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10类书信写规范——让阅卷老师判定五档
一、求助信和建议信
求助信
(一)谨记写作范式
求助信是针对自己目前遇到的困难写信请求对方给予帮助的信件类型,因此整篇文章应用一般现在时。其结构通常为:
(二)黄金表达要记牢
【先声夺人开头句——开篇表意】
①I'm writing to seek help from you/ask you to do me a favor/give me a hand,as I meet with/come across some problems while planning a Green Campus campaign.
②Faced with/In the face of so challenging a problem,I have no alternative but to turn to you for help.
【引人入胜篇中句——说明困惑或难题】
①What bothers me is that I am at a loss/have no idea how to review what I have learned by myself at home.
②I have much trouble in concentrating on online classes,making me really frustrated.
【画龙点睛结尾句——表达希望】
①(2024·皖豫名校联盟大联考) I'd appreciate it very much if you could give me a hand.Looking forward to your early reply.
②(2024·皖豫名校联盟大联考)I would appreciate it if you could do me a favour and spare some time to polish my application letter and resume.
满分范文要会写——向心理老师求助
(2024·江淮十校三模)假定你是李华,你正在为高考紧张复习,但最近你遇到了一些问题以致学习低效。请你给你校外籍心理老师Charlie写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下:
1.写信意图;
2.存在问题;
3.希望得到帮助。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Dear Charlie,
I am Li Hua,a Senior 3 student.Lately,I've been busy preparing for my College Entrance Examination,but unluckily I find it hard to be concentrated.So I'm writing to turn to you for guidance.
I'm faced with some problems which trouble me a lot.I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports.What troubles me most is that it's difficult for me to enjoy a sound sleep every night.
I wonder if you could help me with those difficulties.I'd appreciate it very much if you could give me a hand.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
建议信
(一) 谨记写作范式
建议信是写作中常见的一种文体,是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议或忠告。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确,具有合理性和说服力。写作结构为:
(二)黄金表达要记牢
【先声夺人开头句——开篇表意】
①(2024·广东省高三二模) I'm more than delighted to hear you will hold an activity on the“Chinese Language Day”.Here are some tips to make it amazing and educational.
②(2024·鞍山市第二次监测)Knowing that you'll participate in the“Studying in China”Speech Contest,I'm delighted to give you some suggestions.
【引人入胜篇中句——具体建议】
①First of all,by reading Chinese poems or essays,you can improve your knowledge of Chinese culture.
②What's more,you may as well join in a summer camp,which not only broadens your horizons but also helps you develop the spirit of teamwork.
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③Last but not least,having a face-to-face talk with your parents peacefully and listening patiently is a better choice.
【画龙点睛结尾句——提出希望】
①I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration at your early convenience.
②I do hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.
满分范文要会写——绿化新建图书馆前的空地
(2024·山东省潍坊市高三下学期二模)学校新建图书馆前的空地即将绿化,现征求学生的建议。假如你是李华,请给校英语报Colorful Campus编辑Martin写封邮件,内容包括:
1.绿化布局;
2.设计理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Dear Martin,
Hearing our school is to green the empty space in front of the new library,I would like to share my suggestions.
To begin with,colorful flowers can be planted in the east part where students will enjoy the beauty of nature.Trees and benches can be arranged in the west section providing students with a place to study and relax.Besides,the central part can be covered with grass with a sculpture standing there,reflecting the culture of our school.
I'd appreciate it if you can take my suggestions into account.I hope our school will become more beautiful.
Yours,
Li Hua
二、推荐信和申请信
推荐信
(一) 谨记写作范式
从推荐者的情况来分,可以分为自荐信和推荐信两种。具体写作结构为:
(二) 黄金表达要记牢
【先声夺人开头句——开篇表意】
①Delighted/Pleased that you are going to pay a visit to Xi'an,I'm writing to recommend to you some tourist attractions deserving visiting.
②I'm more than glad/pleased/delighted/cheerful to learn that you are going to Beijing,and I'd like to offer my recommendation.
【引人入胜篇中句——推荐理由】
①Firstly,Tom,who is among the most diligent students in our school,not only studies hard but also behaves well.
② Besides,he stands out for his diverse hobbies,including painting and playing the violin.
③ Last but not least,he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need,for which I recommend him to you.
【画龙点睛结尾句——提出希望】
①I do hope you can take my recommendation into account/consideration and make a final decision.
