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(一)
(2024四川乐山统考一模)你校正以“高中生时间管理”为主题,举办英语征文活动。请你
写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.时间管理的原因:
2.管理时间的做法:
3.号召大家管理好时间。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.题目已为你写好。
Manage Our Time
(二)
(2024年湖南省邵阳市高三第三次联考)假定你是李华,你校英文报专栏节目oices of
Youth就是否在校内成立心理健康俱乐部(Mental Health Club)征询学生的意见。请你给该
栏目编辑写一封邮件。
内容包括:1.你的观点:
2.你的理由(至少两条)。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答趣卡的相应位置作答。
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I'm Li Hua,a student of Class 1.
Yours sincerely.
Li Hua
(三)
(2024高三TOP二十名校质检)假定你是李华,得知你的交换生同学Amanda今年将第一
次在中国过春节。请你给她发一封电子邮件,邀请她到你家做客。内容包括:
1.表示欢迎:
2.发出邀请:
3.期待回复。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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How are you doing?
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(四)
(2024新课标全国I卷)假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英
国朋友Chis写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
(1)你完成的作品;
(2)你的感想。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右:
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris.
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
Yours,
Li Hua
(五)
(2024新课标全国Ⅱ卷)假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英
国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
(1)你完成的作品:
(2)你的感想。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右:
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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Dear Chris.
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
Yours,
Li Hua
(六)
(2024全国甲卷)英语课要求做课堂展示.请你根据所给图片,以Development of Transport
in China为题写一篇发言稿。
shared bicyele
high-speed tnin
new energy vehicle
注意
1.词数100左右
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport,Chinese transport has an
enormous development.
(七)
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刊三周年之际征集读者意见。请你给外教主编Peter写封信,内容主要包括:
1指出校报不足;
2提出改进措施。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
Yours.
Li Hua
(八)
(2023河南郑州校联考模拟预测)高中三年即将结束,回顿丰富多彩的校园生活,哪一次
校园活动给你留下了美好而深刻的印象呢?请你以“The Most Impressive School Activity”为
题,根据以下提示写一篇短文,向校刊投稿。
内容包括:
1.介绍活动过程
2.分享个人感受。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
The Most Impressive School Activity
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(2023北京平谷·统考一模)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jm听说直播
购物(Iivc-stream shopping)在中国很流行,发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件,
内容包括:
1.你是否通过直播进行过购物:
2你对直播购物的看法或感受。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
(十)
(2023广东广州·高三执信中学校考开学考试)你校的体有节刚刚结束。请给学校英语报写
一篇报道,报道体育节的主要活动、精彩瞬间及意义。
注意
1.词数100词左右:
2.可以通当增加细节,使文连贯:
3.报道的开头已为你写好,不入词数。
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参考词汇:开幕式opening ceremony项月item
(十一)
(2023黑龙江哈尔滨哈九中校考二模)为了帮助学生解决学习和生活困难,你校最近新成
立了青少年互助中心(Teenagers Help Center)。假定你是校英文报记者李华,请你在校英文报
上为它写一篇宣传稿,呼吁有需要的同学加入。
注意:1.词数80左右:
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Hand in Hand,Heart to Heart
(十二)
(2023湖北武汉·湖北省武昌实验中学校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,校英语学习俱乐部负
责人。你们邀请到了Smith教授在线作主题为How to Write and Enjoy Poems'”专题讲座。请
你在讲座前作简要发言,内容包括:
1.表示感谢:
2.相关介绍:
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3对听众的要求。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
That's all,thank you.
(十三)
(2023广东·华南师大附中校考三模)你是高中学生李华,你的英国朋友Aa计划明年夏
天高中毕业后来中国游玩,准各提前学一点汉语。她来emal询问你关于汉语学习的建议。
请给Anna回信,主要内容包括:
1学习难点:
2.方法建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Anna,
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(十四)
假定你是校英文报《先锋》(Pioneer).编辑,受你校学生会委托撰写一份以珍爱湿地(Treasure
Wetland)为主题的海报设计大赛通知。内容包括:1.大赛目的;2.作品要求;3.参赛方式
等。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:2.可适当补充细节,使行文流畅。
(十五)
假如你是李华,上周你校新开设了劳动体验课。请给你的留学生朋友Allen写一封邮件邀请
他同去体验。内容包括:
1.介绍课程内容:
2.表达邀请。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答趣卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Allen,
Yours.
