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How to describe emotions more vividly and specifically?
读后续写微技能之情绪描写
Learning objectives:
1. Grasp some words and expressions about emotion.
2. Learn 3 key sentence patterns to make emotional descriptions more vivid and specific.
3.Improve writing skills.
How will you describe your feelings?
情绪
Your description
好害怕。
我生气了。
太感动了。
我太开心了。
我好伤心。
I am so happy.
I am so sad.
I am so scared.
I am angry.
I am so moved.
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(2017浙江卷-遇熊脱险) A burst of horror held me entirely in its power, and I was unable to move an inch.
探究高考真题
(2022新高考-越野比赛)To my joy, David slowly rose to his feet.
(2017浙江卷-遇熊脱险) Extremely frightened, I felt my legs trembling and my palms sweating.
请找出下列句子中的情绪描写表达,并用横线标出。
(2021新高考1.读后续写) The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day.
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(2017浙江卷-遇熊脱险) A burst of horror held me entirely in its power, and I was unable to move an inch.
探究高考真题
(2022新高考-越野比赛)To my joy, David slowly rose to his feet.
(2017浙江卷-遇熊脱险) Extremely frightened, I felt my legs trembling and my palms sweating.
请找出下列句子中的情绪描写表达,并用横线标出。
(2021新高考1.读后续写) The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day.
Useful skills
How to describe feelings more vividly
to one’s +情绪名词
be filled with+情绪名词
形容词作状语
A bust of+情绪名词+held sb.
进阶技巧
使用动作词汇
形容词作状语
使用让步状语(倒装)
Let’s learn some action words and sentence patterns to describe feelings
使用so...that句型
What is his emotion?
How do you know that?
莱昂纳多·迪卡普里奥
Leonardo DiCaprio
Activity1:Watch the video and think.
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What is his feeling?
He feels angry.
eyes
mouth
glare at
shout
grit his teeth
sweat
wave his fist
is about to hit
another guy
[ɡleə]
[fɪst]
[ɡrɪt]
face
怒目而视
咬紧
挥舞
拳头
body
Emotional description
Action
words
Face
Body
Emotional words
Happy, angry, scared…….
Let’s learn to describe.
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face:
body:
He/She is happy; ……
Actions
eyes are bent with
laughter
one’s eyes light up
one’s eyes sparkle/shine
with happiness
dance with joy
cheer and jump for joy
[bent] 弯曲的
meme[miːm]
表情包
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face:
body:
Actions
He/She is sad; ……
with tears in one’s eyes
burst into tears
tears roll/run down one’s cheeks
be in floods of tears
tears blur one’s eyes
wipe tears from one’s face
sob in one’s palms
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face:
body:
Actions
He/She is scared; ……
face turned pale
eyes wide open
mouth wide open
tremble
legs are weak
[ˈtrembl] 颤抖
[peɪl] 苍白的
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(2022全国1卷) 大卫继续跑步。
David kept on running.
大卫感到信心满满的和充满决心的,继续奔跑
_______________________ , David kept on running .
大卫信心满满的和充满决心的,继续奔跑,奋力冲向终点线。
Confident and determined , David kept on running, ___________________________
前加情绪形容词
后加非谓语
Sentence pattern1: 形容词作状语
Confident and determined
struggling to reach the finish line.
形容词作状语:“情绪adj1+情绪adj2, sb did sth,doing sth"
感到...和...,某人做某事1,并做某事2
Complete sentences with appropriate adjectives
1. _________________________(感到坚定和受到鼓舞的), David raised his head , looking at me with gratitude . (2022全国1卷)
2.________________________(既惊讶又感动), Mr. Alder believed what I said, giving me a second chance. (2023广东一模)
3. (感到开心和兴奋的), he
received the admission letter from Oxford University.
Determined and inspired
Surprised and touched
Delighted and excited
1.Extremely tired as/though he was , David made up his mind to finish the race .
2.Exhausted and hungry as/though he was, he carried on climbing the mountain.
Sentence pattern 2 巧用让步状语:
巧用让步状语从句:adj+ as/though sb.+ be 动词, sb (still) did sth
尽管某人(感到)...,某人仍做某事
Observe and summarize the structure
1.尽管很焦急和不情愿,我还是按照爸爸的要求去洗碗。
I still went to wash the dishes at Dad’s request .
2.尽管他很害怕和担心,Hector还是告诉了老师发生了什么。
Hector still told the teacher what had happened.
真题练习
Anxious and unwilling as/though I was,
Scared and worried as/though he was,
He was so scared that he was unable to utter a single word.
他吓得一句话也说不出来
Sentence pattern3: so...that...句型
“sb was so+情绪adj+that 从句"
某人如此的......以至于......
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So scared was he that he was unable to utter a single word.