②Hope my recommendations will be of great help to you.Wish you a good time.
满分范文要会写——推荐特色课程
假定你是李华,你校来自新西兰的交换生Terry发邮件请你推荐一门特色课程,请你用英文给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐的课程及简介;
2.推荐的理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Dear Terry,
Learning that you would like to take a characteristic course of our school,I strongly recommend the course of Chinese painting to you.
Firstly,Chinese painting enjoys a high reputation at home and abroad.Secondly,this course will not only offer a systematic knowledge of its history but also guide you to appreciate the famous masterpieces.Last but not least,you can learn to use Chinese brush and ink to create your own painting,which will make you have a sense of achievement.
I do hope you can take my recommendation into account/consideration and make a final decision.
Yours,
Li Hua
申请信
(一) 谨记写作范式
申请信有很多种,比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请等。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示,写作时除应注意格式上的要求外,也应注意审题全面,不能遗漏要点。具体写作结构为:
(二)黄金表达要记牢
【夺人眼球开头句——点明目的】
①Learning the school basketball team is looking for new members,I'm excited to apply to be a member of it.
②From the advertisement I know a host is needed for the coming music festival,so I can't wait to apply for the position.
【引人入胜篇中句——介绍个人优势】
①(2024·安徽省阜阳市3月质量检测) I do believe that I am qualified for the job.To begin with,I have a good command of English,especially written English.
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②(2024·安徽省阜阳市3月质量检测)Besides,I have taken the part-time job as an English editor,from which I have gained relevant experience.
③(2024·安徽省阜阳市3月质量检测)Last but not least,I have a rich knowledge of traditional Chinese culture.
【画龙点睛结尾句——表达感谢、期望或决心】
①I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and I'm looking forward to your early reply.
②If accepted,I would spare no effort to offer my best service.
满分范文要会写——申请做文化节志愿者
假定你是李华,你所在的社区计划举行中国传统文化节。请你给社区写一封邮件申请做文化节志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.希望获准。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Dear Sir or Madam,
Learning that volunteers are needed for the coming Traditional Chinese Culture Festival in our community,I'm writing to apply for the job.
Firstly,equipped with a good knowledge of traditional Chinese culture,I'm confident that I'm qualified to introduce our treasures to visitors.Moreover,I have a good command of English,enabling me to communicate with foreign guests smoothly.Last but not least,not only am I enthusiastic and optimistic,but I'm also patient and responsible.
I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
三、邀请信和感谢信
邀请信
(一) 谨记写作范式
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信,在写作时,语气要热情真挚,不要强人所难。具体写作结构为:
(二)黄金表达要记牢
【先声夺人开头句——开篇表意说明活动,发出邀请】
①I'd like to invite you to attend the Chinese Excellent Calligraphy Show and admire the great works with me.
②(2024·吉林省名校联盟3月大联考)I'm Li Hua,chairman of the Students' Union,I am writing to invite you to participate in the on-coming painting contest in our school.
【引人入胜篇中句——活动目的、时间、安排、活动形式】
①(2024·吉林省名校联盟3月大联考)The contest,with the theme of “Life on Campus”,is aimed at enriching us students' after-class activities and arousing our affection for our school.
②(2024·吉林省名校联盟3月大联考) You are always interested in painting,so I consider it a good opportunity for you to show your talent.
③At the beginning,a mini lecture related to the music festival will be arranged,after which there will be various fantastic performances given by students.Finally,the audience will visit an exhibition of traditional Chinese musical instruments.
④This is such a golden chance to experience traditional Chinese culture that it can't be missed.
【画龙点睛结尾句——期待接受邀请,早日回复】
I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration at your early convenience.
满分范文要会写——邀请参加“中国文化节”
假设你是李华,你所在的学校将于下月举办“中国文化节”活动。请根据以下提示,写一封信邀请你校英国留学生Jacob届时参加。内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动内容;
3.期待参加。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Dear Jacob,
I'm writing to invite you to participate in the Chinese Cultural Festival scheduled to start on May 6th in our school.
The festival,intended to promote cultural communication and enhance mutual understanding,will include a wide variety of activities where participants can experience traditional culture first hand,such as paper-cutting,kung fu and Chinese calligraphy.In addition,participants will be welcome to watch a live performance of Peking Opera and taste authentic Chinese cuisine during the event.I believe this festival will surely enable you to gain a better insight into traditional Chinese culture since you always have keen interest in it.
