05.必修第一册Unit 3 Getting along with others(生活日记)-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高一英语单元写作深度指导(译林版2020)

Unit 3 Getting along with others 单元写作深度指导 　生活日记 单元话题 考题展示 日记 （2023·陕西西安·二模）假设你是光明中学高三（1）班的学生李华，今天学校组织了消防演习。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英语日记，叙述整个演习过程，并谈谈自己的感想。 注意：（1）日记的开头已为你写好； （2）词数100词左右； （3）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 This morning, our school held a fire drill. ___________________________________________________ 　日记类作文在高考英语写作中是一个常见题型，主要考察学生的日常表达能力及语言组织能力。日记是十分自由的文体，无需正式的主题，主要记录个人的思想、感情及日常生活细节。内容通常包括日期、天气、活动组织（如参加人员、时间、地点）、个人经历及感受等。日记写作需要使用第一人称，以“I”为主语进行叙述；描述具体事件时，注意使用过去时态；注重细节描写，使内容更加生动、真实；表达个人感受时，要真实、自然，避免过度夸张。 考向分析与应对策略 高考英语写作日记类主题的考查特点主要体现在真实性、细节性、第一人称叙述、时态运用、语言风格以及情感表达等方面。这些特点要求学生在写作时能够真实反映生活、注重细节描写、自然运用第一人称和过去时态、运用贴近生活的语言以及表达个人情感和思考。考查特点简要分析如下： 1.‌真实性‌：日记作为记录个人日常生活的文体，强调真实性。在高考英语写作中，考查学生能否真实地反映生活，表达个人情感和经历。 2.‌细节性‌：日记注重细节描写，通过具体的事件、动作、感受等展现个人的日常生活。高考英语写作中，要求学生能够捕捉并描述生活中的具体细节，使文章更加生动、具体。 3.‌第一人称叙述‌：日记是以第一人称“I”为主语进行叙述的，这要求学生在写作时能够自然地运用第一人称，表达个人的观点和感受。 4.‌时态运用‌：日记记录的是已发生的事情，因此主要使用一般过去时。高考英语写作中，考查学生能否正确运用过去时态来描述过去的事件和经历。 5.‌语言风格‌：日记的语言风格较为口语化、自然流畅。高考英语写作中，要求学生能够运用贴近生活的语言，使文章更加贴近实际、易于理解。 6.‌情感表达‌：日记中应包含个人感受和反思，使内容更加丰富和有深度。在高考英语写作中，考查学生能否在描述事件的同时，表达个人的情感和思考。 英语日记写作需要关注以下几个方面： 1.‌格式规范‌：日记开头需包含日期、星期及天气情况，为读者提供背景信息。 2.‌时态运用‌：日记记录的是已发生的事情，因此主要使用一般过去时。 3.‌人称选择‌：日记是记录个人经历和感受，因此使用第一人称。 4.‌语言风格‌：日记是私人化的写作，语言应口语化、自然流畅。 5.‌内容组织‌：内容通常按时间顺序组织，使用衔接词（如in the morning, at noon, in the afternoon）来连接各个时间段的活动。 6.‌情感表达‌：日记中应包含个人感受和反思，使内容更加丰富和有深度。‌ 昨天, 你与朋友因琐事发生争吵, 为此你感到很后悔。请根据下列内容提示, 以第一人称用英语写一篇日记, 表达你对朋友的歉意。 【写作示例】 [读题审题] [激活表达] 1. 我想为昨天和朋友争吵向她道歉。 I want to apologize to my friend for quarreling with her yesterday.   2. 我对我粗鲁的话语感到惭愧, 我的话让她很心碎。 I am ashamed of my rude words and my words really broke her heart.   3. 如果不是我的粗鲁, 她就不会勃然大怒。 If it had not been for my rudeness, she would not have exploded with anger.   4. 我们已经交往八年了, 几乎形影不离, 我不想放弃我们的友谊。 We have been close for eight years and almost inseparable, and I don’t want to let go of our friendship.   5. 她总是对我很宽容, 而且我们能彼此信任和依赖。 She is always so generous to me that we can trust and count on each other.   6. 我想发自内心地向她道歉。无论如何, 有错的是我。 I want to say sorry to her from the bottom of my heart. In any case, I’m in the wrong.   7. 我真的希望她能原谅我并与我和好。 I do hope she can forgive me and make up with me.   8. 将句2改为定语从句 I am ashamed of my rude words which really broke her heart.   9. 用but for引导的虚拟语气改写句3 But for my rudeness, she would not have exploded with anger.   10. 用分词的完成时作状语改写句4 Having been close for eight years and almost inseparable, I don’t want to let go of our friendship.   [衔接成篇] [参考范文] March 12th, Tuesday Sunny 　　I want to apologize to my friend for quarreling with her yesterday. I am ashamed of my rude words which really broke her heart. But for my rudeness, she would not have exploded with anger. As far as I’m concerned, having been close for eight years and almost inseparable, I don’t want to let go of our friendship. She is always so generous to me that we can trust and count on each other. Again, I want to say sorry to her from the bottom of my heart. In any case, I’m in the wrong. I do hope she can forgive me and make up with me. 1. 话题特点 　　生活日记用来记述自己在日常生活中做过的、看到的或听到的有意义的事情或用来抒发自己当天对某些事情的感受以及自己将来的打算。体裁可以是记叙文、应用文、说明文、议论文等各种形式。 2. 话题词汇 (1)intend　　　　　　 v. 打算 (2)pack vt. 