06.必修第一册Unit 3 Getting along with others(读后续写-动作描写2)-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高一英语单元写作深度指导(译林版2020)

Unit 3 Getting along with others 单元写作深度指导 读后续写（动作描写2） (2021新课标I&II卷)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右。 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 【写作示例】 本文是一篇记叙文。讲述的是Jenna和Jeff这对双胞胎兄妹为了在母亲节早上给母亲惊喜而精心策划并制作早餐的故事；他们克服困难，永不放弃，折射的是他们对母亲的拳拳之爱。 Paragraph 1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Knowing what they were preparing for, he was greatly surprised. So immediately, he offered to get involved in the kids’ job. Firstly, he put the pot of porridge on a gentle heat, asking Jeff to watch out for it going for fifteen minutes. And then, he asked Jenna to break another two eggs and mix them with milk. With all preparations done, they started to fry bread together. In a flash, sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen. To their delight, the breakfast was a success in the end. Paragraph 1: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Eyes opened, the woman heard a harmonious “Happy Mother’s Day” from her twin kids with hot, sweet breakfast before her. Behind the children stood their father. To shed light on the game of the gift, he told the mother the whole story. After learning about what happened, she rose quickly to gaze at the boy’s hand with moved tears rolling down her cheeks. “Thank you, my honey!” said the mother. 【写作分析】本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败的故事。 【要点详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。”可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。 ②由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。 2.续写线索：指导——积极——献礼——感动 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①帮助：help/assist ②完成：finish/complete ③拥抱：hug/embrace 情绪类 ①高兴：happy/delighted ②感动：moved/touched [高分句型1]. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]. It was not only the breakfast, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. (固定短语not only…but (also)和强调句型) 读后续写高频动作描写词汇（二） ▲动作的速度 1.It all happened so suddenly.(突然地;意外地) 2.The sky darkened abruptly.(突然地;意外地) 3. Cathy worked quickly and methodically.(利索地) 4.She moved swiftly to the rescue.(迅速地;敏捷地) 5. He walked briskly along the path swinging his rolled-up umbrella.(轻快地;伶俐地) 6. The road fell sharply to the sea.(急剧地) 7.Unemployment is rising steeply.(急剧地;大幅度地) 8.Crime figures are rising rapidly.(迅速地) 9.I will deal with it promptly and fairly.(迅速地;毫不迟疑) 10.AlIl enquiries were dealt with as speedily as possible.(快速地) 11.She hastily cooked up an excuse.(匆忙地) 12.It was late and she walked home hurriedly.(仓促地;匆忙地) 13. We'll get there slowly but surely.(稳扎稳打地) 14. We should proceed with it methodically but not too slowly.(有步骤地;有条不紊地) ▲动作的频率 1. I never knew that you had a twin sister.(从未) 2. I very rarely wear a raincoat because I spend most of my time in a car.(难得;罕有) 3.She seldom, if ever, goes to the theatre.(不常;难得) 4. We occasionally meet for a drink after work.(偶尔;有时候) 5.Modem sports connect with the economy minutely.(每时每刻地) 6.We are hourly expecting news from the climbers.(每小时地;随时) 7. You can pay monthly or annually.(每月／年) 8. The victim was stabled repeatedly in the chest.(反复地;多次地) 9. Buses run frequently between the city and the airport.(频繁地) 10.I'm usually home by 6 o'clock.(通常地) 11.The factory typically produces 500 chairs a week.(通常;一般) 12.Mothers routinely lay babies on their backs to sleep.(惯常地) 13. So many of us habitually gossip or complain.(习惯地) 14.We are mostly out on Sundays.(通常地) 15.Normally a well-built man, he had lost more than 30 pounds.(通常地) 16.I generally get up at six(通常地) 17. If he can't help, there is always John.(总是) ▲动作的进程 1.The castle was originally surrounded by a triple wall, only one of which remains.(起初) 2. Initially the government was unwilling to accept the defeat.(最初;起初) 3.Previously she had very little time to work in her own garden.(以前) 4.No one knows how many people currently surf the Net.(目前) 5. The crime is presently being investigated by the police.(句中表现在:眼下) 6. Presently, the door opened again and three men stepped out.(句首表过去:不久) 7.She'll be here presently.(句尾表将来:马上) 8. I'll be ready shortly.(马上) 9.The driver was killed instantly.(立刻;当即) 10. The point of my question may not be immediately apparent.(立刻;马上) 11.Tell them I'll be there directly.(立刻;直接) 12. Wine is made from the juice of freshly picked grapes.(刚刚;新近) 13. It is not your talents or abilities, but your choices that ultimately decide your fate.(最终) 14.The bilateral relations have been developing healthily and stably since the two countries established diplomatic ties in 1992.(稳定地) 15.It is becoming increasingly clear that this problem will not be easily solved.(越来越····..;日益) 16.The weather gradually improved.(逐渐地) 17.The pain got progressively worse.(逐渐地) 18. They arrived promptly at two o'clock.(准时地;及时地) 19.Thank heavens the ship was late leaving! Had it left punctually, we should have missed it.(准时) 20. He moved restlessly from one foot to the other.(不停地) 21. We worked solidly for six hours.(连续地) 22. The only question is whether I will rely on it consistently.(一如既往地) 23. I admired her timelessly beautiful skin.(永恒地;永存地) 24. Roman culture was enduringly fertilized.(耐久地;永久地) 25.I became lastingly devoted to what I called “adventures” concurrently planned and acted.(持续地) 26. He and his family have settled permanently in the States.(永久地;时刻地) 27.I saw him step forward momentarily but then hang back, nervously massaging(搓着)his hands.(片刻地;时刻地) 28.He had spoken to Emma only briefly.(短暂地) 29. The next round of talks is tentatively scheduled to begin October 21st in Washington.(临时地;暂时地) 30. We regret this service is temporarily unavailable.(暂时地) 31. I go jogging fairly regularly.(定期地) 32. We will refresh this information periodically to keep our system updated.(周期性地;定期地) 33.Running outside is potentially dangerous, because roof tiles and glass may fall on you.(潜在地;可能地) 34. Stress in itself is not necessarily injurious.(未必;不一定) ▲动作的程度 1.I knew her slightly.(略微) 2. He looked faintly embarrassed.(微弱地;有点) 3. He felt mildly surprised at what we had done.(轻微地) 4. He was only partly responsible for the accident.(一定程度上;部分地) 5.Some efforts have been modestly successful.(适度地) 6. How much money do you need to do the job properly?(适当地;正确地) 7.The government has been accused of not responding appropriately to the needs of the homeless.(适当地;正确地) 8.The journey took approximately seven hours.