读后续写 终课件-2024届高三英语专项复习

读后续写 Continuation writing 授 课 教 师： Pre-reading Free talk Have you ever dreamed a dream that turned out to be a reality? Who (character) Where (place) When (time) What (event) Why (reason) How (solution) I; Becki; “she” along the highway; at home late night I found Becki hadn't come home. The car had come to an unexpectedly stopped Becki accepted help from a woman Main idea: Becki's car broke down on the way home at night and someone offered her a ride. While-reading Task1:Read for main idea setting inciting incident Rising action Climax Falling action Resolution Denouement While-reading Task2:Read for plot The darkness was gathering as she wobbled (颤颤巍巍) in high heels along the side of the highway. The car had come to an unexpected stop, and like a normal teenager she did the only thing she could think of...get out and walk. It was cold and late, and home was far away. This could be a long night. If only someone would stop and offer her a ride. She prayed for help and dragged herself forward. The lights of a truck shone from behind as it approached. “Maybe he will stop,” she hoped. The brake lights flashed on as it stopped. Next instant, the cab door opened. A wordless invitation was extended and she understood. Without hesitation the girl climbed up into the seat and closed the door. Slowly the truck pulled back onto the road and disappeared into the night, never to be seen again. The darkness was gathering as she wobbled (颤颤巍巍) in high heels along the side of the highway. The car had come to an unexpected stop, and like a normal teenager she did the only thing she could think of...get out and walk. It was cold and late, and home was far away. This could be a long night. If only someone would stop and offer her a ride. She prayed for help and dragged herself forward. The lights of a truck shone from behind as it approached. “Maybe he will stop,” she hoped. The brake lights flashed on as it stopped. Next instant, the cab door opened. A wordless invitation was extended and she understood. Without hesitation the girl climbed up into the seat and closed the door. Slowly the truck pulled back onto the road and disappeared into the night, never to be seen again. Exposition The darkness was gathering as she wobbled (颤颤巍巍) in high heels along the side of the highway. The car had come to an unexpected stop, and like a normal teenager she did the only thing she could think of...get out and walk. It was cold and late, and home was far away. This could be a long night. If only someone would stop and offer her a ride. She prayed for help and dragged herself forward. The lights of a truck shone from behind as it approached. “Maybe he will stop,” she hoped. The brake lights flashed on as it stopped. Next instant, the cab door opened. A wordless invitation was extended and she understood. Without hesitation the girl climbed up into the seat and closed the door. Slowly the truck pulled back onto the road and disappeared into the night, never to be seen again. inciting incident rising action 1. Use rhetorical devices to hook readers. The darkness was gathering as she wobbled (颤颤巍巍) in high heels along the side of the highway. The car had come to an unexpected stop, and like a normal teenager she did the only thing she could think of...get out and walk. It was cold and late, and home was far away. This could be a long night. If only someone would stop and offer her a ride. She prayed for help and dragged herself forward. The lights of a truck shone from behind as it approached. “Maybe he will stop,” she hoped. The brake lights flashed on as it stopped. Next instant, the cab door opened. A wordless invitation was extended and she understood. Without hesitation the girl climbed up into the seat and closed the door. Slowly the truck pulled back onto the road and disappeared into the night, never to be seen again. 2. Use strong verbs to show feelings and develop the story 3. Use inner speech to illustrate feelings and reveal clues While-reading Task2:Read for plot I woke up in a cold sweat, alarmed. Was that a dream or was it a vision? It was unbelievably real, and the girl was my daughter! I jumped from my bed and ran to her room. Her bed was empty. I stood in horror trying to think why she had not come home. As the mental fog began to lift, I remembered she was visiting her friend that evening. Perhaps she stayed there for the night. It was 1: 30 a. m, but I raced to the phone and dialed a number. “Hello?” The voice was heavy with sleep. “Hey. Sorry to wake you. Becki didn't come home tonight and I was wondering if she stayed at your place?” “No, she left here a few hours ago. She should have been home at least by midnight!” The voice on the other end began to reflect my own panic. Over the next forty-five minutes I alternated between lying in pray and pacing the floor in anxiety. At 2:15 a.m. lights appeared as a car turned up our long driveway. I could tell immediately that it was not my daughter's car. I woke up in a cold sweat, alarmed. Was