08.必修第一册Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good(读后续写-动作描写3)-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高一英语单元写作深度指导(译林版2020)

Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good 单元写作深度指导 读后续写（动作描写3） (2020新课标卷)阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges. Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them. One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy -his name was Bernard-had interested her very much. “I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don't see what he can do.” After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.” “So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.” For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成).” The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn(爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.” 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右: 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When Mrs. Meredith heard of John's idea, she thought it was a good one, too. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作分析】 【参考范文】 When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too. So, they went to the local supermarket together. They bought a bag of corn and some special bags for popcorn. When they got home, they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags. With the popcorn, they went to Bernard’s home. They told Bernard how to sell the popcorn. Bernard and his parents were very grateful. And the Meredith family also felt very happy to help this family. With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. He took the popcorn around to the houses and sold all his popcorn. He earned a lot of money. Then, he wanted to be self-dependent. Therefore, he asked Mrs. Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn. After that, not only did he sell popcorn, but he also added cream and salt to the popcorn to make it taste better. Bernard grew up to be a remarkable man. He did not forget the help of Meredith’s family, and he also did what he could to help those in need. 【写作解析】本文是根据短文进行续写，使之成为一个完整的故事。 1.认真读懂所给提供的材料:善良的Meredith一家住在一个小社区里，他们想帮助一个贫困的家庭。那家的男主人生病卧床，女主人要照顾丈夫、无法外出赚钱，家中的小男孩Bernard也做不了什么事情，生活十分困难。后来，Meredith的孩子想出了一个主意--制作爆米花，让Bernard去卖爆米花。 2.根据所给材料确定文章主题:Meredith如何通过制作和卖爆米花帮助Bernard一家摆脱困境的。 3.续写部分和前面的文章衔接得上，并且与原文情节发展和人物性格相一致，故事情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理。 4.根据第一段首句When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too.(当Meredith太太听到John的主意时，她也认为这是个好主意)可以针对如何实现制作爆米花这个提议展开构思；根据第二段首句With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.(一切准备就绪后，Bernard开始了他的新生意)可以针对Bernard如何通过卖爆米花让家庭摆脱困境展开构思。 5.续写的语言要尽可能与原文的语言保持风格上的一致。文章时态以一般过去时为主。应使用自己熟悉的句型和短语进行写作，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合题干要求，句子结构准确，适当补充信息，使篇章结构连贯。 读后续写高频动作描写词汇（三） ▲“耳、鼻、口”相关的动作 1.I'm all ears. 我洗耳恭听. 2. My ears are burning. 我耳根发热. 3. Young people sometimes seem to turn a deaf ear to the words of their anxious parents. 年轻人有时把父母的苦口婆心当作耳边风. 4. She'll smile from ear to ear if we give her a bike for her birthday. 如果我们送她一辆自行车作为生日礼物,她会笑得合不拢嘴. 5.Chicago provides a feast for the ears of any music lover. 《芝加哥》将给所有音乐爱好者献上一场听觉的盛宴. 6. The classical music is really a feast for the ears. 这首古典乐曲令人大饱耳福. 7.Collapsing buildings, jumping flaming cars, planes falling down and managing to pull up a second before touching down, it was a real trip and a feast for the eyes and ears. 倒塌的建筑物,跳跃燃烧的汽车,飞机坠落并设法在着陆前拉升,它是一次真正的旅行和一场视听盛宴. 8.She cast him a significant smile. 她向他投去意味深长的一笑. 9. You won't have to think, just follow your nose. 你不必考虑,凭直觉行事就行. 10.He lets his wife lead him by the nose. 他对太太唯命是从. 11.My nose began to bleed. 我的鼻子开始出血. 12.She blew her nose as daintily as possible. 她尽量文雅地擤了擤鼻涕. 13.You do have a nose for fashion. 你的时尚嗅觉的确了得. 14. We all had colds and couldn't stop sniffing and sneezing. 我们都感冒了,一个劲儿地抽鼻子,打喷嚏. 15. The pies in the store window made little Tommy's mouth water. 店铺橱窗里摆的馅饼使小汤米馋涎欲滴. 16. When he saw the baker's boy coming, he jumped out from behind the haystack and the boy's mouth fell open in surprise. 他看见那面包师的儿子走来时,就从草堆后边跳了出来,那男孩吓得张大了嘴巴. 17. When you are eating, don't speak with your mouth full of food. 当你吃东西时,不要在你满嘴食物时说话. 18. Both sisters bit their nails as children. 两姐妹都像小孩儿一样咬指甲. 19. He bit his tongue as he found himself on the point of saying “follow that car”. 他想说“跟上那辆车”,话到嘴边又咽了回去. 20. As she passed, she caught sight of a dry crust of bread on the commode, which was moulding there amid the dust; she flung herself upon it and bit into it, muttering. 走过柜橱时,她看见那上面有一块在尘土中发霉的干面包皮,她扑了上去,拿来一面啃,一面嘟囔. 21.The little girl's tooth came out when she bit into the apple. 这小女孩在咬苹果时,她的牙掉了. 22. When I first tasted it I almost barfed. 我第一次尝这个的时候,差点没呕出来. 23.He has tasted the sweets and bitters of life. 他尝遍了人生的酸甜苦辣. 24. The strong smell made me throw up. 这强烈的气味使我呕吐了. 25.She threw up all the medicine she had just taken. 她刚吃完药,又都吐了出来. 26.Michael sighed wearily. 迈克尔疲惫地叹了口气. 27.Lunch was a feast of meat and vegetables, cheese, yoghurt and fruit, with unlimited wine. 午餐很丰盛,有肉、蔬菜、奶酪、酸奶、水果,酒无限量供应. 28. They feasted well into the afternoon on mutton and corn stew. 他们吃玉米炖羊肉一直吃到下午. 29.They feast like there is no tomorrow. 他们大吃大喝,好像没有明天了一样. 30.Polly took a bite of the apple, chewed and swallowed. 波利咬了一口苹果,嚼了嚼咽了下去. 31. He swallowed hard, and walked into the interview room. 他使劲咽了一下口水,然后踏进面试室. 32. Gordon has swallowed the anger he felt. 戈登忍住了内心的愤怒. 