专题09 书面表达-【好题汇编】备战2024-2025学年八年级英语上学期期中真题分类汇编（上海专用）

专题09 书面表达 （15篇） 1．（23-24八年级上·上海徐汇·期中）请以“That Day, I solved a Trouble”（《那天，我解决了一个麻烦》）为题，写一篇不少于 60 词的短文，标点符号不计入词数。 The following questions are for your reference: *What trouble did you meet with? * How did you solve the trouble? *What did you learn from this experience? 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24八年级上·上海闵行·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A challenge in my life” （请以“我生活中的一次挑战“为题，写一篇不少于60个字的短文，标点符号不占格。） 生活中充满了各种各样的挑战，请结合你自己的生活实际和经历，谈谈在你的生活中所经历的一次挑战，以及这次挑战带给你的成长。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（23-24八年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A helping hand I gave”（以“我伸出的一次援助之手”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格） 帮助别人自己也会快乐，即使一件微不足道的小事也会令自己感到快乐。你在生活中一定也有向需要帮助的人伸出援助之手的经历。请你选取其中一件，谈一谈你是如何提供帮助的及你的感受。 （注意：短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（23-24八年级上·上海松江·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “One of my great moments”. （请以“我的精彩一刻”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Use the following points as reference. （以下问题仅供参考） ●When was your great moment? ●How did you make it? ●What can you get from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（23-24八年级上·上海嘉定·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about one of your family members’, your friends’ or your teachers’ daily life on the topic “A day in the life of _______” ( 根据下列问题的提示，以“______ 生活中的一天”为题，写一篇关于某人的日常生活的作文，如：你的一个家庭成员或是你的一个朋友等。要求意思明确，内容连贯，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)    注意：文中不得出现真实人名或校名等信息 Suggested questions: What does he or she do in his or her daily life? What do you think of him or her according to（根据）his or her daily life? What can you learn from him or her?/Do you have any suggestions for him or her? A day in the life of _________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（23-24八年级上·上海杨浦·期中）According to the subject, write an e-mail to your teacher to explain a problem or trouble you have (60-100 words)，请根据邮件的主题(subject)， 写一篇60-100个词的邮件给你的老师Kim Hart，标点符号不占格。 From: Mary Lee To: Professor Kim Hart Subject: Absence from school for two weeks Dear Kim Hart, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Regards, Mary 7．（23-24八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据所给情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文） 我校正在征集模范学生，下图是其中的四条标准，你最认同哪一条？为什么？请结合自身经历或见闻说明 注意：1. 文中不得出现个人信息，否则不予评分 2. 照抄语篇不得分 3. 请选择一条填在横线上 Be _______________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（23-24八年级上·上海静安·期中）Write a short passage of at least 60 words about the topic “An interesting story in my family” (请以“一件家庭趣事”为题写不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（22-23八年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about “An unforgettable experience”(以“一次难忘的经历”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文). Suggested points: 1. When and where did the story happen? 2. What happened and how did you deal with it? 3. What have you learned from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（22-23八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A busy Day at School”.（以”学校里忙碌的一天”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 Use the following points as a guide.（短文须包含下列要点） 1. What do you do at school every day? 2. Why do you think it is a busy day? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．（22-23八年级上·上海杨浦·期中）Based on your own experience, write at least 80 words on the given situation “This time I was brave”. 以“这次我很勇敢”为题，根据自身的经历写一篇不少于80词的短文，标点符号不占格。 (注意： 1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、学校等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．（22-23八年级上·上海·期末）以“I have done better in _________”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。 居家线上学习也许使同学们在时间管理、与父母沟通、做家务劳动等很多方面有一定的进步，请结合你居家在线学习的经历，谈谈你某一方面的进步。 The following expressions are for reference only: (以下短语仅供参考） 1. find it efficient/ useful to 2. be proud of 3. make progress in ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（22-23八年级上·上海·期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A(n) ______ school activity”.（请以“一次______的校园活动”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文。） 校园生活中，我们开展了各种各样活动，例如运动会、文艺汇演、班会活动、节日活动、学科活动等。于你而言，这些活动或许是有趣的、特殊的、难忘的，亦或是遗憾的……请描述你以往的一次校园活动，并谈谈你的感悟。 （注意：1. 请先补充完整题目；2. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分） A(n) ______ school activity _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（22-23八年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Everyone has some challenges in his life. How can you deal with challenges when you face them? Think about one of the challenges you have faced and write at least 60 words about the topic “facing challenges”.