that a dream or was it a vision? It was unbelievably real, and the girl was my daughter! I jumped from my bed and ran to her room. Her bed was empty. I stood in horror trying to think why she had not come home. As the mental fog began to lift, I remembered she was visiting her friend that evening. Perhaps she stayed there for the night. It was 1: 30 a. m, but I raced to the phone and dialed a number. “Hello?” The voice was heavy with sleep. “Hey. Sorry to wake you. Becki didn't come home tonight and I was wondering if she stayed at your place?” “No, she left here a few hours ago. She should have been home at least by midnight!” The voice on the other end began to reflect my own panic. Over the next forty-five minutes I alternated between lying in pray and pacing the floor in anxiety. At 2:15 a.m. lights appeared as a car turned up our long driveway. I could tell immediately that it was not my daughter's car. rising action I woke up in a cold sweat, alarmed. Was that a dream or was it a vision? It was unbelievably real, and the girl was my daughter! I jumped from my bed and ran to her room. Her bed was empty. I stood in horror trying to think why she had not come home. As the mental fog began to lift, I remembered she was visiting her friend that evening. Perhaps she stayed there for the night. It was 1: 30 a. m, but I raced to the phone and dialed a number. “Hello?” The voice was heavy with sleep. “Hey. Sorry to wake you. Becki didn't come home tonight and I was wondering if she stayed at your place?” “No, she left here a few hours ago. She should have been home at least by midnight!” The voice on the other end began to reflect my own panic. Over the next forty-five minutes I alternated between lying in pray and pacing the floor in anxiety. At 2:15 a.m. lights appeared as a car turned up our long driveway. I could tell immediately that it was not my daughter's car. 2. Use strong verbs to show feelings and develop the story I woke up in a cold sweat, alarmed. Was that a dream or was it a vision? It was unbelievably real, and the girl was my daughter! I jumped from my bed and ran to her room. Her bed was empty. I stood in horror trying to think why she had not come home. As the mental fog began to lift, I remembered she was visiting her friend that evening. Perhaps she stayed there for the night. It was 1: 30 a. m, but I raced to the phone and dialed a number. “Hello?” The voice was heavy with sleep. “Hey. Sorry to wake you. Becki didn't come home tonight and I was wondering if she stayed at your place?” “No, she left here a few hours ago. She should have been home at least by midnight!” The voice on the other end began to reflect my own panic. Over the next forty-five minutes I alternated between lying in pray and pacing the floor in anxiety. At 2:15 a.m. lights appeared as a car turned up our long driveway. I could tell immediately that it was not my daughter's car. 4. Use dialogues to thread events While-reading Task2:Read for plot Paragraph 1: My face pressed against the window and found it hard to breathe. Paragraph 2: “Mom, she gave me a ride home.”Becki said. climax denouement falling action While-reading Task2:Read for plot ...the cab door opened. A wordless invitation was extended and she understood. Without hesitation the girl climbed up into the seat and closed the door ... What difficulties did she face? Paragraph 2: “Mom, she gave me a ride home.”Becki said. ...she wobbled in high heels along the side of the highway...it was cold and late, and home was far away. darkened and cold surroundings; uncomfortable shoes; long distance danger What help did she get? Who offered her help? While-reading Task3:Read for clues In writing the article, the writer intends to ________ to describe a terrible experience to present readers with good and evil to highlight an act of kindness to show a mother's selfless love It's wise to extend a story with a bright and positive theme. While-reading Task4:Read for writing pupose 意图 to highlight an act of kindness 划线词 Character Setting Action Mood 段首句 Paragraph 1: My face pressed against the window and found it hard to breathe. Paragraph 2: “Mom, she gave me a ride home.”Becki said. What did I see inside the car? What did I do seeing Becki's return? Who helped Becki? What did Becki explain her being late for home? How did I react after hearing the explanation? daughter high heels, highway, home, night, ride, dream, midnight, car pray panic While-reading Task5:Read for prediction setting inciting incident Rising action Climax Falling action Resolution Denouement Becki's car broke down Night approaching, she walked along the highway in high heels. It was cold and late and she was dragging forward when a car stopped and she got in. Meanwhile, I made a bad dream. A car appeared and I waited to see the “visitors”. Becki returned home safe and sound Becki told me a woman drove her home sceptical horrified panicky anxious relieved grateful While-reading Task5:Read for prediction Paragraph 1: My face pressed against the window and found it hard to breathe. Paragraph 2: “Mom, she gave me a ride home.”Becki said. Event: Becki returned home safe and sound Feelings: anxious relieved Event: Becki told me a woman drove her home Feeling: grateful While-reading Task6:Read for writing How to describe a person's anxiety? 