专题12 应用文写作-三年（2022-2024）新高考英语真题和2024年名校精选模拟

专题12 应用文写作（原卷版） 考题解读 应用文写作占据十分重要的地位，它既是高考英语常考题也是必考题，本篇文章将具体梳理近五年新高考以“应用文写作”为主题的文章句子。 解题技巧 一、明确写作目的与受众 ●确定写作目的：在开始写作前，首先要明确写作的目的，是为了申请工作、请求支持、提供建议还是传达信息等。这有助于你构建文章的整体框架和内容。 ●考虑受众：了解你的文档将被哪些人阅读，以便调整语气和内容，以满足他们的需求。不同的受众可能需要不同的语言风格和表达方式。 二、审清题目，明确文种与格式 ●审文种：通过文种确定行文格式。例如，倡议书需要包括标题、称谓、正文和落款；而通知则可能只需要标题、正文和落款。 ●审身份：明确作答主体，对应落款及语言风格。不同的身份可能需要使用不同的称谓和语气。 ●审受众对象：明确作答对象，对应称谓及语言风格。确保你的称谓和语气与受众相符。 ●审发文目的：结合题干中的文种、身份、对象、事由来明确作答重点和所要完成的任务，对应写作开头与主体内容的构成。 三、结构化信息，逻辑清晰 ●引言：引入写作目的，概括你的写作目标，以引起读者的兴趣和好奇心。同时，可以提供一些与写作目的相关的背景信息。 ●主体段落：按照逻辑顺序或重要性排列，清晰地呈现信息。每个段落应围绕一个中心思想展开，使用段落和标题使文档易于阅读和理解。 ●总结：在结论中，总结你的请求、建议或提供的信息。强调下一步行动或期望的反应。 四、语言精炼，表达准确 ●使用清晰、精炼的语言：避免使用模糊或含糊不清的表述，确保你的意见和请求能够准确传达给受众。 ●适当的语气：根据情境选择正式或非正式的语气。确保你的语气与受众一致，既不过于生硬也不过于随意。 五、个性化与重点突出 ●个性化你的文档：通过引用受众的姓名、职位或其他细节来增加亲近感。这有助于建立与受众之间的良好关系。 ●重点突出：使用粗体、斜体或下划线等方式来强调重要信息。确保关键信息在文档中易于识别。 真题再现 高考真题 精准练01  书信类 1.（2024年新高考I卷&II卷） 1．假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： （1）你完成的作品； （2）你的感想。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3.（2023年新高考I&II卷） 2．  假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意：   1. 写作词数应为80个左右；   2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 3.（2022年新高考II卷） 3．假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括： 1. 节目介绍； 2. 访谈的时间和话题。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Caroline, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 4.（2022年浙江1月卷） 4．假定你是李华，在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国，请你给他 写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 回忆活动经历；2. 分享个人收获；3. 希望保持联系。 注意： 1 . 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.（2022年浙江6月卷） 5．假定你是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验，内容包括： 1.位置与开放时间； 2.室内设施和功能。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 精准练02  短文类 1.（2024年浙江1月卷） 6．请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括： 1. 介绍这项运动； 2. 说明推荐理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答： Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.（2023年浙江卷1月） 7．上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括： 1. 活动的过程； 2. 收获与感想。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Getting to Know the Plants Around Us ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2024年名校模拟题 Writing 1 （2024·重庆荣昌·模拟预测） 2．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Peter以优异的成绩通过考试，取得了到中国某大学留学的资格。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示祝贺； 2. 请教学习方法； 3. 期待在中国见面。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Writing 2 （2024·广东肇庆·三模） 3．假定你是学生会主席李华，英国某中学的部分师生即将访问你校，并体验校园传统文化节活动。请你用英语写一篇欢迎辞，主要内容包括： 1. 表示欢迎；      2. 活动介绍；        3. 表达祝愿。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear visiting guests, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! Writing 3 （2024·湖北·三模） 4．假定你是李华，给你班交换生Frank发邮件，想邀请Frank一起晨跑。请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1. 表明来意； 2. 晨跑的重要性； 3. 注意事项。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Dear Frank, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua Writing 4 （2024·浙江温州·三模） 5．你校英文报就最近举办的“当英语遇上艺术”(When English Meets The Arts)系列活动开展征文，请你写一篇短文，分享其中让你印象深刻的一项活动，内容包括： 1.活动介绍;2.你的感想 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 When English Meets The Arts _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 5 （2024·四川·模拟预测） 6．假定你是李华，你校即将举行一场以“环境保护”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你代表班级写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1. 阐述环境保护的重要性； 2. 分享班级在环境保护方面的做法和成果； 3. 呼吁全校师生参与环境保护行动。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear teachers, boys and girls, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! Writing 6 （2024·辽宁锦州·模拟预测） 7．假定你是李华，今天早上去找来自美国的好友John，想邀请他这周末一起去观看京剧 (Peking Opera) 表演，但John不在家，请你给他写封邮件。内容包括 1．你到John家的目的； 2．简要介绍京剧； 3．请求告知是否有空。 Dear John ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Writing 7 （2024·宁夏银川·模拟预测） 8．假定你是李华，最近参加了学校举办的“新时代好少年”(“Model Students in New Era”)主题网络短视频制作大赛活动，请你给学校英文报写一篇短文介绍该活动，内容包括： 1.活动设置目的； 2.你的参与情况和感受。 注意：1.词数100词左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：新时代好少年 Model Students in New Era An Unforgettable Video–clip Story _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 8 （2024·河北衡水·模拟预测） 9．假定你是李华，你校将于下周末举办英语朗诵比赛（recitation competition），请给你的外教Mr. Wesley写一封电子邮件，请他给你指导一下英语发音。内容包括： 1. 朗诵比赛情况介绍； 2. 请求老师帮助； 3. 附带你的朗读录音。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr. Wesley, How is everything going with you? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua Writing 9 （2024·广东深圳·三模） 10．假定你是李华，你校交换生Mike准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China) 短视频大赛，特发邮件向你征询视频创意。