Li Hua
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(一)
(2024·四川乐山·统考一模)你校正以“高中生时间管理”为主题,举办英语征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 时间管理的原因;
2. 管理时间的做法;
3. 号召大家管理好时间。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 题目已为你写好。
Manage Our Time
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】 Manage Our Time
As senior high students, we are on busy schedules every day, burdened with heavy study and involved in various after-school activities. Therefore, time management seems essential, without which work delay and study stress will be inevitable.
So how to plan it successfully? Making a to-do list is on top recommendation. List things we’re going to do and plan the time taken up by each task, and things will be done accordingly. Second, do one thing at a time. Concentration guarantees efficiency and the former task’s accomplishment usually helps the next go smoothly.
That’s why I strongly recommend time management: with which I believe we can live our senior high life to its fullest.
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生写一篇以“高中生时间管理”为主题的文章参加学校举办的英语征文活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
日常安排:schedule→daily plan
参加:be involved in→participate in
因此:therefore→so
根本的:essential→basic
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As senior high students, we are on busy schedules every day, burdened with heavy study and involved in various after-school activities.
拓展句:As senior high students, who are burdened with heavy study and involved in various after-school activities, we are on busy schedules every day.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Therefore, time management seems essential, without which work delay and study stress will be inevitable.(由 without which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】List things we’re going to do and plan the time taken up by each task, and things will be done accordingly.(由省略关系代词that引导的定语从句)
(二)
(2024年湖南省邵阳市高三第三次联考)假定你是李华,你校英文报专栏节目 Voices of Youth 就是否在校内成立心理健康俱乐部(Mental Health Club)征询学生的意见。请你给该栏目编辑写一封邮件。
内容包括:1.你的观点;
2.你的理由(至少两条)。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear editor,
I'm Li Hua, a student of Class 1.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear editor,
I'm Li Hua, a student of Class 1. In today's competitive world, it's not unusual for young people to suffer from mental problems. So I am fully in favor of establishing a Mental Health Club in our school.
For one thing, it provides a safe and supportive environment for us students to pour out our hearts freely. For another, in the club, we can gain professional guidance on how to cope with stress,emotions and relationships with others, which will in turn improve our well-being. Furthermore, a Mental Health Club will help foster a culture of understanding and break down the invisible prejudice against mental problems.
Personally,I think mental health is of equal importance to academic record. Hope that the Mental Health Club will be set up as early as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【语篇导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,你校英文报专栏节目Voices of Youth 就是否在校内成立心理健康俱乐部(Mental Health Club)征询学生的意见。请给该栏目编辑写一封邮件。
[高分句型]1.In today's competitive world, it's not unusual for young people to suffer from mental problems.(运用了it作形式主语)
[高分句型]2.For another,in the club, we can gain professional guidance on how to cope with stress,emotions and relationships with others, which will in turn improve our well-being.(运用了“疑问词+不定式”固定结构作宾语,which引导非限制性定语从句)
(三)
(2024高三TOP二十名校质检)假定你是李华,得知你的交换生同学Amanda今年将第一次在中国过春节。请你给她发一封电子邮件,邀请她到你家做客。内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.发出邀请;
3.期待回复。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Amanda,
How are you doing?
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Amanda,
How are you doing? Knowing that you will spend the Spring Festival in China, I'd like to extend a warm welcome to you.
As far as I know, you will celebrate the traditional Chinese festival here for the first time,which may leave you slightly confused. Since where you live is not far from my home, it would be a great pleasure for me to have you as the distinguished guest of our family. If you come, I can introduce various customs about the festival to you.
I'd be more than glad if you could accept my invitation. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(四)
(2024新课标全国Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
(1)你完成的作品;
(2)你的感想。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.