1. Use rhetorical devices to show anxiety A deep sense of anxiety flooded over me. Full of anxiety, I felt like sitting on pins and needles. 如坐针毡 The thought of what might have happened to Becki sent shivers down my spine. 让我脊背发凉 A deep sense of anxiety arose in my heart and quickly overwhelmed me. 心底涌现出深深的焦虑感,并迅速将我淹没 The sense of anxiety got increasingly stronger with each passing minute. I felt too anxious that my heart almost jumped out of my throat. Simile Personification Exaggeration Exaggeration 焦虑感渐增 Exaggeration 焦虑感淹没了我 Exaggeration “协同效应” My brain was like a scribble. Simile 脑子乱作一团 2. Use strong/vivid verbs to show anxiety I poked my head out of the window, casting an anxious glance at the car. 浑身打颤 跺脚 踱步 哭 下跪 心跳加快 甩门 飞奔 叹气 看 情绪崩溃 焦虑的表现 Anxious,I shivered in every limb./ I shook with fear. I stamped my foot in anxiety. I began pacing the room. /I paced back and forth in the room. I was close to tears. /I began to sob bitterly. I was almost on the verge of breaking down. Anxious, I fell to my knees. With heart beating hard/racing, I steadied my eye(凝神看). Flinging open the door, I ran outside. I darted/ trotted/galloped outside. /I rushed out in haste. I sighing heavily, wondering what to do next. 3. Use inner speech to show anxiety “What happened? Where did my dear Becki go?” my mind was in chaos.大脑一片混乱 “What if my daughter was injured? What if she met a bad guy?” worry crept into my mind. 爬上心头 “What if the dream was true?” the thought hit me like a bucket of cold water.(像被泼了一盆冷水) I dare not think about it any longer. “What should I do—oh! I shouldn't have let her go to meet her friend alone.” I was filled with regret. “God, please bring my dear Becki home safely.” I prayed. ... How to describe a person's relief? Use inanimate subject (无灵主语) A pair of high heels appeared. It was my daughter! I breathed a sigh of relief. 看见我女儿，我松了口气。 听到熟悉的声音，我如释重负地喘了口气。 Suddenly a familiar voice came into my ears. It was Becki. I gasped in relief. Use inversion (倒装) 我女儿穿着她的高跟鞋(从车里)出来了。 Out stepped my precious daughter in her high heels. The car pulled in front of the house, and out of it emerged my precious daughter. How to describe a person's gratitude? 1. Use emphatic structure 是她在我晚上独自一人无助地在公路上走的时候向我伸出了援手。 It was she who extended a helping hand when I was walking alone on the highway hopelessly. 2. Use the subjunctive mood 没有她的帮助我不可能穿着高跟鞋走到家。 But for/ Without her help, I would have never made it home in my high heels. Hadn't she helped me, I would have never made it home in my high heels. Possible version： My face pressed against the window and I found it hard to breathe. The car pulled in front of the house, and out of it emerged my precious daughter, making her way up the steps. Tears stinging my eyes (泪水模糊了我的眼睛), I threw open the door, pulled her inside and hugged her tightly. The dream was just too real and I could hardly believe I was now having my daughter in my hug. I wondered if it was because my pray was answered. Then through my blurred vision (模糊的视野)I saw a lady stepping out of the car. 同义复现 衔接 Possible version： “Mom, she gave me a ride home.”Becki said. “My car broke down on the highway and without her help, I would never have made it home in my high heels.” she continued, exposing her blistered ankles. My heart shuddered at the thought of how painfully she staggered along the dark highway. She must be an angel for Becki! I approached the lady and invited her inside. Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand. Possible version： “Mom, she gave me a ride home.”Becki said. “My car broke down on the highway and without her help, I would never have made it home in my high heels.” she continued, exposing her blistered ankles. My heart shuddered at the thought of how painfully she staggered along the dark highway. She must be an angel for Becki! I approached the lady and invited her inside. Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand. 反义复现 Possible version： “Mom, she gave me a ride home.”Becki said. “My car broke down on the highway and without her help, I would never have made it home in my high heels.” she continued, exposing her blistered ankles. My heart shuddered at the thought of how painfully she staggered along the dark highway. She must be an angel for Becki! I approached the lady and invited her inside. Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand. 同义复现 Homework 1. Revise your writing using the checklist as a guide. 2. Share your story with your classmates. Do I use more than 5 underlined key words? Do I plotted the events logically and coherently? Do I add rich, accurate language, including vivid verbs, inner speeches, etc.? Do my ending better match with the given material? Checklist Thanks for listening $$