Look forward to your participation!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
感谢信
(一) 谨记写作范式
感谢信是重要的礼仪文书,是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信,有感谢和表扬双重意思。具体写作结构为:
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(二)黄金表达要记牢
【先声夺人开头句——表达感谢之情,并说明原因】
①I'd like to express/convey my great appreciation for your timely help and support.
②With the deepest gratitude,I'm writing to you to express my thanks to you for your kindness when I was traveling in London.
【引人入胜篇中句——描述对方对自己的帮助】
①Undoubtedly,it was your encouragement and support that lit me up when I was faced with difficulties in English learning.
② Thank you so much for the gift you sent me.It's one of the most wonderful gifts I have ever got.
③Had it not been for your assistance and kindness,I couldn't have made such great progress.
【画龙点睛结尾句——再次表达感谢】
① Thanks again for your help and I'm sincerely looking forward to showing you around in Beijing to repay your kindness.
②Without your assistance,my English couldn't have got better in such a short time.Thanks again for your kind help.
满分范文要会写——感谢好友给予帮助
假定你是一名加拿大籍交换生 David,2022 年来到中国学习,期间好友李华在汉语学习和生活方面给了你很大的帮助。请你给他写一封信,表示感谢。要点如下:
1.简述你在学习期间遇到的困难,如语言方面、生活方面等;
2.感谢好友李华给予的帮助;
3.邀请他来加拿大旅游。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Dear Li Hua,
I am writing to convey my genuine gratitude to you for your generous help.Without your encouragement and advice,I wouldn't have benefited so much from the experience.
During my stay in China,I had great difficulty in understanding Chinese.It was you who encouraged me to be confident to express myself fluently in Chinese.What's more,whenever I was overwhelmed by homesickness,you were always with me,and were ready to give me a hand.
I will be more than pleased if I can show you around Canada in return for your kindness.
Yours,
David
四、道歉信和投诉信
道歉信
(一) 谨记写作范式
道歉信是陈述自己不当行为给对方造成不利影响的歉意,或者无法答应对方所托的原因。具体写作结构为:
(二)黄金表达要记牢
【先声夺人开头句——开篇表示歉意】
① I'm writing to convey my sincere apologies to you for not accompanying you to the gallery at our appointed time.
② Now,I'm writing you this letter to show my deep regret.
【引人入胜篇中句——具体说明道歉的原因,提出补救措施】
①The reason why I won't be available at that time as planned is that my grandfather fell ill suddenly yesterday and I had to care for him.
②I have just found I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon.I hope the change will not cause too much trouble.
③I feel so sorry for not keeping my word,but would you give me a chance to say sorry to you face to face?
④I would appreciate it if you could allow me to fix another time.If not,please keep me informed in advance of when it is convenient to you.
【画龙点睛结尾句——再次表达歉意】
①I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and understand my situation.Wish you a safe and happy journey!
②Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence and all the best wishes to you.
满分范文要会写——道歉无法参加讲座
(2024·浙江温州高三二模)假定你是李华,因故不能参加外教Mr.Green明天晚上开设的关于“中美文化差异”的讲座,请给他写一封信表示道歉,内容包括:
1.表达道歉;
2.解释原因;
3.询问是否愿意提供相关资料。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Dear Mr.Green,
I'm Li Hua,one of your students.I'm writing to apologize to you for failing to attend your lecture this Friday evening,which is about the difference between Chinese and English.
Because of a high fever catching me yesterday,I have been in hospital for a timely treatment,which unfortunately prevented me from all school activities.In fact,I have strong interest in what you will share with us in the lecture.I'd appreciate it if you could provide me with some relevant materials.
I would deeply apologize again and wish your lecture a success.
Yours,
Li Hua
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投诉信
(一) 谨记写作范式
投诉信常被用来解决诸如消费者利益受损、正常生活或工作受到干扰等问题。投诉信不同于申请信或邀请信,要直截了当,掷地有声地表达自己的观点,不能拖泥带水。具体写作结构为:
(二)黄金表达要记牢
【先声夺人开头句——表明身份,交代要投诉的问题】
①Dissatisfied with your poor service,I couldn' t feel more annoyed so I can not help but make an immediate complaint.
②There is much to be desired about your after-sales service,so I'm writing to make a complaint about the problems of it.
③I'm Li Hua,a customer who bought a book from your website a week ago.There exists something wrong with several pages.That's why I'm writing to complain.