（每个人的生活中会遇到各种挑战，想一想当你面对挑战时，你是如何应对的。联系一次你的相关经历，以“面对挑战”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文。以下问题可供参考。） 1. What was your challenge? 2. How did you feel when you faced the challenge? 3. How did you deal with the challenge? 4. What did you learn from the experience? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．（23-24八年级上·上海宝山·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My daily life” (以“我的日常生活”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) Suggested questions: What do you do in your daily life? What do you think of your daily life? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！22 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题09 书面表达 （15篇） 1．（23-24八年级上·上海徐汇·期中）请以“That Day, I solved a Trouble”（《那天，我解决了一个麻烦》）为题，写一篇不少于 60 词的短文，标点符号不计入词数。 The following questions are for your reference: *What trouble did you meet with? * How did you solve the trouble? *What did you learn from this experience? 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： That day, I solved a trouble Since I became a Grade 9 student, I have had a colourful school life. However, I still meet with some troubles. One day, it was my grandma’s eightieth birthday. It was really a meaningful day for my family. Since my parents were occupied with the decoration of the house, they asked me to order a cake. However, I was so careless that I left the matter behind my mind when my friends invited me to play basketball that day. I felt sorry for that, but I didn’t lose myself in self-blame. I made a handmade cake with cookies and colourful candies. Grandma was very happy when she saw the special cake. When terrible things happen, what we should do is not to find fault with others, but to use our intelligent brain to solve them. In our daily life, there are occasions when we are faced with something unpleasant. And self-blame, which is always the first choice of some people, is really of little use in solving the problems. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给的问题提示，讲述你解决一个麻烦的经历，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，交代事情发生的时间，地点和经过，以及是如何解决的； 第二步，讲述自己从这次经历中获得了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①be occupied with sth忙于做某事 ②leave...behind把……遗留在 ③play basketball打篮球 ④not...but不是……而是…… [高分句型] ①Since I became a Grade 9 student, I have had a colourful school life.  (since引导的时间状语从句) ②I was so careless that I left the matter behind my mind when my friends invited me to play basketball that day.(so...that引导的结果状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句) ③And self-blame, which is always the first choice of some people, is really of little use in solving the problems.(定语从句) 2．（23-24八年级上·上海闵行·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A challenge in my life” （请以“我生活中的一次挑战“为题，写一篇不少于60个字的短文，标点符号不占格。） 生活中充满了各种各样的挑战，请结合你自己的生活实际和经历，谈谈在你的生活中所经历的一次挑战，以及这次挑战带给你的成长。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A challenge in my life In my life, one of the most significant challenges I faced was when I decided to move to a new city for further studies. As an introvert, I found it difficult to adjust to the new environment and make new friends. However, I knew that I had to overcome this challenge if I wanted to succeed in my studies and personal life. I started by joining some clubs and taking part in social events, which helped me meet new people and make friends. I also forced myself to step out of my comfort zone and try new things. Although the process was filled with difficulties, I overcame this challenge. This experience taught me how to adapt to new environments, communicate and interact with others, and conquer fear and self-doubt. 【详解】[总体分析]       ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；       ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；       ③提示：以“我生活中的一次挑战”为题，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。       [写作步骤]       第一步，具体介绍自己生活中所经历的一次挑战；       第二步，书写自己的收获。     [亮点词汇]     ①make friends交朋友 ②succeed in成功 ③take part in参加 ④fill with充满 ⑤adapt to适应 [高分句型]       ①In my life, one of the most significant challenges I faced was when I decided to move to a new city for further studies.(表语从句)    ②However, I knew that I had to overcome this challenge if I wanted to succeed in my studies and personal life.(宾语从句；条件状语从句) ③I started by joining some clubs and taking part in social events, which helped me meet new people and make friends.(非限制性定语从句) 3．（23-24八年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A helping hand I gave”（以“我伸出的一次援助之手”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格） 帮助别人自己也会快乐，即使一件微不足道的小事也会令自己感到快乐。