包装 (3)be proud of 骄傲 (4)the importance of ……的重要性 (5)take part in 参加 (6)make up one’s mind 下定决心 (7)go in for 参加; 从事 (8)spare no effort to do sth. 不遗余力去做某事 (9)be absorbed in 专心致志于 (10)have difficulty (in) doing sth. 做某事有困难 3. 话题句式 (1) 表达感情 ①I had an unforgettable trip to Cambridge today. 今天我到剑桥的旅行很难忘。 ②Today is an unforgettable and significant day. 今天是难忘且意义重大的一天。 (2) 叙述经过 ①Today I took part in a farm work programme in the suburbs. 今天我参加了郊区的一个农活项目。 ②At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme “Labour is the most beautiful thing”. 在班会上, 我们的老师告诉我们节目的主题是“劳动是最美好的事情”。 ③And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands. 他还强调了亲自动手的重要性。 ④When I got home, I packed up my luggage for the trip. 当我回家时, 我收拾好行李准备旅行。 ⑤On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun. 在农场里, 我们帮忙摘西瓜。工作的时候, 我意识到在炎热的阳光下在田野里工作是多么辛苦。 (3)表达观点 ①Kate is a girl who is easy to get along/on with and we all like her. 凯特是一个容易相处的女孩, 我们都喜欢她。 ②As a result, from this experience I have learned it was important to work together with others. 结果, 从这次经历中我认识到与他人合作是很重要的。 (4)总结概括 If you miss this chance, I don’t think you will have a second chance to play with outstanding players. 如果你错过了这个机会, 我想你再也没有机会和优秀的球员比赛了。 4.写作模版 一、单句翻译 1．汤姆认为自信很重要，因为这一点他的同学们很崇拜他。 (attach…to, 介词+which定语从句) 2．我为自己未被允许而进入会议室向您道歉。(apologize) 3．那儿的湿度很大，所以树都长得特别高，一些高达90多米。 4．他坚持认为我犯了错误，坚持要我向他的母亲道歉． 5．没有人能确保整形手术的结果是病人确实想要的。 6．最后，需要指出的是，谨慎择友，用心经营友谊。 7．然而，我不同意他们的看法。我觉得我已经做好准备，可以肩负更多责任。 8．要想发挥自己的潜能，充分利用我们学校的资源很重要。 9．可能性无穷无尽， 而且我相信你们有能力改变你们的家庭，改变你们的社区，改变我们的国家。 10．只要你有梦想，坚持努力就一定能成功。 11．失败是成功之母。 12．我真佩服你的勇气。 13．外出吃饭是一种很好的选择，并且这和丢掉传统没有什么关系。 14．在线交流时，你永远无法百分百确定跟你聊天的人是否坦诚地表明了身份。 15．有的人在喂马，有的在练习射箭，其他人则在聊天或者拍照。 二、语篇翻译 将语篇中的中文句子翻译成英文 One day a man was asked to paint a boat by the owner of the boat. He brought with him paint and brushes and began to paint the boat bright red, as the owner asked him. While painting the boat, he saw a hole in the boat. He repaired it at once. 16 (完成刷漆后，他拿了钱便离开了。) The next day, the owner of the boat came to the painter’s house and presented him with a nice check, much higher than the payment of painting. 17 (油漆匠感到非常惊讶。) “You’ve already paid me for painting the boat!” he said. “But this is not for the paint job. It’s for having repaired the hole in the boat,” the owner said. “But it was such a small service. Certainly it is not worth paying me such a high amount for something so unimportant!” “My dear friend, you do not understand. 18 (现在让我告诉你发生了什么。) When I asked you to paint the boat, I forgot to mention the hole. When the boat dried, my kids took the boat and went on a fishing trip. They did not know that there was a hole in the boat. I was not at home at that time. When I returned and noticed they had taken the boat, I was hopeless because I remembered that the boat had a hole. 19 (然而，让我欣喜的是，他们竟然安全回家了!) It was really unbelievable! “ 20 (我立刻检查了这艘船，发现你已经修补了那个洞!) You see, now, what you did? You saved my children! I do not have enough money to pay your ‘small’ good deed.” So, no matter where, when or how, just carefully repair all the ‘holes’ you find. 参考词汇：finish doing; be surprised; let sb do sth; to one’s joy; immediately 三．书面表达 （22-23高一下·黑龙江哈尔滨·期末）假定你是李华。上个周六你跟你的交换生朋友Mike一起去当地的养老院当志愿者。请写一篇日记，记录此次活动，内容包括： 1.活动的过程; 2.你的感受。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Saturday 27 May ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 观察下面四幅图片，根据图片内容，用英语写一篇日记。 注意： 1.可以适当增加细节，以使情节连贯； 2.