【引人入胜篇中句——描述投诉原因,问题的经过及产生的后果】
① Personally,it's time that your service should be improved to live up to the customers' expectations.
②Worse still,several pages in the book are missing,which makes it impossible for me to make sense of the book.
③Much to my dissatisfaction,the cellphone is not easy to operate,causing me much inconvenience.What's worse,it often breaks down for no reason,which shows its poor quality.
【韵味无穷结尾句——提出解决方案】
①I do hope you will take my complaint seriously and get it settled as soon as possible.
②I wonder if I can get my money back,or I wish you could have it repaired or changed.I hope you will do what you can to fix the problem.
满分范文要会写——投诉、要求换货或退款
假定你是李华,两周前你在国外某网站购买的商品有问题,请你给该网站负责人写一封邮件,要求换货或退款,内容包括:
1.商品信息;
2.退换货原因。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to complain to you about the recording pen I bought from your website several days ago.However,there seems to be something wrong with it.
Firstly,the voice isn't so clear as you claimed.Additionally,it's not easy to operate,causing me much trouble.Due to its poor quality and much inconvenience it has caused,I wonder whether you can do something about it.I'd appreciate it if I could either be refunded or the pen could be changed.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
五、咨询信和告知信
咨询信
(一) 谨记写作范式
咨询信,又称询问信,是写信人对不理解、不熟悉的事情或对某方面的信息感兴趣,希望了解详细信息的信件。具体写作结构为:
(二)黄金表达要记牢
【先声夺人开头句——开篇表意】
①I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding/concerning the English summer camp.
②I'm writing to you in the hope of getting some details of the two-week journey.
③I'm wondering if/whether you could/would offer some specific information related to your advertisement.
【引人入胜篇中句——咨询具体信息,强调所需信息的重要性】
①Could you be so kind as to tell me the detailed arrangement for these online courses?
②Another point I'm uncertain about is whether the meals are covered in the total expenses.
【画龙点睛结尾句——期盼回复】
①I'd appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.
②If there is anything else that needs special attention,please inform me at your convenience.
满分范文要会写——咨询预订酒店
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友特里(Terry)一行人要来你市体验元宵节,他请你帮他们预订酒店,请你给他回一封电子邮件。要点如下:
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1.表示欢迎;
2.询问到达时间;
3.询问具体要求(价位、房间数等)。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Dear Terry,
I'm delighted to learn that you will taste the Lantern Festival in our city.Please give me some detailed information about your schedule,so I can reserve a hotel for you in advance.
Firstly,when will your flight arrive at the airport? Besides,prices of a hotel room range from 399 yuan to 999 yuan,so which kind of rooms do you prefer?And more importantly,how many rooms do you exactly need?Only if I figure out all of the questions can I make reservations for you.
Looking forward to your early coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
告知信
(一) 谨记写作范式
告知信用于告知对方有关活动事宜,情况变化。告知信分为两类:
1.告知某人有某事将要发生;
2.回复某人关于某事的询问。
具体写作结构为:
(二)黄金表达要记牢
【先声夺人开头句——开篇表意】
①Learning you are enthusiastic about the art festival,I'm delighted to share with you some details.
②I'm eager/excited to inform you of a voluntary activity that you may be interested in.
③I can hardly wait to share with you the exciting news that a folk music festival is to be held in our city.
【引人入胜篇中句——告知相关事宜】
①The next class is about calligraphy,for which you are supposed to make some preparations.
②I hope the change of the course arrangement will not cause you too much trouble/inconvenience.
③Not only was the activity a feast for the eyes,but it also inspired us to study harder.
【画龙点睛结尾句——结尾点题,期盼再次联系 】
If you want to know anything else,please don't hesitate to contact me.
满分范文要会写——告知交换生推迟“农耕研学”
(2024·山东省日照市高三二模)假定你是李华,你校原定于本周五举行为期两天的“农耕研学(Agricultural Field Trip)”活动,因天气影响将延期举行。请你写一封邮件告知交换生David,内容包括:
1.说明变动原因;
2.告知变动情况。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
Dear David,
How is everything going? I'm sorry to tell you that some adjustments have been made to the two-day Agricultural Field Trip,which was scheduled for this Friday.