他吓得一句话也说不出来
“So+情绪adj+was/were+sb.+that 从句"
某人如此的.....以至于......
sentence pattern3: so...that...句型
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She was so sad that she burst into tears.
她太伤心了,突然哭了起来。
Translation
=So sad was she that she burst into tears.
Complete sentences with “so ...that structure”
1. that she slept on the ground.
简太累了,只好睡在地上。
2. that I walked closer to hug them tightly.
我被深深地感动了,走近紧紧地拥抱他们.
Jane was so tired
I was so touched
=So tired was Jane
=So touched was I
Summary
1.使用动作词汇(喜怒哀乐的不同动作表达)
2.形容词做状语:adj.1+adj.2, sb.did, doing...
感到...和...,某人做某事1,并做某事2
3.让步状语(倒装句型):情绪形容词+ as/though sb.+ be 动词, sb. ( still ) did sth. .
尽管某人(感到)...,某人仍做某事
4. so...that...句型:sb was so+情绪adj+that 从句
某人如此......以至于......
Tom was lost. He was so ____that his face________ .(他吓得脸都变白了) _____________, he_____________, (沮丧和无助,他泪如泉涌)wondering what to do next. Fortunately, with the help of a kind person, he found his parents. After a day’s play, _______ was Tom that ______________.(汤姆太累了,很快就睡着了)
Writing
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Tom was lost. He was so scared that his faceturned pale.(Tom吓得脸都变白了) Depressed and helpless, he was in fllods of tears , (沮丧和无助,他泪如泉涌)wondering what to do next. Fortunately, with the help of a kind person, he found his parents. After a day’s play, so tired was Tom that he fell asleep quickly.(汤姆太累了,很快就睡着了)
Writing
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Children’day is coming. Tom’s parents said that they would take him to the zoo .Hearing this, Tom jumped up with excitement. His face lit up and his eyes shone.
The next morning, they set out early. Tom was delighted all the way with the birds singing songs for him. When they got to the zoo, Tom saw many toys on sales(出售)at the gate of the zoo. He wanted to buy a car toy. His father wouldn’t buy it for him. Tom cried and rolled(翻滚)on the ground.
Paragraph1
_____________________________________(他父亲又气又恼,怒视着他,想揍他一顿。)__________________________________________________看到这一切,他母亲虽然不情愿,但也没办法,只好给他买了一个。)______________________________________他非常开心,一直在动物园里玩这辆车。)There were many lovely animals and people in the zoo. He was attracted by the lions. Suddenly, he couldn’t see his parents.
Paragraph2
________________(他吓得脸都变白了。)_____________(沮丧和无助,他泪如泉涌,不知道下一步该怎么办);Fortunately, with the help of a kind person, he found his parents. After a day’s play, _____________________.(汤姆太累了,很快就睡着了。)
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Children’day is coming. Tom’s parents said that they would take him to the zoo .Hearing this, Tom jumped up with excitement. His face lit up and his eyes shone.
The next morning, they set out early. Tom was delighted all the way with the birds singing songs for him. When they got to the zoo, Tom saw many toys on sales(出售)at the gate of the zoo. He wanted to buy a car toy. His father wouldn’t buy it for him. Tom cried and rolled(翻滚)on the ground.
Paragraph1
______________(他父亲又气又恼,怒视着他,想揍他一顿。看到这一切,他母亲虽然不情愿,但也没办法,只好给他买了一个。他非常开心,一直在动物园里玩这辆车。)
There were many lovely animals and people in the zoo. He was attracted by the lions. Suddenly, he couldn’t see his parents.
Paragraph2
________________(他吓得脸都变白了。)_____________(沮丧和无助,他泪流满面,不知道下一步该怎么办);Fortunately, with the help of a kind person, he found his parents. After a day’s play, _____________________.(汤姆太累了,很快就睡着了。)
Homework: revise and further polish your writing.
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Children’day is coming. Tom’s parents said that they would take him to the zoo .Hearing this, Tom jumped up with excitement.His face lit up and his eyes shone.
The next morning, they set out early. Tom was delighted all the way with the birds singing songs for him. When they got to the zoo, Tom saw many toys on sales(出售)at the gate of the zoo. He wanted to buy a car toy. His father wouldn’t buy it for him. Tom cried and rolled(翻滚)on the ground. Angry and annoyed, his father glared at him,wanting to beat him.Seeing this, unwilling though his mother was, she had nothing to do but bought one for him. He was so delighted that he kept playing the car in the zoo.
There were many lovely animals and people in the zoo. He was attracted by the lions. Suddenly, he couldn't see his parents.He was so scared that his face turned pale. Depressed and helpless, he was in floods of tears, wondering what to do next; Fortunately, with the help of a kind person, he found his parents. After a day’s play, Tom was so tired that he fell asleep quickly.
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谢谢聆听
Thanks for listening!
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