词数100左右； 3.首句已经给出，不计入词数。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Monday 1 January Today was a heartwarming start to the new year as my family gathered for a special hotpot dinner. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 3 Getting along with others 单元写作深度指导 　生活日记 单元话题 考题展示 日记 （2023·陕西西安·二模）假设你是光明中学高三（1）班的学生李华，今天学校组织了消防演习。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英语日记，叙述整个演习过程，并谈谈自己的感想。 注意：（1）日记的开头已为你写好； （2）词数100词左右； （3）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 This morning, our school held a fire drill. ___________________________________________________ 　日记类作文在高考英语写作中是一个常见题型，主要考察学生的日常表达能力及语言组织能力。日记是十分自由的文体，无需正式的主题，主要记录个人的思想、感情及日常生活细节。内容通常包括日期、天气、活动组织（如参加人员、时间、地点）、个人经历及感受等。日记写作需要使用第一人称，以“I”为主语进行叙述；描述具体事件时，注意使用过去时态；注重细节描写，使内容更加生动、真实；表达个人感受时，要真实、自然，避免过度夸张。 考向分析与应对策略 高考英语写作日记类主题的考查特点主要体现在真实性、细节性、第一人称叙述、时态运用、语言风格以及情感表达等方面。这些特点要求学生在写作时能够真实反映生活、注重细节描写、自然运用第一人称和过去时态、运用贴近生活的语言以及表达个人情感和思考。考查特点简要分析如下： 1.‌真实性‌：日记作为记录个人日常生活的文体，强调真实性。在高考英语写作中，考查学生能否真实地反映生活，表达个人情感和经历。 2.‌细节性‌：日记注重细节描写，通过具体的事件、动作、感受等展现个人的日常生活。高考英语写作中，要求学生能够捕捉并描述生活中的具体细节，使文章更加生动、具体。 3.‌第一人称叙述‌：日记是以第一人称“I”为主语进行叙述的，这要求学生在写作时能够自然地运用第一人称，表达个人的观点和感受。 4.‌时态运用‌：日记记录的是已发生的事情，因此主要使用一般过去时。高考英语写作中，考查学生能否正确运用过去时态来描述过去的事件和经历。 5.‌语言风格‌：日记的语言风格较为口语化、自然流畅。高考英语写作中，要求学生能够运用贴近生活的语言，使文章更加贴近实际、易于理解。 6.‌情感表达‌：日记中应包含个人感受和反思，使内容更加丰富和有深度。在高考英语写作中，考查学生能否在描述事件的同时，表达个人的情感和思考。 英语日记写作需要关注以下几个方面： 1.‌格式规范‌：日记开头需包含日期、星期及天气情况，为读者提供背景信息。 2.‌时态运用‌：日记记录的是已发生的事情，因此主要使用一般过去时。 3.‌人称选择‌：日记是记录个人经历和感受，因此使用第一人称。 4.‌语言风格‌：日记是私人化的写作，语言应口语化、自然流畅。 5.‌内容组织‌：内容通常按时间顺序组织，使用衔接词（如in the morning, at noon, in the afternoon）来连接各个时间段的活动。 6.‌情感表达‌：日记中应包含个人感受和反思，使内容更加丰富和有深度。‌ 昨天, 你与朋友因琐事发生争吵, 为此你感到很后悔。请根据下列内容提示, 以第一人称用英语写一篇日记, 表达你对朋友的歉意。 【写作示例】 [读题审题] [激活表达] 1. 我想为昨天和朋友争吵向她道歉。 I want to apologize to my friend for quarreling with her yesterday.   2. 我对我粗鲁的话语感到惭愧, 我的话让她很心碎。 I am ashamed of my rude words and my words really broke her heart.   3. 如果不是我的粗鲁, 她就不会勃然大怒。 If it had not been for my rudeness, she would not have exploded with anger.   4. 我们已经交往八年了, 几乎形影不离, 我不想放弃我们的友谊。 We have been close for eight years and almost inseparable, and I don’t want to let go of our friendship.   5. 她总是对我很宽容, 而且我们能彼此信任和依赖。 She is always so generous to me that we can trust and count on each other.   6. 我想发自内心地向她道歉。无论如何, 有错的是我。 I want to say sorry to her from the bottom of my heart. In any case, I’m in the wrong.   7. 我真的希望她能原谅我并与我和好。 I do hope she can forgive me and make up with me.   8. 将句2改为定语从句 I am ashamed of my rude words which really broke her heart.   9. 用but for引导的虚拟语气改写句3 But for my rudeness, she would not have exploded with anger.   10. 用分词的完成时作状语改写句4 Having been close for eight years and almost inseparable, I don’t want to let go of our friendship.   [衔接成篇] [参考范文] March 12th, Tuesday Sunny 　　I want to apologize to my friend for quarreling with her yesterday. I am ashamed of my rude words which really broke her heart. But for my rudeness, she would not have exploded with anger. As far as I’m concerned, having been close for eight years and almost inseparable, I don’t want to let go of our friendship. She is always so generous to me that we can trust and count on each other. Again, I want to say sorry to her from the bottom of my heart. In any case, I’m in the wrong. I do hope she can forgive me and make up with me. 1. 话题特点 　　生活日记用来记述自己在日常生活中做过的、看到的或听到的有意义的事情或用来抒发自己当天对某些事情的感受以及自己将来的打算。