According to the latest weather report,there's going to be a heavy rain this Friday.Thus,our school has decided to put off the field trip until it gets better.Weather permitting,the activity may take place next Friday.I will let you know once it is confirmed.I hope the unexpected change won't cause you much inconvenience.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
报道等其他9类应用文——让科学应试成就满分
一、新闻报道、征文投稿、图画/图表说明类短文
新闻报道
(一)谨记写作范式
新闻报道是对新近发生的事实的报道。新闻是对客观事实进行报道而形成的信息,反映在新闻信息中的内容必须具有真实性和可传达性,即用事实说话。具体写作结构为:
(二)黄金表达要记牢
【先声夺人开头句——阐释所报道事件的来龙去脉】
①(2024·临沂市一模) Last Sunday,our school held a theme activity called “Mental Health Education”on the playground.
②(2024·厦门外国语学校适应性考试)To encourage students to take an interest in space exploration,this year's theme of our annual school Science Festival is “Space”.
【引人入胜篇中句——详细叙述报道事件的起因、经过和结果】
①(2024·福建省部分地市高三第一次质量检测)By sharing some of their most unforgettable volunteering experiences,20 participants deeply
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impressed the audience with their vivid stories,feelings and insights.
②(2024·衡水中学高三下学期一调)Every athlete made great efforts to win,the students who stood by the runway let out the most encouraging slogan.
③(2024·衡水中学高三下学期一调)Exhausted as we were,we enjoyed ourselves cheering and jumping.
【画龙点睛结尾句——简要总结、评论】
①(2024·临沂市一模)Not only is this theme activity of great benefit to our mental health but it also enriches our school life.
②It was through this activity that we fully realized that the awareness of respecting the old should be raised.
满分范文要会写——庆祝“中文语言日”
(2024·广州市毕业班综合测试)为庆祝4月20日中文语言日,你校举办了主题活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动内容;
2.活动反响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Chinese Language Day Celebrations on Campus
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Chinese Language Day Celebrations on Campus
To help students fully understand and appreciate the beauty of our mother tongue,our school held series of celebrations on April 20th,the Chinese Language Day.
On that day,more than 20 events were organized around the campus,offering the fullest experience of the beauty of our mother tongue.Among those most popular events were the live Chinese calligraphy show from our teachers and the paper-cutting contest.What won the most applause was the contest of tongue twisters,attracting visiting foreign students to show their wonderful oral Chinese.
The celebrations have had a positive effect on every participant.Chinese language is so beautiful and interesting that we'll definitely carry on our study into it.
征文投稿
(一)谨记写作范式
投稿是投稿人根据征稿要求进行写作,所投稿件应紧贴主题,内容应新颖、创新、实用、符合字数要求等。具体写作结构为:
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【先声夺人开头句——点明目的】
①(2022·全国甲卷) June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day,which aims to raise people's awareness of protecting oceans.
②(2022·全国乙卷) Recently,we conducted a survey concerning different ways to learn English beyond the classroom.The results are as follows.
【引人入胜篇中句——介绍基本情况】
① (2022·全国甲卷)It goes without saying that oceans play a critical role in the world.
② (2022·全国甲卷)Not only do they provide abundant resources and food for us,but they are also crucial for the global climate development.
③(2022·全国甲卷)Additionally,oceans are “the lungs of our planet”,providing most of the oxygen we breathe.
【画龙点睛结尾句——总结感想和祝福】
①(2022·全国甲卷) As high school students,it's our responsibility to protect oceans.
②(2024·石家庄市高三质量检测)In a word,if knowledge enriches the mind,then English adds wings.
满分范文要会写——“植树节”征文比赛
(2024·黑龙江省大庆市高三二模)你校英文报将以三月十二日“中国植树节(National Tree Planting Day)”为主题,举行征文比赛。请写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.简要介绍植树节;
2.说明树木的重要性;
3.呼吁履行植树义务。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Planting Trees for Our Future
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Planting Trees for Our Future
National Tree Planting Day takes place on March 12 every year, when millions of volunteers,both young and old,plant trees in schools,parks,city gardens and the countrysides.
As is known to us,trees are very significant to the environment and humans.They play a vital role in enhancing air quality and battling against climate change.Besides,trees supply habitats and food for numerous species of wildlife.
Thus,we each should take an active part in voluntary tree planting activity to do our bit.With perseverance and joint efforts,we will be able to make the environment better.
