内容正文:
第一讲 建议信&邀请信&申请信
写作专题提升 应用文写作
文体(一) 建议信
建议信通常是就对方在生活、工作或求学过程中出现的问题或遇到的困难提出看法或建议。写作框架可分为三段:
增分美句
1.出彩亮点首段句
①(2023·新课标Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷)I’m Li Hua from Class 3.I am writing to express my concerns about your way of grouping us at random for our oral English practice.
②(2023·新课标Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷)I’m Li Hua from Class 3.We’re overwhelmed with excitement at the knowledge that an oral English class will be arranged for us.
③I’m Li Hua, a student in our school. I’m writing to give you some tips/suggestions on how to create a green school.
④As is known to all, living Green can ensure our health and sustainable development. For us students, we should create a green school in order to contribute to a comfortable studying environment. My suggestions are as follows.
2.吸引眼球中段句
①(2023·新课标Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷)To begin with, it couldn’t be better if students with mixed levels of English could be grouped together deliberately rather than at random. Additionally, to ensure that our oral practice goes smoothly, I suggest that you put three to four students together.
②Firstly, it’s a good idea to arrange a series of lectures related to environmental protection.
Secondly, we may as well to attach great importance to saving water, paper and electricity and planting trees and put them into practice. Last but not least, we must have good habits to keep every corner tidy in our school.
3.画龙点睛末段句
①(2023·新课标Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷)I would be more than delighted if my proposal could meet with your consideration.
②(2023·新课标Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷)Should it be possible, I truly hope you can take my suggestions into consideration.
③ I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
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1.Thanks for giving me such an opportunity to address my opinion on...
非常感谢给予我机会,就……问题发表意见。
2.I feel it my responsibility to suggest that...我觉得自己有责任建议你……
3.I deeply appreciate your effort to... However,in my view,you’d better... 很欣赏您为……所做的努力。但是依我看来,您最好……
4.As a...,I’m writing to offer my advice on the matter of... 作为……,我写此信是想就……问题提出我的建议。
5.I hope you can take my advice seriously.
我希望您能认真对待我的建议。
6.I’m sure you’ll find it worthwhile to take my suggestions.我相信您会发现我的建议值得听取。
7.I believe you will take my suggestions into account/consideration.我相信您一定会好好考虑我的建议。
8.I would be ready to discuss this matter in further details.我很乐意进一步详细讨论这个问题。
提分演练
假如你是去国外交流的某中学的学生李华,请你给所在交流学校校委会写一封信,就开办一个艺术画廊给出自己的建议及理由,内容包括:
1.建议开办一个校园艺术画廊,展示在校学生自己的作品;
2.画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的平台,开阔学生视野、传播校园文化。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Committee members,
I wish to make a suggestion about starting a school art gallery.
There are many students good at painting in our school. The school art gallery can provide these students with a very good platform to display their own paintings, and others may not only get a chance to admire their artistic skills and the development of school culture but also widen their knowledge. If you were to offer such an opportunity to the students, I believe they would give you a big surprise.
I would be more than happy if my suggestion could be considered.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
文体(二) 邀请信
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信,在写作时,语气要热情真挚,不要强人所难。具体写作架构常分三段:
增分美句
1.出彩亮点首段句
①(2022·新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷)I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union. It’s my great honor to invite you to give an interview on our program“Talk and Talk”,which is scheduled for 7 pm this Friday.
②(2022·新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷)On behalf of the school radio station, I feel honored to invite you to give an interview on our English radio program“Talk and Talk”.
2.吸引眼球中段句
①(2022·新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷) It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, a great many students are eager to know how to deal with it.
②(2022·新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷)“Talk and Talk” is designed for students who are eager to acquire more knowledge about English, and now it is highly thought of by most listeners. The topic of this time’s interview is about Western literature, and the interview is scheduled for 17:00 this Friday.
3.画龙点睛末段句
①(2022·新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷) I do believe your presence at our program will undoubtedly benefit the students a lot more as well as the program itself.
②(2022·新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷)I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply. Looking forward to your reply.
