UNIT 5 Education Section Ⅶ Writing—A Picture Description(Word教参)-【精讲精练】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第二册（北师大版2019）

Section Ⅶ　Writing—A Picture Description 图画式作文，是一种常见的题型。它是指根据图画所提供的信息写一篇短文，或叙述一件事，或通过几幅相关的图画说明某个问题或得出某个结论。 课文展示 写作手法 ①When I first look at this picture, it seems to be just a pretty simple drawing of a man in a garden.②However, when looking at it more closely, I see something interesting. ③In the picture, a man is wearing a hat and an apron, and is carrying an umbrella because it is raining heavily.He has his back turned to us.We can see he is in his garden, for he is watering the flowers with a watering can.The drawing is entitled “It's Time to Water the Flowers”． ④This implies that this man obviously loves routines (and his flowers), and probably waters his flowers every day at the same time.He is doing this even though it is raining heavily.However, the plants don't need the extra water he is providing.He is not seeing the obvious, but is just going through the motions without thinking. ⑤The overall message we can take from this picture is that it is important to have routines and timetables, as they can help us stay organised, but sometimes routines can control us, rather than us controlling the routines.It is important not to become too preoccupied with routines and schedules, because they can make us blind to what is in front of us.Sometimes we need to be flexible and adapt to changing circumstances. 【文章结构】 ①初看之印象，先抑； ②使用转折词，后扬； ③图片描写，重在表面意义，为下一段的描写作铺垫； ④图片隐含意义的描写； ⑤总结图片意义，升华主题。 【常用语句】 1．精彩开头语 ①The picture briefs the history of commercial fishing in the 20th century.这幅图简要介绍了20世纪商业捕鱼的历史。 ②In the picture，an American girl looks so pleased in the richly decorated Chinese national costumes.照片中，一个美国女孩穿着装饰华丽的中国民族服装，看起来非常高兴。 ③Looking at the picture，many people cannot help laughing. 看着这张照片，许多人忍不住笑了起来。 ④ It is not unusual for Chinese children to get money from their parents，grandparents or relatives during the Spring Festival.This is what the picture indicates. 春节期间，中国孩子从父母、祖父母或亲戚那里得到钱是很平常的。这就是图片所显示的。 ⑤As can be seen from the picture，the car stops on the way and cannot move any further. 从图中可以看出，汽车在路上停了下来，不能再往前移动了。 ⑥It is most likely that by drawing the pictures，the artist intends not only to tell us the story of fish but also to set us thinking more about nature.画家很可能不仅想通过画这些画给我们讲鱼的故事，而且想让我们更多地思考自然。 2．精彩结尾语 ①It is time that we should take measures to solve this problem.该是我们采取措施解决问题的时候了。 ②Only in this way can we solve this problem. 只有这种办法才能解决这个问题。 ③There is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of...毫无疑问，对……问题应予以特别关注。 ④The most effective means to solve this problem is that... 解决这个问题最有效的方法是…… ⑤Taking into account all of these factors，we may reach the conclusion that...将所有的因素考虑进来，我们将得到……的结论。 [注意事项] 此类题型的体裁比较广泛，可以是记叙文，将图画中所表达的信息完整地记录下来；也可以是说明文，根据图画从时间、过程、步骤等方面对之加以解释、说明；还可以是议论文，针对图画中所表现出来的一般现象，加以议论，得出结论，提出解决问题的最佳办法。 请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以“Opportunities Favour the Prepared Mind”为题，用英语写一篇作文。 1．简要描述两幅图的内容； 2．概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解； 3．举例说明两幅图对你的启示。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [谋篇布局] 体裁 图画作文 人称 第三人称为主 时态 一般现在时为主 框架 第一段：描述图画中的信息和表达的含义 第二段：具体分析图画的内容 第三段：发表评论并得出启示 [完成句子] 1．在图1中，一个人正在梦想一个光明的未来，但没有任何行动。 In Picture 1，a man is dreaming of opportunities for a bright future，but without any action. 2．图2显示的是另一个人致力于他的学习，做好充分的准备。 Picture 2 shows that another man devotes himself to his study to get fully prepared. 3．这两个人的区别只在于对待机会的方式。 The difference between the two men lies only in the way each treats opportunities. 4．成功的人总是做好充分的准备来抓住机会。 Successful people always make adequate preparations to seize opportunities. 5．人们普遍认为没有行动和努力我们将一事无成。 People generally believe that we would accomplish nothing without actions and efforts. [句式升级] 6．用while连接句1和句2 In Picture 1，a man is dreaming of opportunities for a bright future，but without any action，while Picture 2 shows another man devotes himself to his study to get fully prepared. 7．升级句5 It's universally acknowledged that we would accomplish nothing without actions and efforts. [连句成篇] Opportunities Favour the Prepared Mind The two pictures reveal two men who take completely different attitudes to building a bright future.In Picture 1，a man is dreaming of opportunities for a bright future，but without any action，while Picture 2 shows another man devotes himself to his study to get fully prepared. The message conveyed here is clear：Opportunities favour the prepared mind.The difference between the two men lies only in the way each treats opportunities.Successful people always make adequate preparations to seize opportunities.Unsuccessful people，on the other hand，work little and just wait，seeing opportunities pass by. Therefore，we should spare no effort to fulfill our dreams.It's universally acknowledged that we would accomplish nothing without actions and efforts. (2024·全国甲卷)英语课要求做课堂展示，请你根据所给图片，以Development of Transport in China 为题写一篇发言稿。 注意：1.写作词数应为100左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Development of Transport in China From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport，Chinese transport has an enormous development. 【参考范文】 Development of Transport in China From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport，Chinese transport has an enormous development.Today I'd like to focus on some major developments，which include shared bicycles，high­speed trains and new energy vehicles(非限制性定语从句)． As we all know，changes in transportation will bring great changes to people's lives.Shared bicycles provide a convenient and environmentally friendly (环保的) means of transport for short trips.Besides，China's high­speed railway network has connected various cities effectively，greatly saving travel time and promoting economic development (现在分词短语作结果状语)．Currently，advanced new energy vehicles have entered our lives (走进我们的生活)，helping reduce air pollution. These developments in transportation have raised our quality of life (提高我们的生活质量) and showed the power of science.Therefore，we need to study hard and make a contribution (做贡献) to the further development of transportation. Thank you for your listening！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$