体裁可以是记叙文、应用文、说明文、议论文等各种形式。 2. 话题词汇 (1)intend　　　　　　 v. 打算 (2)pack vt. 包装 (3)be proud of 骄傲 (4)the importance of ……的重要性 (5)take part in 参加 (6)make up one’s mind 下定决心 (7)go in for 参加; 从事 (8)spare no effort to do sth. 不遗余力去做某事 (9)be absorbed in 专心致志于 (10)have difficulty (in) doing sth. 做某事有困难 3. 话题句式 (1) 表达感情 ①I had an unforgettable trip to Cambridge today. 今天我到剑桥的旅行很难忘。 ②Today is an unforgettable and significant day. 今天是难忘且意义重大的一天。 (2) 叙述经过 ①Today I took part in a farm work programme in the suburbs. 今天我参加了郊区的一个农活项目。 ②At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme “Labour is the most beautiful thing”. 在班会上, 我们的老师告诉我们节目的主题是“劳动是最美好的事情”。 ③And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands. 他还强调了亲自动手的重要性。 ④When I got home, I packed up my luggage for the trip. 当我回家时, 我收拾好行李准备旅行。 ⑤On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun. 在农场里, 我们帮忙摘西瓜。工作的时候, 我意识到在炎热的阳光下在田野里工作是多么辛苦。 (3)表达观点 ①Kate is a girl who is easy to get along/on with and we all like her. 凯特是一个容易相处的女孩, 我们都喜欢她。 ②As a result, from this experience I have learned it was important to work together with others. 结果, 从这次经历中我认识到与他人合作是很重要的。 (4)总结概括 If you miss this chance, I don’t think you will have a second chance to play with outstanding players. 如果你错过了这个机会, 我想你再也没有机会和优秀的球员比赛了。 4.写作模版 一、单句翻译 1．汤姆认为自信很重要，因为这一点他的同学们很崇拜他。 (attach…to, 介词+which定语从句) 2．我为自己未被允许而进入会议室向您道歉。(apologize) 3．那儿的湿度很大，所以树都长得特别高，一些高达90多米。 4．他坚持认为我犯了错误，坚持要我向他的母亲道歉． 5．没有人能确保整形手术的结果是病人确实想要的。 6．最后，需要指出的是，谨慎择友，用心经营友谊。 7．然而，我不同意他们的看法。我觉得我已经做好准备，可以肩负更多责任。 8．要想发挥自己的潜能，充分利用我们学校的资源很重要。 9．可能性无穷无尽， 而且我相信你们有能力改变你们的家庭，改变你们的社区，改变我们的国家。 10．只要你有梦想，坚持努力就一定能成功。 11．失败是成功之母。 12．我真佩服你的勇气。 13．外出吃饭是一种很好的选择，并且这和丢掉传统没有什么关系。 14．在线交流时，你永远无法百分百确定跟你聊天的人是否坦诚地表明了身份。 15．有的人在喂马，有的在练习射箭，其他人则在聊天或者拍照。 【答案与解析】 1．Tom attaches great importance to confidence, for which his classmates admire him very much. 【解析】attach importance to为固定词组，意为“认为……很重要”，本句用for which引导定语从句，for表原因，which代指前句整句内容，故可译为：Tom attaches great importance to confidence, for which his classmates admire him very much. 2．I apologize to you for entering the meeting room without (your) permission/without being permitted. 【解析】考查apologize的用法。“因做了某事而向某人道歉”应表达为apologize to somebody for doing something；“未经允许”应表达为without your permission /without being permitted。故译为： I apologize to you for entering the meeting room without your permission/ without being permitted。 3．It is so wet there that the trees are extremely tall, some measuring over 90 metres." 【解析】考查 so …that引导的结果状语从句和独立主格结构。“如此潮湿以至于树长得特别高”应表达为so wet there that the trees are extremely tall；“一些树高达90多米”可以使用独立主格作作状语成分，可表达为some trees measuring over ninety meters。故译为： It is so wet there that the trees are extremely tall, some measuring over 90 meters。 4．He insisted that I had made a serious mistake and I（should）apologize to/make an apology to his mother． 【解析】考查宾语从句和insist的用法。分析句子可知， 因事情已发生，要用一般过去时态； insist意为"坚持说"时，后接宾语从句用陈述语气，即I had made a serious mistake是陈述证据；意为"坚决要求"时，用虚拟证据，即I （should） apologize to/make an apology to his mother；make a mistake意为"犯错误"；apologize to/make an apology to意为"向……道歉"．再根据其它汉语提示。故翻译为：He insisted that I had made a serious mistake and I（should）apologize to/make an apology to his mother。 5．No one can make sure that the result of plastic surgery will be exactly what the patient has expected. 【解析】考查情态动词，宾语从句，名词，代词，一般将来时，现在完成时，表语从句。“没有人”为no one；表示“能，能够”用can；“确保”为make sure；所以主句部分为No one can make sure。