciation
分段线
咨询信
自我介绍
背景信息
写信目的
Basic Structure
咨询内容
期待回复+表达谢意
假定你是李华,你从网上得知某机构要在暑假期间举行到美国参观的游学活动,请你根据以下要点给该机构写一封咨询信。内容包括:
1. 参观哪些城市及大学;
2. 除了参观之外,还有哪些活动;
3. 花费(包括住宿和机票)是多少。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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