③I do hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient to you.
美句模版
1.Learning/Knowing..., I am writing to invite you to... 得知……,我写信邀请您……
2.It’s my pleasure/a great honor for me to invite you to...很荣幸邀请您……
3.It is with the great pleasure that I write to cordially/sincerely invite you... 很高兴我写这封信诚挚地邀请您……
4.On behalf of..., I have the honor to extend an invitation to you to... 谨代表……,我很荣幸地邀请您……
5.When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you... 就此情况,我建议你……
6.I think it would be more beneficial if you could... 我觉得要是你能……会大有裨益。
7.Your participation can surely add color to our trip/activity and we are all looking forward to your involvement.您的参与一定会给本次活动增色,期待您的加入。
8.I would be grateful if you could accept my invitation. I’m looking forward to your early reply.如果您能受邀我将不胜感激。盼复。
提分演练
假定你是李明。你所在的班级将举行毕业告别派对(graduation farewell party),请你给外教Mr. Robinson 写一封邀请信,内容包括:
1.时间:周日下午5点;
2.地点:学校餐厅;
3.活动安排:享用晚餐,观看演出,分享美好回忆等等。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Mr. Robinson,
I am writing to invite you to attend our graduation farewell party, which will be held in the school canteen at 5 p.m. this Sunday. During the party, we will enjoy delicious meals, play interesting games and appreciate various performances together. Then there will come the most important part of the party: sharing the unforgettable moments in the past three years.
We would be greatly honored by your presence. If you accept our sincere invitation, please inform us at your earliest convenience, enabling us to make some necessary preparations.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
文体(三) 申请信
申请信有求职申请、加入某组织或参加某活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等,其目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就以及愿望等,所以对个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容,应尽可能地向对方说明自己的长处,以便留下好印象,获得机会。具体写作架构常分三段:
增分美句
1.出彩亮点首段句
①I am writing to apply for a volunteer position in our community library during the summer break.
②I am Li Hua, a Chinese student in London now. Having learned that a Chinese painting exhibition will be held in this city, I am writing to apply to be a volunteer.
③Learning the school basketball team is looking for new members, I’m excited to apply to be a member of it.
2.吸引眼球中段句
①First of all, as a Chinese, I have a good command of English, making it easy for me to communicate with foreign guests freely. Besides, having a good knowledge of Chinese paintings, I can get the visitors to know about them. With all these advantages, I hold the firm belief that I will be very qualified to be a volunteer.
②I worked as an assistant of my English teacher, from which I gained much working experience. Therefore, I have a sense of duty and cooperation greatly needed in a team work. I’m convinced that I am qualified for this job and I will perform to the best of my ability if I am lucky to get the job.
3.画龙点睛末段句
①I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
②I would be very grateful if you could offer me a chance to be a volunteer.
③I’ll be grateful if you could give me this precious opportunity.
美句模版
1.I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to...
我写此信是希望能得到机会来……
2.I am interested in your...and wish to enter this significant program. My background is as follows...我对你的……感兴趣,希望能加入到这个重要项目中。我的学历背景如下……
3.I think I am qualified to /for... because I have a good command of...我通晓……,所以我认为我有资格……
4.I would be truly grateful, if you can grant me an early reply/inform me the result of my application in due course.如果您能早日答复/及时通知我申请结果,我将不胜感激。
5.Thank you for your consideration/time.
感谢您给予考虑/抽出宝贵的时间。
6.I am looking forward to hearing from you at your early convenience.期盼早日收到您的来信。
提分演练
假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事,请阅读启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2025, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms. Chen @ cultureschool. com.
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Ms. Chen,
I’ m Li Hua, a student from Class 2, Grade 3.I’m writing to apply for the position as a volunteer.
As an outgoing boy, I get along well with my classmates and I am good at cooperating. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as an assistant to my English teacher. I have also successfully organized some activities, highly appreciated by teachers and classmates.
I really want to get this precious opportunity. I am sure I can live up to your expectations. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
谢谢观看
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