In a word, It was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信, 分享在公园上美术课的经历。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
决定:decide→determine
整个的:entire→whole
提供:offer→provide
总之:in a word→in short
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
拓展句:Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, which was surrounded by blooming flowers.
【点睛】[高分句型1]We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. (that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.(as引导的时间状语从句)
(五)
(2024新课标全国Ⅱ卷)假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
(1)你完成的作品;
(2)你的感想。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.
In a word, It was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信, 分享在公园上美术课的经历。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
决定:decide→determine
整个的:entire→whole
提供:offer→provide
总之:in a word→in short
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
拓展句:Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, which was surrounded by blooming flowers.
【点睛】[高分句型1]We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. (that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.(as引导的时间状语从句)
(六)
(2024全国甲卷)英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development. Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.
Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times, making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.
In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片,以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇激活
提供:offer→provide
极大地:dramatically→tremendously
减少:reduce→decrease
总之:in short→in a nutshell
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips.
拓展句:Firstly, shared bicycles, which offer an affordable and green alternative for short trips have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
(七)
(2023·广西南宁·南宁三中校考一模)假定你是李华,你所喜爱的Students’ Space校报在创刊三周年之际征集读者意见。请你给外教主编Peter写封信,内容主要包括:
1.指出校报不足;
2.提出改进措施。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I hope this letter finds you well. It’s my pleasure to contribute to the 3rd anniversary edition of the Students’ Space by sharing a few thoughts on how we can improve the newspaper.
Firstly, I believe the content of the paper could be more diverse. Secondly, I suggest improving the readability of the paper. Lastly, I propose that we increase the frequency of the paper to twice a month.
Thank you for considering my suggestions. I look forward to reading a more diverse, readable, and informative Students’ Space in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,你所喜爱的Students’ Space校报在创刊三周年之际征集读者意见。请你给外教主编Peter写封信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggest→advise
提议:propose→make a proposal
考虑:consider→take...into account
认为:believe→hold the belief that
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Thank you for considering my suggestions.
拓展句:I’d appreciate it if you can consider my suggestions.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It’s my pleasure to contribute to the 3rd anniversary edition of the Students’ Space by sharing a few thoughts on how we can improve the newspaper. (运用了how引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Lastly, I propose that we increase the frequency of the paper to twice a month. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
(八)
(2023·河南郑州·校联考模拟预测)高中三年即将结束,回顾丰富多彩的校园生活,哪一次校园活动给你留下了美好而深刻的印象呢?请你以“The Most Impressive School Activity”为题,根据以下提示写一篇短文,向校刊投稿。
内容包括:
1. 介绍活动过程;
2. 分享个人感受。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右。
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
The Most Impressive School Activity
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【答案】One possible version:
It’s hard to believe that I am so close to reaching the end of high school. Looking back, I find the past days has witnessed plenty of memorable activities. However, the one that stuck me as the most impressive was the coming-of-age ceremony.
To honor the students who had turned 18, a grand ceremony was held in the 2nd term of the senior year. We students, wearing traditional dress, gathered at the stadium as scheduled. First, our principal sincerely extended her congratulations on us becoming a grown-up. Then followed the Confucian-style coming-of-age ceremonies-Ji Li (for girls) and Guan Li (for boys). Finally, we made a solemn vow to shoulder the responsibilities of an adult, which was definitely the highlight.
Personally, the ceremony exerted a profound influence on us students. Not only did it fully expose us to traditional Chinese culture, but it motivated us to embrace the new identity and live up to our promise.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。高中三年即将结束,回顾丰富多彩的校园生活,哪一次校园活动给你留下了美好而深刻的印象呢?请你以“The Most Impressive School Activity”为题,根据以下提示写一篇短文,向校刊投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举行:hold→host
学期:term→semester
难忘的:memorable→unforgettable
传统的:traditional→conventional
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We students, wearing traditional dress, gathered at the stadium as scheduled.