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．提出建议； 2．阐明理由。 注意： 1．写作词数应为 80 左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Mike, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Writing 10 （2024·重庆·模拟预测） 11．假定你是李华，现就读于一所国际学校，打算向校学生会申请成立一个社团。请给学生会主席写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 社团的类型； 2. 社团的活动计划和目的； 3. 希望获得批准。 注意: 1. 词数80词左右； 2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear President, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$专题12 应用文写作（解析版） 考题解读 应用文写作占据十分重要的地位，它既是高考英语常考题也是必考题，本篇文章将具体梳理近五年新高考以“应用文写作”为主题的文章句子。 解题技巧 一、明确写作目的与受众 ●确定写作目的：在开始写作前，首先要明确写作的目的，是为了申请工作、请求支持、提供建议还是传达信息等。这有助于你构建文章的整体框架和内容。 ●考虑受众：了解你的文档将被哪些人阅读，以便调整语气和内容，以满足他们的需求。不同的受众可能需要不同的语言风格和表达方式。 二、审清题目，明确文种与格式 ●审文种：通过文种确定行文格式。例如，倡议书需要包括标题、称谓、正文和落款；而通知则可能只需要标题、正文和落款。 ●审身份：明确作答主体，对应落款及语言风格。不同的身份可能需要使用不同的称谓和语气。 ●审受众对象：明确作答对象，对应称谓及语言风格。确保你的称谓和语气与受众相符。 ●审发文目的：结合题干中的文种、身份、对象、事由来明确作答重点和所要完成的任务，对应写作开头与主体内容的构成。 三、结构化信息，逻辑清晰 ●引言：引入写作目的，概括你的写作目标，以引起读者的兴趣和好奇心。同时，可以提供一些与写作目的相关的背景信息。 ●主体段落：按照逻辑顺序或重要性排列，清晰地呈现信息。每个段落应围绕一个中心思想展开，使用段落和标题使文档易于阅读和理解。 ●总结：在结论中，总结你的请求、建议或提供的信息。强调下一步行动或期望的反应。 四、语言精炼，表达准确 ●使用清晰、精炼的语言：避免使用模糊或含糊不清的表述，确保你的意见和请求能够准确传达给受众。 ●适当的语气：根据情境选择正式或非正式的语气。确保你的语气与受众一致，既不过于生硬也不过于随意。 五、个性化与重点突出 ●个性化你的文档：通过引用受众的姓名、职位或其他细节来增加亲近感。这有助于建立与受众之间的良好关系。 ●重点突出：使用粗体、斜体或下划线等方式来强调重要信息。确保关键信息在文档中易于识别。 真题再现 高考真题 精准练01  书信类 1.（2024年新高考I卷&II卷） 1．假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： （1）你完成的作品； （2）你的感想。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3.（2023年新高考I&II卷） 2．  假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意：   1. 写作词数应为80个左右；   2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 3.（2022年新高考II卷） 3．假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括： 1. 节目介绍； 2. 访谈的时间和话题。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Caroline, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 4.（2022年浙江1月卷） 4．假定你是李华，在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国，请你给他 写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 回忆活动经历；2. 分享个人收获；3. 希望保持联系。 注意： 1 . 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.（2022年浙江6月卷） 5．假定你是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验，内容包括： 1.位置与开放时间； 2.室内设施和功能。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 精准练02  短文类 1.（2024年浙江1月卷） 6．请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括： 1. 介绍这项运动； 2. 说明推荐理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答： Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.（2023年浙江卷1月） 7．上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括： 1. 活动的过程； 2. 收获与感想。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Getting to Know the Plants Around Us ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2024年名校模拟题 Writing 1 （2024·重庆荣昌·模拟预测） 2．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Peter以优异的成绩通过考试，取得了到中国某大学留学的资格。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示祝贺； 2. 请教学习方法； 3. 期待在中国见面。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Writing 2 （2024·广东肇庆·三模） 3．假定你是学生会主席李华，英国某中学的部分师生即将访问你校，并体验校园传统文化节活动。请你用英语写一篇欢迎辞，主要内容包括： 1. 表示欢迎；      2. 活动介绍；        3. 表达祝愿。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear visiting guests, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! Writing 3 （2024·湖北·三模） 4．假定你是李华，给你班交换生Frank发邮件，想邀请Frank一起晨跑。请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1. 表明来意； 2. 晨跑的重要性； 3. 注意事项。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Dear Frank, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua Writing 4 （2024·浙江温州·三模） 5．你校英文报就最近举办的“当英语遇上艺术”(When English Meets The Arts)系列活动开展征文，请你写一篇短文，分享其中让你印象深刻的一项活动，内容包括： 1.活动介绍;2.你的感想 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 When English Meets The Arts _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 5 （2024·四川·模拟预测） 6．假定你是李华，你校即将举行一场以“环境保护”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你代表班级写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1. 阐述环境保护的重要性； 2. 分享班级在环境保护方面的做法和成果； 3. 呼吁全校师生参与环境保护行动。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear teachers, boys and girls, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! Writing 6 （2024·辽宁锦州·模拟预测） 7．假定你是李华，今天早上去找来自美国的好友John，想邀请他这周末一起去观看京剧 (Peking Opera) 表演，但John不在家，请你给他写封邮件。内容包括 1．你到John家的目的； 2．简要介绍京剧； 3．请求告知是否有空。 Dear John ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Writing 7 （2024·宁夏银川·模拟预测） 8．假定你是李华，最近参加了学校举办的“新时代好少年”(“Model Students in New Era”)主题网络短视频制作大赛活动，请你给学校英文报写一篇短文介绍该活动，内容包括： 1.活动设置目的； 2.你的参与情况和感受。 注意：1.