根据汉语意思可知，此处为宾语从句，make sure后面用that引导的宾语从句。“结果”为result；“整形手术”为plastic surgery；“结果s病人确实想要的”描述的是将来的情况，所以用一般将来时；“确实”为exactly；从句中含有表语从句，从句部分为“病人确实想要的”，所以用what引导，“病人”为patient；“期待”为expect，此处描述的动作发生在“是”之前，表示已经发生过，所以用现在完成时，主语为the patient，所以助动词用has。故答案为No one can make sure that the result of plastic surgery will be exactly what the patient has expected. 6．Eventually, it should be pointed out that we should cautiously choose friends and develop relationships with them carefully. 【解析】考查固定句型和动词。句子开头表示“最后”应用副词eventually，作状语修饰整个句子；表示“需要指出的是……”可知句型为it should be pointed out that…；that从句中，主语为we，谓语为should choose，谨慎地为 cautiously，作状语修饰动词短语choose friends，所以“谨慎择友”翻译为：we should cautiously choose friends。“用心经营友谊”翻译成动宾结构，翻译为“develop relationships with them carefully”。“谨慎择友”与“用心经营友谊”为并列关系，用and连接。故翻译为：Eventually, it should be pointed out that we should cautiously choose friends and develop relationships with them carefully. 7．However, I disagree with them, because I feel ready to be more responsible. 【解析】考查状语从句和动词短语。句子表达个人的观点以及对现状的看法，应用一般现在时，句子为主从复合句，主句中“然而”however，位于句首，首字母大写，主句主语“我”I，句中应用动词短语disagree with sb.“不同意某人的看法”，谓语动词“不同意”disagree with，宾语“他们的看法”them，从句用because引导原因状语从句，从句主语“我”I，句中应用动词短语be ready to do sth.“做好准备作某事”，谓语动词应用感官动词feel“觉得”，表语“已经做好准备” ready，“可以肩负更多责任”应用不定式短语to be more responsible。故翻译为However, I disagree with them, because I feel ready to be more responsible. 8．To fully realize your potential, it is important for you to make the most of our school resources. 【解析】考查固定短语，不定式，时态和主谓一致。句子描述客观事实，时态用一般现在时，“要想发挥自己的潜能”用不定式表目的，“发挥自己的潜能”是fully realize your potential，“做某事很重要”是固定句型it is important for sb. to do sth.，其中it是形式主语，真正的主语是不定式，“充分利用”是固定短语make the most of，“我们学校的资源”是our school resources，因此整句话翻译为“To fully realize your potential, it is important for you to make the most of our school resources”。故答案为To fully realize your potential, it is important for you to make the most of our school resources. 9．The possibilities are endless, and I have confidence in your ability to make a difference to your family, to your community and to our country. 【解析】考查形容词，固定短语，时态和主谓一致。根据句意可知，句子描述客观事实，时态用一般现在时，“可能性”是possibility，不止一个，因此用复数，“无穷无尽”用endless作表语，主语possibilities是复数，其后be动词用are，“而且”是and，“相信”是have confidence in，“你们有能力做某事”是your ability to do sth.，“改变”是make a difference to，“你们的家庭”是your family，“你们的社区”是your community，“我们的国家”是our country，因此整句话翻译为“The possibilities are endless, and I have confidence in your ability to make a difference to your family, to your community and to our country”。故答案为The possibilities are endless, and I have confidence in your ability to make a difference to your family, to your community and to our country. 10．As long as you have a dream, keep trying and you’ll make it. 【解析】考查时态、非谓语动词、条件状语从句、固定搭配、祈使句的肯定形式。表示“只要”用as long as引导条件状语从句。条件状语从句中：表示“你”用you，作主语；表示“有梦想”用have a dream；本句描述一般事实，句子用一般现在时，主语为you，谓语用动词原形。表示“坚持努力”为主句，用祈使句的肯定形式。主句中：表示“坚持努力”用keep trying。用and连接两个句子。and后的句子中：表示“你”用you，作主语；表示“成功”用固定搭配make it，描述将来发生的事情，句子时态用一般将来时。故翻译为As long as you have a dream, keep trying and you’ll make it. 11．Failure is the mother of success. 【解析】考查名词和时态。根据句意以及句子结构可知，表示“失败”为名词Failure；表示“成功之母”为名词短语the mother of success；结合该句为陈述客观事实，所以为一般现在时。故翻译为：Failure is the mother of success. 12．I admire your courage indeed. 【解析】考查时态、名词、副词。表示“我”用I，作主语。表示“佩服”用admire，本句描述一般事实。时态用一般现在时，且主语为I，故谓语用动词原形。表示“勇气”用名词courage，表示“你的勇气”用your courage，作admire的宾语。