拓展句:We students, who worn traditional dress, gathered at the stadium as scheduled.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It’s hard to believe that I am so close to reaching the end of high school. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Not only did it fully expose us to traditional Chinese culture, but it motivated us to embrace the new identity and live up to our promise. (运用了部分倒装)
(九)
(2023·北京平谷·统考一模)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim听说直播购物(live-stream shopping)在中国很流行,发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.你是否通过直播进行过购物;
2.你对直播购物的看法或感受。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible version
Dear Jim,
You’re quite right about live-stream shopping being popular in China. I’d like to share something about it with you.
I often buy things through live-stream shopping. For me, purchasing products through livestreaming has already become a habit. Firstly, it’s a more time-saving alternative than going to malls. Besides, the broadcasts enable us to communicate with the seller face-to-face, which is an advantage over only browsing the introduction pages. It’s just like shopping in the real stores. Third, it enables consumers to have a more intuitive and comprehensive understanding of the products. More importantly, it has also created millions of jobs and boosted E-commerce and express industry.
How about your live-stream shopping in Britain? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假如你是李华,你的英国好友Jim听说直播购物(live-stream shopping)在中国很流行,发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:你是否通过直播进行过购物;你对直播购物的看法或感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择:alternative→option/choice
此外:Besides→In addition
使能够:enable→capacitate
全面的:comprehensive→overall
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I often buy things through live-stream shopping.
拓展句:I often buy things through live-stream shopping, which has many benefits.
【点睛】[高分句型1] For me, purchasing products through livestreaming has already become a habit. (运用了动名词作主语)
[高分句型2] Besides, the broadcasts enable us to communicate with the seller face-to-face, which is an advantage over only browsing the introduction pages.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(十)
(2023·广东广州·高三执信中学校考开学考试)你校的体育节刚刚结束。请给学校英语报写一篇报道,报道体育节的主要活动、精彩瞬间及意义。
注意
1.词数100词左右;
2.可以通当增加细节,使文连贯;
3.报道的开头已为你写好,不入词数。
参考词汇:开幕式 opening ceremony 项目 item
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【答案】
The school sports carnival, which took place last Friday and Saturday, was a great success. The crowds cheer on their classmates who took part in more than 10 exciting events.
The carnival started with an opening ceremony which included a student athlete march and dance performance by our school’s street dance club. This was followed by the events themselves. Among the many great performances was Li Hua’s win in the 1500-metre running race and QiQi’s dominant victory in the girls 100-metre race. Perhaps the biggest cheer of the meet was for the students when they defeated the teachers in the tug-of-war competition.
After its conclusion, many students said they love the sports meet as it provided them with an opportunity to relax, demonstrate their sports abilities and build friendship and school spirit among the students.
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生用英语写一篇报道,报道体育节的主要活动、精彩瞬间及意义。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:提纲类作文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般过去时。
结构:总分法
要求:报道体育节的主要活动、精彩瞬间及意义。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
take place;cheer on;take part in;dominant;defeat;demonstrate
第三步:连词成句
1. The school sports carnival, which took place last Friday and Saturday, was a great success.
2. The crowds cheer on their classmates who took part in more than 10 exciting events.
3. The carnival started with an opening ceremony which included a student athlete march and dance performance by our school’s street dance club.
4. This was followed by the events themselves.
5. Among the many great performances was Li Hua’s win in the 1500-metre running race and QiQi’s dominant victory in the girls 100-metre race.
6. Perhaps the biggest cheer of the meet was for the students when they defeated the teachers in the tug-of-war competition.
7. After its conclusion, many students said they love the sports meet as it provided them with an opportunity to relax, demonstrate their sports abilities and build friendship and school spirit among the students.
第四步:连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】文章结构合理,思路清晰,使用了恰当的连接词及词组使行文连贯,如“which,who,after”,也运用了一些高级词汇和表达,如“take place;cheer on;take part in;dominant;defeat;demonstrate”以及定语从句、状语从句等,增加了文章的亮点,体现了学生较高的英语学科素养。
(十一)
(2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈九中校考二模)为了帮助学生解决学习和生活困难,你校最近新成立了青少年互助中心(Teenagers Help Center)。假定你是校英文报记者李华,请你在校英文报上为它写一篇宣传稿,呼吁有需要的同学加入。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Hand in Hand, Heart to Heart
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【答案】 Hand in Hand, Heart to Heart
Aimed at relieving students’ mental stress and helping solve some problems we are faced with, our Teenagers Help Center has been set up recently.