词数100词左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：新时代好少年 Model Students in New Era An Unforgettable Video–clip Story _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 8 （2024·河北衡水·模拟预测） 9．假定你是李华，你校将于下周末举办英语朗诵比赛（recitation competition），请给你的外教Mr. Wesley写一封电子邮件，请他给你指导一下英语发音。内容包括： 1. 朗诵比赛情况介绍； 2. 请求老师帮助； 3. 附带你的朗读录音。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr. Wesley, How is everything going with you? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua Writing 9 （2024·广东深圳·三模） 10．假定你是李华，你校交换生Mike准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China) 短视频大赛，特发邮件向你征询视频创意。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．提出建议； 2．阐明理由。 注意： 1．写作词数应为 80 左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Mike, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Writing 10 （2024·重庆·模拟预测） 11．假定你是李华，现就读于一所国际学校，打算向校学生会申请成立一个社团。请给学生会主席写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 社团的类型； 2. 社团的活动计划和目的； 3. 希望获得批准。 注意: 1. 词数80词左右； 2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear President, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 高考真题答案 1． Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers. The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted. In a word, it was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信, 分享在公园上美术课的经历。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 决定：decide→determine 整个的：entire→whole 提供：offer→provide 总之：in a word→in short 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers. 拓展句：Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, which was surrounded by blooming flowers. 【点睛】[高分句型1]We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. (that引导的定语从句) [高分句型2] I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.(as引导的时间状语从句) 2．Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows. To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with. My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together. Thank you for considering my suggestion. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 首先：to begin with → first of all 提高：improve → progress 建议：suggestion → advice 选择：choose → select 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. 拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. 【点睛】[高分句型1] This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语） [高分句型2] Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句） 3．Dear Caroline, This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请你的外教Caroline来你校的广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”做一次访谈。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参加：attend→participate in 建立：establish→set up 帮助：aid→assistance 许多：plenty of→a lot of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. 拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot. 【点睛】[高分句型1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略结构) 4．Dear Chris, How are you doing these days? It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much. I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago. It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history. We really enjoyed ourselves there. What’s far more important is that we became good friends then. Though I felt a little sorry that you left China last year, I am pleased to know you are leading a happy life in your hometown.    I hope we can keep in touch often. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在文化节上结识的外国朋友写一封信叙旧。 【详解】1.词汇积累 返回：come back to → return to 思念：miss→ yearn 分享：share → exchange 玩得开心：enjoy oneself→ have a good time → have fun 开心的：pleased→ happy →delight→ content 过着快乐的生活：lead a happy life→ live a happy life 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much.   拓展句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland and I miss you so much. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago.（运用了定语从句） 【高分句型2】It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history.（运用了强调句型和定语从句） 【高分句型3】What’s far more important is that we became good friends then.（运用了主语从句和表语从句） 5．Dear Michael, Good news ! Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library. Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays. Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet. It’s really convenient for us to do some group projects. Why not ask our group members to go and experience it? Early reply and we can reserve one room for our project. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 由……组成：consist of→ be made up of 位于：be located on→ be situated on 与……相连接： be linked to →be connected to 预定：reserve→book 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library. 