33.She managed to swallow her pride and say sorry to him. 她放下架子／放下身段向他道歉. 34. He flashed me a quick grin but rapidly swallowed it when he saw my expression. 他先是冲我咧嘴一笑,不过看到我的表情后又赶紧收起笑脸. 35. I was screaming at them to get out of my house. 我尖叫着让他们离开我的家. 36. Don't yell at me. I came as fast as I could. 你少冲我大喊大叫的,我已经够快的了. 37. At the end of the performance, the entire hall burst into thunderous cheers. 演出结束时全场爆发出雷鸣般的欢呼声. 38. Then we turned a corner-and I stopped and gasped in amazement. 我们转到一个角落－我驻足,惊叹不已. 39. Most of the audience laughed, a small number gasped in astonishment. 大多数听众笑,少数张嘴惊骇. 40. I gasped with/in surprise at the unexpected news. 听到这意外的消息,我惊得倒吸了一口冷气. 41. “Maybe I'm going to die,” he thought as he gasped for air. “我可能要死了.”他一边想一边喘着气. 42.Jack was huffing and puffing to keep up with her. 杰克气喘吁吁地跟着她. 43.The ugly, overweight man struggled breathlessly through the door with his equally ugly wife. 那个丑陋、肥胖的男人和他的同样丑陋的妻子气喘吁吁地挣扎着穿过门. 44. The boys listened breathlessly as the sailor detailed the story of the shipwreck. 当水手详述沉船的故事时,孩子们屏息倾听着. 45. I am out of breath, let me recover my breath. 我上气不接下气,让我喘口气. 46.I must be betting old-those few steps have left/have made/have put me quite out of breath. 我肯定老了,那几级台阶已经让我气喘吁吁了. 47.His chest heaved, and he took a deep breath. 他的胸脯上下起伏,然后他深深地吸了口气. 48. He had stopped to catch his breath and make sure of his directions. 他曾停下来歇口气,同时确定一下方向. 49. He held his breath, not daring to raise his head. 他屏住了气,不敢抬起头来. 50.She breathed freely, and a great weight fell off her. 她自由地呼吸着,好像卸下千斤重担. 51.He heard the security guard's footsteps receding and breathed freely again. 他听到卫士的脚步声消失后,才松了口气. 52.She dropped her voice. 她放低声音. 53. Her voice dropped to a whisper when she was talking with him. 当她和他谈话时,她的讲话声压低而变成耳语. 54.In a voice of near childlike innocence, she asks extraordinarily difficult questions about nature. 她用近乎孩子气的天真的声音问关于大自然的非常难的问题. 55. Arms crossed, he stares up wide-eyed and open-mouthed at the fireworks in the sky. 两臂交叉,他睁大眼睛张大嘴巴盯着看天空中的烟花. 56. She was staring into space, her mouth slack. 她双唇微张,呆呆地望着天空. 57. When he finally reached her, the woman flooded him with questions “Who are you? What antique shop?” 当他终于找到她时,那女人向他连珠炮似地提出了许多问题:“你是谁？什么古董店？” 58. If you harbour concerns ,you usually bombard lieutenants with questions. 如果你心存疑虑,你通常会连珠炮式地向你的副手发问. 59. They fired so many questions at him that he hardly knew what to do. 他们连珠炮似地向他发问,弄得他不知所措. 60. She talked away like a chatterbox. 她像打开了的话匣子一样讲个没完没了. 61.Why did the God this joke to sound out our love? 上天为什么开这种玩笑来试探我们的缘分？ 62. He says his trip to China is an attempt to sound out Chinese world views. 他说他的访华之行是想探询一下中国对世界问题的看法. 63. I am trying to sound out if he'd like to work for us. 我正在试探他,看他是否愿意来为我们工作. 64. They decided to sound him out about/on his interest in the project. to sound out his interest in the project. 他们决定试探一下他对那个项目的兴趣. 65. She claims to be in favour of training, but so far she's only paid lip service to the idea. 她声称赞同训练,但至今还只是停留在口头上, 66,Many governments do nothing more than pay lip service to the advice, or drag their feet. 许多国家的政府对于该建议只是口头承诺,或者行事迟缓. 67.Those who pay lip ice are greater enemies than those who speak openly against you. 那些口是心非的人比那些公开反对你的人对你的威胁更大. 68.He picked his words carefully. 他用词细心谨慎. 69.He even tried to sweet-talk the policewoman who arrested him. 他甚至想和逮住他的女警官套近乎. 70. Don't sweet-talk me into it. I won't give you money anymore. 别给我灌迷魂汤了,我不会再给你钱的. 71. Don't try to sweet-talk me into going to your company party. 别想用甜言蜜语哄我去参加你们公司的聚会. 72. They swapped stories about their army days. 他们互相讲述了他们在军队中的经历. 73. They all sat together at table, laughing and swapping stories. 他们都坐在桌子旁,有说有笑地讲述各自的故事. 74. Startled by the unexpected sight, the girl's eyes became huge and then her mouth curved slowly into a smile. 女孩被这意外的景象吓了一跳,眼睛睁得大大的,但随后嘴角慢慢地弯成一个微笑. 75. But her joke went over like a lead balloon, nobody even cracked a smile. 但是,她的笑话没有引起任何反应,甚至没有一个人笑一笑. 76. When we gave the kid a toy train, he finally cracked a smile. 在我们给了那个小孩一个玩具火车后,他终于笑了. ▲“doing...(动作伴随)”表“动作伴随” *S+V…doing...(同时动作)典型句型:stand/sit/lie+地点＋doing... *S+V...(while)doing...(同时动作) *Having done... (for a long time/again and again),S+V...(先后动作) 1.The children ran out of the room, laughing and talking merrily. 孩子们跑出房间,快乐地说笑着. 2.Laughing and crying, Mrs. Smith grabbed her hat and her children and ran out. 史密斯太太又笑又叫,抓起帽子抱起孩子冲了出去. 3. The children stood back watching their mother kissing this strange man. 孩子们退后看着妈妈和该陌生人接吻. 4.Alan and the other campers sat around the fire chewing meat chops. 艾伦和其他露营者围坐在火堆旁,嚼着肉排. 5. He said it angrily pointing at the notice on the wall. 他手指着墙上的布告,生气地说着. 6.I was flicking idly through a newspaper while awaiting the arrival of orange juice and coffee. 我一边无所事事地翻着报纸,一边等着我点的橙汁和咖啡. 7.This will enable the audience to sit in comfort while watching the shows. 这样能让观众舒舒服服地坐着看表演. 8.I went through a noodle shop, picking up the sweet fragrance, I suddenly felt very hungry. 我穿过一家面馆,闻到了香味,突然间觉得很饿. 9.Having waited for a long time, he felt very bored and took a magazine at random from the shelf to kill time. 等了很长时间,他觉得很无聊,从货架上拿了一本杂志来消磨时间. 10. Having done it once, she made a habit of it. 这种事她干了一次之后就欲罢不能了. ▲“with十宾语十宾补”和“prep.十身体部位”表示“动作伴随” 1. It is not just moms who are right there with their sleeves rolled up. Fathers are doing all the same things that moms do. 在那儿撸起袖子加油干的,不仅有妈妈们还有爸爸们. 2.He failed again and again(with his head) bloody but unbowed(虽败犹荣)． 他一次又一次失败,但每次虽败犹荣. 