第3讲 读后续写实战突破（教师用书word）-【金版新学案】2025年高考英语高三总复习大一轮复习讲义（外研版2019）

第三讲　读后续写实战突破 热考话题(一)　人与动物 人与动物话题主要包括两种场景：一种是“困境脱险”，即遇到危险动物，但最终化险为夷；一种是“和谐相处”，体现人与自然的和谐关系。 (2023·浙江1月卷) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs(蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me. When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty? As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering(悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight. During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said，“She must have come to say good-bye.” 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. I still remembered my friends’ promise so I went past the abandoned milking house to see if they had fixed the broken window. To my satisfaction, no other tiny creatures would meet this trouble any more. As I approached the farm, I was greeted by a spicy smell of the barbecue, urging me to walk faster. We were totally immersed in the peaceful atmosphere, enjoying the delicate cuisines, talking about our interesting experiences and singing songs till the sun set. The evening glow spreading across the farm, it was time for us to say goodbye so we went to the parking lot together. I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. With a squeaking call, she dived towards me and hovered before my face, looking at me with her bright eyes. Then she stopped on my left shoulder. I patted her on the back which was covered by colorful feathers. And I took out my water bottle, trying to give her some water. Content and joyful, she flew about 2 meters above the ground, turning her head from side to side as if expressing her gratitude for saving her life to me again. At that moment, happiness and the feeling of being moved mingled, welling up into my heart, tears rolling down my cheeks. (2024·龙岩高三检测) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “I don’t want to see that cat in our yard again，”my husband said as he drove the beautiful cat back into the neighbor’s yard.“Cats aren’t like dogs, honey. They are very independent and tend to move around wherever they please, especially if they are mousing，”I said.“Well, text our neighbor and let her know I don’t appreciate her cat in our yard，”he insisted. Sighing, I sent off a quick text to our sweet neighbor, Cheryl, informing her of my husband’s dislike of cats.“I’ll do my best，”she replied sometime later，“but it’s kind of hard controlling where she goes when I let her outside.”The following morning, John stood at the picture window in our bedroom. He’d installed it so that I could watch the birds visiting our feeders. 学生用书第524页 “You aren’t going to believe this，”he said.“Come look！”Slowly, I approached the window, praying Cheryl’s cat wasn’t in our yard. Seated side by side, right in the center of our yard, were two enormous groundhogs(土拨鼠).We’d observed groundhogs before, especially since our back yard backs up to a wooded area, but never had they been as brave as these two. John raised the window, and the two raced into the woods. That evening, I happened to glance out the picture window. Then something caught my eye in the flowerbed beyond.“John, come quick！”Hurriedly, he entered the bedroom just in time to see one of the groundhogs chewing on the flowers we’d planted around the water fountain.“Why, it’s eating every single blossom！” Again, John lifted the window, and the groundhog fled into the woods.“Hmmm, I better look up groundhogs on the computer and see just how destructive they can be.”Before he left the room, however, he saw something again. A groundhog was chewing our vegetables in the center of the garden. Across the yard, we’d planted a vegetable garden. We’d taken great pains to enclose the rows and rows of plants in chicken wire. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 “Something’s got to be done！”John shouted. ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ I couldn’t help smiling to myself as I went to search for my cellphone. ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 “Something’s got to be done！”John shouted. He went to start the computer in the other room.“It says here that groundhogs do not like cats — in fact, they hate the smell of soiled kitty litter.”I thought about the absence of our neighbor’s cat lately.“You know, I haven’t seen Cheryl’s cat mousing in our yard for some time. I wonder if that’s the reason these groundhogs have gotten so brave.”John glanced in my direction.“You might have something there. Why don’t you text Cheryl and let her know the cat’s ban has been removed.” I couldn’t help smiling to myself as I went to search for my cellphone. That evening, we spotted the sweet yellow cat moving around the border of our woods in search of mice. The groundhogs were nowhere in sight.“It’s a beautiful evening, isn’t it？”My husband smiled as we sat on the sofa. The sunset painted the sky pink, purple and gold. I couldn’t help sighing contentedly. Cheryl’s cat meowed in the distance.“You might say it’s absolutely perfect！” 热考话题(二)　家庭生活 家庭生活话题近几年考试出现频率较高，主要通过家人共同生活场景或生活趣事表现家庭成员之间的亲情友爱；也有通过描写家庭成员之间化解矛盾冲突，体现家人的宽容和理解。 (2021·新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a. m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. 