拓展句：Recently, a newly-furnished section, which consists of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet.（of which引导的非限制性定语从句） [高分句型2] Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays.（过去分词作状语） 6． Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day? How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine? One great option is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons. First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being. So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 厌倦：be tired of→be fed up with 首先：first→above all 减轻：combat→relieve 提高：improve→enhance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. 拓展句：This is a simple routine that involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. (运用了动名词作宾语) [高分句型2] It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day. (运用了that引导的定语从句) 7．                                                     Getting to Know the Plants Around Us    Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.    The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.     Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 参与：participate in → attend 开始：begin → start 观察，调查：observe → survey 震惊：strike → astonish/surprise 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union. 拓展句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union, which benefited me a lot. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句） 2024名校汇编答案 2．Dear Peter, I’m rather glad to learn that you have passed the examination and obtained the qualification to study in China. I’d like to express my sincere congratulations on your success. I’m deeply encouraged by what you’ve achieved. Although I work hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory. Could you be kind enough to share your learning experience with me? Meanwhile, I’m so much inspired by what you have achieved and, you know, to study in a key university is a dream deep-rooted in my mind. How can I make a step forward from where I am? Looking forward to your coming to China. I hope we can meet in China during the summer vacation. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的英国笔友 Peter以优异的成绩通过考试，取得了到中国某大学留学的资格。请给他写封邮件。 【详解】1.词汇积累 快乐的：glad→pleased 获得：obtain→gain 鼓励：encourage→motivate 表达：express→extend 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Although I work hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory. 拓展句：Working hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m deeply encouraged by what you’ve achieved.（运用了what引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】I’m rather glad to learn that you have passed the examination and obtained the qualification to study in China.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） 3．Dear visiting guests, On behalf of all the students in our school, I’d like to express our warmest welcome to you. It’s really a great honor for us that you can come and join us in the Campus Traditional Cultural Festival. The purpose of the festival is to enrich our school life and carry forward Chinese traditional culture. We will organize a series of activities, including performances on traditional Chinese musical instruments, folk dances and Chinese martial arts. Without doubt, it’ll be a good chance for you to get to understand Chinese culture better. Now, welcome again, our distinguished quests! I sincerely hope that you will have great fun here and get familiar with Chinese culture as well. Thank you! Dear visiting guests, It’s my honor to stand here on behalf of all the students, and I’d like to extend our warmest welcome to your coming and joining us in the Campus Traditional Culture Festival. Aimed at enriching our extra-curricular life and carrying forward traditional Chinese culture, a wide range of activities are due/arranged/expected, which are divided into 3 categories. One contains audiovisual performances on traditional Chinese musical instruments, folk dances and Chinese martial arts. Another involves paper-cutting, making tea and other intriguing hands-on projects. What comes the last is the interactive class—workshops where individuals share insights into given customs and traditions, making for the collision and blend of distinct minds. With these refreshing and spellbinding activities, there must be one to your taste and you’ll be totally immersed in the charm and vitality/vigour of Chinese culture and thus gain more insights into it as well. Welcome again, our distinguished guests! We sincerely hope everyone will have a pleasant and memorable time. Thank you! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语写一篇欢迎辞，欢迎英国某中学的部分师生来校访问，并体验校园传统文化节活动。解析以范文一为例。 【详解】1.词汇积累 表达：express→convey 机会：chance→opportunity 真诚地：sincerely→genuinely 玩得很开心：have great fun→have a wonderful time 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Without doubt, it’ll be a good chance for you to get to understand Chinese culture better. 拓展句：There is no doubt that it’ll be a good chance for you to get to understand Chinese culture better. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s really a great honor for us that you can come and join us in the Campus Traditional Cultural Festival. (运用了that引导的主语从句，it作形式主语) 【高分句型2】I sincerely hope that you will have great fun here and get familiar with Chinese culture as well. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 4．Dear Frank,       How are you doing? I’m writing to invite you to go for a morning run with me, which may benefit both of us in an amazing way.       When I was in junior high school, I often got sick due to lack of exercise. So I picked up running in the morning. Since then, running has played an important role in my life, without which I wouldn’t have built strong body. I think it is a good way to keep fit. That’s why I want to invite you to join me. Before running, it is necessary to have some preparation exercises, such as pressing legs and swinging arms. What’s more, make sure appropriate shoes and clothing are worn.       I hope you can join me in exercising. Looking forward to your early reply.                                                                                                                                                                   Best regards,                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生按照提示给交换生Frank发邮件，邀请Frank一起晨跑。 【详解】1.词汇积累 重要的：important→significant 健康的：fit→healthy 必要的：necessary→essential 另外：what’s more→in addition 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Before running, it is necessary to have some preparation exercises, such as pressing legs and swinging arms. 拓展句：Before running, it is necessary that we have some preparation exercises, such as pressing legs and swinging arms. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m writing to invite you to go for a morning run with me, which may benefit both of us in an amazing way. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Since then, running has played an important role in my life, without which I wouldn’t have built strong body. (运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句) 5．When English Meets The Arts Recently, our school organized a series of activities titled ”When English Meets The Arts". Among them, the activity that left a deep impression on me was the English drama performance. During the activity, students from different grades cooperated to produce and perform short English dramas. Each drama showcased a unique storyline and creative dialogue, providing a platform for students to showcase their English proficiency and acting skills. Personally, I was deeply impressed by the dedication and teamwork displayed by the students. Despite the challenges of language learning and stage fright, they demonstrated confidence and enthusiasm on stage. Moreover, the dramas not only entertained the audience but also encouraged language learning in a fun and interactive way. Overall, the English drama performance was a memorable and inspiring experience, highlighting the synergy between language learning and artistic expression. It reinforced the importance of creative approaches in language education and provided valuable opportunities for students to shine on stage. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇征文，分享学校英文报最近举办的“当英语遇上艺术”系列活动中让你印象深刻的一项活动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 一系列：a series of →a suite of 合作：cooperate→collaborate 展示：showcase→display 提供：provide→offer 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Each drama showcased a unique storyline and creative dialogue, providing a platform for students to showcase their English proficiency and acting skills. 拓展句：Each drama showcased a unique storyline and creative dialogue, which provided a platform for students to showcase their English proficiency and acting skills. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Among them, the activity that left a deep impression on me was the English drama performance.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Overall, the English drama performance was a memorable and inspiring experience, highlighting the synergy between language learning and artistic expression.