你在生活中一定也有向需要帮助的人伸出援助之手的经历。请你选取其中一件，谈一谈你是如何提供帮助的及你的感受。 （注意：短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A helping hand I gave Helping others brings me happiness and makes my life meaningful. I grow up a lot by helping others. I am good at English and can always get good grades in English exams. Then one day, my best friend Tina asked me to help her with her English. So I shared some useful ways to learn English. Each time she has trouble with her homework, I’ll try my best to explain as clearly as possible. I’m glad that Tina has made great progress in English. I feel a strong feeling of satisfaction when helping others. It makes me realize that the more you give, the happier you will be. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏相关要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，帮助别人能够带给我快乐，让我的生活更有意义； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，详细说明如何提供帮助； 第三步，书写结语，帮助别人能够给我带来满足感。 [亮点词汇] ①get good grades in English exams 英语考试取得好成绩 ②try one’s best to do 尽最大努力去…… [高分句型] It makes me realize that the more you give, the happier you will be.(宾语从句) 4．（23-24八年级上·上海松江·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “One of my great moments”. （请以“我的精彩一刻”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Use the following points as reference. （以下问题仅供参考） ●When was your great moment? ●How did you make it? ●What can you get from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 One of my great moments When I was in seventh grade, I once participated in the 1000 meter race at the school sports meet. When I ran to 500 meters, I was so tired that I didn’t want to continue running. At this moment, I saw my classmates and teachers cheering me on. I kept on running again. I chased the athletes in front little by little. Finally, I achieved a good score of second place. Through this incident, I understand that no matter what we do, as long as we persist, we can definitely achieve success. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍“精彩一刻”是何时； 第二步，具体阐述如何成功实现的“精彩一刻”； 第三步，此次经历的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①participate in参加 ②cheer sb. on为某人加油 ③keep on doing继续做某事 [高分句型] ①When I ran to 500 meters, I was so tired that I didn’t want to continue running.（when引导时间状语从句） ②I understand that no matter what we do, as long as we persist, we can definitely achieve success.（that引导宾语从句） 5．（23-24八年级上·上海嘉定·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about one of your family members’, your friends’ or your teachers’ daily life on the topic “A day in the life of _______” ( 根据下列问题的提示，以“______ 生活中的一天”为题，写一篇关于某人的日常生活的作文，如：你的一个家庭成员或是你的一个朋友等。要求意思明确，内容连贯，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)    注意：文中不得出现真实人名或校名等信息 Suggested questions: What does he or she do in his or her daily life? What do you think of him or her according to（根据）his or her daily life? What can you learn from him or her?/Do you have any suggestions for him or her? A day in the life of _________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A day in the life of my good friend Mary is my good friend. She usually gets up at 6 o’clock. At 6:30 she eats breakfast. Then she goes to school by bus at 7:00 a.m. She has classes from 8:00 a.m. to 3:00 p.m. In the afternoon, she plays basketball with her friends at 3:30. She goes home at 4:30. And she does her homework at 5:15 p.m. At 6: 30, she eats dinner with her family. She usually goes to bed at 9:30 p.m. I think she is a hardworking and active girl. I realized that I should make full use of my time. I think she should do more after-school activities. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：先补充完整题目，再根据所给的问题提示介绍某人生活的一天，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出要介绍的人物，按照时间的先后顺序介绍他/她一天的生活安排； 第二步，对他/她的生活做出评价，并谈谈自己从中学到了什么，有什么建议； [亮点词汇] ①from...to...从……到…… ②play basketball打篮球 ③do her homework做作业 [高分句型] I realized that I should make full use of my time.（宾语从句） 6．（23-24八年级上·上海杨浦·期中）According to the subject, write an e-mail to your teacher to explain a problem or trouble you have (60-100 words)，请根据邮件的主题(subject)， 写一篇60-100个词的邮件给你的老师Kim Hart，标点符号不占格。 From: Mary Lee To: Professor Kim Hart Subject: Absence from school for two weeks Dear Kim Hart, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Regards, Mary 【答案】范文： From: Mary Lee To: Professor Kim Hart Subject: Absence from school for two weeks Dear Kim Hart, I’m sorry to tell you that I will be absent from school for two weeks. My parents are out of town on business now. They won’t be back for a while. My grandmother is ill in hospital and needs someone to look after her. So I have to take two weeks off to look after my grandma. I will take the initiative to learn in the hospital. If I have a problem I don’t understand, I will ask you or my classmates for help in time. I ask for your approval. Regards, Mary 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是邮件； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我很遗憾地告诉您，我将缺课两周。