学生用书第525页 Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。 2．请按如下格式作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. The two children were very eager to ask for help. Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over again. They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. It was all right this time. Delicious breakfast was ready. How happy they were! The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn’t expect. The children said loudly，“Happy Mother’s Day！”Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again. (2024·佛山模拟) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was in my room, unwilling to head to the community theatre with“my brother”Henry. He was just adopted by my parents recently. I was not in the mood for being onstage with him. “Kirstie, come here，”my mom called. Following her voice, I found her outside the bathroom, holding a wet book. She gave the book a shake.“Henry’s book was in the bathtub. Did you put it there？”She glared at me, something she never did before Henry came to our home. I didn’t wet his book on purpose. Tears of hurt clouded my eyes. Worse still, she promised to buy him a new copy. My heart ached. Henry was stealing my mother’s love. He was ruining my life. Meanwhile, Henry was just nearby, absorbed in working on a complicated rope knot(绳结) as usual. Why did a boy like him do the girly work? Far from manly! Soon, it was time to have to set off to the community theatre. As Henry walked ahead of us to the car, my mom took me aside and said in a low voice，“It’s the first time for Henry to be onstage. Be kind to him, Honey.”I nodded but sighed. Being kind didn’t use to be hard. But after Henry moved in, everything felt different. The theatre used to be a special place for my parents and me. With Henry involved, it didn’t seem so special any more. Finally, it was our stage time. My heart beat wildly. I forgot my annoyance at Henry for a while. As we kids lined up, ready to act out our short play, I realized how loosely I had tied the drawstring(束带)on my skirt. Sure enough, my skirt began to drop. Laughter from the audience could be heard, and even though I was wearing shorts under my skirt, I could feel my face burst into flames. However, my hands were full. If only someone could help me out! 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Right then, Henry sensed my embarrassment. ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ After the performance, I found Henry and tapped him on the arm gratefully. ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Right then, Henry sensed my embarrassment. He immediately came to my aid. He pulled up my skirt and skillfully tied the drawstring with a beautiful knot. Seeing what Henry did for me, something deep in my mind began to change. It seemed as if my cold heart began to melt slowly and my annoyance at him gradually gave way to guilt. I regretted having treated him as a stranger. While my mind was wandering, our performance time came. It turned out a great success, thunderous applause filling the whole theatre. After the performance, I found Henry and tapped him on the arm gratefully.“Thanks，”I said with a grateful smile on my face. I had to admit that but for his timely help, I would have been extremely embarrassed. Without his knotting skill, the performance would have been quite different.“Not at all. You are my sister，”he grinned innocently, saying humorously. Surrounded by the cheerful atmosphere, I felt a flood of warmth of a big family. Maybe it wouldn’t be so bad to have a new person in my corner of the world after all. 学生用书第526页 热考话题(三)　学校生活 学校生活话题是近两年考查的方向内容，主要描写学生的个人成长经历，多是通过记叙参加校园比赛或活动来表现矛盾以及如何解决矛盾，展现学生在学校环境下通过个人努力或者团队合作帮助取得的成长和进步。 (2022·新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route(路线)through thick evergreen forest. I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. He was small for ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked him why he wasn’t with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run. What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event! I quickly searched the crowd for the school’s coach and asked him what had happened.“I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him，”he explained uncomfortably.“I gave him the choice to run or not, and let him decide.” I bit back my frustration(懊恼).I knew the coach meant well—he thought he was doing the right thing. After making sure that David could run if he wanted, I turned to find him coming towards me, his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward. David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children, but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid. He always participated to the best of his ability in whatever they were doing. That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the cross-country team. It just took him longer—that’s all. David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run long after the other children, he did always finish. As a special education teacher at the school, I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. I said gently and quietly，“No one can change your mind, except yourself. If you desire to challenge yourself, there is nothing to do with others’ thoughts.”He sat still with a deep breath.