(运用了现在分词作状语) 6．Dear teachers, boys and girls, Today, I am talking about a matter of utmost urgency—environmental conservation. The health of our planet is vital for our survival. Pollution, deforestation, and wasteful habits threaten the delicate balance of nature. We must act now to preserve our environment for future generations. Our class has taken significant steps towards this goal. We’ve initiated a recycling program, reduced plastic use, and organized tree-planting activities. These efforts have led to a noticeable decline in waste and an increase in greenery around our school. Small actions such as using eco-friendly products can make a huge difference. Let’s come together and contribute to the protection of our Earth. Thank you! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇演讲稿，参加以“环境保护”为主题的英语演讲比赛。 【详解】1.词汇积累 目标：goal→target 活动：activity→event 显然的：noticeable→apparent 重要的：significant→vital 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：We must act now to preserve our environment for future generations. 拓展句：If we want to preserve our environment for future generations, we must act now. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Let’s come together and contribute to the protection of our Earth. (运用了肯定祈使句) [高分句型2] Small actions such as using eco-friendly products can make a huge difference. (运用了动名词作宾语) 7． Dear John I hope this email finds you well. Learning you are interested in Chinese culture, I visited your home earlier this morning, but unfortunately, you were not there. So I am writing to invite you to watch Peking Opera this weekend. I believe this is a good chance for you to gain insight into it. Regarded as one of the cultural treasures of China, Peking Opera is more than just music and singing; it also combines drama, dancing, and martial arts, which makes it one of the most varied art forms in the world. I can tell you more about it when we meet. Please let me know if you are available and I will buy the tickets in advance. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给来自美国的好友John写封邮件，邀请他这周末一起去观看京剧表演。 【详解】1.词汇积累 机会：opportunity→chance 结合：associate→combine 多样的：various→varied 被看作：be regarded as→be considered as 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Learning you are interested in Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to watch Peking Opera this weekend. 拓展句：Since you are interested in Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to watch Peking Opera this weekend. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning you are interested in Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to watch Peking Opera this weekend. (运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2] Regarded as one of the cultural treasures of China, Peking Opera is more than just music and singing; it also combines drama, dancing, and martial arts, which makes it one of the most varied art forms in the world. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 8．                                                   An Unforgettable Video–clip Story Aimed at inspiring students to foster a sense of social responsibility, the video production competition themed “Model Students in New Era”, was held by our school. Collaborating with a team of like-minded peers, I brainstormed ideas that encapsulated the spirit of a “Model Student”. My video centered around a day in the life of a student who balanced academic pursuits with environmental activism, demonstrating how small acts could create significant impact. From scripting to filming and editing, every step was a learning experience that honed my technical abilities and fostered teamwork. Not only did I feel challenging in this competition, but also I gained a lot. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校英文报写一篇短文，介绍学校最近举办的“新时代好少年”(“Model Students in New Era”)主题网络短视频制作大赛活动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 激励：inspire→motivate 竞赛：competition→contest 合作：collaborate→cooperate 获得：gain→obtain 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Aimed at inspiring students to foster a sense of social responsibility, the video production competition themed “Model Students in New Era”, was held by our school. 拓展句：Aimed at inspiring students to foster a sense of social responsibility, the video production competition, whose theme is “Model Students in New Era”, was held by our school. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 Not only did I feel challenging in this competition, but also I gained a lot.