(大约) 9. The need for sleep varies considerably from person to person.(非常;很;相当多地) 10. I go jogging fairly regularly.(相当地) 11. The two sets of figures are not significantly different.(显著地;有重大意义地) 12. He paused, apparently lost in thought.(显然) 13.She walked slowly down the road, evidently in pain.(显然) 14.She explained everything very clearly.(清楚地;显然) 15. He was obviously drunk.(显然) 16. I distinctly remember mocking(对·····嗤之以鼻)the idea.(明显地;清楚地) 17.I specifically told you not to go near the water.(明确地) 18.I know exactly how she felt.(精确地;确切地) 19.The meeting starts at 2 o'clock precisely.(准确地;精确地) 20.The task was said to be most long and tiring but equally rewarding.(同样地) 21.The lecture was not particularly interesting.(特别;尤其) 22.I was not feeling especially happy that day.(特别;尤其) 23.She found it extremely difficult to get a job.(极其) 24.Being tall can make you feel incredibly self-confident.(极其) 25.Doing this seems to be unbelievably difficult.(难以置信地) 26.She absolutely adores you.(极其) 27.They intended to invest hugely in new technology.(极其;巨大地) 28.I was broadly in favour of it.(大体上;基本上) 29. I've completely forgotten her name.(彻底地) 30.I entirely agree with you.(完全地) 31.I'm not totally convinced that he knows what he is doing.(完全地) 32. I fully understand your motives.(完全地) 33. She took the job purely and simply for the money.(仅仅地;完全地) 34. We became the best of friends and he influenced me deeply.(极其;深刻地) 35. His teachers think very highly of him.(非常;很高地) 36. The car is in remarkably good condition for its age.(极其;显著地) 37.Despite the positive news, he said the rate of deforestation remained alarmingly high in many countries.(极其;让人担忧地) 38. Very rarely have I seen such a strikingly beautiful woman!(醒目地;斐然可观地) 39. She is madly in love with him.(极端地;疯狂地) 40. They laughed and sang heartily.(尽情地;极为) 41.They wanted to win so badly.(非常;在很大程度上) 42. We are profoundly affected by what happens to us in childhood.(深刻地;彻底地) 43. He was surprised to find his room thoroughly cleaned and everything arranged in perfect order.(彻底地;认真仔细地) 44. He's ten. He's fantastically imaginative, but too casual.(极其) 45.I was beginning to feel amazingly sleepy.(出奇地) 46. How unimaginably pale life without hope would be!(难以想象地) 47.My experience tells me that however spectacularly you get your heart broken, eventually it's okay.(壮观地;令人吃惊地) 48.I felt astonishingly calm in my place by the captain.(令人惊讶地;惊人地) 49.The weather was surprisingly warm and sunny.(惊人地;出人意外地) 50.The theatre was practically empty.(几乎;差不多) 51. Men are ridiculously pig-headed(死脑筋)and stubborn.(可笑地;荒谬地) 52.The paintings were sold for absurdly high prices.(荒谬地;荒唐地) 53. I still believe that people are fundamentally good.(从根本上说) 54.I cannot adequately express how sorry I am for what I have done.(充分地;足够地) 55. He is admirably suited for the job.(非常;极好地) 56. I'm awfully sorry about that problem the other day,(非常;恶劣地) 57. He is proud of his ability to remember things accurately.(精确地) 58.I list roughly my work as follows,(粗略地) 59.The causes of the phenomenon are still incompletely understood.(不完全地) 60.Life in the city is incomparably better for children than life in the country.(无比地;无敌地) 61.Husband and wife were similarly successful in their chosen careers.(相似地) 62. His analysis of urban use of agricultural land has been proved essentially correct.(本质上;大体上) 63.Education is vitally important for the country's future.(极其) 64.I narrowly missed a cyclist who wobbled into my path.(狭窄地;勉强地) 65.A notably short, silver-haired man, he plays basketball with his staff several times a week.(尤其;显著地) 66. Although the car is basically sound, I was worried about certain areas.(基本上;总的说来) 67. The difficulty lies primarily in the fact that the fiber core is relatively small.(首要地;主要地) 68. I like to think I'm relatively easy to get along with.(相对地) 69.Fortunately,the weather that winter was reasonably mild.(尚可;过得去;适度地) 70. Things are moving painfully slowly.(非常地) 71. My parents love me, but not excessively.(过分地;过度地) 72.She was several inches taller than I was, and unnaturally blond.(异常地) 73. After a week of effort, when I successfully skipped for the first time I was more than indescribably happy!(不可名状地;难以形容地) 74.Elaine felt unaccountably shy for once.(不可解释地;莫名其妙地) 75.Suppose you go to the best restaurant in town with your wealthy friends. To you, the food is unimaginably good. (超乎想像地) 76.With the help of his friends and his unbelievably tremendous patience and effort, he made it.(难以置信地) 77. I am not, I hope, unreasonably naive.(不合理地;离谱地) 78.His responsibilities press heavily upon him.(在很大程度上;沉重地) 79.I am acutely aware of the difficulties we face.(极其;强烈地) 80. If anything, swimming will appeal to her most strongly.(强烈地;强有力地) ▲动作的角度 1.The richer we have become materially ,the poorer we have become morally and spiritually.(物质上)(道德上)(精神上) 2.We must heal ourselves emotionally and spiritually.(情绪上) 3.Physically I might not have been overseas but mentally and spiritually I was with them.(身体上)(心理上) 4.She was physically delicate(孱弱) and psychologically unstable.(心理上) 5.He failed to shine academically.(在学术方面) 6.Life for the successful doctor can be emotionally and financially rewarding.(在经济上) 7.A five-day week benefits more than individually and economically.(在经济上) 8.Maria bent her head instinctively to avoid being recognized.(本能地) 9. Today was my birthday. I was officially eighteen years old.(正式地;官方地) 10. The school is legally responsible for your child's safety.(法律上;合法地) 11. The factory was unlawfully built on a piece of land which belongs to a nearby school.(非法地;不正当地) 12. Theoretically, the price is supposed to be marked on the shelf.(理论上;照理说) 13.I think they developed their ideas step by step logically.(逻辑上;符合逻辑地) 14.Characteristically,he worked hard at the assignment.(典型地;有代表性地) 他一如既往地认真完成分派的任务. 15. He was typically modest about his achievements.(典型地;果然) 16.Young people should know how to write clearly and reason statistically.(统计上地) 17. It satisfies the user's requirements both functionally and emotionally.(功能上地) 18.Technically,the two sides have been in a state of war ever since 1949.(技术上;严格说来) 19. If children can't think, read, write and compute, they cannot adapt technologically.(技术上地;科技地) 20.I would pay extra for more environmentally friendly cars and fuel.(有关环境方面) 21. The responsibility naturally fell on our shoulders.(天然地;顺理成章地) 22.Not unnaturally, I wanted to know where my daughter had been all night.(很自然) 23.The crime was not politically motivated.