内容正文:
高考英语写作提升训练:应用文之短文投稿
任务呈现
某英文网站正在举办以“My favourite female scientist”为题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。
注意:词数100左右
写作步骤
一、任务分析
1. 审题:确定文章的人称和时态
本题要求写一篇短文介绍自己最喜欢的女科学家,故人称以第三人称为主;时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
2. 确定文章结构
该短文可以分为三段。
第一段:表明自己最喜欢的女科学家是谁;
第二段:对其进行简要介绍;
第三段:说明我们可以学习她的一些什么品质。
二、词语、句子罗列
1. 词语
(1) brilliant female scientists 杰出的女科学家
(2) have a deep love for … 深深喜欢……
(3) a natural curiosity about … 对……有天生的好奇
(4) be best known for … 因……而闻名
(5) establish a camp 建立营地
(6) be based on … 以……为基础
(7) correct misunderstandings 纠正误解
(8) due to 由于
(9) win honors 赢得荣誉
(10) play a significant role in … 在……中起关键作用
2. 句子
(1) 珍妮•古道尔1934年出生于英国,她从小就非常喜欢动物,对动物行为有着天生的好奇。
Jane Goodall was born in England in 1934 and she had a deep love for animals and a natural curiosity about animal behaviour from an early age.
Born in England in 1934, Jane Goodall had a deep love for animals and a natural curiosity about animal behaviour from an early age.
(2) 作为一名动物行为学家,珍妮•古道尔因其自1960年在坦桑尼亚建立营地以来对黑猩猩的特别详尽和长期的研究而闻名。
As an ethologist, Jane Goodall is best known/famous for her exceptionally detailed and long-term research on chimpanzees since she established a camp in Tanzania in 1960.
(3) 基于她的研究,古道尔纠正了一些关于黑猩猩的误解,并写了一些关于动物的书籍和文章。
Based on/On the basis of her research, Goodall corrected a number of misunderstandings about chimpanzees and wrote a number of books and articles about animals.
(4) 由于对野生动物保护的巨大贡献,她获得了许多荣誉。
Due to/Because of her great contribution to wildlife protection, she has won a lot of honors.
三、范文(扩充要点,连句成文)
My favourite female scientist
Among numerous brilliant female scientists in the world, Jane Goodall is my favourite. Born in England in 1934, Jane Goodall had a deep love for animals and a natural curiosity about animal behaviour from an early age. As an ethologist, Jane Goodall is best known for her exceptionally detailed and long-term research on chimpanzees since she established a camp in Tanzania in 1960. Based on her research, Goodall corrected a number of misunderstandings about chimpanzees and wrote a number of books and articles about animals. Due to her great contribution to wildlife protection, she has won a lot of honors.
In my opinion, we should learn from her passion and persistence, which plays a significant role in our success.
知识储备
人物描写句式
●Born in …, he was a great …, who …
●…, (who is) an outstanding scientist, was born …
●When he was a boy, he showed great interest in …
●Being poor, he had to leave school at the age of ...
●As a teacher, she is kind, patient and helpful, so all of us like her.
●He is considered to be one of the great scientists.
●He was confident enough to solve different problems by himself.
●With his hard work, he once won …
●As a warm-hearted person, he always does everything in his power to help those who are in need.
●He devoted himself to scientific research and made great contributions to his country.
●He will be remembered for his contributions to …
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