(运用了not only放句首的部分倒装句) 【高分句型2】My video centered around a day in the life of a student who balanced academic pursuits with environmental activism, demonstrating how small acts could create significant impact.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句，how引导的宾语从句) 9．One possible version: Dear Mr. Wesley, How is everything going with you? An English recitation competition aimed to raise students’ interest in learning English is to be held next weekend. This competition is an excellent opportunity for us students to showcase our language skills and build confidence in public speaking. I am writing to kindly request your assistance in improving my English pronunciation for the competition. I believe your guidance will greatly benefit my performance. Your expertise in English phonetics would be invaluable in helping me refine my pronunciation and delivery. I have also attached a recording of my recitation for your reference. I would greatly appreciate any feedhack or advice you could provide. Thank you in advance for your assistance. Yours sincerely. Li Hue 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Wesley写一封电子邮件，请他给你指导一下英语发音，参加学校于下周末举办的英语朗诵比赛。 【详解】1.词汇积累 机会：opportunity →chance 请求：request →ask for 建议：competition→match 帮助：assistance →help/aid 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：An English recitation competition aimed to raise students’ interest in learning English is to be held next weekend. 拓展句：An English recitation competition which is aimed to raise students’ interest in learning English is to be held next weekend. 【点睛】【高分句型1】This competition is an excellent opportunity for us students to showcase our language skills and build confidence in public speaking.（运用了不定式短语作定语修饰名词opportunity） 【高分句型2】I would greatly appreciate any feedhack or advice you could provide.（运用了省略关系代词的定语从句） 10．Dear Mike, Learning you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you. If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China’s smart agriculture. Nowadays, you can see modern farmers using cutting-edge technologies and devices for agricultural production, monitoring and management. Thanks to this, the efficiency is greatly improved and the country’s grain security is guaranteed. Therefore, I’m convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers. May your entry stand out in the competition! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China) 短视频大赛的交换生Mike回一封邮件，就视频创意提出建议并阐明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 想法：idea →opinion 安全：security →safety 因此：therefore →thus 确信：convinced →sure 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Learning you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you. 拓展句：Because I learn you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you. 【点睛】【高分句型1】If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China’s smart agriculture.（运用了虚拟语气） 【高分句型2】Therefore, I’m convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和动名词短语作主语） 11． Dear President, I’m Li Hua, writing to apply for the establishment of a new club within our student community. The proposed club is dedicated to promoting cultural exchange and diversity among students. We plan to organize various activities, including cultural festivals, language workshops, and international film screenings. These events will provide an excellent platform for students to broaden their horizons and enhance their cross-cultural understanding. We also believe it will foster a more inclusive and diverse campus culture, while enhancing students’ interpersonal skills and global awareness. Thank you for considering my application. I'm looking forward to your favorable response. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生现就读于一所国际学校，打算向校学生会申请成立一个社团，要求考生按照要求给学生会主席写一封邮件。 【详解】1.词汇积累 致力于：be dedicated to→ be devoted to 促进：promote→ facilitate 计划做：plan to do→ intend to do 各种各样的：various→ a variety of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：We plan to organize various activities, including cultural festivals, language workshops, and international film screenings. 拓展句：We plan to organize various activities, which include cultural festivals, language workshops, and international film screenings. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m Li Hua, writing to apply for the establishment of a new club within our student community.（运用了现在分词writing作状语） 【高分句型2】The proposed club is dedicated to promoting cultural exchange and diversity among students（运用了动名词promoting作宾语） $$