表示“确实”用副词indeed，作状语，修饰动词admire。故翻译为I admire your courage indeed. 13．Eating out is a good choice and it has nothing to do with loss of traditions. 【解析】考查动词短语、名词、非谓语动词以及时态。句子在介绍一般性的事实，时态宜用一般现在时；“外出吃饭”可用动词短语eat out，且作主语，表示抽象概念，因此eat用动名词形式，动名词作主语，谓语动词用单数；“是”用be动词is，“一种很好的选择”可用名词短语a good choice，作表语；“并且”用连词and，“这”用代词it，作主语，“和……没有什么关系”可用动词短语have nothing to do with，have需用第三人称单数形式，“丢掉传统”可用名词短语loss of traditions，作with的宾语。故可译为：Eating out is a good choice and it has nothing to do with loss of traditions. 14．With online communication you can never be 100 percent sure that the people (that/who) you are chatting to are being honest about who they are. 【解析】考查情态动词、宾语从句、时态、形容词和名词。表示“用”用介词with。表示“在线”用形容词online，作前置定语，修饰名词“交流”。表示“交流”用名词communication，作with的宾语。表示“你”用you，作主语。表示“能够”用情态动词can 。表示“确定做某事”用be sure that...，位于情态动词can后，用动词原形。表示“从不”用副词never，作状语，修饰be sure。表示“百分百”用100 percent。从句中：表示“人们”用介词people，此处为特指，people前加the，the people作从句主语；表示“坦诚的”用形容词honest，从句表正在发生的动作，故时态用现在进行时，且主语为the people，故be动词用are；故用are being honest，形容词honest作表语；表示“关于”用介词about；about后为宾语从句；宾语从句中：表示“谁”用who，作从句主语，且引导从句；表示“他们”用代词they；表示“是”用be动词are。表示“跟你聊天的”用定语从句，定语从句中：表示“你”用有，作从句主语；表示“与某人聊天”用动词chat to sb.，表示“正在聊天”用现在进行时，主语是you，be动词用are，谓语用are chatting；先行词是people，指人，关系词代替先行词在从句中作are chatting的宾语，应用关系代词who或that引导，也可以省略引导词。故翻译为With online communication you can never be 100 percent sure that the people (that/who) you are chatting to are being honest about who they are. 15．Some were feeding their horses, some were practising archery, and others were chatting or taking photos. 【解析】考查时态和代词的用法。句子描述过去正在进行的动作，应用过去进行时，“有的……有的……其他人……”使用some..., some..., and others...，“喂马”feed their horses，其中horse是可数名词，使用复数形式表示泛指，作feed的宾语，“练习射箭”practise archery，主语是some，be动词使用were，“聊天或者拍照”chat or take photos，主语是others，be动词使用were。故翻译为Some were feeding their horses, some were practising archery, and others were chatting or taking photos. 二、语篇翻译 将语篇中的中文句子翻译成英文 One day a man was asked to paint a boat by the owner of the boat. He brought with him paint and brushes and began to paint the boat bright red, as the owner asked him. While painting the boat, he saw a hole in the boat. He repaired it at once. 16 (完成刷漆后，他拿了钱便离开了。) The next day, the owner of the boat came to the painter’s house and presented him with a nice check, much higher than the payment of painting. 17 (油漆匠感到非常惊讶。) “You’ve already paid me for painting the boat!” he said. “But this is not for the paint job. It’s for having repaired the hole in the boat,” the owner said. “But it was such a small service. Certainly it is not worth paying me such a high amount for something so unimportant!” “My dear friend, you do not understand. 18 (现在让我告诉你发生了什么。) When I asked you to paint the boat, I forgot to mention the hole. When the boat dried, my kids took the boat and went on a fishing trip. They did not know that there was a hole in the boat. I was not at home at that time. When I returned and noticed they had taken the boat, I was hopeless because I remembered that the boat had a hole. 19 (然而，让我欣喜的是，他们竟然安全回家了!) It was really unbelievable! “ 20 (我立刻检查了这艘船，发现你已经修补了那个洞!) You see, now, what you did? You saved my children! I do not have enough money to pay your ‘small’ good deed.” So, no matter where, when or how, just carefully repair all the ‘holes’ you find. 参考词汇：finish doing; be surprised; let sb do sth; to one’s joy; immediately 【答案与解析】 16．