(政治地;政党地) 24.My watch shows the time digitally.(以数字形式地) 25. Top supermarkets are to ban many genetically modified foods.(基因地;从遗传学角度) 26. You can pay bills over the Internet. Additionally, you can check your balance or order statements.(此外) 27.The agency will make travel arrangements for you. Alternatively, you can organize your own transport.(或者) 28.I want to speak to each member of the group individually.(分别地;独特地) 29.Wash the white clothes together and the blue one separately.(单独地;分别地) 30. I take everything too personally.(亲自地;就个人而言) 31.There is only one China in the world. This is a fact which is universally recognized by the international community.(普遍地) 32.The song is becoming widely popular.(广泛地) 33. It is very important for us to verbally compliment and encourage one another.(言词上;口头地) 34.All candidates must first of all be orally examined,(口头地;口服地) 35. We'll discuss the matter more concretely next time. I hope everyone would make some preparations.(具体地) 36. He described his idea abstractly, without any illustrative examples.(抽象地;理论上地) 37.He has spent several minutes telling about that viewpoint detailedly.(详细地;逐条地) 读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Pat was the new kid in town.Her dad got a new job, so they had to move from their old home, school, friends and everything in South America to this new city.Now they were total strangers here. 　　Summer vacation went by while they unpacked, arranged furniture and adjusted to the new city.School was approaching.Pat dreaded it.She was not an outgoing person, so making friends was not easy for this shy and quiet girl.She was filled with fears and worries.She thought, “Would I make friends? Would I fit in? Would I survive at all in this strange new world?” But there she was, preparing for a new school full of strangers. 　　Here came her first day in the new school.She arrived at school on time, found her classroom and seated herself.Everything was going well until the first class when Pat’s teacher asked her to introduce herself in front of the whole class.She had prepared for it the day before, so she should have done it well.But when she uttered the first sentence, the whole class burst out laughing and began to whisper.It was then that Pat realized she talked with a very strange accent which was different from the locals.Blushing with embarrassment, she finished her introduction quickly and sat there all day long without talking with others. 　　After school, Pat came home crying, “It’s an awful day.All of them are disagreeable.I hate them.” After knowing what had happened in the school, Pat’s mother gently hugged her and comforted her, “Hatred can hurt both others and yourself.Honey, try to be happy.” In order to cheer her up, Pat’s mother suggested, “How about having a party this Saturday? We haven’t had any party since we arrived here.” Party is such an appealing event for kids like Pat.Right away, she stopped crying and looked at her mother excitedly, “Oh yes! Ice cream! Cake! Red, red balloons!” 　　“And friends?” mom asked gently. 　　Hearing this, Pat sobbed again, “I haven’t got any friends here.Nothing but enemies.” 注意: 1.续写词数应为150个左右; 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 　　“If so, let’s have an enemy party.I think it would be interesting,” Pat’s mom smiled.______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ 　　On Saturday, it was sunny, and all of Pat’s classmates came to the party. ______ ____________________________________________________________________ 【写作分析】 Step 1　获取语篇信息 1.故事发展线索:开一个让“敌人”参加的派对→帕特妈妈的建议和解释→帕特明白妈妈的意思→帕特所有的同学都来参加聚会→关系终于融洽→感悟 2.情感发展线索:茫然(刚搬新家)→纠结(不愿意开派对)→赞同(决定开派对)→高兴(同学们都来参加派对) Step 2　合理推测走向 1.针对续写段首1:“If so, let’s have an enemy party.I think it would be interesting,” Pat’s mom smiled.设问: (1)Would Pat accept her mother’s suggestion? (2)How did Pat’s mother persuade her to accept the advice? (3)What would Pat do? 推测:续写的第一段首句讲的是帕特的妈妈的建议,让她开一个由她的“敌人”参加的派对。接着应该写她的妈妈如何说服她接受这一建议的,她对妈妈的建议有何想法,决定如何做。 2.针对续写段首 2:On Saturday, it was sunny, and all of Pat’s classmates came to the party.设问: (1)What did Pat and her mother prepare for the party? (2)What happened during the party? (3)What was the result of the party? 推测:续写的第二段首句讲的是星期六所有同学都来帕特家参加派对。接着应该写帕特和她的妈妈为派对进行的布置和安排,派对上同学们融洽相处的过程,最后写对此事件的感悟:朋友间应当相互理解。 Step 3　打造合规词句 1.帕特困惑地看着妈妈,想知道“敌人”的聚会怎么可能有趣。 Pat looked at her mother in confusion,wondering how an enemy party could possibly be fun.  2.帕特琢磨着妈妈的话,意识到也许有另一种方式来处理她的处境,一种关于理解和宽恕的方式。 Pat pondered over her mother’s words,realizing that maybe there was a different way to approach her situation, one that involved understanding and forgiveness.  3.后院装饰着五颜六色的装饰品,空气中充满了笑声和兴奋。 The backyard was adorned with colorful decorations, and the air was filled with laughter and excitement.  4.随着时间的推移,帕特观察到她的同学们彼此之间的互动,慢慢地意识到他们并不像她最初想象的那样不友好。 As the day progressed, Pat observed her classmates interacting with one another, slowly realizing that they were not as disagreeable as she had initially thought.  5.帕特妈妈关于“敌人参加的派对”的想法变成了一个转折点,敌人变成了熟人,熟人变成了朋友,理解的种子也播下了。 Pat’s mom’s idea of an “enemy party” turned out to be a turning point,where enemies became acquaintances, acquaintances turned into friends, and the seeds of understanding were sown.  Step 4 衔接过渡成篇 　　“If so, let’s have an enemy party.I think it would be interesting,” Pat’s mom smiled.Pat looked at her mother in confusion, wondering how an enemy party could possibly be fun.But her mother continued, “Invite your classmates, including those who laughed at you today.Maybe they just need a chance to get to know you better and realize that you can be friends.It’s an opportunity to break down the walls and build bridges.” Pat pondered over her mother’s words, realizing that maybe there was a different way to approach her situation, one that involved understanding and forgiveness. 　　On Saturday, it was sunny, and all of Pat’s classmates came to the party.The backyard was adorned with colorful decorations, and the air was filled with laughter and excitement.As the day progressed, Pat observed her classmates interacting with one another, slowly realizing that they were not as disagreeable as she had initially thought.Conversations sparked, smiles were exchanged, and barriers began to crumble.Pat’s mom’s idea of an “enemy party” turned out to be a turning point, where enemies became acquaintances, acquaintances turned into friends, and the seeds of understanding were sown. 一、语段描写 根据以下情境,使用表示“惊讶、羞愧”的情绪及相关动作描写词汇和句式,写一篇80词左右的短文。 