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——向老师解释遇到的问题要阐述清楚。 第三步：书写结语。陈述“我请求您的批准。”的想法。 [亮点词汇] ①on business出差 ②look after照顾 ③be absent from缺席 [高分句型] ①If I have a problem I don’t understand, I will ask you or my classmates for help in time. (If引导的条件状语从句） ②I’m sorry to tell you that I will absent from school for two weeks. (宾语从句) 7．（23-24八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据所给情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文） 我校正在征集模范学生，下图是其中的四条标准，你最认同哪一条？为什么？请结合自身经历或见闻说明 注意：1. 文中不得出现个人信息，否则不予评分 2. 照抄语篇不得分 3. 请选择一条填在横线上 Be _______________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Be honest      I think being honest is the most important for a model student. As we know, honesty is one of people’s good qualities. Everyone needs honesty and I hope everyone is honest. Last Friday, my best friend Li Ming wanted to copy my homework because he played computer games until midnight and had no time to do his homework. But I thought it was not good, so I told him not to copy my homework and I would help him next time. Finally he understood me and agreed with me.     Honesty is quite an important quality to a person. So I think as a model student, he must be honest. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏方框中“提示信息”的四个方面选一个模范学生的标准进行阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我认为诚实是模范学生最重要的一个品质”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示问题的三个方面——哪一条标准、原因、自身经历或见闻均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“作为一个模范学生，他必须诚实”的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①the most important最重要的 ②good qualities好品质 ③copy my homework抄我的作业 [高分句型] ① Last Friday, my best friend Li Ming wanted to copy my homework because he played computer games until midnight and had no time to do his homework.(because引导的原因状语从句） ② I think being honest is the most important for a model student. (宾语从句) 8．（23-24八年级上·上海静安·期中）Write a short passage of at least 60 words about the topic “An interesting story in my family” (请以“一件家庭趣事”为题写不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 An interesting story in my family My father is a doctor. Sometimes he works so hard that he can’t remember the date. One day, my father wanted to get up early as usual, but he wasn’t able to do that, because he hadn’t set the alarm clock the night before. So when he got up, he did everything in a hurry. After my father left, my mother said to me mysteriously, “He will come back soon.” “Why?” I was greatly surprised. “Because today is Sunday, his holiday!” Just as mother said, my father came back home soon, and went to bed again, because he was too tired. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据An interesting story in my family为题，可围绕家庭生活展开。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍作者的家庭成员、职业及性格等； 第二步，简述一件家庭趣事发生的背景、起因和过程等，需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。 [亮点词汇] ①so…that如此……以至于 ②set the alarm定闹铃 ③in a hurry匆忙 [高分句型] ①One day, my father wanted to get up early as usual, but he wasn’t able to do that, because he hadn’t set the alarm clock the night before.（because引导原因状语从句） ②So when he got up, he did everything in a hurry.（when引导时间状语从句） 9．（22-23八年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about “An unforgettable experience”(以“一次难忘的经历”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文). Suggested points: 1. When and where did the story happen? 2. What happened and how did you deal with it? 3. What have you learned from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     Last summer I had an unforgettable experience that I climbed Mount Huang with my dad. I felt excited because it was the first time for me to climb a mountain.     At first, I hiked so quicky that my dad couldn’t follow me up. But after a while, I was too tired to go on. I wanted to give up because it seemed impossible for me to reach the top of the mountain. Just then, my dad said, “No pain, no gain. You should not give up, or you’ll never succeed.” He encouraged me a lot. I stood up and rush towards my goal. Finally, I made it! I was really amazed!     The unforgettable experience taught me a lesson that I would never succeed if I give up easily. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的难忘经历是去了哪里，引出下文的介绍； 第二步，讲述自己的难忘经历； 第三步，介绍从这次经历收获了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①too…to 太……而不能…… ②give up 放弃 [高分句型] ① Last summer I had an unforgettable experience that I climbed Mount Huang with my dad（that引导定语从句） ②I felt excited because it was the first time for me to climb a mountain.（because引导原因状语从句） 10．（22-23八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A busy Day at School”.（以”学校里忙碌的一天”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 Use the following points as a guide.（短文须包含下列要点） 1. What do you do at school every day? 2. Why do you think it is a busy day? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I am a middle school student. I am very busy every day. Let me tell you about my busy day at school. I often go to school at 6:30, and get to school at 6:45. We often begin our classes at 7:00. We have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. After class we often have sports on the playground. Sometimes, I do some cleaning at 5:00 in the classroom in the afternoon. I often go home at 5:55 after school. After supper, I must go to school. At school, I have to finish so much homework that I get home at 8:30 in the evening. I am very tired, but I must go over my lessons. It is really a busy day for me because I put my heart and soul into study. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中你认为这是忙碌的一天的原因，注意要点要齐全。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题。表明自己每天都很忙碌； 第二步，具体介绍自己白天做的事情； 第三步，介绍自己晚饭后要做的事情，并阐明这是忙碌的一天的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①have sports进行体育锻炼 ②do cleaning做清洁，打扫卫生 ③so...that...太……以致于…… ④go over复习 [高分句型] ①At school, I have to finish so much homework that I get home at 8:30 in the evening.（that引导的结果状语从句） ②It is really a busy day for me because I put my heart and soul into study.（because引导的原因状语从句） 11．（22-23八年级上·上海杨浦·期中）Based on your own experience, write at least 80 words on the given situation “This time I was brave”. 以“这次我很勇敢”为题，根据自身的经历写一篇不少于80词的短文，标点符号不占格。 (注意： 1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、学校等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 This time I was brave In our daily life, we have various fears preventing us from moving forward. And overcoming the fears helps us become more confident. I used to be afraid of speaking in public. I never dared to step up and speak in front of a crowd. Then, in Grade 9, a speech contest was held in my school. With my teacher’s encouragement, I entered for it and made full preparations for it. Luckily, I finished it smoothly. To my surprise, I won the second prize. This time I was brave. Now I have become more and more confident in expressing myself in public. Don’t let the fear take you. Just step forward and you will find you can do it! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应介绍自身的一段经历，注意细节的描写。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体点名克服困难，会让我们更自信，作为开头； 第二步，介绍具体的事情； 第三步，以鼓励作为结尾。 [亮点词汇] ①more and more confident 越来越自信 ②be afraid of 害怕 [高分句型] ①Don’t let the fear take you.（祈使句） ②Now I have become more and more confident in expressing myself in public.（现在完成时） 12．（22-23八年级上·上海·期末）以“I have done better in _________”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。 居家线上学习也许使同学们在时间管理、与父母沟通、做家务劳动等很多方面有一定的进步，请结合你居家在线学习的经历，谈谈你某一方面的进步。 The following expressions are for reference only: (以下短语仅供参考） 1. find it efficient/ useful to 2. be proud of 3. make progress in ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I have done better in communicating with my parents Early this year, because of the virus, we had to stay at home for a few months. During the time, I learned how to share my feeling and thoughts with my parents. One day, I was so anxious that I could not concentrate on any of my study. I told my parents the trouble and difficulty I met. They comforted me with kind words and also tried to solve the problem with me together. After chat, I felt much better and my pressure was just relieved. From then on, I realized the importance of talking with parents. They are the person who share my sadness and happiness. 【详解】[总体分析]： ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：结合居家在线学习的经历，谈谈某一方面的进步。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍与父母的沟通更好的契机。 第二步：阐述与父母的沟通更好的事件经过。 [亮点词汇] ①concentrate on专注于 ②comforted安慰 ③the importance of……的重要性 [高分句型] ①I was so anxious that I could not concentrate on any of my study.（结果状语从句） ②They are the person who share my sadness and happiness.（定语从句） 13．（22-23八年级上·上海·期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A(n) ______ school activity”.（请以“一次______的校园活动”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文。） 