After/When he finished painting, he took his money and left. 17．The painter was/felt very surprised. 18．Now let me tell you what happened/has happened. 19．However, to my great joy, they did return/returned home safely! 20．Immediately, I examined the boat and found that you had repaired the hole. 【解析】16．考查时间状语从句。“完成刷漆后”用after/when引导时间状语从句，时态用一般过去时，表示过去的事情，“完成刷漆”是finish painting，“他拿了钱便离开了”时态用一般过去时，翻译为he took his money and left，其中and连接并列的谓语动词，因此整句话翻译为“After/When he finished painting, he took his money and left”。故答案为After/When he finished painting, he took his money and left. 17．考查时态，形容词和主谓一致。“油漆匠感到非常惊讶”描述过去的事情，时态用一般过去时，“油漆匠”是the painter，“感到”是be动词或feel，用过去式，主语painter是单数，be动词用was，“非常惊讶”用very surprised作表语，因此整句话翻译为“The painter was/felt very surprised”。故答案为The painter was/felt very surprised. 18．考查宾语从句，时态和主谓一致。“现在”是now，“让我做某事”是let me do sth.，“告诉你”是tell you，“发生了什么”用what引导的宾语从句，时态用一般过去时或现在完成时，翻译为what happened/has happened，因此整句话翻译为“Now let me tell you what happened/has happened”。故答案为Now let me tell you what happened/has happened. 19．考查时态，介词短语和动词短语。“然而”是however，“让我欣喜的是”用固定短语to my great joy，“他们竟然安全回家了”描述过去的事情，时态用一般过去时，“安全回家”是return home safely，return用过去式，也可用“did+动词原形”表强调，因此整句话翻译为“However, to my great joy, they did return/returned home safely”。故答案为However, to my great joy, they did return/returned home safely! 20．考查时态和宾语从句。“立刻”是immediately，“检查了这艘船，发现你已经修补了那个洞”描述过去的事情，时态用一般过去时，“检查”是examine，用过去式，“这艘船”是the boat，“发现你已经修补了那个洞”用一般过去时，“发现”是find，用过去式，and连接并列谓语动词，其后用that引导的宾语从句，“你已经修补了那个洞”用过去完成时表示先于found之前发生的事情，“修补”是repair，“那个洞”是the hole，因此整句话翻译为“Immediately, I examined the boat and found that you had repaired the hole”。故答案为Immediately, I examined the boat and found that you had repaired the hole. 三．书面表达 （22-23高一下·黑龙江哈尔滨·期末）假定你是李华。上个周六你跟你的交换生朋友Mike一起去当地的养老院当志愿者。请写一篇日记，记录此次活动，内容包括： 1.活动的过程; 2.你的感受。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Saturday 27 May ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Saturday 27May Last Saturday, my friend Mike and I paid a visit to the Happiness Nursing House as volunteers to help the old there. Excited and thrilled, we brought flowers and fruits along with our best wishes. As soon as we arrived there, we did cleaning carefully to make the houses clean and tidy. Then, we chatted with them, which made them happy and relaxed. Before we left, we took a picture with them. Tired as we felt, we thought it was worthwhile. From this meaningful activity, I found that we should care for the old and respect them. It is also necessary to treat our own grandparents more kindly. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文，要求考生写一篇日记，记录去当地的养老院当志愿者的经历和感受。 【要点详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：happy→delighted 应该：should→be supposed to 劳累的：tired→exhausted 值得的：worthwhile→rewarding 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Last Saturday, my friend Mike and I paid a visit to the Happiness Nursing House as volunteers to help the old there. 拓展句：Last Saturday, my friend Mike and I paid a visit to the Happiness Nursing House as volunteers so that we can help the old there. [高分句型1] As soon as we arrived there, we did cleaning carefully to make the houses clean and tidy.（运用了as soon as引导时间状语从句） [高分句型2] From this meaningful activity, I found that we should care for the old and respect them.（运用了that引导宾语从句） 观察下面四幅图片，根据图片内容，用英语写一篇日记。 注意： 1.可以适当增加细节，以使情节连贯； 2.词数100左右； 3.首句已经给出，不计入词数。