图画/图表说明类短文
(一)谨记写作范式
图画/图表类写作要求考生围绕题目将有关信息转化为文字形式,考生应该具有一定数据分析和材料归纳的能力,同时会运用一定的写作方法。具体写作结构为:
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【开头部分:描述图表内容】
①(2024·福建省高三适应性练习)As can be seen from the chart,the choices of school clubs in our school vary from person to person.
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②As we can see from the chart,most of the students (90%) do the housework,among whom 30% work for 1-2 hours per week and 60% for less than an hour.
③The figures show that students are wasting so much,which will have a bad effect on the earth.
④According to the graph,65% of all those surveyed indicate that they are under great pressure.
⑤As is shown in the table/chart/graph,a great many teenagers are addicted to surfing the Internet.
【主体部分:简评图表呈现的现象】
①Several factors are responsible for the phenomenon above.
②There is a growing tendency that the majority of the students would like to choose Chinese Calligraphy and Painting Club,while 25% students choose the Table Tennis Club.
③It's really necessary to raise children's labor consciousness and involve them in housework.
④Based on the chart,we can safely draw the conclusion that we should take measures to raise children's awareness of wildlife protection.
⑤Overall,the results are quite interesting,indicating that diverse sorts of books hold different proportions.
【结尾部分:针对现象给出建议】
①I hold the view that whatever clubs we choose,we should learn to relax ourselves besides concentrating on our studies.
②Only in this way can we improve our efficiency and make our school life meaningful.
③(2024·青岛市高三第一次适应性检测)From my perspective/ Personally/In my view/From my point of view,I suggest students should read more classics,which accumulates the wisdom and spirits from ancestors,thus having a deeper insight into the pearl of literature.
满分范文要会写——邀请参加“中国文化节”
(2024·济宁市高三模拟)你校英文报正在针对高中生开展以After-school Activities为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.状况描述;
2.简单评论;
3.你的建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[参考范文]
A recent survey regarding After-school Activities was conducted in our school.
As can be seen from the pie chart,the majority of the students surveyed,about 56%,tended to do homework after school.By contrast,playing computer games,doing sports and reading books proved to be less popular,accounting for 22%,13% and 9% respectively.
In my view,the trend mentioned above is basically due to the mounting pressure.To help students get fully developed,it's sensible to balance study and relaxation—workout and book-reading should be given priority while less time should be spent on screens.Plus,more diverse extracurricular activities should be provided to cater to different interests and talents.
二、倡议、演讲、通知、日记
倡议书
(一)谨记写作范式
倡议书属于应用文的一种,是为倡议或发起某项活动而写的号召性的、公开提议性的专用文体。倡议书一般由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。具体写作结构为:
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【先声夺人开头句——发起倡议的目的和背景】
①(2024·浙江省名校协作体联考)With Earth Day approaching,I advocate everyone to care about the planet we live on.
②(2024·长沙第二次检测)On behalf of the Students' Union,I am writing to call on all students to participate in the“Read Classics,Learn English”activity,whose theme is to appreciate the charm of English classics and promote English learning.
【引人入胜篇中句——倡议具体内容】
①(2024·湖北武汉三月质检)To meet the challenges of the senior year,it's high time that we should take action to say no to the unhealthy lifestyle.
②(2024·湖北武汉三月质检)We are supposed to go to bed early and get up early and take meals regularly and slowly enough.
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【画龙点睛结尾句——决心和希望】
①Let's join our hands and take action immediately.
②(2024·济南模拟)I am convinced that,with our joint efforts,the happening of wasting food will disappear.
满分范文要会写——走进春天,锻炼身体
假定你是校学生会主席李华,时值春暖花开,万物复苏,请你围绕“走进春天,锻炼身体”这一主题,在校英文报上发表一封倡议书,要点如下:
1.倡议的目的;
2.具体内容。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear friends,
The Students' Union
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Dear friends,
Spring has come! Flowers are blossoming and everything is coming back to life.It is high time that we embraced the bright spring and built up our body.So it is strongly advocated that we go outdoors and take exercise regularly.
First,we are supposed to do more sports daily,which is definitely beneficial to our immune system.We can play ball games,jog or take a walk after school.Besides,at weekends,it is a good choice to go hiking with our friends or family.
Let's act together now to strengthen our physical health and create a better life.
The Students' Union
演讲与致辞
(一)谨记写作范式
演讲稿、致辞等是人们在生活和学习中常用的文体。发言稿常用于向听众说明一些道理,希望对方接受自己的见解。致辞是接待或欢送客人时,为表示欢迎、感谢或祝愿而进行的发言。具体写作结构为:
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【先声夺人开头句——引出主题】
①(2024·云南省“3+3+3”高三联考)Good morning,everyone! I feel honored to share my dream university,Beijing Normal University.