情境提示:你的同桌Lily期中考试成绩位居班级第十名,你感到很惊讶,因为她以前学习成绩不好,你认为她可能考试作弊了。同学们也惊讶地看着她。后来你了解到Lily在家熬夜学习,弥补功课,充分利用时间复习备考。你对你的行为感到羞愧。 二、读后续写 （2025·河南安阳·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One day in the 1990s, I was helping my brother move from a teaching job after college. He was driving his little pickup truck pulling a trailer (拖车) and I was driving my old little Ford station car, packed with his things. It was a Sunday. I was driving along. All of a sudden, my car just died. No warning, nothing. I stopped at the side of a country highway and waited for my brother to realize I wasn’t behind him anymore and turn around. After about 20 minutes, he did return to find me. However, neither of us knew much about cars. After waiting for what seemed to be a century, a man, introducing himself as Jerry, came out of nowhere, took one look at the engine and said, “Timing belt.” We had asked about getting the car pulled 30 miles to the closest large town on the phone, only to find that it was going to be an expensive repair, even if the engine was OK. Just at this moment, Jerry saw the difficult situation. He saw two poor kids in their early 20s struggling with life, and he said, “Well, it’s Sunday. Nothing’s going to be open. I tell you what I will do. My next-door neighbor is a repairman. Let’s push the car down to his repair shop and we’ll see what we can do.” So we did exactly as Jerry told us. Jerry’s neighbor called his friend at the auto parts store, which was closed on Sunday. He did a favor and got the parts needed, driving them 30 miles out to the repair shop. And we sat around, telling our stories on the way while the car was being fixed. The repairman’s son, a kid of about 9 or 10, was hanging around. After some chatting, we learned that he was extremely bored as no one played with him. 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The boy badly desired someone to help build a treehouse in the woods. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When we went back to the repair shop, the car had been all fixed. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2024·湖北·一模）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On Monday morning I wore my favourite dress to school for the first time since I had started at Edison Middle School. I said good morning to our headmaster, Mr. Jordan, at the school entrance. With a genuine smile that reached his eyes, he greeted me by name, inquiring about my weekend and showing a sincere interest in my day ahead. That was really comforting! It was the day of the poetry festival. and I was excited. At my old school, I had won the poetry award every year. I’m horrible at sports, and too shy to be popular—but І do write good poetry, although I never told anyone here about it yet. The poem I wrote for the Edison Festival was about my dad. I wished I would surprise my classmates and Mrs. Baker, my English teacher. When Mrs. Baker called on me, I was so nervous that I had to swallow about ten times before I could speak. But once I started, I didn’t even bother to look at my paper. I’d spent so much time perfecting the rhymes that I knew the poem by heart. I had just started the third line when I noticed Mrs. Baker’s expression change. She looked at me with a mixture of appreciation and disbelief. I stopped in the middle of a word and waited for her to say something. “Linda, you are supposed to be reading a poem you made up yourself, not reciting something you learned. That is called plagiarism(剽窃)!” “Oh, but it’s an original one. I did make it up, it’s about my dad.” I heard a “Yeah, right!” from somewhere behind me, and someone else laughed. I opened my mouth to explain, but no words came out. “Perhaps you could step out and gather your thoughts, and when you feel ready, we can discuss this with a clear mind,” said Mrs. Baker. I’d been standing outside for 5 minutes when Mr. Jordan came over to ask me what happened. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Almost in tears, I poured out the whole story. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Inspired by his words, I gathered my courage and turned back to the classroom. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 3 Getting along with others 单元写作深度指导 读后续写（动作描写2） (2021新课标I&II卷)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右。 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 【写作示例】 本文是一篇记叙文。讲述的是Jenna和Jeff这对双胞胎兄妹为了在母亲节早上给母亲惊喜而精心策划并制作早餐的故事；他们克服困难，永不放弃，折射的是他们对母亲的拳拳之爱。 Paragraph 1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Knowing what they were preparing for, he was greatly surprised. So immediately, he offered to get involved in the kids’ job. Firstly, he put the pot of porridge on a gentle heat, asking Jeff to watch out for it going for fifteen minutes. And then, he asked Jenna to break another two eggs and mix them with milk. With all preparations done, they started to fry bread together. In a flash, sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen. To their delight, the breakfast was a success in the end. Paragraph 1: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Eyes opened, the woman heard a harmonious “Happy Mother’s Day” from her twin kids with hot, sweet breakfast before her. Behind the children stood their father. To shed light on the game of the gift, he told the mother the whole story. After learning about what happened, she rose quickly to gaze at the boy’s hand with moved tears rolling down her cheeks. “Thank you, my honey!” said the mother. 【写作分析】本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败的故事。 【要点详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。”可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。 ②由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。 2.续写线索：指导——积极——献礼——感动 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①帮助：help/assist ②完成：finish/complete ③拥抱：hug/embrace 情绪类 ①高兴：happy/delighted ②感动：moved/touched [高分句型1]. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]. It was not only the breakfast, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. (固定短语not only…but (also)和强调句型) 读后续写高频动作描写词汇（二） ▲动作的速度 1.It all happened so suddenly.(突然地;意外地) 2.The sky darkened abruptly.(突然地;意外地) 3. Cathy worked quickly and methodically.(利索地) 4.She moved swiftly to the rescue.(迅速地;敏捷地) 5. He walked briskly along the path swinging his rolled-up umbrella.(轻快地;伶俐地) 6. The road fell sharply to the sea.(急剧地) 7.Unemployment is rising steeply.(急剧地;大幅度地) 8.Crime figures are rising rapidly.