3.He gets up every day bound and determined(矢志不渝;下定决心)to improve something. 他每天起床后都下定决心把某桩事做得更好. 4.It was very quiet all around with nobody in sight. 周遭静悄悄的,不见一个人. 5. Spain and Greece are in depression, with no hope of recovery in sight. 西班牙和希腊都处于萧条期,没有复苏的希望. 6.With the door being knocked on, the thief's heart beat fast. 随着有人不断敲门,小偷的心跳加速了. 7. The nurse walked on tiptoe for fear of waking the patient. 护士踮着脚走,生怕吵醒病人. 8. Never go down on your knees before difficulty. 在困难面前决不能屈膝. 9. China's rise has been on everyone's lips in recent years. 近年来,中国崛起成为街谈巷议的话题. 10.She held the bird gently in cupped hands. 她双手轻轻地捧着那只小鸟. 11.A fortunate few were pulled out within hours by anxious parents scrabbling at the wreckage with bare hands. 少数幸运的孩子在几个小时内被焦急的父母徒手从废墟中扒出. 12.I walked around the house barefoot/in bare feet. 我赤脚在房子里走来走去. 13.After a few minutes,1 walked over to Terry on shaky legs. “Good luck, Terry,” I said in a whisper that barely masked my urge to cry. 几分钟后我朝泰利走过去,腿发抖.“祝你好运,泰利.”我低声对她说道,几乎难以掩饰想哭的冲动. 14.With a mighty leap, he rose to the surface of the sea. 他使劲用脚向上一蹬,浮出了海面. 15.Sylvia woke with a jump. 西尔维娅一下子惊醒过来. 16.With one bound, he was over the wall. 他纵身一跃就跳过了墙. 17.With a spring, the cat leapt onto the table. 猫一跃跳上桌子. 18. She walked along with a spring in her step. 她迈着轻快的步伐向前走去. 19.Then with one big push my brother sent me down the snowy hillside. 我哥用力一推,我便快速沿着雪山坡滑下. 20.The clever fish then swam round a pile and, with a sudden pull, broke the line. 这条聪明的鱼绕着一根桥桩游了好几圈,然后猛地一扯便挣断了渔线. 21.He walked with a drag. 他拖着脚走路. 22.With a sigh, she straightened in her chair and stretched. 她叹了口气,在椅子里坐直,伸了个懒腰. 23. With a cry of “Stop thief!” he ran after the boy. 他一边喊“抓贼！”一边追赶那男孩. 24. Each evening she bursts into her apartment with a ritualistic shout of “Honey, I'm home!” 每天晚上她都会像往常一样一边嚷着“亲爱的,我回来啦！”一边冲进公寓. 25.After each desperate effort it shrank with a yell of pain. 每做出一次拼死的努力,它就凄厉地嚎叫着退缩一下. 26.Then,with a loud scream, the horse turned and ran down the valley. 这时马大声嘶叫,转身跑下山谷去. 27. With a terrible howl, he leapt forward and threw himself into the water. 他狂吼一声,向前猛冲,纵身跳进水中. 28. When he finished, the room erupted with applause and cheering. 演出完毕,屋子里爆发出雷鸣般的掌声和喝彩声. 29.She declined the offer with a wave of her hand. 她摆了摆手谢绝了这一提议. 30. The woman had motioned Robert Jordan over to her with a nod of her head. 那妇人点点头,示意罗伯特·乔丹到她身边去. 31. “Probably." agreed Hunter, with a slow nod of his head. 亨特慢慢点了点头,表示赞同地说:“很有可能.” 32. “On an exceedingly limited and particular scale,” suggested Mrs. Chick, with a glance at her brother. “在极其有限和特殊的范围内.”奇克夫人向她的哥哥看了一眼,提示道. 33.Our group rejected this proposal with one voice. 我们小组异口同声地拒绝了这个提议. 34.Dad was always at his best in any danger, but at this moment he froze.“John! Help!” he shouted in a trembling voice, with the tiller still in his hands. 父亲平时面对危险表现得都很勇敢,但这次他呆住了.“约翰！帮帮我！”他用颤抖的声音 喊道,手仍握着舵柄. 35. “I loved Cal,” she confessed in a whisper. “How could he hurt me so?” “我爱卡,”她细声低语承认了,“他怎么可以如此伤害我呀？” 36. He finished off his story in an exciting tone. 他以激动的语调结束了他的故事. 37. At first glance, the problem seemed easy. 乍一看问题似乎很简单. 38. He walked away without a backward glance. 他头也不回地扬长而去. 39. He dived in after her without a second thought. 他不假思索地随她跳入水中. 40. He had intended to go, but on second thought(s),he gave up/abandoned the idea. 他本来想去,但进一步考虑后,打消了这个念头. 41.She blushed at the thought of it. 她想到这件事就脸红. 42. His hair stood on end at the sight of a snake. 一看到蛇他头发根都竖了起来. 43. His anger rose at the sight of the villain, but he calmed himself. 一见那个恶棍他就火冒三丈,但他还是使自己冷静下来. 44. His face clouded at the mention of grandpa's name. 一提起祖父的名字,他脸色就阴沉起来. 45. With this in mind, consider how you might solve a slightly different problem. 清楚这些后,考虑一下你如何解决一个稍微不同的问题. 46.Rise to your feet when the visitor comes in. 来宾进来时请你们起立. 47. The girl jumped to her feet and rushed out of the room. 女孩一跃而起,冲出房间. 48.He struggled to his feet from the chair. 他吃力地从他坐着的椅子上站了起来. 49.As coach Maguire walked out of her office, I inched to the edge of my seat ready to spring to my feet as soon as she announced my name. 当马奎尔教练走出她的办公室时,我小心翼翼挪到座位边上准备等她一宣布我的名字就一跃而起. 50.It's been going on right under my nose. 它就在我的眼前发生了, 51.He saw his life's work destroyed before his very eyes. 他看到他毕生的劳动成果在自己的眼前毁于一旦. 52.They fell asleep in each other's arms. 他们互相搂抱着睡着了. 53.He walked from the court arm in arm with his wife. 他和妻子挽着胳膊走出法庭. 54.Hard work goes hand in hand with success. 努力工作总是与成功并肩而行. 55. The quarreling couple stood in the sitting room, eyeball to eyeball. 夫妻俩站在起居室里吵架,你瞪着我,我瞪着你. 一、语段描写 根据以下情境,使用表示“悲伤、沮丧”的情绪及相关动作描写词汇和句式,写一篇80词左右的短文。 情境提示:我参加了今年的英语演讲比赛。但是我太骄傲了,以至于没有刻苦练习。比赛那天,我开始对自己失去信心,怯场了,没有赢得任何奖品,眼里充满了泪水。 