Generally, there will be a sharing session, various interpersonal activities and some interesting games, which can help us know each other better, improve our relationship with others and refresh ourselves. Meanwhile, we can gradually find a way to maintain the balance between our study and our life. These activities and games are scheduled for Friday from 4 p.m. on the second floor of the Student Center.
If you have any interest in this center, don’t hesitate to join it. You won’t be disappointed!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。假定你是校英文报记者李华,你校最近新成立了青少年互助中心(Teenagers Help Center),请你在校英文报上为它写一篇宣传稿,呼吁有需要的同学加入。
【详解】1.词汇积累
解决:solve →address
建立:set up →establish
各种各样的:various →a variety of
同时:meanwhile →at the same time
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Aimed at relieving students’ mental stress and helping solve some problems we are faced with, our Teenagers Help Center has been set up recently.
拓展句:Our Teenagers Help Center has been set up recently, whose aim is to relieve students’ mental stress and help solve some problems we are faced with.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Generally, there will be a sharing session, various interpersonal activities and some interesting games, which can help us know each other better, improve our relationship with others and refresh ourselves. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] If you have any interest in this center, don’t hesitate to join it. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
(十二)
(2023·湖北武汉·湖北省武昌实验中学校考模拟预测)假定你是李华,校英语学习俱乐部负责人。你们邀请到了Smith教授在线作主题为“How to Write and Enjoy Poems”专题讲座。请你在讲座前作简要发言,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.相关介绍;
3.对听众的要求。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
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That’s all, thank you.
【答案】
Dear fellow students,
We feel honored, and wish to express our heartfelt appreciation to Professor Smith for his graciously agreeing to give us this online lecture on “How to Write and Enjoy Poems”. So let’s show our warm welcome!
Prof. Smith is a well-known poet, and he will illustrate the connotations of poems in structure, imagery, and rhyme by sharing his own poems. Thus, it is a great opportunity to improve our writing procedures and skills and I am sure it will be of significant benefit to us all.
I hope all in attendance will participate positively and follow his instructions as requested. You may also take notes if necessary. There will be a five-minute question-and-answer session following the lecture, which will allow you an opportunity to ask questions and actively participate in the discussion.
That’s all, thank you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生在Smith教授的主题为“How to Write and Enjoy Poems”的专题讲座前作简要发言,内容包括:1.表示感谢;2.相关介绍;3.对听众的要求。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:express→convey
因此:thus→hence
机会:opportunity→chance
确定的:sure→certain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We feel honored, and wish to express our heartfelt appreciation to Professor Smith for his graciously agreeing to give us this online lecture on “How to Write and Enjoy Poems”.
拓展句:We feel honored, and wish to express our heartfelt appreciation to Professor Smith for his graciously agreeing to give us this online lecture whose theme is “How to Write and Enjoy Poems”.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I hope all in attendance will participate positively and follow his instructions as requested. (运用了that引导的宾语从句,省略了that)
[高分句型2] There will be a five-minute question-and-answer session following the lecture, which will allow you an opportunity to ask questions and actively participate in the discussion. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(十三)
(2023·广东·华南师大附中校考三模)你是高中学生李华,你的英国朋友Anna计划明年夏天高中毕业后来中国游玩,准备提前学一点汉语。她来email询问你关于汉语学习的建议。请给Anna回信,主要内容包括:
1.学习难点;
2.方法建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Anna,
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Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Anna,
It’s wonderful to hear you’re planning to visit China and learning Chinese! I am thrilled to offer some advice that may help you along your language learning journey.
Firstly, one of the biggest challenges of learning Chinese is the pronunciation and tones. The four basic tones in Chinese can be tricky, and even slight variations in tone can change the meaning of a word. Listening to native speakers and practicing with a tutor or language partner can help you to develop your ear for the language and improve your pronunciation. Another challenge is getting used to the grammar. Chinese sentence structure is quite different from that of English, so it may take some time to adjust. I suggest starting with basic sentence patterns and gradually working your way up to more complex structures. It may also be helpful to focus on learning practical vocabulary related to travel, such as directions, transportation, and ordering food. This will enable you to communicate more effectively during your trip.