②(2024·山东枣庄市模拟) Good morning,ladies and gentlemen!It's my great honour to share with you my career planning today!
【引人入胜篇中句——陈述演讲主题】
①(2024·山东枣庄市模拟) I would like to be an engineer after my graduation because I am interested in physics and chemistry.
②(2024·山东枣庄市模拟) Meanwhile,engineering is one of the most popular careers in China.
③ (2024·山东枣庄市模拟) Since I have planned my career,I would spare no effort to study all the related courses well.
【画龙点睛结尾句——表达感谢】
① I'm sure I will make it!Thank you!
②Thank you for your listening to my speech.
满分范文要会写——校园安全预防经验交流
(2024·山东省新高考联合模拟)假定你是李华,你将参加一个以“Live a Green Life”为主题的英语演讲活动,现需写一篇英语演讲稿。内容包括:
1.“绿色生活”的意义和方式;
2.发出号召。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Ladies and gentlemen,
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Ladies and gentlemen,
I'm honored to give this speech.Due to social and economic developments,human beings have damaged the environment seriously,and we are faced with serious problems like global warming,frequent natural disasters.In other words,going green means protecting ourselves.
Everyone can play an active part in the campaign.First of all,we can try to use public transportation or travel on foot or by bike.Besides,we should cherish what we have and make good use of water,electricity,paper,food,etc.We can start by exchanging our second-hand books with others.Finally,if possible,classify our garbage and recycle it.
Start now and we'll make a difference.That's all.Thank you!
通知
(一)谨记写作范式
通知是上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、传达情况或告诉公众某件事情等情况时使用的一种应用文体,通常分为口头通知和书面通知两种。具体写作结构为:
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【先声夺人开头句——介绍缘由】
①Ladies and gentlemen,may I have your attention,please? I have an announcement to make.
②Attention,please.I have something important to announce.
③(2024·武汉市二月调研)A series of activities based on the topic of Harmonious Campus are going to be held.
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【引人入胜篇中句——具体通知内容】
①(2024·武汉市二月调研)Starting at 10 a.m.,the meeting will be held next Monday in the meeting room of our English literature society.
②(2024·泉州市质量监测)As scheduled,the activity will start with the presentation made by our instructor Mr.Wang who will be the judge of the competition.
③(2024·泉州市质量监测)If interested in the contest,you can send an email to potteryclub@163.com to register online or ask for detail information.
【画龙点睛结尾句——表示欢迎和期待】
①Everyone is welcome to take part in it.
②Your participation will surely make a difference.
满分范文要会写——校园劳动节
(2024·安徽省名校联盟高三4月联考)你所在的国际学校近期将举办首届“校园劳动节”,请你代表学生会写一则通知,通知学生们参加活动。内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动内容;
3.注意事项。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Notice
Students' Union
November 28th
[参考范文]
Notice
Recently,in order to stimulate students' enthusiasm for labor and encourage students to actively participate in labor practice,our school is planning the first Campus Labor Day.As scheduled,it will be held on December 1st in the playground.By then,there will be many activities you can take part in,including sweeping up the fallen leaves on the playground,cleaning exercise equipment and so on.It is important to note that participants need to prepare their own tools for cleaning.I hope that with everyone's efforts,our playground can become much cleaner and tidier.
Welcome to your active participation.
Students' Union
November 28th
日记
(一)谨记写作范式
日记常用来记录一天中所发生的有意义的事件。在日记中,人们会对事件发表议论,阐述自己的态度或体会。具体写作结构为:
(二)黄金表达要记牢
【先声夺人开头句——概括活动经历】
Today witnessed a rewarding activity—Tree Planting organized by the Student Union of our school.
【引人入胜篇中句——描述活动过程】
①In the morning,I,along with my classmates,headed to the suburbs to plant trees.
②On our arrival,we got down to working together as planned.
③Through our joint efforts,the hillside was lined with rows of seedlings bathed in the sunshine.
【画龙点睛结尾句——呈现个人感受】
①Exhausted as I was,I felt the joy of labor.
②Seeing the lines of trees,I was filled with a sense of achievement,for I did my part to protect and beautify our environment.