(迅速地) 9.I will deal with it promptly and fairly.(迅速地;毫不迟疑) 10.AlIl enquiries were dealt with as speedily as possible.(快速地) 11.She hastily cooked up an excuse.(匆忙地) 12.It was late and she walked home hurriedly.(仓促地;匆忙地) 13. We'll get there slowly but surely.(稳扎稳打地) 14. We should proceed with it methodically but not too slowly.(有步骤地;有条不紊地) ▲动作的频率 1. I never knew that you had a twin sister.(从未) 2. I very rarely wear a raincoat because I spend most of my time in a car.(难得;罕有) 3.She seldom, if ever, goes to the theatre.(不常;难得) 4. We occasionally meet for a drink after work.(偶尔;有时候) 5.Modem sports connect with the economy minutely.(每时每刻地) 6.We are hourly expecting news from the climbers.(每小时地;随时) 7. You can pay monthly or annually.(每月／年) 8. The victim was stabled repeatedly in the chest.(反复地;多次地) 9. Buses run frequently between the city and the airport.(频繁地) 10.I'm usually home by 6 o'clock.(通常地) 11.The factory typically produces 500 chairs a week.(通常;一般) 12.Mothers routinely lay babies on their backs to sleep.(惯常地) 13. So many of us habitually gossip or complain.(习惯地) 14.We are mostly out on Sundays.(通常地) 15.Normally a well-built man, he had lost more than 30 pounds.(通常地) 16.I generally get up at six(通常地) 17. If he can't help, there is always John.(总是) ▲动作的进程 1.The castle was originally surrounded by a triple wall, only one of which remains.(起初) 2. Initially the government was unwilling to accept the defeat.(最初;起初) 3.Previously she had very little time to work in her own garden.(以前) 4.No one knows how many people currently surf the Net.(目前) 5. The crime is presently being investigated by the police.(句中表现在:眼下) 6. Presently, the door opened again and three men stepped out.(句首表过去:不久) 7.She'll be here presently.(句尾表将来:马上) 8. I'll be ready shortly.(马上) 9.The driver was killed instantly.(立刻;当即) 10. The point of my question may not be immediately apparent.(立刻;马上) 11.Tell them I'll be there directly.(立刻;直接) 12. Wine is made from the juice of freshly picked grapes.(刚刚;新近) 13. It is not your talents or abilities, but your choices that ultimately decide your fate.(最终) 14.The bilateral relations have been developing healthily and stably since the two countries established diplomatic ties in 1992.(稳定地) 15.It is becoming increasingly clear that this problem will not be easily solved.(越来越····..;日益) 16.The weather gradually improved.(逐渐地) 17.The pain got progressively worse.(逐渐地) 18. They arrived promptly at two o'clock.(准时地;及时地) 19.Thank heavens the ship was late leaving! Had it left punctually, we should have missed it.(准时) 20. He moved restlessly from one foot to the other.(不停地) 21. We worked solidly for six hours.(连续地) 22. The only question is whether I will rely on it consistently.(一如既往地) 23. I admired her timelessly beautiful skin.(永恒地;永存地) 24. Roman culture was enduringly fertilized.(耐久地;永久地) 25.I became lastingly devoted to what I called “adventures” concurrently planned and acted.(持续地) 26. He and his family have settled permanently in the States.(永久地;时刻地) 27.I saw him step forward momentarily but then hang back, nervously massaging(搓着)his hands.(片刻地;时刻地) 28.He had spoken to Emma only briefly.(短暂地) 29. The next round of talks is tentatively scheduled to begin October 21st in Washington.(临时地;暂时地) 30. We regret this service is temporarily unavailable.(暂时地) 31. I go jogging fairly regularly.(定期地) 32. We will refresh this information periodically to keep our system updated.(周期性地;定期地) 33.Running outside is potentially dangerous, because roof tiles and glass may fall on you.(潜在地;可能地) 34. Stress in itself is not necessarily injurious.(未必;不一定) ▲动作的程度 1.I knew her slightly.(略微) 2. He looked faintly embarrassed.(微弱地;有点) 3. He felt mildly surprised at what we had done.(轻微地) 4. He was only partly responsible for the accident.(一定程度上;部分地) 5.Some efforts have been modestly successful.(适度地) 6. How much money do you need to do the job properly?(适当地;正确地) 7.The government has been accused of not responding appropriately to the needs of the homeless.(适当地;正确地) 8.The journey took approximately seven hours.(大约) 9. The need for sleep varies considerably from person to person.(非常;很;相当多地) 10. I go jogging fairly regularly.(相当地) 11. The two sets of figures are not significantly different.(显著地;有重大意义地) 12. He paused, apparently lost in thought.(显然) 13.She walked slowly down the road, evidently in pain.(显然) 14.She explained everything very clearly.(清楚地;显然) 15. He was obviously drunk.(显然) 16. I distinctly remember mocking(对·····嗤之以鼻)the idea.(明显地;清楚地) 17.I specifically told you not to go near the water.(明确地) 18.I know exactly how she felt.(精确地;确切地) 19.The meeting starts at 2 o'clock precisely.(准确地;精确地) 20.The task was said to be most long and tiring but equally rewarding.(同样地) 21.The lecture was not particularly interesting.(特别;尤其) 22.I was not feeling especially happy that day.(特别;尤其) 23.She found it extremely difficult to get a job.(极其) 24.Being tall can make you feel incredibly self-confident.(极其) 25.Doing this seems to be unbelievably difficult.(难以置信地) 26.She absolutely adores you.(极其) 27.They intended to invest hugely in new technology.(极其;巨大地) 28.I was broadly in favour of it.(大体上;基本上) 29. I've completely forgotten her name.(彻底地) 30.I entirely agree with you.(完全地) 31.I'm not totally convinced that he knows what he is doing.(完全地) 32. I fully understand your motives.(完全地) 33. She took the job purely and simply for the money.(仅仅地;完全地) 34. We became the best of friends and he influenced me deeply.(极其;深刻地) 35. His teachers think very highly of him.(非常;很高地) 36. The car is in remarkably good condition for its age.(极其;显著地) 37.Despite the positive news, he said the rate of deforestation remained alarmingly high in many countries.(极其;让人担忧地) 38. Very rarely have I seen such a strikingly beautiful woman!(醒目地;斐然可观地) 39. She is madly in love with him.(极端地;疯狂地) 40. They laughed and sang heartily.(尽情地;极为) 41.They wanted to win so badly.(非常;在很大程度上) 42. We are profoundly affected by what happens to us in childhood.(深刻地;彻底地) 43. He was surprised to find his room thoroughly cleaned and everything arranged in perfect order.(彻底地;认真仔细地) 44. He's ten. He's fantastically imaginative, but too casual.(极其) 45.I was beginning to feel amazingly sleepy.(出奇地) 46. How unimaginably pale life without hope would be!(难以想象地) 47.My experience tells me that however spectacularly you get your heart broken, eventually it's okay.(壮观地;令人吃惊地) 48.I felt astonishingly calm in my place by the captain.(令人惊讶地;惊人地) 49.The weather was surprisingly warm and sunny.