“You have a full preparation before this event, which is the most important reason why you show up here，” I added with a sincere tone. Hearing my words, David turned to me tremblingly with tears spilling out of his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determination to finish the cross-country run. His coach heard what David said and gave me a look—the kind that was more determined than anyone else’s. I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. The race started. It seemed that the runway was extremely long for young children, not to mention a child with a heart disease. David insisted on running as if he had forgotten all his weaknesses, though he was tripped over within the few kilometers. It didn’t take long before he picked himself up again and continued his mission. Classmates all appeared on the racing track, cheering for him.“Come on! You can make it! We are proud of you！”they shouted enthusiastically. To everyone’s joy, he reached the final line and ranked the 20th. It was no more important whether he won the first place or not. It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally. (2024·泰安高三模拟) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Make-up Guy Dave was a make-up artist who regularly held make-up artistry classes at the local community college. He was well-known as an excellent trainer and enjoyed great popularity. Usually, the majority of his students were middle-aged housewives, who wanted to fine-tune their make-up skills so as to make themselves more attractive. But this time, it was beyond him that his class was attended by a man as well. 学生用书第527页 The new student was a gentleman in his best years with a seemingly boundless interest in make-up artistry. He was keen to learn as much as he possibly could and asked questions whenever and wherever possible. He was so absorbed in learning that he wouldn’t stop until he was satisfied with the result of his work. Understandably, the man was the number one subject of conversation when the other women were alone. Speculations(猜测) quickly started to spread. Why did he learn make-up? Was he to seek for a woman to be his life partner? How about my neighbor’s youngest daughter? Why on earth would he attend such a woman class? Who could it be? Doubts like this came crowding in. The community college was placed in a remote rural area, which was why the other participants were quite doubtful of the man’s intentions. Throughout the lessons, ignoring the curious women around him, the man carefully listened and wrote everything down he learned, leaving the women more and more curious and puzzled. When the day and class were slowly coming to an end, the gossiping women simply could not hide their curiosity any longer, for they knew it was time to remove their doubts, otherwise... Finally, one of them couldn’t resist her curiosity, so she picked up the courage and asked him why he was so interested in make-up artistry. What followed was a dead silence. After what seemed a century, he slowly opened his mouth and here came the most inspiring beautiful reply. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 He said his beloved wife partially lost her eyesight because of diabetes(糖尿病) and she was no longer able to apply her make-up. ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ So he decided to take the course to surprise his wife. ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 He said his beloved wife partially lost her eyesight because of diabetes(糖尿病) and she was no longer able to apply her make-up. Fearing being laughed at, she locked herself in her room, abandoning herself to great grief. She was absolutely beautiful even without make-up. But what upset her was that she simply felt not comfortable leaving the home without make-up.“Sensing her loneliness in a colorless world, I was also at a loss as to what to do. Once informed of this class, I determined to learn make-up without hesitation, hoping to make a difference.” So he decided to take the course to surprise his wife. Without a pause, he shared his story. He mastered a wide range of practical skills, allowing him to help her take on a new look. Surely, enveloped by an atmosphere of love, his beloved wife at present was deeply affected.“I not only want to learn how to apply her make-up，but I want her to wear the most beautiful make-up so her inner beauty also shines on the outside.”he announced，“It is her smile that touches most my heart, not the make-up.” 热考话题(四)　社区/社会生活 社区/社会生活话题主要表现“助人为乐、友善待人”的优秀品行，既包括邻里相助，也有陌生人帮助或者公益助人活动温暖感人的场景。 (2022·浙江6月卷改编) 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 I needed to do something in my community (社区)in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate from high school. Some of my friends had signed up to spend time at a soup kitchen, so I did, too. It seemed like a good thing to do. I thought that we would just be passing out dinners to those in need, but I found out we would be doing everything from preparing to serving the dinner. We began preparing the food, from mixing salad dressing to separating frozen meat. Much still needed to be done before dinner was served, but already outside the building many homeless people were gathering. It wasn’t until a couple of hours later that we opened the doors and began serving dinner. As the line of people came toward me, I got a little scared. I’d come face to face with the homeless: 学生用书第528页 How should I act? How would they treat me? Would they hate me for having more than they did? While some of the people looked very friendly, some of them looked so dangerous. I didn’t have too much time to worry about it. I was assigned (分配) to serve the salad with the lady next to me. She smiled at me and said if I needed help, she’d be right there, which I found quite comforting. I had never seen so many people wanting food. They were of all ages and nationalities. Most of them wore clothes that were torn and dirty. Some looked like they had totally given up on life, while others seemed to be making the best of the situation, smiling and joking. Some were better off than others, but they all needed a good meal and a warm place to eat. It saddened me to think of how many people there were who didn’t have a place to call home and that the only food they got came from a soup kitchen. 注意：1.续写词数应为150 左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile. ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile. In my sight, I found a lot of homeless people in need of something to eat were waiting in the queue. In the next few hours I was very busy giving out the meat and other food items into their hands. And what moved me most was that when those hungry people went off, they also left with some friendly words of gratitude. Though I felt rather tired and worn out，I still seemed delighted. Seeing what I did make their day，I felt deep pleasure welling up from the bottom of my heart. I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. Never had I ever experienced such an appealing situation. It was definitely a rewarding thing to do the community service! Following the lady’s advice, I even tried my best to know them. And it turned out that the seemingly dangerous people were actually quite friendly. Through this unforgettable experience, I also earned something more valuable. To help the people in need is also a help to myself. By offering the voluntary assistance, we can not only actually comfort the poor people, but also lift our own spirits, which can help build a better world with warmth and friendliness for all of us. (2024·广州高三模拟) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I’ve lived in this neighborhood for years, but I still remember the first person I met when I moved here, and she was Linda who had black wavy hair, big naughty eyes and a smile on her face all the time. I think she was about ten when I first met her. She was very fond of trees and spent all her spare time collecting leaves and sticking them on a brochure. She remembered exactly where she had picked up a particular leaf, on which day and whether it was a sunny, windy or rainy day. Because I was interested in seeing what she had collected, I was her best friend or sister, Belle. Later, Linda went to a boarding school outside the town. She would come home only during vacations. That is to say, we couldn’t see each other as often as we used to. But we would make full use of every opportunity to visit the small forest near our home to collect her favorite leaves, and meanwhile, I could listen to her wonderful descriptions of the trees. You must be wondering why I am talking about Linda. You see, something fantastic happened last week. I was standing on the balcony looking at the budding blossoms of the trees. As usual, I remembered Linda whom I had not seen for many years. Two years ago, I got some information from an old neighbor about Linda. She had settled down in France and had a daughter. I wondered whether she still stuck to her hobby of collecting leaves. I was so lost in thought that I did not hear that the doorbell rang at first. Then it rang again and again. Two short rings, one long ring and two short rings. Suddenly it dawned on me that it was how Linda used to ring the bell. I ran to the door. 学生用书第529页 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 I opened the door and found“Linda”standing there. ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ “Hello, Belle! I’m Amy, Linda’s daughter.” ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 I opened the door and found “Linda”standing there. The girl was with the same black wavy hair, the same big naughty eyes, and the same smile, and she held two brochures in her arms. She was about the same age when I had met Linda the first time. She couldn’t be Linda! I remembered that I had learned from my neighbor that Linda had a daughter who looked so much like her. I was sure the girl was her daughter. “Hello, Belle! I’m Amy, Linda’s daughter.”What a wonderful surprise! Then Amy called out to someone hiding behind a tree，“Come out now. We have succeeded in surprising her！”Here came Linda. You cannot imagine the excitement we felt when we saw each other after so many years. That afternoon, the three of us went for a walk in the forest, collecting different leaves and enjoying the pleasure of friendship and companionship. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$