二、读后续写 （2024·湖北·三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Leo and his friends lived in the same street. They’d meet on the sidewalk daily and walk towards the park, where they’d spend the afternoon playing basketball. During the winter, Leo noticed that of all the houses on the block, there was one with an untidy, dirty yard that looked unattended. One Sunday afternoon, the snow began to melt (融化), exposing all the buried leaves, autumn branches, and other rubbish. Leo couldn’t help but stare at his neighbor’s yard a little longer. “You guys go ahead,” Leo told his friends while walking to the park. “This dirty yard needs to be taken care of,” he said. His friends laughed at him upon hearing this. “Are you serious? Are you going to give up playing basketball to clean a yard that isn’t even yours?” one of them asked. “I’ll catch up with you all later,” Leo insisted. None of Leo’s friends offered to stay, so when they left, Leo quickly got to work. He went back home and took the tools he needed. It took Leo the entire afternoon to clean the yard. He got the melting snow out of the pathway and swept the ground. He also cut down the bushes and left them as neat as he could. When he finished, Leo hesitated to ring the doorbell. He hadn’t seen his neighbor in months, an old lady who had to sit in a wheelchair, with a caregiver visiting her every other day. However, he didn’t want to disturb her. The following morning, the old woman, Abigail, opened her door with happiness. She had quietly watched Leo clean up the yard the day before and wanted to approach him, but she had no food or something else to offer him because her caregiver had not arrived. Abigail had not left her house in months; she only depended on her caregiver for her basic needs. After sitting in her wheelchair by the door for a couple of minutes, her neighbors started to notice her. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 They walked up to her to say hello. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The neighbors came to Leo’s house with gifts and Abigail. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   （2024·河南·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A caring mother stared down at her son who was dying of deadly skin cancer. With her heart filled with sorrow，the mother also had a strong sense of determination, even though something was no longer possible. The cancer had brought them the nightmare. But she was still keen on wanting her son’s dreams to come true. She held her son’s hand and asked, “Jack, have you ever had an idea what you want to be when you grow up? Have you ever dreamed and wished about what you will do with your life?” “Mommy, I always want to be a fireman when I grow up.” Mom smiled back and said, “Let’s see if we can make your wish come true.” Later that day she went to the local fire department in Tedson, London, where she met Fireman Jim, who had a heart as big as Tedson. She explained her son’s final wish and asked if it might be possible to give her six-year-old son a ride around the block on a fire engine. Fireman Jim said, “Look, we can do better than that. If you have your son ready at seven o’clock on Wednesday morning, we’ll make him an honorary fireman for the whole day. He can come down to the fire station, eat with us, go out on all the fire calls, the whole nine yards! And, if you give us his sizes, we’ll get a real fire uniform made for him, with a real fire hat — not a toy one — with the emblem of the Tedson Fire Department on it, a yellow slicker like we wear and rubber boots. They’re all manufactured right here in Tedson, so we can get them fast.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Actually, Fireman Jim came to pick up Jack two days later. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One night saw all of Jack’s life signs dropping sharply. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good 单元写作深度指导 读后续写（动作描写3） (2020新课标卷)阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges. Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them. One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy -his name was Bernard-had interested her very much. “I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don't see what he can do.” After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.” “So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.” For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成).” The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn(爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.” 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右: 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When Mrs. Meredith heard of John's idea, she thought it was a good one, too. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作分析】 【参考范文】 When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too. So, they went to the local supermarket together. They bought a bag of corn and some special bags for popcorn. When they got home, they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags. With the popcorn, they went to Bernard’s home. They told Bernard how to sell the popcorn. Bernard and his parents were very grateful. And the Meredith family also felt very happy to help this family. With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. He took the popcorn around to the houses and sold all his popcorn. He earned a lot of money. Then, he wanted to be self-dependent. Therefore, he asked Mrs. Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn. After that, not only did he sell popcorn, but he also added cream and salt to the popcorn to make it taste better. Bernard grew up to be a remarkable man. He did not forget the help of Meredith’s family, and he also did what he could to help those in need. 【写作解析】本文是根据短文进行续写，使之成为一个完整的故事。 1.认真读懂所给提供的材料:善良的Meredith一家住在一个小社区里，他们想帮助一个贫困的家庭。那家的男主人生病卧床，女主人要照顾丈夫、无法外出赚钱，家中的小男孩Bernard也做不了什么事情，生活十分困难。后来，Meredith的孩子想出了一个主意--制作爆米花，让Bernard去卖爆米花。 2.根据所给材料确定文章主题:Meredith如何通过制作和卖爆米花帮助Bernard一家摆脱困境的。 3.续写部分和前面的文章衔接得上，并且与原文情节发展和人物性格相一致，故事情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理。 4.根据第一段首句When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too.