I hope these tips are helpful to you, and I wish you the best of luck in your language learning journey. Don’t forget to have fun exploring the language and culture of China!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给计划明年夏天高中毕业后来中国游玩并准备学点汉语的英国朋友Anna写一封关于汉语学习建议的信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的:thrilled→excited
习惯:get used to→become used to
有帮助的:be helpful→be of help
适应:adjust→adapt
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I suggest starting with basic sentence patterns and gradually working your way up to more complex structures.
拓展句:I suggest that you start with basic sentence patterns and gradually work your way up to more complex structures.
(十四)
假定你是校英文报《先锋》(Pioneer)编辑,受你校学生会委托撰写一份以珍爱湿地(Treasure Wetland)为主题的海报设计大赛通知。内容包括:1. 大赛目的;2. 作品要求;3. 参赛方式等。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 可适当补充细节,使行文流畅。
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【参考范文】
Notice
In a bid to raise our environmental awareness and protect precious wetland resources, a poster design competition themed “Treasure Wetland” is organized by the Student Union.
To begin with, originality, by all means, is the first requirement. Plus, the poster you design should be inspiring and thought-provoking, clearly illustrating the significance of the wetland and the urgency to protect it. Moreover, a powerful slogan is also preferred, which will make your work more persuasive and impressive.
All the students are welcome to submit their entries to Pioneer@163.com before 10th January, 2024. Only one work per individual is allowed. The winning works will be announced on February 2nd, 2024, World Wetland Day, in this newspaper.
Looking forward to your participation.
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为皖南八中校英文报《先锋》(Pioneer)编辑,受你校学生会委托撰写一份以珍爱湿地(Treasure Wetland)为主题的海报设计大赛通知。
1.词汇积累
旨在,目的是:In a bid to→ With the aim to
此外:Moreover → What’s more
比赛:competition→ match
提高,增强:raise→ enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In a bid to raise our environmental awareness and protect precious wetland resources, a poster design competition themed “Treasure Wetland” is organized by the Student Union.
拓展句:In a bid to raise our environmental awareness and protect precious wetland resources, a poster design competition whose theme is “Treasure Wetland” is organized by the Student Union.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Moreover, a powerful slogan is also preferred, which will make your work more persuasive and impressive.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Plus, the poster you design should be inspiring and thought-provoking, clearly illustrating the significance of the wetland and the urgency to protect it.(运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语。)
(十五)
假如你是李华,上周你校新开设了劳动体验课。请给你的留学生朋友Allen写一封邮件邀请他同去体验。内容包括:
1. 介绍课程内容;
2. 表达邀请。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Allen,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Ailen,
I am writing to share some exciting news. Last week, our school introduced a new course called “Labor Experience”, which is aimed to provide students with hands-on experience in various types of work.
We launched a campaign, Beautiful Campus, where students do some cleaning and plant colorful flowers. Then a labor base was set up for students to experience growing, picking and harvesting. Our school also offers training lessons to equip us with living skills like repairing appliances and cooking. Through these activities, we learn teamwork and improve problem-solving competence.
I believe it’s a unique and valuable experience. We can work together, learn from each other, and have fun. Sincerely invite you to join us in our next class.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华,上周你校新开设了劳动体验课。请给你的留学生朋友Allen写一封邮件邀请他同去体验。
1.词汇积累
提供:offer→provide
能力:competence→ability
宝贵的:valuable→precious
玩得高兴:have fun→enjoy oneself
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:We can work together, learn from each other, and have fun. Sincerely invite you to join us in our next class.
拓展句:I sincerely invite you to join us in our next class because we can work together, learn from each other, and have fun.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Last week, our school introduced a new course called “Labor Experience”, which is aimed to provide students with hands-on experience in various types of work. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I believe it’s a unique and valuable experience. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
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