Unit1 Section Ⅳ Writing(Word教参)-【精讲精练】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第三册（译林版2020）

Section Ⅳ　Writing 写一篇关于旅行的计划 本单元写作要求为写一篇关于旅行计划的邮件。要求对旅行的地点、时间和出行方式等进行准确的描述，注意描述的重点和顺序。 一、写作常用词汇 1．destination n.　目的地 2．take a tour　游览 3．set out/off　出发 4．a seven­day trip　七日游 5．enjoy the scenery　欣赏风景 6. leave for　动身去某地 二、写作常用句式 1．I'm writing to tell you something about my travel plan. 我写信是想告诉你我的旅行计划。 2．I have an exciting travelling plan to share with you. 我想和你分享一个令人兴奋的旅行计划。 3．The May Day is coming/approaching, and I am going to travel to Shanghai to see its beautiful scenery. 五一就要到了，我要去上海旅游，看看它的美丽风景。 4．We'll be leaving at 8：00 in the morning and a school bus is available for us at the school gate. 我们将在早上八点离开，校车将在校门口等候我们。 5．I'm planning to go there by train and come back by bus. 我计划乘火车去那儿，乘公共汽车回来。 6．I think it is a wise choice to travel during winter as the air fare is cheaper. 我认为冬天旅行是个明智的选择，因为飞机票更便宜。 7．Would you like to join me? 你想和我一起去吗？ 8．Looking forward to your early reply. 期待你尽快回复。 假定你是李华，寒假即将来临，你打算和父母去上海游玩。请给你的好友Mary写一封邮件，分享你的出行计划。要点如下： 1．1月21日下午2点左右从济南乘高铁去上海，到达后入住预订酒店，休息一晚； 2．第二天上午参观上海科技馆，下午登上东方明珠塔，欣赏上海全貌； 3．1月23日乘高铁返回。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：高铁high­speed railway；上海科技馆Shanghai Science and Technology Museum；东方明珠塔the Oriental Pearl Tower [审题谋篇] 审题 审人称：第一人称为主 审时态：一般将来时为主 谋篇 1．确定写作主题：介绍旅行计划； 2．确定写作要点：旅行的目的地、出发及返回时间、出行方式、旅行景点等； 3．确定常用的表达方式：定语从句； 4．确定前后逻辑的衔接； 5．注意细节，如拼写、标点符号或句式结构等。 语言 要注意逻辑顺序 [核心词汇] 1．book vt.　预约；预订 2．share sth with sb　和某人分享某事 3．set off from...for...　从……动身去…… 4．in advance　提前 5．enjoy the whole view of...　欣赏……的全景 [主要句式] 1．我写信是想和你分享我的旅行计划。 I'm writing to share my travel plan with you. 2．我将和父母去上海进行三天的旅行。 I will have a three­day trip to Shanghai with my parents. 3．我们将于1月21日下午2点左右乘高铁从济南动身去上海。 We will set off from Jinan for Shanghai by the high­speed railway at 2：00 pm on 21 January. 4．一到达上海，我们将入住一家酒店。 Upon arriving in Shanghai, we will live in a hotel. 5．我们已经提前在网上预订了这个酒店。 We have booked the hotel online in advance. 6．我们将在下午登上东方明珠塔，在那里欣赏上海的全景。 We will climb up the Oriental Pearl Tower in the afternoon, and we will enjoy the whole view of Shanghai there. [句式升级] 7．句4和句5合并为含有定语从句的句子。 Upon arriving in Shanghai, we will live in the hotel that we have booked online in advance. 8．句6改为含有“介词＋关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句的句子。 We will climb up the Oriental Pearl Tower in the afternoon, from where we will enjoy the whole view of Shanghai. [衔接成篇] Dear Mary， How is everything going? I'm writing to share my travel plan with you. I will have a three­day trip to Shanghai with my parents. We will set off from Jinan for Shanghai by the high­speed railway at 2: 00 pm on 21 January. Upon arriving in Shanghai, we will live in the hotel that we have booked online in advance. On the second day, we will visit Shanghai Science and Technology Museum in the morning. Besides, we will climb up the Oriental Pearl Tower in the afternoon, from where we will enjoy the whole view of Shanghai. On 23 January, we will take the high­speed railway back. How about the plan for your winter holiday? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua 假定你是Tom，你打算今年10月份来中国旅游，请写一封邮件告诉你的中国笔友李华你的旅行计划，并征求他的建议。 第一站：北京 长城the Great Wall 紫禁城the Forbidden City 第二站：山东 泰山Mount Tai 第三站：杭州 西湖the West Lake 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Li Hua， Yours， Tom 【参考范文】 Dear Li Hua，　 I'm glad to tell you that I'm going to visit China in October. First, I'll visit Beijing, where I am looking forward to enjoying the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and some beautiful parks. Then I intend to go to visit Mount Tai in Shandong Province. I've heard that it is one of the most famous mountains in China and I can't wait to enjoy the amazing sunrise there. After that, I am also going to visit Hangzhou. It is said that it is a beautiful modern city with breathtaking natural sights, among which the West Lake is a well­known tourist attraction. What do you think of my travel plan? Would you please be my guide? I'm looking forward to your early reply. 　Yours，　 　Tom　 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$