(当Meredith太太听到John的主意时，她也认为这是个好主意)可以针对如何实现制作爆米花这个提议展开构思；根据第二段首句With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.(一切准备就绪后，Bernard开始了他的新生意)可以针对Bernard如何通过卖爆米花让家庭摆脱困境展开构思。 5.续写的语言要尽可能与原文的语言保持风格上的一致。文章时态以一般过去时为主。应使用自己熟悉的句型和短语进行写作，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合题干要求，句子结构准确，适当补充信息，使篇章结构连贯。 读后续写高频动作描写词汇（三） ▲“耳、鼻、口”相关的动作 1.I'm all ears. 我洗耳恭听. 2. My ears are burning. 我耳根发热. 3. Young people sometimes seem to turn a deaf ear to the words of their anxious parents. 年轻人有时把父母的苦口婆心当作耳边风. 4. She'll smile from ear to ear if we give her a bike for her birthday. 如果我们送她一辆自行车作为生日礼物,她会笑得合不拢嘴. 5.Chicago provides a feast for the ears of any music lover. 《芝加哥》将给所有音乐爱好者献上一场听觉的盛宴. 6. The classical music is really a feast for the ears. 这首古典乐曲令人大饱耳福. 7.Collapsing buildings, jumping flaming cars, planes falling down and managing to pull up a second before touching down, it was a real trip and a feast for the eyes and ears. 倒塌的建筑物,跳跃燃烧的汽车,飞机坠落并设法在着陆前拉升,它是一次真正的旅行和一场视听盛宴. 8.She cast him a significant smile. 她向他投去意味深长的一笑. 9. You won't have to think, just follow your nose. 你不必考虑,凭直觉行事就行. 10.He lets his wife lead him by the nose. 他对太太唯命是从. 11.My nose began to bleed. 我的鼻子开始出血. 12.She blew her nose as daintily as possible. 她尽量文雅地擤了擤鼻涕. 13.You do have a nose for fashion. 你的时尚嗅觉的确了得. 14. We all had colds and couldn't stop sniffing and sneezing. 我们都感冒了,一个劲儿地抽鼻子,打喷嚏. 15. The pies in the store window made little Tommy's mouth water. 店铺橱窗里摆的馅饼使小汤米馋涎欲滴. 16. When he saw the baker's boy coming, he jumped out from behind the haystack and the boy's mouth fell open in surprise. 他看见那面包师的儿子走来时,就从草堆后边跳了出来,那男孩吓得张大了嘴巴. 17. When you are eating, don't speak with your mouth full of food. 当你吃东西时,不要在你满嘴食物时说话. 18. Both sisters bit their nails as children. 两姐妹都像小孩儿一样咬指甲. 19. He bit his tongue as he found himself on the point of saying “follow that car”. 他想说“跟上那辆车”,话到嘴边又咽了回去. 20. As she passed, she caught sight of a dry crust of bread on the commode, which was moulding there amid the dust; she flung herself upon it and bit into it, muttering. 走过柜橱时,她看见那上面有一块在尘土中发霉的干面包皮,她扑了上去,拿来一面啃,一面嘟囔. 21.The little girl's tooth came out when she bit into the apple. 这小女孩在咬苹果时,她的牙掉了. 22. When I first tasted it I almost barfed. 我第一次尝这个的时候,差点没呕出来. 23.He has tasted the sweets and bitters of life. 他尝遍了人生的酸甜苦辣. 24. The strong smell made me throw up. 这强烈的气味使我呕吐了. 25.She threw up all the medicine she had just taken. 她刚吃完药,又都吐了出来. 26.Michael sighed wearily. 迈克尔疲惫地叹了口气. 27.Lunch was a feast of meat and vegetables, cheese, yoghurt and fruit, with unlimited wine. 午餐很丰盛,有肉、蔬菜、奶酪、酸奶、水果,酒无限量供应. 28. They feasted well into the afternoon on mutton and corn stew. 他们吃玉米炖羊肉一直吃到下午. 29.They feast like there is no tomorrow. 他们大吃大喝,好像没有明天了一样. 30.Polly took a bite of the apple, chewed and swallowed. 波利咬了一口苹果,嚼了嚼咽了下去. 31. He swallowed hard, and walked into the interview room. 他使劲咽了一下口水,然后踏进面试室. 32. Gordon has swallowed the anger he felt. 戈登忍住了内心的愤怒. 33.She managed to swallow her pride and say sorry to him. 她放下架子／放下身段向他道歉. 34. He flashed me a quick grin but rapidly swallowed it when he saw my expression. 他先是冲我咧嘴一笑,不过看到我的表情后又赶紧收起笑脸. 35. I was screaming at them to get out of my house. 我尖叫着让他们离开我的家. 36. Don't yell at me. I came as fast as I could. 你少冲我大喊大叫的,我已经够快的了. 37. At the end of the performance, the entire hall burst into thunderous cheers. 演出结束时全场爆发出雷鸣般的欢呼声. 38. Then we turned a corner-and I stopped and gasped in amazement. 我们转到一个角落－我驻足,惊叹不已. 39. Most of the audience laughed, a small number gasped in astonishment. 大多数听众笑,少数张嘴惊骇. 40. I gasped with/in surprise at the unexpected news. 听到这意外的消息,我惊得倒吸了一口冷气. 41. “Maybe I'm going to die,” he thought as he gasped for air. “我可能要死了.”他一边想一边喘着气. 42.Jack was huffing and puffing to keep up with her. 杰克气喘吁吁地跟着她. 43.The ugly, overweight man struggled breathlessly through the door with his equally ugly wife. 那个丑陋、肥胖的男人和他的同样丑陋的妻子气喘吁吁地挣扎着穿过门. 44. The boys listened breathlessly as the sailor detailed the story of the shipwreck. 当水手详述沉船的故事时,孩子们屏息倾听着. 45. I am out of breath, let me recover my breath. 我上气不接下气,让我喘口气. 46.I must be betting old-those few steps have left/have made/have put me quite out of breath. 我肯定老了,那几级台阶已经让我气喘吁吁了. 47.His chest heaved, and he took a deep breath. 他的胸脯上下起伏,然后他深深地吸了口气. 48. He had stopped to catch his breath and make sure of his directions. 他曾停下来歇口气,同时确定一下方向. 49. He held his breath, not daring to raise his head. 他屏住了气,不敢抬起头来. 50.She breathed freely, and a great weight fell off her. 她自由地呼吸着,好像卸下千斤重担. 51.He heard the security guard's footsteps receding and breathed freely again. 他听到卫士的脚步声消失后,才松了口气. 52.She dropped her voice. 她放低声音. 53. Her voice dropped to a whisper when she was talking with him. 当她和他谈话时,她的讲话声压低而变成耳语. 54.In a voice of near childlike innocence, she asks extraordinarily difficult questions about nature. 她用近乎孩子气的天真的声音问关于大自然的非常难的问题. 55. Arms crossed, he stares up wide-eyed and open-mouthed at the fireworks in the sky. 两臂交叉,他睁大眼睛张大嘴巴盯着看天空中的烟花. 56. She was staring into space, her mouth slack. 她双唇微张,呆呆地望着天空. 57. When he finally reached her, the woman flooded him with questions “Who are you? What antique shop?” 当他终于找到她时,那女人向他连珠炮似地提出了许多问题:“你是谁？什么古董店？” 58. If you harbour concerns ,you usually bombard lieutenants with questions. 如果你心存疑虑,你通常会连珠炮式地向你的副手发问. 59. They fired so many questions at him that he hardly knew what to do. 他们连珠炮似地向他发问,弄得他不知所措. 60. She talked away like a chatterbox. 她像打开了的话匣子一样讲个没完没了. 61.Why did the God this joke to sound out our love? 