(惊人地;出人意外地) 50.The theatre was practically empty.(几乎;差不多) 51. Men are ridiculously pig-headed(死脑筋)and stubborn.(可笑地;荒谬地) 52.The paintings were sold for absurdly high prices.(荒谬地;荒唐地) 53. I still believe that people are fundamentally good.(从根本上说) 54.I cannot adequately express how sorry I am for what I have done.(充分地;足够地) 55. He is admirably suited for the job.(非常;极好地) 56. I'm awfully sorry about that problem the other day,(非常;恶劣地) 57. He is proud of his ability to remember things accurately.(精确地) 58.I list roughly my work as follows,(粗略地) 59.The causes of the phenomenon are still incompletely understood.(不完全地) 60.Life in the city is incomparably better for children than life in the country.(无比地;无敌地) 61.Husband and wife were similarly successful in their chosen careers.(相似地) 62. His analysis of urban use of agricultural land has been proved essentially correct.(本质上;大体上) 63.Education is vitally important for the country's future.(极其) 64.I narrowly missed a cyclist who wobbled into my path.(狭窄地;勉强地) 65.A notably short, silver-haired man, he plays basketball with his staff several times a week.(尤其;显著地) 66. Although the car is basically sound, I was worried about certain areas.(基本上;总的说来) 67. The difficulty lies primarily in the fact that the fiber core is relatively small.(首要地;主要地) 68. I like to think I'm relatively easy to get along with.(相对地) 69.Fortunately,the weather that winter was reasonably mild.(尚可;过得去;适度地) 70. Things are moving painfully slowly.(非常地) 71. My parents love me, but not excessively.(过分地;过度地) 72.She was several inches taller than I was, and unnaturally blond.(异常地) 73. After a week of effort, when I successfully skipped for the first time I was more than indescribably happy!(不可名状地;难以形容地) 74.Elaine felt unaccountably shy for once.(不可解释地;莫名其妙地) 75.Suppose you go to the best restaurant in town with your wealthy friends. To you, the food is unimaginably good. (超乎想像地) 76.With the help of his friends and his unbelievably tremendous patience and effort, he made it.(难以置信地) 77. I am not, I hope, unreasonably naive.(不合理地;离谱地) 78.His responsibilities press heavily upon him.(在很大程度上;沉重地) 79.I am acutely aware of the difficulties we face.(极其;强烈地) 80. If anything, swimming will appeal to her most strongly.(强烈地;强有力地) ▲动作的角度 1.The richer we have become materially ,the poorer we have become morally and spiritually.(物质上)(道德上)(精神上) 2.We must heal ourselves emotionally and spiritually.(情绪上) 3.Physically I might not have been overseas but mentally and spiritually I was with them.(身体上)(心理上) 4.She was physically delicate(孱弱) and psychologically unstable.(心理上) 5.He failed to shine academically.(在学术方面) 6.Life for the successful doctor can be emotionally and financially rewarding.(在经济上) 7.A five-day week benefits more than individually and economically.(在经济上) 8.Maria bent her head instinctively to avoid being recognized.(本能地) 9. Today was my birthday. I was officially eighteen years old.(正式地;官方地) 10. The school is legally responsible for your child's safety.(法律上;合法地) 11. The factory was unlawfully built on a piece of land which belongs to a nearby school.(非法地;不正当地) 12. Theoretically, the price is supposed to be marked on the shelf.(理论上;照理说) 13.I think they developed their ideas step by step logically.(逻辑上;符合逻辑地) 14.Characteristically,he worked hard at the assignment.(典型地;有代表性地) 他一如既往地认真完成分派的任务. 15. He was typically modest about his achievements.(典型地;果然) 16.Young people should know how to write clearly and reason statistically.(统计上地) 17. It satisfies the user's requirements both functionally and emotionally.(功能上地) 18.Technically,the two sides have been in a state of war ever since 1949.(技术上;严格说来) 19. If children can't think, read, write and compute, they cannot adapt technologically.(技术上地;科技地) 20.I would pay extra for more environmentally friendly cars and fuel.(有关环境方面) 21. The responsibility naturally fell on our shoulders.(天然地;顺理成章地) 22.Not unnaturally, I wanted to know where my daughter had been all night.(很自然) 23.The crime was not politically motivated.(政治地;政党地) 24.My watch shows the time digitally.(以数字形式地) 25. Top supermarkets are to ban many genetically modified foods.(基因地;从遗传学角度) 26. You can pay bills over the Internet. Additionally, you can check your balance or order statements.(此外) 27.The agency will make travel arrangements for you. Alternatively, you can organize your own transport.(或者) 28.I want to speak to each member of the group individually.(分别地;独特地) 29.Wash the white clothes together and the blue one separately.(单独地;分别地) 30. I take everything too personally.(亲自地;就个人而言) 31.There is only one China in the world. This is a fact which is universally recognized by the international community.(普遍地) 32.The song is becoming widely popular.(广泛地) 33. It is very important for us to verbally compliment and encourage one another.(言词上;口头地) 34.All candidates must first of all be orally examined,(口头地;口服地) 35. We'll discuss the matter more concretely next time. I hope everyone would make some preparations.(具体地) 36. He described his idea abstractly, without any illustrative examples.(抽象地;理论上地) 37.He has spent several minutes telling about that viewpoint detailedly.(详细地;逐条地) 读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Pat was the new kid in town.Her dad got a new job, so they had to move from their old home, school, friends and everything in South America to this new city.Now they were total strangers here. 　　Summer vacation went by while they unpacked, arranged furniture and adjusted to the new city.School was approaching.Pat dreaded it.She was not an outgoing person, so making friends was not easy for this shy and quiet girl.She was filled with fears and worries.She thought, “Would I make friends? Would I fit in? Would I survive at all in this strange new world?” But there she was, preparing for a new school full of strangers. 　　Here came her first day in the new school.She arrived at school on time, found her classroom and seated herself.Everything was going well until the first class when Pat’s teacher asked her to introduce herself in front of the whole class.She had prepared for it the day before, so she should have done it well.But when she uttered the first sentence, the whole class burst out laughing and began to whisper.It was then that Pat realized she talked with a very strange accent which was different from the locals.Blushing with embarrassment, she finished her introduction quickly and sat there all day long without talking with others. 　　