满分范文要会写——逃生演练
(2024·日照一模)假定你是李华,上周六下午你校在学校礼堂举行了消防逃生演练(fire drill)。请你写一篇英语日记,内容包括:
1.消防讲座;
2.逃生演练;
3.你的感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Saturday July 16
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Saturday July 16
In order to raise our safety awareness,some firefighters were invited to our school to give a speech last Saturday afternoon.They showed us what to do in case of a fire,how to prevent the fire and how to use different kinds of fire-fighting equipment.
Then a fire drill was held.As soon as the alarm rang,all of us students ran downstairs one by one.We finally got together at the playground safely where our teachers were waiting for us.
Through the drill,we have learned how to escape in an emergency.I think it is essential for us to remain calm and know what to do.
三、叙事短文、人物描写
叙事短文
(一)谨记写作范式
叙事短文属于记叙文的写作范畴,文章多以事件为中心,以时间和空间为线索,按事件的发生、发展、结局展开故事。具体写作结构为:
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【先声夺人开头句——点明故事发生的时间、地点、目的】
①(2024·唐山市二模)Recently,our school newspaper has conducted a survey on what English extracurricular reading brings us.
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②(2024·泰安二模)Our school organised a campus chorus contest on Wednesday afternoon,the theme of which is“Love Our Motherland”.
【引人入胜篇中句——具体介绍故事发展的详情】
①Having done the cleaning,some of us made a well-prepared funny show,which made them very delighted.
②As scheduled,the contest took place in the school hall,lasting two hours from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm.
【画龙点睛结尾句——发表个人感受】
①By doing interesting experiments myself,I had lots of fun as well as gaining knowledge.
②From this meaningful activity,I found that we are supposed to care for the old and respect them.
满分范文要会写——家务活我在行
(2024·沈阳市高三二模)假设你是李华,最近参加了学校举办的“家务活我在行”的活动,请你为班级英语角写篇短文介绍这次活动。内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动过程;
3.活动感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Housework,I can do it
[参考范文]
Housework,I can do it
To promote the awareness of students' tidiness and family responsibility,an activity named“Housework,I can do it”was held.In response to the activity sponsored by our school,I carried out my housework plan last weekend,ranging from tidying up rooms to cooking meals.
Early in the morning,I removed unwanted items and cleaned the house until it was spotless.At almost eleven,I prepared a lunch,fried rice,for which my parents praised me.Tired as I was,I felt so proud.
Through the involvement in the household chores,not only have I established a sense of family responsibility,but also I have fully understood that doing housework is of great meaning.
人物描写
(一)谨记写作范式
人物描写属于记叙文的写作范畴,写作时要围绕人物组织材料,要做到主题鲜明,内容清楚,并注意结构的完整性。具体写作结构为:
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【先声夺人开头句——引入话题】
①There are many respectable people around us.And the person I respect most is my physics teacher,who is so patient with each student that we all like her.
②Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history, surrounded by a large amount of students.
③Old as he is,he still makes great contributions in the field of medicine.
【引人入胜篇中句——具体人物描述】
①Yuan Longping was a Chinese agricultural scientist,known for developing the first hybrid rice varieties in the 1970s.
②It's her friendliness and the sense of responsibility that make me admire her.
③She teaches us not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person.
④She has been highly respected for her wisdom as well as courage by the Chinese people.
【画龙点睛结尾句——对所介绍人物进行评价】
①Having set a great example to us students,she fully deserves my respect.
②Her spirit inspires me and millions of other girls to live an independent life and be responsible for our own decisions.
满分范文要会写——心中的民族英雄
你校正在开展“向民族英雄学习”的活动。请你给学校英语报写一篇短文,谈谈你心中的民族英雄。内容包括:
1.英雄人物简介;
2.成为你心中英雄的原因;
3.向英雄学习。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
参考词汇:merit 优点
The National Hero in My Heart
As we know,most people have a national hero or heroes in their hearts.
[参考范文]
The National Hero in My Heart
As we know,most people have a national hero or heroes in their hearts. For me,Yuan Longping is actually my national hero.
Dr Yuan devoted himself to doing research on the rice output.With the development of new rice,gone are the days when Chinese people suffer from terrible starvation,and more countries of the world are able to grow more rice to feed the growing world population.
We should learn from him the spirit of striving for the well-being of mankind.His perseverance,indifference to personal fame and fortune,his devotion to research work and profound insight are also great merits we should follow!
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