上天为什么开这种玩笑来试探我们的缘分？ 62. He says his trip to China is an attempt to sound out Chinese world views. 他说他的访华之行是想探询一下中国对世界问题的看法. 63. I am trying to sound out if he'd like to work for us. 我正在试探他,看他是否愿意来为我们工作. 64. They decided to sound him out about/on his interest in the project. to sound out his interest in the project. 他们决定试探一下他对那个项目的兴趣. 65. She claims to be in favour of training, but so far she's only paid lip service to the idea. 她声称赞同训练,但至今还只是停留在口头上, 66,Many governments do nothing more than pay lip service to the advice, or drag their feet. 许多国家的政府对于该建议只是口头承诺,或者行事迟缓. 67.Those who pay lip ice are greater enemies than those who speak openly against you. 那些口是心非的人比那些公开反对你的人对你的威胁更大. 68.He picked his words carefully. 他用词细心谨慎. 69.He even tried to sweet-talk the policewoman who arrested him. 他甚至想和逮住他的女警官套近乎. 70. Don't sweet-talk me into it. I won't give you money anymore. 别给我灌迷魂汤了,我不会再给你钱的. 71. Don't try to sweet-talk me into going to your company party. 别想用甜言蜜语哄我去参加你们公司的聚会. 72. They swapped stories about their army days. 他们互相讲述了他们在军队中的经历. 73. They all sat together at table, laughing and swapping stories. 他们都坐在桌子旁,有说有笑地讲述各自的故事. 74. Startled by the unexpected sight, the girl's eyes became huge and then her mouth curved slowly into a smile. 女孩被这意外的景象吓了一跳,眼睛睁得大大的,但随后嘴角慢慢地弯成一个微笑. 75. But her joke went over like a lead balloon, nobody even cracked a smile. 但是,她的笑话没有引起任何反应,甚至没有一个人笑一笑. 76. When we gave the kid a toy train, he finally cracked a smile. 在我们给了那个小孩一个玩具火车后,他终于笑了. ▲“doing...(动作伴随)”表“动作伴随” *S+V…doing...(同时动作)典型句型:stand/sit/lie+地点＋doing... *S+V...(while)doing...(同时动作) *Having done... (for a long time/again and again),S+V...(先后动作) 1.The children ran out of the room, laughing and talking merrily. 孩子们跑出房间,快乐地说笑着. 2.Laughing and crying, Mrs. Smith grabbed her hat and her children and ran out. 史密斯太太又笑又叫,抓起帽子抱起孩子冲了出去. 3. The children stood back watching their mother kissing this strange man. 孩子们退后看着妈妈和该陌生人接吻. 4.Alan and the other campers sat around the fire chewing meat chops. 艾伦和其他露营者围坐在火堆旁,嚼着肉排. 5. He said it angrily pointing at the notice on the wall. 他手指着墙上的布告,生气地说着. 6.I was flicking idly through a newspaper while awaiting the arrival of orange juice and coffee. 我一边无所事事地翻着报纸,一边等着我点的橙汁和咖啡. 7.This will enable the audience to sit in comfort while watching the shows. 这样能让观众舒舒服服地坐着看表演. 8.I went through a noodle shop, picking up the sweet fragrance, I suddenly felt very hungry. 我穿过一家面馆,闻到了香味,突然间觉得很饿. 9.Having waited for a long time, he felt very bored and took a magazine at random from the shelf to kill time. 等了很长时间,他觉得很无聊,从货架上拿了一本杂志来消磨时间. 10. Having done it once, she made a habit of it. 这种事她干了一次之后就欲罢不能了. ▲“with十宾语十宾补”和“prep.十身体部位”表示“动作伴随” 1. It is not just moms who are right there with their sleeves rolled up. Fathers are doing all the same things that moms do. 在那儿撸起袖子加油干的,不仅有妈妈们还有爸爸们. 2.He failed again and again(with his head) bloody but unbowed(虽败犹荣)． 他一次又一次失败,但每次虽败犹荣. 3.He gets up every day bound and determined(矢志不渝;下定决心)to improve something. 他每天起床后都下定决心把某桩事做得更好. 4.It was very quiet all around with nobody in sight. 周遭静悄悄的,不见一个人. 5. Spain and Greece are in depression, with no hope of recovery in sight. 西班牙和希腊都处于萧条期,没有复苏的希望. 6.With the door being knocked on, the thief's heart beat fast. 随着有人不断敲门,小偷的心跳加速了. 7. The nurse walked on tiptoe for fear of waking the patient. 护士踮着脚走,生怕吵醒病人. 8. Never go down on your knees before difficulty. 在困难面前决不能屈膝. 9. China's rise has been on everyone's lips in recent years. 近年来,中国崛起成为街谈巷议的话题. 10.She held the bird gently in cupped hands. 她双手轻轻地捧着那只小鸟. 11.A fortunate few were pulled out within hours by anxious parents scrabbling at the wreckage with bare hands. 少数幸运的孩子在几个小时内被焦急的父母徒手从废墟中扒出. 12.I walked around the house barefoot/in bare feet. 我赤脚在房子里走来走去. 13.After a few minutes,1 walked over to Terry on shaky legs. “Good luck, Terry,” I said in a whisper that barely masked my urge to cry. 几分钟后我朝泰利走过去,腿发抖.“祝你好运,泰利.”我低声对她说道,几乎难以掩饰想哭的冲动. 14.With a mighty leap, he rose to the surface of the sea. 他使劲用脚向上一蹬,浮出了海面. 15.Sylvia woke with a jump. 西尔维娅一下子惊醒过来. 16.With one bound, he was over the wall. 他纵身一跃就跳过了墙. 17.With a spring, the cat leapt onto the table. 猫一跃跳上桌子. 18. She walked along with a spring in her step. 她迈着轻快的步伐向前走去. 19.Then with one big push my brother sent me down the snowy hillside. 我哥用力一推,我便快速沿着雪山坡滑下. 20.The clever fish then swam round a pile and, with a sudden pull, broke the line. 这条聪明的鱼绕着一根桥桩游了好几圈,然后猛地一扯便挣断了渔线. 21.He walked with a drag. 他拖着脚走路. 22.With a sigh, she straightened in her chair and stretched. 她叹了口气,在椅子里坐直,伸了个懒腰. 23. With a cry of “Stop thief!” he ran after the boy. 他一边喊“抓贼！”一边追赶那男孩. 24. Each evening she bursts into her apartment with a ritualistic shout of “Honey, I'm home!” 每天晚上她都会像往常一样一边嚷着“亲爱的,我回来啦！”一边冲进公寓. 25.After each desperate effort it shrank with a yell of pain. 每做出一次拼死的努力,它就凄厉地嚎叫着退缩一下. 26.Then,with a loud scream, the horse turned and ran down the valley. 这时马大声嘶叫,转身跑下山谷去. 27. With a terrible howl, he leapt forward and threw himself into the water. 他狂吼一声,向前猛冲,纵身跳进水中. 28. When he finished, the room erupted with applause and cheering. 演出完毕,屋子里爆发出雷鸣般的掌声和喝彩声. 29.She declined the offer with a wave of her hand. 她摆了摆手谢绝了这一提议. 30. The woman had motioned Robert Jordan over to her with a nod of her head. 那妇人点点头,示意罗伯特·乔丹到她身边去. 31. “Probably." agreed Hunter, with a slow nod of his head. 亨特慢慢点了点头,表示赞同地说:“很有可能.” 32. “On an exceedingly limited and particular scale,” suggested Mrs. Chick, with a glance at her brother. “在极其有限和特殊的范围内.”