校园生活中，我们开展了各种各样活动，例如运动会、文艺汇演、班会活动、节日活动、学科活动等。于你而言，这些活动或许是有趣的、特殊的、难忘的，亦或是遗憾的……请描述你以往的一次校园活动，并谈谈你的感悟。 （注意：1. 请先补充完整题目；2. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分） A(n) ______ school activity _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 An unforgettable school activity We sometimes feel stressed out because we have so much schoolwork to do. However, our school often organizes activities that allow us to take a break. Last Saturday, our Student Union organized a volunteer service activity at Xingfu Social Welfare Home. Many of us participated in it. We met at 8:00 a.m. at the school gate. All the members were divided into groups. When we got there, some did some cleaning for the elderly. Some played games with them. Some had a good talk with them. What we did made them happy and warm. It was an unforgettable school activity. I took the chance to learn and to grow. As teenagers in the new era, we should have certain responsibilities of serving society. By participating in volunteering activities, we can learn how to work well in a team and how to improve our organizational ability. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”； ③提示：要求介绍以往的一次校园活动，并谈谈自己的感悟，注意首先要补全题目，再进行写作，可适当发挥，注意逻辑连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题； 第二步，具体介绍这次的校园活动，包括时间、地点，做的事情等； 第三步，表达自己通过这次活动所得到的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①participate in参加 ②take a break休息一下 ③be divided into被分成 [高分句型] ①When we got there, some did some cleaning for the elderly. (when引导时间状语从句) ②What we did made them happy and warm. (what引导主语从句) 14．（22-23八年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Everyone has some challenges in his life. How can you deal with challenges when you face them? Think about one of the challenges you have faced and write at least 60 words about the topic “facing challenges”.（每个人的生活中会遇到各种挑战，想一想当你面对挑战时，你是如何应对的。联系一次你的相关经历，以“面对挑战”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文。以下问题可供参考。） 1. What was your challenge? 2. How did you feel when you faced the challenge? 3. How did you deal with the challenge? 4. What did you learn from the experience? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例： Facing challenges Life is filled with challenges. In my study, I always meet with new challenges. When I was in grade eight, I used to fail my final math exams. This was a serious problem because math is a very important subject. However, I did not quit. I listened to the teacher carefully in class. I also did as many exercises as I could. Besides, I turned to my teacher and classmates for help. In the end, after several months’ hard work, I passed the final exam. Looking back on this, I realize that whatever challenges I am faced with, if I can spare no efforts and never give up, I will get them over. What’s more, those challenges make me who I am. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点以问题的方式给出，考生应注意不要遗漏；适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明写作主题“生活充满挑战”； 第二步，阐述具体写作内容。从挑战的内容、面对挑战的感受、解决措施三方面阐述面对挑战的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，总结面对挑战学习到的经验。 [亮点词汇] ①be filled with 充满 ②as…as sb. could 尽可能…… ③turn to sb. for help 向某人求助 ④spare no efforts 不遗余力 [高分句型] ①When I was in grade eight, I used to fail my final math exams.(used to) ②Looking back on this, I realize that whatever challenges I am faced with, if I can spare no efforts and never give up, I will get them over.(动名词作主语；if引导的条件状语从句) 15．（23-24八年级上·上海宝山·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My daily life” (以“我的日常生活”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) Suggested questions: What do you do in your daily life? What do you think of your daily life? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文      I am a student. I get up at six o’clock. I read English for half an hour. At seven ten I have breakfast. After that, I walk to school because it is not far from my home to school. I have five lessons in the morning. I do morning exercises with my classmates after the second lesson. At 11:30, I go home for lunch. In the afternoon, I have three lessons. After class, we often do sports on the playground. After supper, I read newspapers or go out for a walk, then I do my homework for one and a half hours. At half past ten, I go to bed.      What a busy day I have every day! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文的时态为一般现在时； ③提示：本文以时间为顺序，注意衔接自然。 [写作步骤] 第一步，详细的以时间顺序介绍日常生活； 第二步，结束语，对自己的日常生活的评价； [亮点词汇] at half past ten在10点半 [高分句型] What a busy day I have every day!（感叹句） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！22 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$