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Monday 1 January Today was a heartwarming start to the new year as my family gathered for a special hotpot dinner. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Monday 1 January Today was a heartwarming start to the new year as my family gathered for a special hotpot dinner. In the morning, my family of three went shopping in a nearby supermarket for groceries. We carefully selected fresh vegetables, meats, and other ingredients for the hotpot. Backing home, my dad started mopping the floor while my mom and I washed the vegetables. Everyone worked together to prepare the meal, filled with laughter and joy. Soon, the delicious hotpot was ready, and we gathered around the table with grandparents. After the meal, we took a family photo together, capturing this memorable moment. Today’s family day was truly special. I really enjoyed the moment when all of us were together. It reminded me of the importance of spending quality time with loved ones and creating memories that will last a lifetime. Monday 1 January Today was a heartwarming start to the new year as my family gathered for a special hotpot dinner. Taking hot pot as our new year dinner is a crucial tradition long shared by my family. On hearing the first beep of my alarm, I fitted into my new-bought clothes and followed my parents to the supermarket for some “hotpot food.” Carrying all the dishes we love back home, we started to prepare for the big night. My mother and I were cutting the vegetable while my father had the floor mopped into a shiny mirror. At night, alongside my parents came my grandparents. We surrounded a round table where the hot pot saw us talked and laughed in high spirits. We took a photo together afterwards when we went for a joyful walk. With a first day like this, I am sure this year will be a wonderful year! Monday 1 January Today was a heartwarming start to the new year as my family gathered for a special hotpot dinner. The day began with a shopping for hot pot ingredients, a cherished activity that I eagerly await each year because my parents grant me the liberty to fill our cart with whatever I like in the supermarket. After our satisfying purchases, we returned home and began preparing individually. My mother and I handled the raw ingredients for the hotpot while my father was tidying up the room. The final special hotpot dinner in which all five family members participated became a celebration of the new year and love. It has not only brought happiness to me and my parents, but also touched my grandparents deeply. As we enjoyed our time together, the best thing we could do was to leave an unforgettable impression in our hearts, so we captured the moment in a photograph. What a wonderful day! 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据图片内容，用英语写一篇日记。 【要点详解】1.词汇积累 附近的：nearby→neighbouring 挑选：select→choose 开始：start→begin 充满：filled with→full of 2.句式拓展 同义句 原句：Backing home, my dad started mopping the floor while my mom and I washed the vegetables. 拓展句：When we were back home, my dad started mopping the floor while my mom and I washed the vegetables. 【高分句型1】After the meal, we took a family photo together, capturing this memorable moment.(运用了非谓语动词作状语) 【高分句型2】I really enjoyed the moment when all of us were together.(运用了when引导的限制性定语从句) ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$