After school, Pat came home crying, “It’s an awful day.All of them are disagreeable.I hate them.” After knowing what had happened in the school, Pat’s mother gently hugged her and comforted her, “Hatred can hurt both others and yourself.Honey, try to be happy.” In order to cheer her up, Pat’s mother suggested, “How about having a party this Saturday? We haven’t had any party since we arrived here.” Party is such an appealing event for kids like Pat.Right away, she stopped crying and looked at her mother excitedly, “Oh yes! Ice cream! Cake! Red, red balloons!” 　　“And friends?” mom asked gently. 　　Hearing this, Pat sobbed again, “I haven’t got any friends here.Nothing but enemies.” 注意: 1.续写词数应为150个左右; 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 　　“If so, let’s have an enemy party.I think it would be interesting,” Pat’s mom smiled.______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ 　　On Saturday, it was sunny, and all of Pat’s classmates came to the party. ______ ____________________________________________________________________ 【写作分析】 Step 1　获取语篇信息 1.故事发展线索:开一个让“敌人”参加的派对→帕特妈妈的建议和解释→帕特明白妈妈的意思→帕特所有的同学都来参加聚会→关系终于融洽→感悟 2.情感发展线索:茫然(刚搬新家)→纠结(不愿意开派对)→赞同(决定开派对)→高兴(同学们都来参加派对) Step 2　合理推测走向 1.针对续写段首1:“If so, let’s have an enemy party.I think it would be interesting,” Pat’s mom smiled.设问: (1)Would Pat accept her mother’s suggestion? (2)How did Pat’s mother persuade her to accept the advice? (3)What would Pat do? 推测:续写的第一段首句讲的是帕特的妈妈的建议,让她开一个由她的“敌人”参加的派对。接着应该写她的妈妈如何说服她接受这一建议的,她对妈妈的建议有何想法,决定如何做。 2.针对续写段首 2:On Saturday, it was sunny, and all of Pat’s classmates came to the party.设问: (1)What did Pat and her mother prepare for the party? (2)What happened during the party? (3)What was the result of the party? 推测:续写的第二段首句讲的是星期六所有同学都来帕特家参加派对。接着应该写帕特和她的妈妈为派对进行的布置和安排,派对上同学们融洽相处的过程,最后写对此事件的感悟:朋友间应当相互理解。 Step 3　打造合规词句 1.帕特困惑地看着妈妈,想知道“敌人”的聚会怎么可能有趣。 Pat looked at her mother in confusion,wondering how an enemy party could possibly be fun.  2.帕特琢磨着妈妈的话,意识到也许有另一种方式来处理她的处境,一种关于理解和宽恕的方式。 Pat pondered over her mother’s words,realizing that maybe there was a different way to approach her situation, one that involved understanding and forgiveness.  3.后院装饰着五颜六色的装饰品,空气中充满了笑声和兴奋。 The backyard was adorned with colorful decorations, and the air was filled with laughter and excitement.  4.随着时间的推移,帕特观察到她的同学们彼此之间的互动,慢慢地意识到他们并不像她最初想象的那样不友好。 As the day progressed, Pat observed her classmates interacting with one another, slowly realizing that they were not as disagreeable as she had initially thought.  5.帕特妈妈关于“敌人参加的派对”的想法变成了一个转折点,敌人变成了熟人,熟人变成了朋友,理解的种子也播下了。 Pat’s mom’s idea of an “enemy party” turned out to be a turning point,where enemies became acquaintances, acquaintances turned into friends, and the seeds of understanding were sown.  Step 4 衔接过渡成篇 　　“If so, let’s have an enemy party.I think it would be interesting,” Pat’s mom smiled.Pat looked at her mother in confusion, wondering how an enemy party could possibly be fun.But her mother continued, “Invite your classmates, including those who laughed at you today.Maybe they just need a chance to get to know you better and realize that you can be friends.It’s an opportunity to break down the walls and build bridges.” Pat pondered over her mother’s words, realizing that maybe there was a different way to approach her situation, one that involved understanding and forgiveness. 　　On Saturday, it was sunny, and all of Pat’s classmates came to the party.The backyard was adorned with colorful decorations, and the air was filled with laughter and excitement.As the day progressed, Pat observed her classmates interacting with one another, slowly realizing that they were not as disagreeable as she had initially thought.Conversations sparked, smiles were exchanged, and barriers began to crumble.Pat’s mom’s idea of an “enemy party” turned out to be a turning point, where enemies became acquaintances, acquaintances turned into friends, and the seeds of understanding were sown. 一、语段描写 根据以下情境,使用表示“惊讶、羞愧”的情绪及相关动作描写词汇和句式,写一篇80词左右的短文。 情境提示:你的同桌Lily期中考试成绩位居班级第十名,你感到很惊讶,因为她以前学习成绩不好,你认为她可能考试作弊了。同学们也惊讶地看着她。后来你了解到Lily在家熬夜学习,弥补功课,充分利用时间复习备考。你对你的行为感到羞愧。 【参考范文】 　　My deskmate Lily ranked tenth in the class in the mid-term exam. I was thrown into astonishment because she hadn’t studied well and I thought she may have cheated in the exam. Other classmates stared at her in wide-eyed amazement. Later I learnt that Lily had stayed up late studying at home to make up for her lessons and made the most of her time to prepare for the exam. I flushed with a deep sense of shame. I even had no courage to look into her eyes.  二、读后续写 （2025·河南安阳·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One day in the 1990s, I was helping my brother move from a teaching job after college. He was driving his little pickup truck pulling a trailer (拖车) and I was driving my old little Ford station car, packed with his things. It was a Sunday. I was driving along. All of a sudden, my car just died. No warning, nothing. I stopped at the side of a country highway and waited for my brother to realize I wasn’t behind him anymore and turn around. After about 20 minutes, he did return to find me. However, neither of us knew much about cars. After waiting for what seemed to be a century, a man, introducing himself as Jerry, came out of nowhere, took one look at the engine and said, “Timing belt.” We had asked about getting the car pulled 30 miles to the closest large town on the phone, only to find that it was going to be an expensive repair, even if the engine was OK. Just at this moment, Jerry saw the difficult situation. He saw two poor kids in their early 20s struggling with life, and he said, “Well, it’s Sunday. Nothing’s going to be open. I tell you what I will do. My next-door neighbor is a repairman. Let’s push the car down to his repair shop and we’ll see what we can do.” So we did exactly as Jerry told us. Jerry’s neighbor called his friend at the auto parts store, which was closed on Sunday. He did a favor and got the parts needed, driving them 30 miles out to the repair shop. And we sat around, telling our stories on the way while the car was being fixed. The repairman’s son, a kid of about 9 or 10, was hanging around. After some chatting, we learned that he was extremely bored as no one played with him. 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The boy badly desired someone to help build a treehouse in the woods. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When we went back to the repair shop, the car had been all fixed. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 The boy badly desired someone to help build a treehouse in the woods. Pointing to the woods behind us, he said to us animatedly, “Would you like to see my treehouse?” My brother and I exchanged a knowing look, smiling, “Sure.” The little boy, hopping up and down with uncontainable excitement, led us into the woods. He proudly explained to us that he came here every day to build the house in an attempt to drive off his loneliness. We ended up spending two hours with this charming kid, helping him complete the treehouse. When we went back to the repair shop, the car had been all fixed. Eager to show our appreciation, my brother and I offered the total of $60 in cash that we had on us to the kind man. However, he firmly refused, just saying, “No, you need help, and I’m glad to offer it. Besides, you have given my son company for so long and he is over the moon now. I really appreciate it.” It was then that we had a profound understanding of the saying: What you give away will invariably come back to you in another form. 【写作分析】本文以人物经历为线索展开，讲述了作者在帮助兄弟搬家途中遭遇车辆故障，作者与兄弟两人对汽车修理一无所知，在漫长等待后，幸遇好心人Jerry。Jerry一眼识破问题所在，并主动提出帮助，带领他们前往其邻居的修理店。在修理过程中，Jerry的邻居联系了汽车零件店的朋友，于周日闭店之际仍帮忙取得所需零件。期间，作者与兄弟与众人聊天分享故事，还结识了修理工无聊的儿子。 【要点详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“这个男孩非常希望有人帮他在树林里建一座树屋。”可知，第一段可描写小男孩邀请作者和他兄弟去树林看他的树屋，作者和他兄弟同意，并帮助小男孩完成了树屋。 ②由第二段首句内容“当我们回到修理厂时，汽车已经全部修好了。”可知，第二段可描写作者向对Jerry表示感谢，但是Jerry拒绝了，让作者有了深刻感悟。 2. 续写线索：小男孩邀请——帮助完成树屋——修好汽车——给钱——拒绝——感悟。 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①完成：complete/finish ②表达：show/express ③提供：offer/provide 情绪类 ①热烈地：animatedly/enthusiastically ②高兴的：glad/delighted [高分句型1]He proudly explained to us that he came here every day to build the house in an attempt to drive off his loneliness.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]Eager to show our appreciation, my brother and I offered the total of $60 in cash that we had on us to the kind man.(运用了形容词短语作状语和that引导的定语从句) （2024·湖北·一模）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On Monday morning I wore my favourite dress to school for the first time since I had started at Edison Middle School. I said good morning to our headmaster, Mr. Jordan, at the school entrance. With a genuine smile that reached his eyes, he greeted me by name, inquiring about my weekend and showing a sincere interest in my day ahead. That was really comforting! It was the day of the poetry festival. and I was excited. At my old school, I had won the poetry award every year. I’m horrible at sports, and too shy to be popular—but І do write good poetry, although I never told anyone here about it yet. The poem I wrote for the Edison Festival was about my dad. I wished I would surprise my classmates and Mrs. Baker, my English teacher. When Mrs. Baker called on me, I was so nervous that I had to swallow about ten times before I could speak. But once I started, I didn’t even bother to look at my paper. I’d spent so much time perfecting the rhymes that I knew the poem by heart. I had just started the third line when I noticed Mrs. Baker’s expression change. She looked at me with a mixture of appreciation and disbelief. I stopped in the middle of a word and waited for her to say something. “Linda, you are supposed to be reading a poem you made up yourself, not reciting something you learned. That is called plagiarism(剽窃)!” “Oh, but it’s an original one. I did make it up, it’s about my dad.” I heard a “Yeah, right!” from somewhere behind me, and someone else laughed. I opened my mouth to explain, but no words came out. “Perhaps you could step out and gather your thoughts, and when you feel ready, we can discuss this with a clear mind,” said Mrs. Baker. I’d been standing outside for 5 minutes when Mr. Jordan came over to ask me what happened. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Almost in tears, I poured out the whole story. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Inspired by his words, I gathered my courage and turned back to the classroom. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Almost in tears, I poured out the whole story. With a lump in my throat, I explained how much I loved poetry and that I had never even considered plagiarizing. Mr. Jordan listened attentively, nodding occasionally as I spoke. When I finished, he smiled gently and reassured me that it was okay to feel sad, “Sharing your creativity is a brave thing to do, Linda,” he said warmly. “Even if it didn’t go as planned, your courage is admirable. Remember, talent like yours is a gift. Trust in your own abilities and let your work speak for itself.” His words comforted me, giving me a sense of affirmation I desperately needed in that moment of doubt and frustration. Inspired by his words, I gathered my courage and turned back to the classroom. Mrs. Baker looked up as I entered, her expression now softened with understanding. Taking a deep breath, I assured everyone the poem was indeed my own creation and explained how I had crafted the poem about my father with love and care, “I’d like to recite it again,” I said with determination. This time, I recited the poem slowly and clearly, letting the emotions behind the words flow naturally. As I finished, there was a moment of silence before applause broke out, genuine and warm. “Sorry for the misunderstanding and thank you for sharing that,” Mrs. Baker said sincerely, “Your poem is really touching.” The tension lifted, and I felt a sense of pride knowing that I did surprise my classmates and Mrs. Baker. 【写作分析】本文以人物为线索，主要介绍了作者在新学校爱迪生中学首次参加诗歌节时，因为紧张而背诵了自己为父亲写的原创诗歌，却被老师误解为剽窃。尽管作者试图解释，但老师仍要求她先出去冷静一下，之后再进行讨论。正在作者不知所措时，乔丹先生走过来问他发生了什么事。 【要点详解】1.段落续写 ①由第一段首句“我几乎流下了眼泪，把整个故事都讲了出来。”可知，本段可描写作者因误会而伤心，乔丹老师安慰并肯定其才华，鼓励其自信。 ②由第二段首句“受到他的启发，我鼓起勇气回到教室。”可知，本段可描写作者鼓起勇气再次朗诵原创诗歌，赢得师生掌声与认可，消除误会，倍感自豪。 2.续写线索：伤心落泪——遇到Mr. Jordan——询问原因——得到鼓励——鼓励自信——回到教室——再次创作——得到认可——消除误会 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①温柔地笑了：smile gently/beamed mildly ②保证：assure/guarante ③爆发：break out/burst fort 情绪类 ①值得赞赏的：admirable/respectable ②真诚地：sincerely/genuinely 【高分句型1】Mr. Jordan listened attentively, nodding occasionally as I spoke.（运用了as引导的时间状语从句以及现在分词短语作状语） 【高分句型2】The tension lifted, and I felt a sense of pride knowing that I did surprise my classmates and Mrs. Baker.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$