奇克夫人向她的哥哥看了一眼,提示道. 33.Our group rejected this proposal with one voice. 我们小组异口同声地拒绝了这个提议. 34.Dad was always at his best in any danger, but at this moment he froze.“John! Help!” he shouted in a trembling voice, with the tiller still in his hands. 父亲平时面对危险表现得都很勇敢,但这次他呆住了.“约翰！帮帮我！”他用颤抖的声音 喊道,手仍握着舵柄. 35. “I loved Cal,” she confessed in a whisper. “How could he hurt me so?” “我爱卡,”她细声低语承认了,“他怎么可以如此伤害我呀？” 36. He finished off his story in an exciting tone. 他以激动的语调结束了他的故事. 37. At first glance, the problem seemed easy. 乍一看问题似乎很简单. 38. He walked away without a backward glance. 他头也不回地扬长而去. 39. He dived in after her without a second thought. 他不假思索地随她跳入水中. 40. He had intended to go, but on second thought(s),he gave up/abandoned the idea. 他本来想去,但进一步考虑后,打消了这个念头. 41.She blushed at the thought of it. 她想到这件事就脸红. 42. His hair stood on end at the sight of a snake. 一看到蛇他头发根都竖了起来. 43. His anger rose at the sight of the villain, but he calmed himself. 一见那个恶棍他就火冒三丈,但他还是使自己冷静下来. 44. His face clouded at the mention of grandpa's name. 一提起祖父的名字,他脸色就阴沉起来. 45. With this in mind, consider how you might solve a slightly different problem. 清楚这些后,考虑一下你如何解决一个稍微不同的问题. 46.Rise to your feet when the visitor comes in. 来宾进来时请你们起立. 47. The girl jumped to her feet and rushed out of the room. 女孩一跃而起,冲出房间. 48.He struggled to his feet from the chair. 他吃力地从他坐着的椅子上站了起来. 49.As coach Maguire walked out of her office, I inched to the edge of my seat ready to spring to my feet as soon as she announced my name. 当马奎尔教练走出她的办公室时,我小心翼翼挪到座位边上准备等她一宣布我的名字就一跃而起. 50.It's been going on right under my nose. 它就在我的眼前发生了, 51.He saw his life's work destroyed before his very eyes. 他看到他毕生的劳动成果在自己的眼前毁于一旦. 52.They fell asleep in each other's arms. 他们互相搂抱着睡着了. 53.He walked from the court arm in arm with his wife. 他和妻子挽着胳膊走出法庭. 54.Hard work goes hand in hand with success. 努力工作总是与成功并肩而行. 55. The quarreling couple stood in the sitting room, eyeball to eyeball. 夫妻俩站在起居室里吵架,你瞪着我,我瞪着你. 一、语段描写 根据以下情境,使用表示“悲伤、沮丧”的情绪及相关动作描写词汇和句式,写一篇80词左右的短文。 情境提示:我参加了今年的英语演讲比赛。但是我太骄傲了,以至于没有刻苦练习。比赛那天,我开始对自己失去信心,怯场了,没有赢得任何奖品,眼里充满了泪水。 【参考范文】 I took part in the English speech contest this year.But I was so proud that I hadn’t practiced hard. On the day of the contest, I began to lose confidence in myself and suffered from stage fright. Finally, I did not win any prize. My eyes were filled with tears. I bit my bottom lip with sadness filling my heart. I dragged my heavy legs with a sinking heart and moved out of the lecture hall. I hung my head in sadness, great sorrow clouding my eyes. On entering the classroom, disappointment and sadness came in waves and tears streamed down my cheeks. The next following days, I felt like I was floating in an ocean of sadness, not wanting to do anything.  二、读后续写 （2024·湖北·三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Leo and his friends lived in the same street. They’d meet on the sidewalk daily and walk towards the park, where they’d spend the afternoon playing basketball. During the winter, Leo noticed that of all the houses on the block, there was one with an untidy, dirty yard that looked unattended. One Sunday afternoon, the snow began to melt (融化), exposing all the buried leaves, autumn branches, and other rubbish. Leo couldn’t help but stare at his neighbor’s yard a little longer. “You guys go ahead,” Leo told his friends while walking to the park. “This dirty yard needs to be taken care of,” he said. His friends laughed at him upon hearing this. “Are you serious? Are you going to give up playing basketball to clean a yard that isn’t even yours?” one of them asked. “I’ll catch up with you all later,” Leo insisted. None of Leo’s friends offered to stay, so when they left, Leo quickly got to work. He went back home and took the tools he needed. It took Leo the entire afternoon to clean the yard. He got the melting snow out of the pathway and swept the ground. He also cut down the bushes and left them as neat as he could. When he finished, Leo hesitated to ring the doorbell. He hadn’t seen his neighbor in months, an old lady who had to sit in a wheelchair, with a caregiver visiting her every other day. However, he didn’t want to disturb her. The following morning, the old woman, Abigail, opened her door with happiness. She had quietly watched Leo clean up the yard the day before and wanted to approach him, but she had no food or something else to offer him because her caregiver had not arrived. Abigail had not left her house in months; she only depended on her caregiver for her basic needs. After sitting in her wheelchair by the door for a couple of minutes, her neighbors started to notice her. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 They walked up to her to say hello. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The neighbors came to Leo’s house with gifts and Abigail. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 They walked up to her to say hello. “How nice to see you out, Abigail!” one of them smiled. “I’m glad to get some fresh air for a change. I couldn’t leave the house for months because of the snow. But yesterday, I saw a kind young man clean my yard,” she said. The neighbors looked at each other with guilty faces. They realized that they had been so blind to Abigail’s problems that no one thought to help her clean the yard. As for the “kind young man”, they knew immediately it was Leo and agreed they should thank him together. The neighbors came to Leo’s house with gifts and Abigail. Leo was surprised to see them holding presents and asked, “What are these for?” “Dear, we’ve come to thank you for helping me clean the yard,” Abigail said, reaching out to touch Leo’s hand. Other neighbors chimed in, “You helped Abigail when none of us did that. Thank you for setting a good example for us.” The neighbors declared every Sunday afternoon “Neighbor Day”, a day when they would gather to do favors. Since that day, their street has been clean and all the yards tidy. 【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述Leo放弃和朋友们打篮球的机会，默默帮助老妇人Abigail打扫院子的故事，而Abigail在屋里看到了发生的一切 。 【要点详解】1.段落续写： ①由续写第一段首句“他们走向她打招呼。”可以预测续写第一段主要内容：Abigail讲述昨天发生的事情，邻居决定陪同Abigail去感谢Leo。 ②由第二段首句“邻居们带着礼物和Abigail来到Leo家。”可以预测续写第二段主要内容：Abigail带着礼物当面感谢Leo，邻居也承诺后期轮流帮助Abigail。 2.续写线索：邻居看望Abigail——Abigail叙述昨天发生的事情——邻居决定陪同Abigail去感谢Leo——邻居被Leo行为感动——承诺后期轮流帮助Abigail 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①打扫：clean/sweep ②帮助：help /do sb a favor/assist ③宣布：declare/announce 情绪类 ①高兴的：glad/delighted/happy ②惊讶的：surprised /astonished [高分句型1] They realized that they had been so blind to Abigail’s problems that no one thought to help her clean the yard.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和so...that引导的结果状语从句） [高分句型2]“Dear, we’ve come to thank you for helping me clean the yard,” Abigail said, reaching out to touch Leo’s hand. （运用了现在分词作状语） [高分句型3] The neighbors declared every Sunday afternoon “Neighbor Day”, a day when they would gather to do favors. （运用when引导的定语从句）   （2024·河南·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A caring mother stared down at her son who was dying of deadly skin cancer. With her heart filled with sorrow，the mother also had a strong sense of determination, even though something was no longer possible. The cancer had brought them the nightmare. But she was still keen on wanting her son’s dreams to come true. She held her son’s hand and asked, “Jack, have you ever had an idea what you want to be when you grow up? Have you ever dreamed and wished about what you will do with your life?” “Mommy, I always want to be a fireman when I grow up.” Mom smiled back and said, “Let’s see if we can make your wish come true.” Later that day she went to the local fire department in Tedson, London, where she met Fireman Jim, who had a heart as big as Tedson. She explained her son’s final wish and asked if it might be possible to give her six-year-old son a ride around the block on a fire engine. Fireman Jim said, “Look, we can do better than that. If you have your son ready at seven o’clock on Wednesday morning, we’ll make him an honorary fireman for the whole day. He can come down to the fire station, eat with us, go out on all the fire calls, the whole nine yards! And, if you give us his sizes, we’ll get a real fire uniform made for him, with a real fire hat — not a toy one — with the emblem of the Tedson Fire Department on it, a yellow slicker like we wear and rubber boots. They’re all manufactured right here in Tedson, so we can get them fast.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Actually, Fireman Jim came to pick up Jack two days later. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One night saw all of Jack’s life signs dropping sharply. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Actually, Fireman Jim came to pick up Jack two days later. Getting Jack dressed in his fire uniform, Jim accompanied him safely from his hospital bed to the waiting hook and ladder truck. Seated up on the back of the truck, Jack helped drive it back to the fire station. That day there were three fire calls in Tedson and Jack got to go out on all of them. Jack rode in different fire engines, the attendants’ van and even the fire chief’s car. He was also videotaped for the local news program. One night saw all of Jack’s life signs dropping sharply. Recalling the day that Jack had spent as a fireman, the nurse called the fire chief and asked if it would be possible to send a fireman in uniform to the hospital to be with Jack as he made his transition. About ten minutes later a hook and ladder truck reached the hospital, extended its ladder up to Jack’s third floor open window and 10 firemen climbed up the ladder into Jack’s room. With his mother’s permission, they hugged him, telling him how much they loved him. 【写作分析】本文以一位濒临死亡的晚期皮肤癌患儿杰克想当一名消防员的遗愿为线索展开，讲述了一位悲伤的母亲，想为患皮肤癌的儿子杰克实现当一名消防员的梦想。她得到了善良的消防队员吉姆的帮助，答应她不仅仅让她儿子乘坐消防车绕街区一圈，而且还可以让他参与更多的事情。两天后，吉姆给杰克穿上消防制服，把他带到消防局，杰克在那里还接到了三个火警电话，乘坐了不同的消防车、护理人员的货车和甚至消防队长的车，他的梦想实现了。杰克深受感动，最后，在消防员和亲人的爱下，杰克离开了这个世界。 【要点详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“事实上，两天后消防员吉姆来接杰克。”可知，第一段可描写消防员吉姆遵守与杰克母亲的诺言，来到医院，给杰克穿上消防服并将他带到消防局，在消防局里，杰克进行了三次消防行动，也坐了不同的消防车等，参加了一系列活动，真正体验了消防员的生活。 ②由第二段首句内容“一天晚上，杰克的所有生命体征都急剧下降。”可知，第二段可描写杰克病危，护士打电话给消防队长，希望他可以派一名穿着制服的消防员去医院陪杰克过渡最后一刻，大约十分钟后，消防员来了，在消防员和亲人的爱下，杰克离开了这个世界。 2.续写线索：吉姆来到医院——吉姆带杰克去消防局——杰克在消防局体验消防员工作——杰克病危——护士请求——消防员来了——杰克离开世界 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①陪伴某人：accompany sb./keep sb. company ②询问：ask/enquire ③拥抱：hug/embrace 情绪类 喜欢、爱：love/be fond of [高分句型1]. Getting Jack dressed in his fire uniform, Jim accompanied him safely from his hospital bed to the waiting hook and ladder truck. (运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2]. 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